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An Explosive Allergy is a Loud House fanfic created by DragonWarrior567. It can be read here: https://www.deviantart.com/dragonwarrior567/journal/An-Explosive-Allergy-808608555
During a night at the loud house, Luna and Luan bring home a big cake, Which Lori excitedly wants to eat, despite Luna's and Luan's protest about it, due to her allergies. Things then [[FromBadToWorse go downhill from there]].
!!!This Fic has the following tropes:
* DidntThinkThisThrough: Lori, big time. She keeps eating the cake, despite her allergies to it. Even when she [[BalloonBelly Swells up from eating most of it]]. [[TooDumbToLive she still tries to eat more]]. This ends up sucking for her big time.
* DarkerAndEdgier: the fic does have shades of this. Mainly in the ending, where Lori is KilledOffForReal in a gruesome fashion.
* DeathByGluttony: Lori suffers this at the end of the fic. After most of the cake flies into her mouth, Lori tries to eat one more piece, despite Luna's and Luan's protest. After eating it and [[HopeSpot Seemingly being okay]]. [[TemptingFate Lori smugly says how she feels great]]. [[PopGoesTheHuman Only to explode into pieces minutes later]].
* DownerEnding: At the end of the fic, despite Luna and Luan desperately protesting and trying to convince Lori not to eat the last piece, She eats up the last of the cake anyways. Ultimately [[KilledOffForReal causing her to explode to her death in a bloody mess]].
During a night at the loud house, Luna and Luan bring home a big cake, Which Lori excitedly wants to eat, despite Luna's and Luan's protest about it, due to her allergies. Things then [[FromBadToWorse go downhill from there]].
!!!This Fic has the following tropes:
* DidntThinkThisThrough: Lori, big time. She keeps eating the cake, despite her allergies to it. Even when she [[BalloonBelly Swells up from eating most of it]]. [[TooDumbToLive she still tries to eat more]]. This ends up sucking for her big time.
* DarkerAndEdgier: the fic does have shades of this. Mainly in the ending, where Lori is KilledOffForReal in a gruesome fashion.
* DeathByGluttony: Lori suffers this at the end of the fic. After most of the cake flies into her mouth, Lori tries to eat one more piece, despite Luna's and Luan's protest. After eating it and [[HopeSpot Seemingly being okay]]. [[TemptingFate Lori smugly says how she feels great]]. [[PopGoesTheHuman Only to explode into pieces minutes later]].
* DownerEnding: At the end of the fic, despite Luna and Luan desperately protesting and trying to convince Lori not to eat the last piece, She eats up the last of the cake anyways. Ultimately [[KilledOffForReal causing her to explode to her death in a bloody mess]].
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* DeathByGluttony: Lori suffers this at the end of the fic. After most of the cake flies into her mouth, Lori tries to eat one more
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Luna and Luan bringing home the cake is what leads to not only the events of the story. [[DeathByGluttony But also causes Lori to meet a rather gruesome end]].
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Luna and Luan bringing home the cake is what leads to not only the events of the story. {{DeathByGluttony But also causes Lori to meet a rather gruesome end]].
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Luna and Luan bringing home the cake is what leads to not only the events of the story. {{DeathByGluttony [[DeathByGluttony But also causes Lori to meet a rather gruesome end]].
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Lori, big time. She keeps eating the cake, despite her allergies to it. Even when she [[BalloonBelly Swells up from eating most of it]]. [[TooDumbToLive she still tries to eat more]]. This ends up sucking for her big time.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Lori, big time. She keeps eating the cake, despite her allergies to it. Even when she [[BalloonBelly Swells up from eating most of it]]. [[TooDumbToLive she still tries to eat more]]. This ends up sucking for her big time.time.
*DarkerAndEdgier: the fic does have shades of this. Mainly in the ending, where Lori is KilledOffForReal in a gruesome fashion.
*DeathByGluttony: Lori suffers this at the end of the fic. After most of the cake flies into her mouth, Lori tries to eat one more piece, despite Luna's and Luan's protest. After eating it and [[HopeSpot Seemingly being okay]]. [[TemptingFate Lori smugly says how she feels great]]. [[PopGoesTheHuman Only to explode into pieces minutes later]].
*DownerEnding: At the end of the fic, despite Luna and Luan desperately protesting and trying to convince Lori not to eat the last piece, She eats up the last of the cake anyways. Ultimately [[KilledOffForReal causing her to explode to her death in a bloody mess]].
*HopeSpot: After Lori eats the last piece of cake, she seems to be fine and even [[TemptingFate brags how she'd know she'd survive and that she feels fine]]. [[PopGoesTheHuman Then her stomach swells up further...]].
*NiceJobBreakingItHero: Luna and Luan bringing home the cake is what leads to not only the events of the story. {{DeathByGluttony But also causes Lori to meet a rather gruesome end]].
*DarkerAndEdgier: the fic does have shades of this. Mainly in the ending, where Lori is KilledOffForReal in a gruesome fashion.
*DeathByGluttony: Lori suffers this at the end of the fic. After most of the cake flies into her mouth, Lori tries to eat one more piece, despite Luna's and Luan's protest. After eating it and [[HopeSpot Seemingly being okay]]. [[TemptingFate Lori smugly says how she feels great]]. [[PopGoesTheHuman Only to explode into pieces minutes later]].
*DownerEnding: At the end of the fic, despite Luna and Luan desperately protesting and trying to convince Lori not to eat the last piece, She eats up the last of the cake anyways. Ultimately [[KilledOffForReal causing her to explode to her death in a bloody mess]].
*HopeSpot: After Lori eats the last piece of cake, she seems to be fine and even [[TemptingFate brags how she'd know she'd survive and that she feels fine]]. [[PopGoesTheHuman Then her stomach swells up further...]].
*NiceJobBreakingItHero: Luna and Luan bringing home the cake is what leads to not only the events of the story. {{DeathByGluttony But also causes Lori to meet a rather gruesome end]].
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* Didn'tThinkThisThrough: Lori, big time. She keeps eating the cake, despite her allergies to it. Even when she [[BalloonBelly Swells up from eating most of it]]. [[TooDumbToLive she still tries to eat more]]. This ends up sucking for her big time.
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* Didn'tThinkThisThrough: DidntThinkThisThrough: Lori, big time. She keeps eating the cake, despite her allergies to it. Even when she [[BalloonBelly Swells up from eating most of it]]. [[TooDumbToLive she still tries to eat more]]. This ends up sucking for her big time.
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Didn'tThinkThisThrough: Lori, big time. She keeps eating the cake, despite her allergies to it. Even when she [[BalloonBelly Swells up from eating most of it]]. [[TooDumbToLive she still tries to eat more]]. This ends up sucking for her big time.
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Didn'tThinkThisThrough: Lori, big time. She keeps eating the cake, despite her allergies to it. Even when she [[BalloonBelly Swells up from eating most of it]]. [[TooDumbToLive she still tries to eat more]]. This ends up sucking for her big time.
Didn'tThinkThisThrough: Lori, big time. She keeps eating the cake, despite her allergies to it. Even when she [[BalloonBelly Swells up from eating most of it]]. [[TooDumbToLive she still tries to eat more]]. This ends up sucking for her big time.
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An Explosive Allergy is a Loud House fanfic created by DragonWarrior567. It can be read here: https://www.deviantart.com/dragonwarrior567/journal/An-Explosive-Allergy-808608555
During a night at the loud house, Luna and Luan bring home a big cake, Which Lori excitedly wants to eat, despite Luna's and Luan's protest about it, due to her allergies. Things then [[FromBadToWorse go downhill from there]].
!!!This Fic has the following tropes:
During a night at the loud house, Luna and Luan bring home a big cake, Which Lori excitedly wants to eat, despite Luna's and Luan's protest about it, due to her allergies. Things then [[FromBadToWorse go downhill from there]].
!!!This Fic has the following tropes:
