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* SuperSoldier: Broly is one. In this interpretation, his power of a Great Ape in human form comes from a secret project led by King Vegeta. He developed it in secret, on remote worlds using only elite warriors capable of maintaining cognizant thought as a Great Ape.
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* SuperSoldier: Broly is one. In this interpretation, his power of a Great Ape in human form comes from a secret project led by King Vegeta. He developed it in secret, on remote worlds using only elite warriors capable of maintaining cognizant thought as a Great Ape.Ape.
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* AdaptedOut: None of the events of ''Dragon Ball Minus'' are touched upon, meaning neither Bardock nor Gine are mentioned. Instead, the author brings back Grandpa Gohan for the epilogue as, in his words, "he is Goku's true family, not Bardock".
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* DeathByAdaptation:
** [[spoiler: Broly ends up being destroyed after a long battle with Beerus.]]
** [[spoiler: Due to the multiple manipulations caused during the events of the story, Goku ends up killing Freeza at the end of the story.]]
** [[spoiler: Broly ends up being destroyed after a long battle with Beerus.]]
** [[spoiler: Due to the multiple manipulations caused during the events of the story, Goku ends up killing Freeza at the end of the story.]]
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''An Empty Revenge'' is an AlternateUniverseFic of ''Anime/DragonBallSuperBroly'', written by [=Ekrolo2=] and published in Website/FanFictionDotNet. Its a retelling of the events of the movie with different interpretation of characters and outcomes.
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''An Empty Revenge'' is an AlternateUniverseFic of ''Anime/DragonBallSuperBroly'', written by [=Ekrolo2=] and published in Website/FanFictionDotNet. Its It is a retelling of the events of the movie with different interpretation of characters and outcomes.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Lemo was a non-combatant in the movie, he is a retired sargent in the fic.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Lemo was a non-combatant in the movie, he is a retired sargent Sargent in the fic.fic.
* AdaptationalIntelligence: Freeza is more cautious than in canon, teaching Paragus about the Super Saiyan transformations obtained by Goku and Vegeta and personally training Broly before even going to Earth.
* AdaptationalIntelligence: Freeza is more cautious than in canon, teaching Paragus about the Super Saiyan transformations obtained by Goku and Vegeta and personally training Broly before even going to Earth.
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** In the movie, Lemo is an old non-combatant member of the Freeza force. In the fic, he is an old sargeant that fought with the Saiyans in his youth and came back from retirement to help rebuilt the empire.
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** In the movie, Lemo is an old non-combatant member of the Freeza force. In the fic, he is an old sargeant sergeant that fought with the Saiyans in his youth and came back from retirement to help rebuilt rebuild the empire.
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40 years ago, colonel Paragus and his son Broly were outcast to the desolated world of Planet Vampa, but were found by the reformed army of Lord Freeza, who took an interest in Broly and decides to train him. Both Paragus and Freeza will use Broly as their tool of revenge against the Vegeta dinasty that is in Planet Earth, and one Saiyan named Son Goku.
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40 years ago, colonel Paragus and his son Broly were outcast to the desolated world of Planet Vampa, but were found by the reformed army of Lord Freeza, who took an interest in Broly and decides to train him. Both Paragus and Freeza will use Broly as their tool of revenge against the Vegeta dinasty dynasty that is in Planet Earth, and one Saiyan named Son Goku.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Due to their similar backgrounds as old soldiers, Lemo and Paragus have a cordial and respectful relationship.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: CommonalityConnection: Due to their similar backgrounds as old soldiers, Lemo and Paragus have a cordial and respectful relationship.
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** In the movie, Lemo is an old non-combatant member of the Freeza force. In the fic, he is an old sargeant that fought with the Saiyans and his youth came back from retirement to help rebuilt the empire.
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** In the movie, Lemo is an old non-combatant member of the Freeza force. In the fic, he is an old sargeant that fought with the Saiyans and in his youth and came back from retirement to help rebuilt the empire.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Lemo was a non-combatant in the movie, he is a retired sargent in the fic.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Due to Lemo and Paragus being old soldiers, they bond and have something of a friendship in the fic. In the movie, this friendship doesn't exist.
* BirdsOfAFeather: Due to their similar backgrounds as old soldiers, Lemo and Paragus have a cordial and respectful relationship.
* BirdsOfAFeather: Due to their similar backgrounds as old soldiers, Lemo and Paragus have a cordial and respectful relationship.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Lemo is unaware of what happened to the Saiyans that worked with Freeza (Raditz, Nappa and Vegeta), thinking the same thing that killed Dodoria and Zarbon was the reason ([[RightForTheWrongReasons which is technically the case, as Vegeta killed Nappa]]) and thinks a meteor destroyed Planet Vegeta.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Lemo is unaware of what happened to the Saiyans that worked with Freeza (Raditz, Nappa and Vegeta), thinking the same thing that killed Dodoria and Zarbon was the reason killed them too ([[RightForTheWrongReasons which is technically the case, as Vegeta killed Nappa]]) and thinks a meteor destroyed Planet Vegeta.
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** In the movie, Lemo is an old non-combatant member of the Freeza force. In the fic, he is an old sargeant that came back from retirement to help rebuilt the empire.
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** Paragus is less of an outcast in the fic, and his relationship with Broly is more paternal than it was in the movie, where Paragus was treated as a HateSink character.
** In the movie, Lemo is an old non-combatant member of the Freeza force. In the fic, he is an old sargeant that fought with the Saiyans and his youth came back from retirement to help rebuilt the empire.
** In the movie, Lemo is an old non-combatant member of the Freeza force. In the fic, he is an old sargeant that fought with the Saiyans and his youth came back from retirement to help rebuilt the empire.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Lemo is unaware of what happened to the Saiyans that worked with Freeza (Raditz, Nappa and Vegeta), thinking the same thing that killed Dodoria and Zarbon was the reason ([[RightForTheWrongReasons which is technically the case, as Vegeta killed Nappa]]) and thinks a meteor destroyed Planet Vegeta.
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* CallBack: Freeza notices that Broly's power is similar to Kale from the Tournament of Power.
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40 years ago, colonel Paragus and his son Broly were outcast to the desolated world of Planet Vampa, but were found by the reformed army of Lord Freeza, who took an interest in Broly and decides to train him. Both Paragus and Freeza will use Broly as their tool of revenge against the Vegeta dinasty that is in Planet Earth, and one Saiyan named Son Goku.
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The fic can be [[read https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13200595/1/An-Empty-Revenge here.]]
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The fic can be [[read https://www.[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13200595/1/An-Empty-Revenge read here.]]
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** Freeza, while still FauxAffablyEvil, acts more cordial and friendly with Paragus than in the movie, even treating him like an old friend, unlike the somewhat friendly but distant relationship in the movie.
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** Freeza, while still FauxAffablyEvil, acts more cordial and friendly with Paragus than in the movie, even treating him like an old friend, unlike the somewhat friendly but distant relationship in the movie.movie.
* CallBack: Freeza notices that Broly's power is similar to Kale from the Tournament of Power.
* SuperSoldier: Broly is one. In this interpretation, his power of a Great Ape in human form comes from a secret project led by King Vegeta. He developed it in secret, on remote worlds using only elite warriors capable of maintaining cognizant thought as a Great Ape.
* CallBack: Freeza notices that Broly's power is similar to Kale from the Tournament of Power.
* SuperSoldier: Broly is one. In this interpretation, his power of a Great Ape in human form comes from a secret project led by King Vegeta. He developed it in secret, on remote worlds using only elite warriors capable of maintaining cognizant thought as a Great Ape.
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''An Empty Revenge'' is an AlternateUniverseFic of ''Anime/DragonBallSuperBroly'', written by [=Ekrolo2=] and published in Website/FanFictionDotNet. Its a retelling of the events of the movie with different interpretation of characters and outcomes.
40 years ago, colonel Paragus and his son Broly were outcast to the desolated world of Planet Vampa, but were found by the reformed army of Lord Freeza, who took an interest in Broly and decides to train him. Both Paragus and Freeza will use Broly as their tool of revenge against Vegeta dinasty that is in Planet Earth, and one Saiyan named Son Goku.
The fic can be [[read https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13200595/1/An-Empty-Revenge here.]]
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!!This work provides the following tropes:
* AdaptationalPersonalityChange:
** In the movie, Lemo is an old non-combatant member of the Freeza force. In the fic, he is an old sargeant that came back from retirement to help rebuilt the empire.
** Freeza, while still FauxAffablyEvil, acts more cordial and friendly with Paragus than in the movie, even treating him like an old friend, unlike the somewhat friendly but distant relationship in the movie.
40 years ago, colonel Paragus and his son Broly were outcast to the desolated world of Planet Vampa, but were found by the reformed army of Lord Freeza, who took an interest in Broly and decides to train him. Both Paragus and Freeza will use Broly as their tool of revenge against Vegeta dinasty that is in Planet Earth, and one Saiyan named Son Goku.
The fic can be [[read https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13200595/1/An-Empty-Revenge here.]]
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!!This work provides the following tropes:
* AdaptationalPersonalityChange:
** In the movie, Lemo is an old non-combatant member of the Freeza force. In the fic, he is an old sargeant that came back from retirement to help rebuilt the empire.
** Freeza, while still FauxAffablyEvil, acts more cordial and friendly with Paragus than in the movie, even treating him like an old friend, unlike the somewhat friendly but distant relationship in the movie.
