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* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler: Despite Adrien's vulnerable mental state, it's implied Gabriel refuses to akumatize him. [[AvertedTrope It doesn't change the fact that he's abused his son.]] ]]
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* KickTheDog: Gabriel demeans Adrien [[spoiler: in the climax when confronted.]]
* KickTheMoralityPet: Unintentionally done by Chloe when she belittles Chat Noir.
* KickTheMoralityPet: Unintentionally done by Chloe when she belittles Chat Noir.
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* WeCanRuleTogether: [[spoiler: Gabriel gives a variant to Adrien. Tempting him with his mother's return and a complete family in exchange for Ladybug's identity.]] [[spoiler: Adrien regects his offer.]]
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* ThereAreNoTherapists: [[AvertedTrope Averted.]] Adrien does see one in between chapters.
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* AbusiveParents: Gabriel already had a foot in this trope before Adrien confronts him [[spoiler: about being Papillon. Gabriel proceeds to ridicule and trivialize Adrien's trauma.]]
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** [[spoiler: Lila is temporarily killed.]]
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* ParentalNeglect: Gabriel takes this {{UpToEleven}} (even by Canon standards) by avoiding Adrien to the point where they don't see each other for months.
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* MultitaskedConversation: Adrien talks to Nino about [[spoiler: being Chat Noir]] and his trauma while not letting it slip to Kagami that Nino is Carapace.
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* HeroicSafeMode: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed.]] Despite his anger and disappointment Adrien manages to stay focused long enough [[spoiler: confront Gabriel.]]
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* HeroicSafeMode: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed.]] Despite his anger and disappointment Adrien manages to stay focused long enough [[spoiler: to confront Gabriel.]]
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* HeroicSafeMode: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed.]] Despite his anger and disappointment Adrien manages to stay focused long enough [[spoiler: confront Gabriel.]]
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* NoIndoorVoice: Gabriel reacts this way to Adrien talking back to him.
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* WellDoneSonGuy: Averted. Adrien's development throughout the story allows him to move past this mentality.
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* WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler: Nino isn't happy about Adrien keeping Lila's lies a secret and demands an explanation. Prompting Adrien to explain his reasoning on how he's {{NotSoDifferent}} from Lila]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler: Nino isn't happy about Adrien keeping Lila's lies a secret and demands an explanation. Prompting Adrien to explain his reasoning on how he's {{NotSoDifferent}} from Lila]]Lila]]
* YouCalledMeXItMustBeSerious: Adrien refers to Gabriel by name instead of "father" [[spoiler: while confronting the elder Agreste's actions as Papillon.]]
* YouCalledMeXItMustBeSerious: Adrien refers to Gabriel by name instead of "father" [[spoiler: while confronting the elder Agreste's actions as Papillon.]]
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* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: [[spoiler: Luka]] is given the Black Cat Miraculous when Adrien can no longer be Chat Noir.
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* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: [[spoiler: Luka]] is given the Black Cat Miraculous when Adrien can no longer be Chat Noir. He takes the name of Panthera.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Adrien finally snaps at Chloe after she ridicules Chat Noir.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Adrien finally snaps at Chloe after she ridicules Chat Noir.Noir for being worse than Panthera.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Adrien defeats Gabriel, saving Paris but doesn't go back to being Chat Noir.]] [[spoiler: {{WordOfGod}} says that he either becomes the new Butterfly wielder or helps the Miraculous holders in a non-powered capacity.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Adrien defeats Gabriel, Gabriel and overcomes his personal demons, saving Paris but doesn't go back to being Chat Noir.]] [[spoiler: {{WordOfGod}} says that he either becomes the new Butterfly wielder or helps the Miraculous holders in a non-powered capacity.]]
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* OffscreenKarma: Lila's lies and willingness to work with Papillon are exposed to all of Paris. [[And Oni-Chan killed her.]] It's also implied that she was expelled.
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* OffscreenKarma: Lila's lies and willingness to work with Papillon are exposed to all of Paris. [[And [[spoiler: And Oni-Chan killed her.]] It's also implied that she was expelled.
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* DoYouTrustMe: Said by Nino to get Adrien to open up about why he's avoiding Marinette. Adrien turns it around and asks if Nino trusts him even if Adrien doesn't explain.
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* WhatIf: The premise of the story follows what would have happened if Adrien's defeat at the hands of Weredad wasn't interrupted.
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* WhatIf: The premise of the story follows what would have happened if Adrien's defeat at the hands of Weredad wasn't interrupted.interrupted.
* WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler: Nino isn't happy about Adrien keeping Lila's lies a secret and demands an explanation. Prompting Adrien to explain his reasoning on how he's {{NotSoDifferent}} from Lila]]
* WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler: Nino isn't happy about Adrien keeping Lila's lies a secret and demands an explanation. Prompting Adrien to explain his reasoning on how he's {{NotSoDifferent}} from Lila]]
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Panthera and Carapace]] both get hit by the akuma and Ladybug has to fight all of them at once.
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* OffscreenKarma: Lila's lies and willingness to work with Papillon are exposed to all of Paris. [[And Oni-Chan killed her.]] It's also implied that she was expelled.
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* LittleNo: Adrien says this [[spoiler: to Gabriel after he demands that Adrien tell him who Ladybug is.]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Adrien gives three of these.
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** And one to [[spoiler: Gabriel.]]
--> '''Adrien:''' [[spoiler: "You have the Power of Transmission! That means you empower people with ''your own emotions!'' All the rage, all the selfishness, all the ''apathy'', that every one of your akumatized ''victims'' have inflicted on this city, all of that comes from ''you!''"]]
--> '''Adrien:''' [[spoiler: "You have the Power of Transmission! That means you empower people with ''your own emotions!'' All the rage, all the selfishness, all the ''apathy'', that every one of your akumatized ''victims'' have inflicted on this city, all of that comes from ''you!''"]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Adrien gives two of these, one to Chloé and one to Gabriel.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Adrien gives two three of these, one these.
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-->'''Adrien:''' "A-all you do is i-insult everyone around you. Criticizing e-every flaw l-like you don't have any.[..] That- That's not ''okay!'' J-just because you're in pain doesn't give you the right toGabriel.m-make everyone else as miserable as ''you!''"
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-->'''Adrien:''' "A-all you do is i-insult everyone around you. Criticizing e-every flaw l-like you don't have any.[..] That- That's not ''okay!'' J-just because you're in pain doesn't give you the right to
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* TraumaButton: Tom Dupain is this for Adrien, as he's reminded of Weredad.
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* TheyLookJustLikeEveryoneElse: Discused twice.twice.
* WhatIf: The premise of the story follows what would have happened if Adrien's defeat at the hands of Weredad wasn't interrupted.
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* BigNo: Gabriel gets two of these. The first when he fails to stop Weredad from throwing Adrien off the thorn tower. The second [[when Adrien confronts Gabriel over his death.]]
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* BigNo: Gabriel gets two of these. The first when he fails to stop Weredad from throwing Adrien off the thorn tower. The second [[when [[spoiler: when Adrien confronts Gabriel over his death.]]
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* BigNo: Gabriel gets two of these. The first when he fails to stop Weredad from throwing Adrien off the thorn tower. The second [[when Adrien confronts Gabriel over his death.]]
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* NotSoDifferent: Adrien's motivation for trying to help Lila is that she reminds him of himself. [[NotSoSimilar Nino disagrees.]]
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* {{Irony}}: Luka states that Marinette and Adrien would be a good pair. [[spoiler Unaware that she's already dating his alter ego as Ladybug.]] Adrien is amused.
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* {{Irony}}: Luka states that Marinette and Adrien would be a good pair. [[spoiler [[spoiler: Unaware that she's already dating his alter ego as Ladybug.]] Adrien is amused.
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* RealityEnsues: After spoiler: being killed, having his Miraculous taken away and generally being confronted with the weight of his own failure Adrien has an emotional breakdown. He spends much of the rest of the story depressed.
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* RealityEnsues: After spoiler: being killed, having his Miraculous taken away and generally being confronted with the weight of his own failure failure, Adrien has an emotional breakdown. He spends much of the rest of the story depressed.
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* {{Irony}}: Luka states that Marinette and Adrien would be a good pair. [[Unaware that she's already dating his alter ego as Ladybug.]] Adrien is amused.
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* CallingTheOldManOut: [[spoiler: Adrien confronts Gabriel in the climax, letting all his pent up frustration loose.]]
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What if Weredad had taken Adrien's Miraculous when he had the chance?
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What if Weredad had taken Adrien's Miraculous when he had the chance?
chance? Seen who was behind the mask and exposed Adrien's identity to Papillon?
