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** Rather than have Buccaneer hide behind the dying Fu's body in order to stab Bradley, the author instead has Buccaneer sneak up behind Bradley while the latter puts all of his focus on Fu and stab him from behind, because the author finds it implausible that Bradley would fail to notice Buccaneer behind Fu, especially with his Ultimate Eye.
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** Rather than have Buccaneer hide behind the dying Fu's body in order to stab Bradley, the author instead has Buccaneer sneak up behind Bradley while the latter puts all of his focus was focused on Fu and stab him from behind, because the author finds it implausible that Bradley would fail to notice Buccaneer behind Fu, especially with his Ultimate Eye.
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* BigBad: Father
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* BigBad: FatherFather.
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''Another Journey'' is a ''Manga/FullmetalAlchemist'' Fanfic created by Isil'zha BLZ. The fic attempts to harmonize the manga/''Brotherhood'' and [[Anime/FullmetalAlchemist the 2003 anime]] into a single story combining the best of both worlds.
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''Another Journey'' is a ''Manga/FullmetalAlchemist'' Fanfic created by Isil'zha BLZ. The fic attempts to harmonize the manga/''Brotherhood'' and [[Anime/FullmetalAlchemist [[Anime/FullmetalAlchemist2003 the 2003 anime]] into a single story combining the best of both worlds.
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The story is on Fanfiction.net [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11707283/1/Another-Journey here]].
As of February 16 2017 the story has concluded.
As of February 16 2017 the story has concluded.
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The story is on Fanfiction.net Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11707283/1/Another-Journey here]].
As of February16 2017 16th, 2017, the story has concluded.
As of February
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** The author notes that there were a lot of scenes with coincidences in the original source material, so he tries to cut these down by adding some justifications to some of the scenes in question. For example, while Bradley finds Greed by sheer luck in the manga/''Brotherhood'', he instead actually manages to track down Greed in Dublith and was send by Father to capture him as well as make sure no harm comes to the Elric brothers.
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** The author notes that there were a lot of scenes with coincidences in the original source material, so he tries to cut these down by adding some justifications to some of the scenes in question. For example, while Bradley finds Greed by sheer luck in the manga/''Brotherhood'', he instead actually manages to track down Greed in Dublith and was send by Father to capture him as well as make sure no harm comes to the Elric brothers.
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* AdaptationNameChange: The reborn Pride, instead of going by Selim again like in the source material, is now named Joseph.
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** The 2003 Anime version of Sloth goes by Misery, since the Manga/''Brotherhood'' Sloth still exists in this story.
** Exaggerated with the 2003 Anime version of Wrath. Since King Bradley is Wrath in this story, this take on the character goes through 3 different names throughout the story, first given the name Spite by Father, then going by Kid after he decides to abandon that name upon finding out his past, and finally agrees to the name Izumi gives him, Lujon.
** The reborn Pride, instead of going by Selim again like in the source material, is now named Joseph.
** The 2003 Anime version of Sloth goes by Misery, since the Manga/''Brotherhood'' Sloth still exists in this story.
** Exaggerated with the 2003 Anime version of Wrath. Since King Bradley is Wrath in this story, this take on the character goes through 3 different names throughout the story, first given the name Spite by Father, then going by Kid after he decides to abandon that name upon finding out his past, and finally agrees to the name Izumi gives him, Lujon.
** The reborn Pride, instead of going by Selim again like in the source material, is now named Joseph.
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** Instead of waiting until episode 30 of ''Brotherhood'' to explain the Ishval Civil War, the conflict is explained to Ed (and the reader) one chapter after Scar's first fight against the Elric brothers. A similar occurrence would come later when Hohenheim would give his backstory to Rose, Izumi, and Sig in order to give a more grounded reason to reveal it rather than choose a random time.
** Rather than having Lust attack Hughes in the middle of the archive room and risk exposing herself (thus ruining the point of a conspiracy), Hughes is found out by Misery (who is still known as Juliet Douglas at the time), who pretends to be on Hughes' side and lures him into a trap by telling him to use a phone booth outside while secretly sending Envy to deal with Hughes.
** Rather than having Lust attack Hughes in the middle of the archive room and risk exposing herself (thus ruining the point of a conspiracy), Hughes is found out by Misery (who is still known as Juliet Douglas at the time), who pretends to be on Hughes' side and lures him into a trap by telling him to use a phone booth outside while secretly sending Envy to deal with Hughes.
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** Instead of waiting until episode 30 of ''Brotherhood'' to explain the Ishval Civil War, the conflict is explained to Ed (and the reader) one chapter after Scar's first fight against the Elric brothers. A similar occurrence would come later when Hohenheim would give his backstory to Rose, Izumi, and Sig one chapter after it's revealed he and Dante knew each other, in order to give a more grounded reason to reveal it rather than choose a random time.
** Rather than having Lust attack Hughes in the middle of the archive room and risk exposing herself (thus ruining the point of a conspiracy), Hughes is found out by Misery(who is still known as (still going by Juliet Douglas at the time), who pretends to be on Hughes' side and lures him into a trap by telling him to use a phone booth outside while secretly sending Envy to deal with Hughes.Hughes.
** The author notes that there were a lot of scenes with coincidences in the original source material, so he tries to cut these down by adding some justifications to some of the scenes in question. For example, while Bradley finds Greed by sheer luck in the manga/''Brotherhood'', he instead actually manages to track down Greed in Dublith and was send by Father to capture him as well as make sure no harm comes to the Elric brothers.
** The Reverse Transmutation Circle that would use Alkahestry to counter Father's ability to cut off access to Amestrian alchemy is revealed not long after the heroes are able to decipher the notes written by Scar's brother, whereas the source material would not reveal this countermeasure until after it's put into effect. This is used to give the heroes a solid plan earlier on in the story and build up tension to the final battle. Hohenheim's countermeasure is still foreshadowed and only revealed after Father activates his nationwide transmutation circle.
** Rather than have the Briggs army fight against Central Soldiers for several episodes to capture Central Command, which led them to come off as traitors as many of the soldiers are unaware of their superior's treachery, General Armstrong instead exposes the Senior Staff's true nature to all of Central Command with an EngineeredPublicConfession, with Hakuro confirming everything they heard, and encourages them to fight for what's right, allowing them to capture Central Command far more quickly than in canon while reducing unnecessary casualties.
** Rather than have Buccaneer hide behind the dying Fu's body in order to stab Bradley, the author instead has Buccaneer sneak up behind Bradley while the latter puts all of his focus on Fu and stab him from behind, because the author finds it implausible that Bradley would fail to notice Buccaneer behind Fu, especially with his Ultimate Eye.
** Dante serves as a CompositeCharacter for the Gold-Toothed Doctor as the homunculi's main human ally, partially because the Author finds the nameless doctor a living plot device rather than a true character since the source material never explains who he is and why he serves the homunculi willingly, whereas Dante has an established backstory and motivation to explain her allegiance to the homunculi.
** Rather than having Lust attack Hughes in the middle of the archive room and risk exposing herself (thus ruining the point of a conspiracy), Hughes is found out by Misery
** The author notes that there were a lot of scenes with coincidences in the original source material, so he tries to cut these down by adding some justifications to some of the scenes in question. For example, while Bradley finds Greed by sheer luck in the manga/''Brotherhood'', he instead actually manages to track down Greed in Dublith and was send by Father to capture him as well as make sure no harm comes to the Elric brothers.
** The Reverse Transmutation Circle that would use Alkahestry to counter Father's ability to cut off access to Amestrian alchemy is revealed not long after the heroes are able to decipher the notes written by Scar's brother, whereas the source material would not reveal this countermeasure until after it's put into effect. This is used to give the heroes a solid plan earlier on in the story and build up tension to the final battle. Hohenheim's countermeasure is still foreshadowed and only revealed after Father activates his nationwide transmutation circle.
** Rather than have the Briggs army fight against Central Soldiers for several episodes to capture Central Command, which led them to come off as traitors as many of the soldiers are unaware of their superior's treachery, General Armstrong instead exposes the Senior Staff's true nature to all of Central Command with an EngineeredPublicConfession, with Hakuro confirming everything they heard, and encourages them to fight for what's right, allowing them to capture Central Command far more quickly than in canon while reducing unnecessary casualties.
** Rather than have Buccaneer hide behind the dying Fu's body in order to stab Bradley, the author instead has Buccaneer sneak up behind Bradley while the latter puts all of his focus on Fu and stab him from behind, because the author finds it implausible that Bradley would fail to notice Buccaneer behind Fu, especially with his Ultimate Eye.
** Dante serves as a CompositeCharacter for the Gold-Toothed Doctor as the homunculi's main human ally, partially because the Author finds the nameless doctor a living plot device rather than a true character since the source material never explains who he is and why he serves the homunculi willingly, whereas Dante has an established backstory and motivation to explain her allegiance to the homunculi.
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* PragmaticAdaptation: The author of the fanfiction makes several changes from the overall plot of Brotherhood to make it fit better with the story. Several examples include:
** Instead of waiting until episode 30 of ''Brotherhood'' to explain the Ishval Civil War, the conflict is explained to Ed (and the reader) one chapter after Scar's first fight against the Elric brothers. A similar occurrence would come later when Hohenheim would give his backstory to Rose, Izumi, and Sig in order to give a more grounded reason to reveal it rather than choose a random time.
** Rather than having Lust attack Hughes in the middle of the archive room and risk exposing herself (thus ruining the point of a conspiracy), Hughes is found out by Misery (who is still known as Juliet Douglas at the time), who pretends to be on Hughes' side and lures him into a trap by telling him to use a phone booth outside while secretly sending Envy to deal with Hughes.
** Instead of waiting until episode 30 of ''Brotherhood'' to explain the Ishval Civil War, the conflict is explained to Ed (and the reader) one chapter after Scar's first fight against the Elric brothers. A similar occurrence would come later when Hohenheim would give his backstory to Rose, Izumi, and Sig in order to give a more grounded reason to reveal it rather than choose a random time.
** Rather than having Lust attack Hughes in the middle of the archive room and risk exposing herself (thus ruining the point of a conspiracy), Hughes is found out by Misery (who is still known as Juliet Douglas at the time), who pretends to be on Hughes' side and lures him into a trap by telling him to use a phone booth outside while secretly sending Envy to deal with Hughes.
