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** [[spoiler:Lyn Corbray, the assassin that killed Robert, is unceremoniously executed by Myrcella, the late king's trueborn daughter.]]
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** [[spoiler:Lyn Corbray, the assassin that killed Robert, is unceremoniously executed by Princess Myrcella, the late king's trueborn daughter.]]
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* AbledInTheAdaptation: Because he doesn't climb the tower and gets pushed by Jamie, Bran doesn't get crippled from the waist down.
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* AbledInTheAdaptation: Because he doesn't climb the tower and gets pushed by Jamie, Jaime, Bran doesn't get crippled from the waist down.
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* CoolUncle: Tyrion, Renly and Jamie to Myrcella. Kevan is a Great uncle variant.
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* CoolUncle: Tyrion, Renly and Jamie Jaime to Myrcella. Kevan is a Great uncle variant.
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** [[spoiler:When Jamie discovers Ser Boros Blount and Robert's corpses amongst the dead assassins they took down with them, he remarks that Ser Boros died like a true Kingsguard, and that this is the way his King wanted to go out, rather than drink himself into an early grave.]]
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** [[spoiler:When Jamie Jaime discovers Ser Boros Blount and Robert's corpses amongst the dead assassins they took down with them, he remarks that Ser Boros died like a true Kingsguard, and that this is the way his King wanted to go out, rather than drink himself into an early grave.]]
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* HesitationEqualsDishonesty: Ned figures out that Myrcella is the only child Cersei birthed for Robert instead of Jamie due to this trope when she confronts her on her children's parentage.
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* HesitationEqualsDishonesty: Ned figures out that Myrcella is the only child Cersei birthed for Robert instead of Jamie Jaime due to this trope when she confronts her on her children's parentage.
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** [[spoiler:Jamie]] dies trying and failing to save [[spoiler:Joffrey]] which deeply affects Tywin and Cersei.
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** [[spoiler:Jamie]] [[spoiler:Jaime]] dies trying and failing to save [[spoiler:Joffrey]] which deeply affects Tywin and Cersei.
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** Jamie is Tywin's golden son with Tyrion being TheUnFavourite.
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: When Jamie explains Cersei's plan [[spoiler:to kill her husband and Ned]], an exasperated Tyrion points out she could have just slipped the King poison instead, as that would be less likely to lead to a civil war with PlausibleDeniability.
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: When Jamie Jaime explains Cersei's plan [[spoiler:to kill her husband and Ned]], an exasperated Tyrion points out she could have just slipped the King poison instead, as that would be less likely to lead to a civil war with PlausibleDeniability.
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* VillainousBSOD: Cersei proceeds to devolve into this when she is then informed that [[spoiler:Jamie died along with her eldest son.]] Tywin goes through this, too.
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* VillainousBSOD: Cersei proceeds to devolve into this when she is then informed that [[spoiler:Jamie [[spoiler:Jaime died along with her eldest son.]] Tywin goes through this, too.
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* MyMasterRightOrWrong: Myrcella uses the fact that Barristan and the rest of Aerys' kingsguard were this for the Mad King to justify why he should stay in Westeros despite Joffrey being just as unworthy, though using the opportunity to transfer his loyalty to her. Brienne also swore and reaffirmed this to her princess, intent on being true to it after coming clean about her duplicity, [[spoiler:which stays her hand after confirming that Cersei's schemes killed Renly]].
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* MyMasterRightOrWrong: Myrcella uses the fact that Ser Barristan and the rest of Aerys' kingsguard Kingsguard were this for the Mad King to justify why he should stay in Westeros despite King Joffrey being just as unworthy, though using the opportunity to transfer his loyalty to her. Brienne also swore and reaffirmed this to her princess, intent on being true to it after coming clean about her duplicity, [[spoiler:which stays her hand after confirming that Cersei's schemes killed Renly]].
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* GlorySeeker: House Frey, as ever. Ironically, thanks to joining with Myrcella, [[spoiler: and after Lysa and Petyr are the ones to break guest rights, and sully the Vale's reputation]], they are poised to earn glory and honor legitimately in this story.
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** When Myrcella tries to make her uncle look bad in the discussion for the PrisonerExchange, Stannis calls her just as manipulative and deceitful as her mother, Cersei.
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** When Myrcella tries to make her uncle look bad in the discussion for the PrisonerExchange, Stannis calls her just as manipulative and deceitful as her mother, Cersei. Cersei Lannister.
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* BelievingTheirOwnLies: Cersei has convinced herself that Myrcella's father is Jaime and not Robert, despite the mount evidence to the contrary.
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* BelievingTheirOwnLies: Cersei has convinced herself that Myrcella's father is Jaime and not Robert, despite the mount mounting evidence to the contrary.
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* BelievingTheirOwnLies: Cersei has convinced herself that Myrcella's father is Jaime and not Robert, despite the mount evidence to the contrary.
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: Melisandre is a sorceress who toes the line into being a HumanoidAbomination. Her brief meeting of Myrcella, where the princess sees through her illusions, and uses her knowledge of the folklore of Azor Ahai to sow doubt in Stannis' followers, has the priestess more shaken than anyone has achieved in all her centuries of life. It's also implied Myrcella's existence and constant throwing the future into doubt has R'hllor panicking as well.
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* StayInTheKitchen: Tywin tells Myrcella, the Lady Paramount of the Stormlands, that she has no place in the war councils and battlefields because she is both young and a girl, and that he expects her future husband to handle these concerns when she reaches maturity. She tells him that, if it bothers him so much, he can take it up with Ser Barristan.
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* StayInTheKitchen: Tywin tells Myrcella, the Lady Paramount of the Stormlands, that she has no place in the war councils and battlefields because she is both young and a girl, and that he expects her future husband to handle these concerns instead when she reaches maturity. She Myrcella tells him that, if it bothers him so much, he can take it up with Ser Barristan.
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* LadyDrunk: Cersei is often seen with a goblet of wine in her hands. Its possible that many of of rash and foolish decisions are influenced by AlcoholInducedIdiocy.
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** Myrcella is ([[AlternateCharacterInterpretation depending on how you view her]]), either a high-functioning sociopath with little real empathy towards anyone, or someone who simply doesn't let her emotions get in the way of her pragmatism and self-interest, but either way she's not at all impressed by the spiteful and petty behavior of Joffrey and Cersei.
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** Myrcella is ([[AlternateCharacterInterpretation depending on how you view her]]), her]]) is either a high-functioning sociopath with little real empathy towards anyone, or someone who simply doesn't let her emotions get in the way of her pragmatism and self-interest, but either way she's not at all impressed by the spiteful and petty behavior of Joffrey and Cersei.
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* AGoodWayToDie: [[spoiler:When Jamie discovers Ser Boros Blount and Robert's corpses amongst the dead assassins they took down with them, he remarks that Ser Boros died like a true Kingsguard, and that this is the way his King wanted to go out, rather than drink himself into an early grave.]]
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** [[spoiler:When Jamie discovers Ser Boros Blount and Robert's corpses amongst the dead assassins they took down with them, he remarks that Ser Boros died like a true Kingsguard, and that this is the way his King wanted to go out, rather than drink himself into an early grave.]]
** [[spoiler:When Jamie discovers Ser Boros Blount and Robert's corpses amongst the dead assassins they took down with them, he remarks that Ser Boros died like a true Kingsguard, and that this is the way his King wanted to go out, rather than drink himself into an early grave.]]
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* KillItWithFire: [[spoiler:Tywin's solution to overcome the Reach's considerable numerical superiority is a wildfire trap in the Kingswood.]]
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* KillItWithFire: [[spoiler:Tywin's solution to overcome the Reach's considerable numerical superiority and get rid of Joffrey is a wildfire trap in the Kingswood.]]
* LadyDrunk: Cersei is often seen with a goblet of wine in her hands. Its possible that many of of rash and foolish decisions are influenced by AlcoholInducedIdiocy.
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* NotHelpingYourCase: The first time Myrcella meets Tywin, she comes across as a young Cersei with her attempts to be given responsibility beyond the Westeros role of girls and women; something Tywin himself notes. She then tries to be given an opportunity to prove herself by noting how Tywin gave [[TheUnfavorite Tyrion]] an assignment of the Rock's sewage system. Tywin completely shuts her down after that.
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* NotHelpingYourCase: The first time Myrcella meets Tywin, she comes across as a young Cersei with her attempts to be given responsibility beyond the Westeros role of girls and women; something Tywin himself notes. She then tries to be given an opportunity to prove herself by noting how Tywin gave [[TheUnfavorite [[TheUnFavourite Tyrion]] an assignment of the Rock's sewage system. [[GetOut Tywin completely shuts her down after that.]]
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* AllForNothing: The ultimate reason Jaime killed the Mad King [[spoiler: was to prevent him from destroying King's Landing by burning it all down with wildfire]]. Come the succession war after Robert's death, [[spoiler: Tywin uses wildfire strategically placed in King's Landing to hold off Stannis' invading forces, and this triggers unexpected explosions of wildfire in the city, that is implied to be set up by Varys to further kill both sides]].
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** Jaime is this to Tyrion, [[spoiler:which makes it all the more heartbreaking when he finds out about his demise.]]
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* DudeNotFunny: Even after she apologises and tells him she was joking and doesn't believe its true, Jaime still gives Myrcella a disapproving look when she makes a quip about the (true) BrotherSisterIncest rumors about him and Cersei.
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* NotHelpingYourCase: The first time Myrcella meets Tywin, she comes across as a young Cersei with her attempts to be given responsibility beyond the Westeros role of girls and women; something Tywin himself notes. She then tries to be given an opportunity to prove herself by noting how Tywin gave [[TheUnfavorite Tyrion]] an assignment of the Rock's sewage system. Tywin completely shuts her down after that.
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* DisappointingPromotion: Jaime sees being made acting Hand of the King by Cersei as this, explaining to her that he never asked or wanted the position and was already happy just being a member of The Kingsguard.
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** Myrcella's own scheming ends up indirectly sabotaging several of Littlefinger's plots by causing situations to unfold outside of his ability to predict. [[spoiler: Which is why he conspires with Lysa to lure her into a trap and remove her from the board.]]
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** Myrcella's own scheming ends up indirectly sabotaging several of Littlefinger's plots by causing situations to unfold outside of his ability to predict. [[spoiler: Which is why he conspires with Lysa to lure her into a trap and remove her from the board. Unfortunately for him, Myrcella thwarts even this plan by surviving thanks to magic.]]
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** Myrcella is the one that constantly looks out for Tommen, especially from Joffrey, their BigBrotherBully .
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** Myrcella is the one that constantly looks out for Tommen, especially from Joffrey, their BigBrotherBully .BigBrotherBully.
** As Jaime realises that Tyrion is with Robert when Cersei orders the latter's assassination, he immediately rides out of King's Landing to his aid. [[spoiler:When he finds him safe and sound, the first thing the brothers do is embrace each other in a hug.]]
** As Jaime realises that Tyrion is with Robert when Cersei orders the latter's assassination, he immediately rides out of King's Landing to his aid. [[spoiler:When he finds him safe and sound, the first thing the brothers do is embrace each other in a hug.]]
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-young-girls-game-of-thrones.1095557/ A Young Girl's Game of Thrones]]'' is a crossover fanfiction between ''Literature/TheSagaOfTanyaTheEvil'' and ''Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire'' by Failninja. This fanfic can also be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/54068080/chapters/136883695 here]] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-young-girls-game-of-thrones.1095557/ A Young Girl's Game of Thrones]]'' is a crossover fanfiction between ''Literature/TheSagaOfTanyaTheEvil'' and ''Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire'' by Failninja.Failninja who also wrote ''Fanfic/AYoungWomansInevitableDanceOfTheDragons''. This fanfic can also be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/54068080/chapters/136883695 here]] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.