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The ''Alternate Tail Series'' is a Manga/FairyTail SeriesFic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3306596/DigiXBot DigiXBot]]. Here instead of Lucy meeting Natsu and Happy in Hargeon, the story begins with Levy Mcgarden meeting Gajeel Redfox and Pantherlily. The three later form a team with fellow Fairy Tail wizards Lyon Vastia and Mirajane Strauss.
Though initially a basic rehash at the start, Alternate Tail slowly but surely diverges from canon in its own AlternateUniverse.
Though initially a basic rehash at the start, Alternate Tail slowly but surely diverges from canon in its own AlternateUniverse.
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The ''Alternate Tail Series'' is a Manga/FairyTail ''Manga/FairyTail'' SeriesFic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3306596/DigiXBot DigiXBot]]. Here instead of Lucy meeting Natsu and Happy in Hargeon, the story begins with Levy Mcgarden meeting Gajeel Redfox and Pantherlily. The three later form a team with fellow Fairy Tail wizards Lyon Vastia and Mirajane Strauss.
Though initially a basic rehash at the start,Alternate Tail ''Alternate Tail'' slowly but surely diverges from canon in its own AlternateUniverse.
Though initially a basic rehash at the start,
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* Part 1: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11988058/1/Fairy-Tail-An-Alternate-Tail Fairy Tail: An Alternate Tail]]; Takes place in X784
* Part 2: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13023102/1/Alternate-Tail-Brave-New-World Alternate Tail: Brave New World]]; takes place in X791
''Alternate Tail'' also has a ChristmasEpisode written in 2019, aptly named [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13461403/1/An-Alternate-Christmas-Tail An Alternate Christmas Tail]].
* Part 2: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13023102/1/Alternate-Tail-Brave-New-World Alternate Tail: Brave New World]]; takes place in X791
''Alternate Tail'' also has a ChristmasEpisode written in 2019, aptly named [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13461403/1/An-Alternate-Christmas-Tail An Alternate Christmas Tail]].
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* Part 1: [[https://www.''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11988058/1/Fairy-Tail-An-Alternate-Tail Fairy Tail: An Alternate Tail]]; Tail]]''; Takes place in X784
* Part 2:[[https://www.''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13023102/1/Alternate-Tail-Brave-New-World Alternate Tail: Brave New World]]; World]]''; takes place in X791
''Alternate Tail'' also has a ChristmasEpisode written in 2019, aptly named[[https://www.''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13461403/1/An-Alternate-Christmas-Tail An Alternate Christmas Tail]].
Tail]]''.
* Part 2:
''Alternate Tail'' also has a ChristmasEpisode written in 2019, aptly named
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* ActionDad: Macao, Makarov, Gildarts, Alzack, and [[spoiler: Pantherlily.]]
* ActionGirl: Mirajane, Levy, and [[spoiler: Kagura]]. Pretty much all the Fairy Tail girls are this trope.
* ActionGirl: Mirajane, Levy, and [[spoiler: Kagura]]. Pretty much all the Fairy Tail girls are this trope.
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** The Fairy Tail Christmas omake written by Nakaba Suzuki, the author of ''Manga/TheSevenDeadlySins'', is turned into a full story where a younger Gajeel thinks that Santa is really a demon thanks to Mira's prank.
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** The Fairy ''Fairy Tail Christmas Christmas'' omake written by Nakaba Suzuki, the author of ''Manga/TheSevenDeadlySins'', is turned into a full story where a younger Gajeel thinks that Santa is really a demon thanks to Mira's prank.
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** In canon, while having saved Mystogan's life years ago, Pantherlily was introduced as a commander of the Edolas Army, and was first [[BoomerangBigot willing to see the other Exceeds face extinction]] after [[DefectorFromDecadence they refused to help Mystogan years ago]], only changing sides when he sees both the Earthland Wizards and the Exceeds work together to save Extalia. In 'Alternate Tail', he is introduced as a member of Fairy Tail from the start, [[spoiler: and worked alongside Mystogan to stop the Anima's from taking Earthland's magic.]]
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** In canon, while having saved Mystogan's life years ago, Pantherlily was introduced as a commander of the Edolas Army, and was first [[BoomerangBigot willing to see the other Exceeds face extinction]] after [[DefectorFromDecadence they refused to help Mystogan years ago]], only changing sides when he sees both the Earthland Wizards and the Exceeds work together to save Extalia. In 'Alternate Tail', ''Alternate Tail'', he is introduced as a member of Fairy Tail from the start, [[spoiler: and worked alongside Mystogan to stop the Anima's from taking Earthland's magic.]]
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** The Edolas counterparts of Lisanna and Lyon. Though never seen, Edolas!Lisanna was described as a gentle, kind-hearted girl like her Earthland self, while Edolas!Lyon was said to have an unrequited love to Juvia, just like Gray Surge. In Alternate Tail, Edolas!Lisanna is a loud punk while Edolas!Lyon is cold to the affections of his Merudy.
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** The Edolas counterparts of Lisanna and Lyon. Though never seen, Edolas!Lisanna Edolas Lisanna was described as a gentle, kind-hearted girl like her Earthland self, while Edolas!Lyon Edolas Lyon was said to have an unrequited love to Juvia, just like Gray Surge. In Alternate Tail, Edolas!Lisanna ''Alternate Tail'', Edolas Lisanna is a loud punk while Edolas!Lyon Edolas Lyon is cold to the affections of his Merudy.
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** Can also apply to [[spoiler: Edolas!Mira, who instead of a barmaid is now the First Division Captain of the Edolas Royal Army.]]
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** Can also apply to [[spoiler: Edolas!Mira, Edolas Mira, who instead of a barmaid is now the First Division Captain of the Edolas Royal Army.]]
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* BashBrothers: Gajeel and Lily.
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* BloodFromTheMouth: Gajeel goes through this whenever he tries to eat incompatible iron.
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* GroinAttack:
** Levy to Jose during the Tower of Heaven arc to escape from him.
** [[spoiler: Agent South Dakota]] to Wyoming.
** Bickslow does this to Yomazu, after commenting on the dark wizards's lack of honor.
** Rogue takes down a Clan Garten agent this way by a shadow-coated punch.
* GenderFlip: [[spoiler: The Edolas Versions of Gajeel and Levy are female and male respectively. Edolas!Levy's name is now Levi Macrosen, while Edolas!Gajeel is Gajeel Rosavulpe.]]
** Levy to Jose during the Tower of Heaven arc to escape from him.
** [[spoiler: Agent South Dakota]] to Wyoming.
** Bickslow does this to Yomazu, after commenting on the dark wizards's lack of honor.
** Rogue takes down a Clan Garten agent this way by a shadow-coated punch.
* GenderFlip: [[spoiler: The Edolas Versions of Gajeel and Levy are female and male respectively. Edolas!Levy's name is now Levi Macrosen, while Edolas!Gajeel is Gajeel Rosavulpe.]]
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* GenderFlip: [[spoiler: The Edolas Versions of Gajeel and Levy are female and male respectively.
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* LoveAtFirstSight:
** Lyon to Merudy, which isn't too far from canon.
** Also Happy to Carla, again, not too far from canon.
** Lyon to Merudy, which isn't too far from canon.
** Also Happy to Carla, again, not too far from canon.
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* Malaproper: While Levy rambles of how Gajeel's inability to regain magic from his own iron is in accords to the Laws of Thermodynamics, Gajeel states he stopped listening after she said "Thermos-Dynamite."
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* Malaproper: {{Malaproper}}: While Levy rambles of how Gajeel's inability to regain magic from his own iron is in accords to the Laws of Thermodynamics, Gajeel states he stopped listening after she said "Thermos-Dynamite."
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** Edolas!Laxus is the son of Faust and the Prince of Edolas.
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** Edolas!Laxus Edolas Laxus is the son of Faust and the Prince of Edolas.
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** The First Chapter has two references to Dizzasta's Fairy Tail Abridged. The first is when Gajeel meets Tora, asking him "Who the fuck are you?". The second was when Tora mocks Gajeel on having big balls for a man with a pierced face, while Gajeel replied with saying that Tora is the same despite having a pierced vagina.
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** The First Chapter has two references to Dizzasta's Fairy ''Fairy Tail Abridged.Abridged''. The first is when Gajeel meets Tora, asking him "Who the fuck are you?". The second was when Tora mocks Gajeel on having big balls for a man with a pierced face, while Gajeel replied with saying that Tora is the same despite having a pierced vagina.
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** Thomas Ore was described as similar to [[Titanic1997 Caledon Hockley]] in the author notes.
** [[spoiler: During their betrayal, an Edolas soldier shouts out "Traitor" at Washington while wielding an electric baton, a clear reference to Film/TheForceAwakens. This is before the baton and other magic equipment are shut down by Washington's magic nullifier.]]
** Gajeel's nickname for Kagura is Half-Pint, a common nickname used by Wolverine for Kitty Pryde in Franchise/XMen
** [[spoiler: During their betrayal, an Edolas soldier shouts out "Traitor" at Washington while wielding an electric baton, a clear reference to Film/TheForceAwakens. This is before the baton and other magic equipment are shut down by Washington's magic nullifier.]]
** Gajeel's nickname for Kagura is Half-Pint, a common nickname used by Wolverine for Kitty Pryde in Franchise/XMen
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** Thomas Ore was described as similar to [[Titanic1997 [[Film/Titanic1997 Caledon Hockley]] in the author notes.
** [[spoiler: During their betrayal, an Edolas soldier shouts out "Traitor" at Washington while wielding an electric baton, a clear reference toFilm/TheForceAwakens.''Film/TheForceAwakens''. This is before the baton and other magic equipment are shut down by Washington's magic nullifier.]]
** Gajeel's nickname for Kagura is Half-Pint, a common nickname used by Wolverine for Kitty Pryde inFranchise/XMen''Franchise/XMen''
** [[spoiler: During their betrayal, an Edolas soldier shouts out "Traitor" at Washington while wielding an electric baton, a clear reference to
** Gajeel's nickname for Kagura is Half-Pint, a common nickname used by Wolverine for Kitty Pryde in
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** The final moment between Gajeel and Edolas!Laxus is similar to the end of Code Geass, with Gajeel as Lelouch and Laxus as Suzaku. Gajeel plays the role of a demon to gather the world's hatred, while Laxus arrives as the hero to stop him. After Laxus stabs him through the shoulder, Gajeel places a blood-coated hand on the other's cheek, telling him to remember the oath of a Fairy Tail goodbye.
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** The final moment between Gajeel and Edolas!Laxus Edolas Laxus is similar to the end of Code Geass, ''Code Geass'', with Gajeel as Lelouch and Laxus as Suzaku. Gajeel plays the role of a demon to gather the world's hatred, while Laxus arrives as the hero to stop him. After Laxus stabs him through the shoulder, Gajeel places a blood-coated hand on the other's cheek, telling him to remember the oath of a Fairy Tail goodbye.
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** Gajeel's intense rant ends with him saying ''[[FanFic/NewGamePlusOnePiece AND IT WILL BE BY FAR THE MOST DELICIOUS AND SATISFYING SANDWICH THAT I WILL EVER EAT IN MY ENTIRE LIFE!!!]]''
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** Gajeel's intense rant ends with him saying ''[[FanFic/NewGamePlusOnePiece ''[[Fanfic/NewGamePlusOnePiece AND IT WILL BE BY FAR THE MOST DELICIOUS AND SATISFYING SANDWICH THAT I WILL EVER EAT IN MY ENTIRE LIFE!!!]]''
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** In Alternate Tail, it is established that weaker Letter Mages (such as Levy at the start of the series) require a medium to use their magic. Because Alexis was scene using his Thesaurian Magic through his [[BladeOnAStick dual lances]], Gajeel believes that he is vulnerable without them. At least until Alexis states the lances were only used to give him a better reach, right before he petrifies Gajeel with a single touch.
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** In Alternate Tail, it is established that weaker Letter Mages (such as Levy at the start of the series) require a medium to use their magic. Because Alexis was scene using his Thesaurian Magic through his [[BladeOnAStick dual lances]], lances, Gajeel believes that he is vulnerable without them. At least until Alexis states the lances were only used to give him a better reach, right before he petrifies Gajeel with a single touch.
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* InnocentCohabitation: Levy moves in [[spoiler: with Gajeel and Lily]] after being kicked out of her apartment following the return from Tenrou Island.
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** The Fairy Tail Christmas omake written by [[Manga/TheSevenDeadlySins Suzuki Nakaba]] is turned into a full story where a younger Gajeel thinks that Santa is really a demon thanks to Mira's prank.
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** The Fairy Tail Christmas omake written by [[Manga/TheSevenDeadlySins Suzuki Nakaba]] Nakaba Suzuki, the author of ''Manga/TheSevenDeadlySins'', is turned into a full story where a younger Gajeel thinks that Santa is really a demon thanks to Mira's prank.
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** The Freelancers from Machinima/RedVsBlue appear in the Edolas arc as antagonists. Here they are seen as heretic soldiers that combine science and technology. The current line-up included Agents Florida, Wahington, South Dakota, and Wyoming. Near the end, [[spoiler: Washington and South join Fairy Tail in stopping the giant Lacrima when they learned they were about to be sacrificed for the destruction of Extalia, and after Wyoming saying he's willing to kill anyone, including their friend Coco, if they interfere with the Kingdom's goal.]]
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** The Freelancers from Machinima/RedVsBlue WebAnimation/RedVsBlue appear in the Edolas arc as antagonists. Here they are seen as heretic soldiers that combine science and technology. The current line-up included Agents Florida, Wahington, South Dakota, and Wyoming. Near the end, [[spoiler: Washington and South join Fairy Tail in stopping the giant Lacrima when they learned they were about to be sacrificed for the destruction of Extalia, and after Wyoming saying he's willing to kill anyone, including their friend Coco, if they interfere with the Kingdom's goal.]]
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** Kagura also goes through this after Reedus shows her a drawing of an older, samurai-like version of her... with small breast.
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** Kagura also goes through this after Reedus shows her a drawing of an older, samurai-like version of her... with small breast.breasts.
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** [[Manga/RaveMaster Bis]], who in the manga appeared in the Grimoire Heart arc, appears in a FlashbackEpisode taking place 6 years before the story.
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These examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Despite being using free-hand Solid Script to aid Gajeel in his fight against Natsu at the last second, Levy isn't an InstantExpert. Her fight against Ore has her using her pen to use her magic, and in "A Play Of The Ages," she mentions to Lisanna that she's been practicing free-hand style to make it more consistent.
** Without any money to pay the 7-year rent for her apartment, Levy is forced to find a current one. However, she runs into several problems including not having enough having to pay for the deposit, her credentials being questionable due to being a member of [[DestructiveHero Fairy Tail]], and any apartment she can afford to buy is not adequate for living in.
** Despite being using free-hand Solid Script to aid Gajeel in his fight against Natsu at the last second, Levy isn't an InstantExpert. Her fight against Ore has her using her pen to use her magic, and in "A Play Of The Ages," she mentions to Lisanna that she's been practicing free-hand style to make it more consistent.
** Without any money to pay the 7-year rent for her apartment, Levy is forced to find a current one. However, she runs into several problems including not having enough having to pay for the deposit, her credentials being questionable due to being a member of [[DestructiveHero Fairy Tail]], and any apartment she can afford to buy is not adequate for living in.
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** One of Mira's new Satan Souls is a fox-demon named... {{Kitsune}}.
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** One of Mira's new Satan Souls is a fox-demon named... {{Kitsune}}.kitsune.
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* LockedIntoStrangeness: [[spoiler: Gajeel's Iron Cosmic Dragon Mode gives him a blue stripe in his hair.]]
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* SkunkStripe: [[spoiler: Gajeel's Iron Cosmic Dragon Mode gives him a blue stripe in his hair.]]
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** This applies to Erza as well, although nothing has really come up about it so far.
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** Of the canon main cast, Erza notably has the same personality, powers, and status in Fairy Tail as in canon, even having lost her eye before she joined the guild.
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** Of the canon main cast, Erza notably has the same personality, powers, and status in Fairy Tail as in canon, even having lost her eye before she joined the guild. Especially considering her backstory was given to Mirajane,
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* OutOfFocus: Outside of fights, Erza doesn't really have much relevance to the story.
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* AdaptationalWimp: While she never had an actual personality in the show, you wouldn't expect Halaphas, one of Mira's strongest Satan Souls, to have a moe personality, being very submissive to her master.
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* AdaptationalWimp: AdaptationalWimp:
** Due to taking Mira's canon role in the Tenrou Island arc, Erza gets beaten by Azuma who she defeated in canon. While Lisanna's hostage situation limited the time she had, she doesn't do much more damage than Mira did, despite Mira being out of shape at that point in canon. The author acknowledges this in the endnotes, admitting Erza should have got in a better showing.
** While she never had an actual personality in the show, you wouldn't expect Halaphas, one of Mira's strongest Satan Souls, to have a moe personality, being very submissive to her master.
** Due to taking Mira's canon role in the Tenrou Island arc, Erza gets beaten by Azuma who she defeated in canon. While Lisanna's hostage situation limited the time she had, she doesn't do much more damage than Mira did, despite Mira being out of shape at that point in canon. The author acknowledges this in the endnotes, admitting Erza should have got in a better showing.
** While she never had an actual personality in the show, you wouldn't expect Halaphas, one of Mira's strongest Satan Souls, to have a moe personality, being very submissive to her master.
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** Of the canon main cast, Erza notably has the same personality, powers, and status in Fairy Tail as in canon, even having lost her eye before she joined the guild.
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* RealityEnsues:
** Despite being using free-hand Solid Script to aid Gajeel in his fight against Natsu at the last second, Levy isn't an InstantExpert. Her fight against Ore has her using her pen to use her magic, and in "A Play Of The Ages," she mentions to Lisanna that she's been practicing free-hand style to make it more consistent.
** Without any money to pay the 7-year rent for her apartment, Levy is forced to find a current one. However, she runs into several problems including not having enough having to pay for the deposit, her credentials being questionable due to being a member of [[DestructiveHero Fairy Tail]], and any apartment she can afford to buy is not adequate for living in.
** Kain and Rustyrose, as two of Grimoire Hearts elites, were powerful threats back when they were first fought. But after seven years of imprisonment and having their magic sealed away, it becomes a brief challenge for both Fairy Tail and the Magic Council to take them down.
** Despite being using free-hand Solid Script to aid Gajeel in his fight against Natsu at the last second, Levy isn't an InstantExpert. Her fight against Ore has her using her pen to use her magic, and in "A Play Of The Ages," she mentions to Lisanna that she's been practicing free-hand style to make it more consistent.
** Without any money to pay the 7-year rent for her apartment, Levy is forced to find a current one. However, she runs into several problems including not having enough having to pay for the deposit, her credentials being questionable due to being a member of [[DestructiveHero Fairy Tail]], and any apartment she can afford to buy is not adequate for living in.
** Kain and Rustyrose, as two of Grimoire Hearts elites, were powerful threats back when they were first fought. But after seven years of imprisonment and having their magic sealed away, it becomes a brief challenge for both Fairy Tail and the Magic Council to take them down.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Despite being using free-hand Solid Script to aid Gajeel in his fight against Natsu at the last second, Levy isn't an InstantExpert. Her fight against Ore has her using her pen to use her magic, and in "A Play Of The Ages," she mentions to Lisanna that she's been practicing free-hand style to make it more consistent.
** Without any money to pay the 7-year rent for her apartment, Levy is forced to find a current one. However, she runs into several problems including not having enough having to pay for the deposit, her credentials being questionable due to being a member of [[DestructiveHero Fairy Tail]], and any apartment she can afford to buy is not adequate for living in.
** Despite being using free-hand Solid Script to aid Gajeel in his fight against Natsu at the last second, Levy isn't an InstantExpert. Her fight against Ore has her using her pen to use her magic, and in "A Play Of The Ages," she mentions to Lisanna that she's been practicing free-hand style to make it more consistent.
** Without any money to pay the 7-year rent for her apartment, Levy is forced to find a current one. However, she runs into several problems including not having enough having to pay for the deposit, her credentials being questionable due to being a member of [[DestructiveHero Fairy Tail]], and any apartment she can afford to buy is not adequate for living in.
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* VillainDecay: Kain and Rustyrose, as two of Grimoire Hearts elites, were powerful threats back when they were first fought. But after seven years of imprisonment and having their magic sealed away, it becomes a brief challenge for both Fairy Tail and the Magic Council to take them down.
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* TheForceIsStrongWithThisOne: When the alliance is wondering who is the sole representative from Cait Shelter is, many of them pick up a large amount of magic coming towards them... only for the door to open and reveal thirteen-year-old Kagura. Jura soon realizes that the magic wasn't coming from Kagura, but rather ''her sword'' Archenemy.
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** In canon, while having saved Mystogan's life years ago, Pantherlily was introduced as a commander of the Edolas Army, and was first [[BoomerangBigot willing to see the other Exceeds face extinction]] after [[DefectorFromDecedence they refused to help Mystogan years ago]], only changing sides when he sees both the Earthland Wizards and the Exceeds work together to save Extalia. In 'Alternate Tail', he is introduced as a member of Fairy Tail from the start, [[spoiler: and worked alongside Mystogan to stop the Anima's from taking Earthland's magic.]]
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** In canon, while having saved Mystogan's life years ago, Pantherlily was introduced as a commander of the Edolas Army, and was first [[BoomerangBigot willing to see the other Exceeds face extinction]] after [[DefectorFromDecedence [[DefectorFromDecadence they refused to help Mystogan years ago]], only changing sides when he sees both the Earthland Wizards and the Exceeds work together to save Extalia. In 'Alternate Tail', he is introduced as a member of Fairy Tail from the start, [[spoiler: and worked alongside Mystogan to stop the Anima's from taking Earthland's magic.]]
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** Mira, see Adaptational Badass AdaptationalBadass above.
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** Jet implies trope regarding Gajeel when the team learns his adoptive father [[spoiler:Metalicana was once the ruler of an ancient nation]], only for Gajeel to reply that ''he'' never knew about it either.
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** Jet implies this trope regarding Gajeel when the team learns his adoptive father [[spoiler:Metalicana was once the ruler of an ancient nation]], only for Gajeel to reply that ''he'' never knew about it either.
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* YouDidntAsk: When the main team learns that Levy's grandfather [[spoiler:was a Wizard Saint]], Mira aks her why she didn't meantion it sooner. Levy jokes that they never asked.
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* YouDidntAsk: YouDidntAsk:
** When the main team learns that Levy's grandfather [[spoiler:was a Wizard Saint]], Mira aks her why she didn't meantion it sooner. Levy jokes that they neverasked.asked.
** Jet implies trope regarding Gajeel when the team learns his adoptive father [[spoiler:Metalicana was once the ruler of an ancient nation]], only for Gajeel to reply that ''he'' never knew about it either.
** When the main team learns that Levy's grandfather [[spoiler:was a Wizard Saint]], Mira aks her why she didn't meantion it sooner. Levy jokes that they never
** Jet implies trope regarding Gajeel when the team learns his adoptive father [[spoiler:Metalicana was once the ruler of an ancient nation]], only for Gajeel to reply that ''he'' never knew about it either.
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*** The title "Black Steel" in canon belonged only to Gajeel. Here it is said that it once belonged to his father, Metalicana.
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** In canon, while having saved Mystogan's life years ago, Pantherlily was introduced as a commander of the Edolas Army, and was first willing to see the other Exceeds face extinction after [[DefectorFromDecedence they refused to help Mystogan years ago]], only changing sides when he sees both the Earthland Wizards and the Exceeds work together to save Extalia. In 'Alternate Tail', he is introduced as a member of Fairy Tail from the start, [[spoiler: and worked alongside Mystogan to stop the Anima's from taking Earthland's magic.]]
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** In canon, while having saved Mystogan's life years ago, Pantherlily was introduced as a commander of the Edolas Army, and was first [[BoomerangBigot willing to see the other Exceeds face extinction extinction]] after [[DefectorFromDecedence they refused to help Mystogan years ago]], only changing sides when he sees both the Earthland Wizards and the Exceeds work together to save Extalia. In 'Alternate Tail', he is introduced as a member of Fairy Tail from the start, [[spoiler: and worked alongside Mystogan to stop the Anima's from taking Earthland's magic.]]
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** Even with Lisanna still around, Elfman is still traumatized to use Full-Body Takeover before the Phantom Lord arc, since Mira and Lisanna were both injured from his animalistic self.
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** Even with Lisanna still around, Elfman is still traumatized to use Full-Body Takeover before the Phantom Lord arc, since Mira and Lisanna were both injured from his animalistic self.during that incident.
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* IntergenerationalFriendship: The main team mostly has young adults ranging from 17 to 19 with Gajeel, Levy, Lyon, and Mira. However, it also has from the much younger Kagura and Carla at 13 and 6 respectively as well as the 198 years old Pantherlily, who is described as being around middle-age spiritually. [[spoiler: The fact he is also Carla's father helps add to this trope]].
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* IntergenerationalFriendship: The main team mostly has young adults ranging from 17 to 19 with Gajeel, Levy, Lyon, and Mira. However, it also has from the much younger Kagura and Carla at 13 and 6 respectively as well as the 198 years old Pantherlily, who is described as being around middle-age spiritually. [[spoiler: The fact he is also Carla's father helps add to this trope]].
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* LegacyCharacter: Gajeel takes the title "Black Steel" from his adoptive father, the Iron Dragon Metalicana.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: When the Galuna Island Request is stolen from the S-Class Board, nearly everyone is shocked that it was ''Pantherlily'', [[CloudcuckoolandersMinderthe one that usually keeps Gajeel from getting into trouble]], that stole it.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: When the Galuna Island Request is stolen from the S-Class Board, nearly everyone is shocked that it was ''Pantherlily'', [[CloudcuckoolandersMinderthe [[CloudcuckoolandersMinder the one that usually keeps Gajeel from getting into trouble]], that stole it.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: In her fight against Mira, Beelzea states that the Takeover has constantly letting her past trauma impact her actions, such as relenting her attack on Laxus when she had the chance to kill him, allowing him to wait for the Etherion to be absorbed by the Tower of Heaven, or going after Ultear without a thought or plan.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: In her fight against Mira, Beelzea states that the Takeover has constantly letting her past trauma impact her actions, such as relenting her attack on Laxus when she had the chance to kill him, allowing him to wait for the Etherion to be absorbed by the Tower of Heaven, or going after Ultear without even a thought or plan.
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* SuperpowerfulGenetics: Implied with Carla, who unlocked her precognition years earlier than her mother Shagotte [[spoiler:because she also inherited higher magic capacity from her father, Lily]].
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* AgeLift: Kagura and Rogue are de-aged from 16 to 13 and from 12 to 6 respectively at X784.* AllYourPowersCombined: Downplayed example during [[spoiler: Tenrou Island, where in the fight against Azuma, Lyon uses an [[ElementalArmor Ice Sentry]] that contains traits of his teammates(Gajeel's scale, Levy's Bogha, Lily and Carla's wings, Mira's demon tail, and Kagura's sword) as well as using Ice-Make versions of Elfman's beast arm, Cana's cards, and Merudy's Maguilty blades]].
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* AgeLift: Kagura and Rogue are de-aged from 16 to 13 and from 12 to 6 respectively at X784.X784.
* AllYourPowersCombined: Downplayed example during [[spoiler: Tenrou Island, where in the fight against Azuma, Lyon uses an [[ElementalArmor Ice Sentry]] that contains traits of his teammates(Gajeel's scale, Levy's Bogha, Lily and Carla's wings, Mira's demon tail, and Kagura's sword) as well as using Ice-Make versions of Elfman's beast arm, Cana's cards, and Merudy's Maguilty blades]].
* AllYourPowersCombined: Downplayed example during [[spoiler: Tenrou Island, where in the fight against Azuma, Lyon uses an [[ElementalArmor Ice Sentry]] that contains traits of his teammates(Gajeel's scale, Levy's Bogha, Lily and Carla's wings, Mira's demon tail, and Kagura's sword) as well as using Ice-Make versions of Elfman's beast arm, Cana's cards, and Merudy's Maguilty blades]].
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* NotHisSled: Despite sticking to TheStationsOfCanon, they are a few distinctions from the original story...
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* NotHisSled: Despite sticking to TheStationsOfCanon, TheStationsOfTheCanon, they are a few distinctions from the original story...
