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Now has a sequel in progress, entitled ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/92316/flames-and-twilight Flames and Twilight]]''.
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Now has a sequel in progress, completed sequel, entitled ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/92316/flames-and-twilight Flames and Twilight]]''.
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** [[spoiler:Darkrai also infuse his magic with his Pokémon attacks called out his attacks names.]]
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* AlchemyIsMagic: In the Epilogue, Flare's favor to [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon is to bring her back to life and not only that He brought her back into a Filly and loses the Alicorn Amulet forever, and is given a new name]]
** This is also counts as a ShoutOut since this is similar to the plot of [[Fanfic/PastSins Past Sins]] since it has [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon is brought back to life as a Filly and is given a new name.]]
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* AlchemyIsMagic: In the Epilogue, Flare's favor to [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon is to bring her back to life and not only that He brought her back into a Filly and loses the Alicorn Amulet forever, and is given a [[FanNickname new name]]
name]].]]
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* TakingYouWithMe: In "Chapter Nine – Darkness before the Dawn", [[spoiler: After Darkrai released He had lost He said this:]]
-->[[''Darkrai'':]] [[spoiler: “If this is to be my end, so be it! BUT I’LL TAKE YOU ALL WITH ME!”]]
-->[[''Darkrai'':]] [[spoiler: “If this is to be my end, so be it! BUT I’LL TAKE YOU ALL WITH ME!”]]
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* AlchemyIsMagic: In the Epilogue, Flare's favor to [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon is to bring her back to life and not only that He brought her back into a Filly and loses the Alicorn Amulet forever.]]
** This is also counts as a ShoutOut since this is similar to the plot of [[Fanfic/PastSins Past Sins]] since it has [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon is to brought back to life as a Filly and is given a new name.]]
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* AlchemyIsMagic: In the Epilogue, Flare's favor to [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon is to bring her back to life and not only that He brought her back into a Filly and loses the Alicorn Amulet forever.]]
forever, and is given a new name]]
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** This is also counts as a ShoutOut since this is similar to the plot of [[Fanfic/PastSins]] [[Fanfic/PastSins Past Sins]] since it has [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon is to brought back to life as a Filly and is given a new name.]]
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* AlchemyIsMagic: In the Epilogue, Flare's favor to [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon is to bring her back to life and not only that He brought her back into a Filly and loses the Alicorn Amulet forever.]]
** This is also counts as a ShoutOut since this is similar to the plot of [[Fanfic/PastSins]] since it has [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon is to brought back to life as a Filly and is given a new name.]]
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* BurningWithAnger: Twilight's reaction when [[spoiler:Virizion mistakenly attacks Flare, thinking she's defending Keldeo]]. Flare's response, naturally, is, "[[MemeticMutation When… did my Twilight evolve into a Rapidash?]]"
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* BurningWithAnger: Twilight's reaction when [[spoiler:Virizion [[spoiler: Virizion mistakenly attacks Flare, thinking she's defending Keldeo]]. Flare's response, naturally, is, "[[MemeticMutation When… did my Twilight evolve into a Rapidash?]]"
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* IChooseToStay: In the Epilogue, [[spoiler: Flare's friends, Sapphira, Lucy, and Velvet decided to stay in Equestria with Flare for different reasons; Sapphira wants to stay because she'll have to bail Flare out of trouble. Lucy wants to stay because so she'll get three meals and nap time and she don’t really care where she go. Velvet wants to stay because he want's to see the fashion, theatre, music, and staying with his friends]].
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* FusionDance: In "Knightmare", [[spoiler: Flare and Nightmare Moon become Knightmare Nova after Flare puts on the Alicorn Amulet.]]
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* VillainSong: In "Knightmare", "Chaos Rising Part Two", [[spoiler: Chrysalis and some of her Changelings sang a parody of [[Disney/TheLittleMermaid Under the Sea]].]]
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* VillainSong: In "Knightmare", [[spoiler: Chrysalis and some of her Changelings sang a parody of [[TheLittlemermaid of [[Disney/TheLittleMermaid Under the Sea]].]]
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* FusionDance: In "Knightmare", [[spoiler: Flare and Nightmare Moon become Knightmare Nova after Flare puts on the Alicorn Amulet.]]
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* VillainSong: In "Knightmare", [[spoiler: Chrysalis and some of her Changelings sang a parody of [[TheLittlemermaid Under the Sea]].]]
* VoiceOfTheLegion: [[spoiler:Knightmare Nova has the voices of Flare and Nightmare Moon speaking at once.]]
* VoiceOfTheLegion: [[spoiler:Knightmare Nova has the voices of Flare and Nightmare Moon speaking at once.]]
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* DraggedIntoDrag: When trying to find his Cutie Mark with The Cutie Mark Crusaders, Flare was almost force into an dress by Sweetie Belle but it was stop when The Cutie Mark Crusaders Start to argue and he bailed on them.
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* DraggedIntoDrag: When trying to find his Cutie Mark with The Cutie Mark Crusaders, Flare was almost force into an dress by Sweetie Belle but it was stop when The Cutie Mark Crusaders Start start to argue and he bailed on them.
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* KneelBeforeZod: In "Chaos Rising" After [[spoiler:Darkrai tells Sombra and Chrysalis to find Luna and [[BringHimToMe brought to him]]. He tells the Mane 6 Who he is and says this.]]
-->[[spoiler:'''Darkrai''': I am Darkrai! Lord of Nightmares! And once I have Luna’s power, you shall all kneel before me!]]
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* KneelBeforeZod: In "Chaos Rising" After [[spoiler:Darkrai tells Sombra and Chrysalis to find Luna and [[BringHimToMe brought to him]]. He tells the Mane 6 Who he is and says this.]]
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* KneelBeforeZod: In "Chaos Rising" After [[spoiler:Darkrai tells Sombra and Chrysalis to find Luna. He tells the Mane 6 Who he is says this.]]
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* KneelBeforeZod: In "Chaos Rising" After [[spoiler:Darkrai tells Sombra and Chrysalis to find Luna.Luna and [[BringHimToMe brought to him]]. He tells the Mane 6 Who he is says this.]]
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-->[[spoiler:'''Darkrai''': I am Darkrai! Lord of Nightmares! And once I have Luna’s power, you shall all kneel before me!]]
-->[[spoiler:'''Darkrai''': I am Darkrai! Lord of Nightmares! And once I have Luna’s power, you shall all kneel before me!]]
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* WhamEpisode: In "Home Sweet Home", [[spoiler:Darkrai is revealed to be working with Sombra and someone else to take over Equestria, and he sends Flare and (by accident) Sparkler to Kanto to keep him out of the way]].
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* WhamEpisode: In "Home Sweet Home", [[spoiler:Darkrai is revealed to be working with Sombra and someone else (later confirmed to be Chrysalis) to take over Equestria, and he sends Flare and (by accident) Sparkler to Kanto to keep him out of the way]].
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* Wham Line: In "Chaos Rising":
-->[[spoiler:'''Zecora''': You have threatened my friends and borne witness to this form. Now you face Equestria's other Pokemon: for I am the embodiment of lightning. I am Zebstrika!]]
* Wham Line: In "Chaos Rising":
-->[[spoiler:'''Zecora''': You have threatened my friends and borne witness to this form. Now you face Equestria's other Pokemon: for I am the embodiment of lightning. I am Zebstrika!]]
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* DraggedIntoDrag: When trying to find his Cutie Mark with The Cutie Mark Crusaders, Flare was almost force into an dress by Sweetie Belle but it was stop when The Cutie Mark Crusaders Start to argue and he bailed on them.
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* CallingYourAttacks: After he learn to use his magic and how to infuse his Pokémon attacks with it. Flare called out his new attacks names.
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* SealedEvilInACan: [[spoiler:Darkrai. After he's revealed to have escaped, the repeated failures of such seals in canon (Discord, Nightmare Moon and Sobra) is lampshaded by Celestia.]]
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* SealedEvilInACan: [[spoiler:Darkrai. After he's revealed to have escaped, the repeated failures of such seals in canon (Discord, Nightmare Moon and Sobra) Sombra) is lampshaded by Celestia.]]
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* WhamEpisode: In "Home Sweet Home", [[spoiler:Darkrai is revealed to be working with Sombra and someone else to take over Equestria, and he sends Flare and (by accident) Sparkler to Kanto to keep him out of the way]].
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Now has a sequel in progress (which is being rewritten), entitled ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/92316/flames-and-twilight Flames and Twilight]]''.
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Now has a sequel in progress (which is being rewritten), progress, entitled ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/92316/flames-and-twilight Flames and Twilight]]''.
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* SealedEvilInACan: [[spoiler:Darkrai. After he's revealed to have escaped, the repeated failures of such seals in canon (Discord, Nightmare Moon and Sobra) is lampshaded by Celestia.]]
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* UnskilledButStrong: When Flare explains how [[SignatureMove Twilight Blaze]] works to Celestia, she explains how surprising it is that Flare can use such an advanced ability like that and [[AchievementsInIgnorance not even realize how difficult it really should be.]] She also explains that while it's possible to infuse magical power into one’s physical prowess, it is both difficult and dangerous to do so.
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* UnskilledButStrong: When Flare explains how [[SignatureMove Twilight Blaze]] works to Celestia, she explains how surprising it is that Flare can use such an advanced ability like that and [[AchievementsInIgnorance not even realize how difficult it really should be.]] She also explains that while it's possible to infuse magical power into one’s physical prowess, it is both difficult and dangerous to do so.so.
* WhamEpisode: In "Home Sweet Home", [[spoiler:Darkrai is revealed to be working with Sombra to take over Equestria, and he sends Flare and (by accident) Sparkler to Kanto to keep him out of the way]].
* WhamEpisode: In "Home Sweet Home", [[spoiler:Darkrai is revealed to be working with Sombra to take over Equestria, and he sends Flare and (by accident) Sparkler to Kanto to keep him out of the way]].
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-->“Space, Time and Distortion, worlds beyond worlds and all are linked to [[OlympusMons the Creator]]. Born form nothing and encompassing everything, the fate of light and darkness, the bearer and destined. The eternal nightmare and the light of destiny. One born from the union of love and will, dreams given form and hope eternal.”
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-->“Space, Time and Distortion, worlds beyond worlds and all are linked to [[OlympusMons the Creator]]. Born form nothing and encompassing everything, the fate of light and darkness, the bearer and destined. The eternal nightmare [[BadDreams nightmare]] and the light of destiny. One born from the union of love and will, dreams given form and hope eternal.”
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** Averted in the revision: [[spoiler:Luna had done some studying up about Flare's world in order to overcome her own fears.]]
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* EmbarrassingNickname: For most of the story Flare was called "Demon Pony of Ponyville" because of his appearance.
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-->“So you’re the famous Demon Pony of Ponyville huh?” Fiddlesticks smiled and Flare groaned before applying his hoof to his face. That blasted title will never leave.
-->“So you’re the famous Demon Pony of Ponyville huh?” Fiddlesticks smiled and Flare groaned before applying his hoof to his face. That blasted title will never leave.
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* IllNeverTellYouWhatImTellingYou: Flare admits to calling Twilight [[spoiler:”my little Element of Harmony”]] in this manner.
** Averted in the revision: Flare admits to calling Twilight [[spoiler:‘Sparkle Fairy’]].
** Averted in the revision: Flare admits to calling Twilight [[spoiler:‘Sparkle Fairy’]].
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* IllNeverTellYouWhatImTellingYou: Flare admits to calling Twilight [[spoiler:”my little Element of Harmony”]] (changed to [[spoiler:Sparkle Fairy]] in the revision) in this manner.
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** Averted in the revision: Flare admits to calling Twilight [[spoiler:‘Sparkle Fairy’]].