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** Averted in the revision: Flare admits to calling Twilight [[spoiler:‘Sparkle Fairy’]].
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* BreadEggsBreadedEggs: When Celestia declares that Flare and Luna are going to be punished for [[spoiler: destroying most of the castle grounds,]] they both fearfully wonder what punishment is in store: Banishment? Imprisonment? Imprisonment in the place she would banish them to?


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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: Luna worries that Celestia's punishment for her and Flare [[spoiler: destroying the castle grounds]] will be to have her games taken away. Instead, it's worse: no dessert.
-->'''Luna:''' (sadly) And tonight's cake night too.

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** In the revision after Flutershy's yay Flare admits between Dinky, Twilight and Fluttershy. He thinks he'll die from it.

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** In the revision revision, after Flutershy's yay yay, Flare admits between Dinky, Twilight and Fluttershy. He Fluttershy, he thinks he'll die from it.this trope.
* [[spoiler: DeadlyUpgrade:]] Averted in the nick of time. [[spoiler: Flare's evolution into a Rapidash also gives him access to unicorn magic. Sadly, as a Pokemon, his body is incompatible with such powers and will kill him painfully if something isn't done. This is safely averted through Arceus and Celestia transforming him into a unicorn.]]
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* UnskilledButStrong: When Flare explains how did Twilight Blaze works to Celestia she explains to him that Flare can use such an advanced ability like that and he not even realize its difficulty or limits and she also explains that it's possible to infuse magical power into one’s physical prowess, but it is both difficult and dangerous.

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* UnskilledButStrong: When Flare explains how did [[SignatureMove Twilight Blaze Blaze]] works to Celestia Celestia, she explains to him how surprising it is that Flare can use such an advanced ability like that and he [[AchievementsInIgnorance not even realize its difficulty or limits and she how difficult it really should be.]] She also explains that while it's possible to infuse magical power into one’s physical prowess, but it is both difficult and dangerous.dangerous to do so.
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* MoreThanMindControl: In "Love is Chaos" [[spoiler:Discord hypnotized Flare to made him think that Rainbow Dash was Twilight]].
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* BigBad:[[spoiler:Darkrai]].

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* BigBad:[[spoiler:Darkrai]].BigBad: [[spoiler:Darkrai]].
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* BigBad:[[spoiler:Darkrai]].
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** [[spoiler:It was later revival that in "Love is Chaos" it's Darkrai]].

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** [[spoiler:It It was later revival that in "Love is Chaos" it's Darkrai]].[[spoiler:Darkrai]].
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* EvilOverlooker: In "A Flame Once Lost" An shadow watched and cursed silently as Trixie left Ponyville. Later in that same thing the same shadow watched Virizion and Keldeo vanished back to their world and makes the third phrase of his plan.
** [[spoiler:It was later revival that in "Love is Chaos" it's Darkrai]].
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* UnskilledButStrong: When Flare explains how did Twilight Blaze works to Celestia she explains to him that Flare use such an advanced ability like that and he not even realize its difficulty or limits and she also explains that it's possible to infuse magical power into one’s physical prowess, but it is both difficult and dangerous.

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* UnskilledButStrong: When Flare explains how did Twilight Blaze works to Celestia she explains to him that Flare can use such an advanced ability like that and he not even realize its difficulty or limits and she also explains that it's possible to infuse magical power into one’s physical prowess, but it is both difficult and dangerous.
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** Flare uses the courting ritual involving flowers introduced in ''Fanfic/{{Xenophilia}}''.

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** Flare uses the courting ritual involving flowers introduced in ''Fanfic/{{Xenophilia}}''.''Fanfic/{{Xenophilia}}''.
* UnskilledButStrong: When Flare explains how did Twilight Blaze works to Celestia she explains to him that Flare use such an advanced ability like that and he not even realize its difficulty or limits and she also explains that it's possible to infuse magical power into one’s physical prowess, but it is both difficult and dangerous.
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* TheProphecy: In Chapter 6 of the revision an Prophecy by Starswirl was written.

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* TheProphecy: In Chapter 6 of the revision an a Prophecy by Starswirl was written.
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Now has a sequel in progress (which has been edited), entitled ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/92316/flames-and-twilight Flames and Twilight]]''.


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Now has a sequel in progress (which has been edited), is being rewritten), entitled ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/92316/flames-and-twilight Flames and Twilight]]''.

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Now has a sequel in progress (which may or may not get a rewrite), entitled ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/92316/flames-and-twilight Flames and Twilight]]''.


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Now has a sequel in progress (which may or may not get a rewrite), has been edited), entitled ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/92316/flames-and-twilight Flames and Twilight]]''.

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* SuddenNameChange: The Giant [[SssssnakeTalk Snake]] from Chapter 7 was change from Ichneumon to an Titanoboa, a [[SssssnakeTalk snake]] that existed roughly 60 million years ago.

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* SuddenNameChange: The Giant [[SssssnakeTalk Snake]] from Chapter 7 was change from an Ichneumon to an Titanoboa, a [[SssssnakeTalk snake]] that existed roughly 60 million years ago.
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Now has a sequel in progress (now on hiatus), entitled ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/92316/flames-and-twilight Flames and Twilight]]''.

Note: The original story is currently undergoing a major revision, with the last few chapters (most of which are spoiler tagged below) currently unavailable.

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Now has a sequel in progress (now on hiatus), (which may or may not get a rewrite), entitled ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/92316/flames-and-twilight Flames and Twilight]]''.

Note: The original story is currently undergoing a major revision, with the last few chapters (most of which are spoiler tagged below) currently unavailable.
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I think everything after Arceus\'s arrival belongs in spoiler territory


* BigWhat in the revision Twilight tells Flare she and Sparkler found a way to send Flare back home and Flare did a reaction.

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* BigWhat in the revision Twilight tells Flare she and Sparkler found a way to send Flare back home and Flare did a reaction.BigWhat:



* CombatCommentator: Pinkie and Luna during the Flare/Arceus battle, the latter having somehow played ''VideoGame/{{Pokemon Black|AndWhite}} Version'' on DS.

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* CombatCommentator: Pinkie and Luna during the Flare/Arceus battle, [[spoiler:Flare/Arceus battle]], the latter having somehow played ''VideoGame/{{Pokemon Black|AndWhite}} Version'' on DS.



* EleventhHourSuperpower: Flare evolves into a Rapidash during the Solar Run, which gives him both the speed boost he needs and access to Unicorn Magic.
* ExactWords[=/=]LoopholeAbuse: Because Flare won the Solar Run as a Rapidash rather than a Ponyta, Arceus goes back on his agreement.

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* EleventhHourSuperpower: Flare [[spoiler:Flare evolves into a Rapidash during the Solar Run, which gives him both the speed boost he needs and access to Unicorn Magic.
Magic.]]
* ExactWords[=/=]LoopholeAbuse: Because [[spoiler:Because Flare won the Solar Run as a Rapidash rather than a Ponyta, Arceus goes back on his agreement.]]



* GoThroughMe: Twilight, Shining Armor and Cadance, when Arceus attempts to take Flare home against his wishes. Celestia herself makes it clear that she will do the same if Flare passes the condition she sets for him remaining in Equestria.
* HonorBeforeReason: [[spoiler:During the Solar Run, Flare refuses to tell his friends and competitors what's at stake for him, because it's not a fair race if they drop out for his sake.]]
** Justifiably subverted when he willingly accepts Arceus's decision to handicap himself by not using Super Effective attacks or Judgement.
* IChooseToStay: Flare. Arceus does not take it well.

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* GoThroughMe: Twilight, Shining Armor and Cadance, when Arceus [[spoiler:Arceus attempts to take Flare home against his wishes. Celestia herself makes it clear that she will do the same if Flare passes the condition she sets for him remaining in Equestria.
* HonorBeforeReason: [[spoiler:During the Solar Run, Flare refuses to tell his friends and competitors what's at stake for him, because it's not a fair race if they drop out for his sake.
Equestria.]]
* HonorBeforeReason: [[spoiler: In the original version, Flare refuses to tell his friends and competitors in the Solar Run what's at stake for him, because it's not a fair race if they drop out for his sake. The revision has him tell Rainbow Dash and Applejack while still insisting they give it everything they've got.]]
** [[spoiler: Justifiably subverted when he willingly accepts Arceus's decision to handicap himself by not using Super Effective attacks or Judgement.
Judgement.]]
* IChooseToStay: Flare. Arceus [[spoiler:Arceus does not take it well.]]



* StuffBlowingUp: Constantly during the Arceus/Flare battle, to the point where Pinkie wonders if [[Creator/MichaelBay Michael Neigh]] directed [[MediumAwareness this chapter]].
* SweetAndSourGrapes: After he wins the Solar Run, Flare asks Celestia to grant the wishes of Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Vanilla Bean rather than his own wish to stay in Equestria. However, this is because he believes he's already fulfilled Arceus's condition for him remaining in Equestria.
* ThisIsSomethingHesGotToDoHimself: spoiler:Flare refuses his friends' help fighting Arceus.

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* StuffBlowingUp: Constantly during [[spoiler: the Arceus/Flare battle, battle]], to the point where Pinkie wonders if [[Creator/MichaelBay Michael Neigh]] directed [[MediumAwareness this chapter]].
* SweetAndSourGrapes: After [[spoiler:After he wins the Solar Run, Flare asks Celestia to grant the wishes of Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Vanilla Bean rather than his own wish to stay in Equestria. However, this is because he believes he's already fulfilled Arceus's condition for him remaining in Equestria.
Equestria.]]
* ThisIsSomethingHesGotToDoHimself: spoiler:Flare [[spoiler:Flare refuses his friends' help fighting Arceus.]]



** Flare's challenge to Arceus after the Solar Run.

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** Flare's challenge to Arceus [[spoiler:Arceus after the Solar Run.]]



* WhamEpisode: At the end of [[spoiler: Chapter 8 in the original version, Arceus arrives to bring Flare back to Sinnoh.]]

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* WhamEpisode: At the end of [[spoiler: Chapter 8 in the original version, 10, Arceus arrives to bring Flare back to Sinnoh.]]
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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: spoiler: Flare doesn't actually defeat Arceus, but puts up enough of a fight that he agrees to let him stay.

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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: spoiler: [[spoiler: Flare doesn't actually defeat Arceus, but puts up enough of a fight that he agrees to let him stay.]]
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* CombatCommentator: [[spoiler:Pinkie and Luna during the Flare/Arceus battle, the latter having somehow played ''VideoGame/{{Pokemon Black|AndWhite}} Version'' on DS.]]

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* CombatCommentator: [[spoiler:Pinkie Pinkie and Luna during the Flare/Arceus battle, the latter having somehow played ''VideoGame/{{Pokemon Black|AndWhite}} Version'' on DS.]]



* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler: Flare doesn't actually defeat Arceus, but puts up enough of a fight that he agrees to let him stay.]]
* EleventhHourSuperpower: Flare evolves into a Rapidash during the Solar Run, which gives him both the speed boost he needs [[spoiler:and access to Unicorn Magic.]]

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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler: spoiler: Flare doesn't actually defeat Arceus, but puts up enough of a fight that he agrees to let him stay.]]
stay.
* EleventhHourSuperpower: Flare evolves into a Rapidash during the Solar Run, which gives him both the speed boost he needs [[spoiler:and and access to Unicorn Magic.]]



** [[spoiler: Justifiably subverted when he willingly accepts Arceus's decision to handicap himself by not using Super Effective attacks or Judgement]].

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** [[spoiler: Justifiably subverted when he willingly accepts Arceus's decision to handicap himself by not using Super Effective attacks or Judgement]].Judgement.



* StuffBlowingUp: [[spoiler: Constantly during the Arceus/Flare battle, to the point where Pinkie wonders if [[Creator/MichaelBay Michael Neigh]] directed [[MediumAwareness this chapter]].]]

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* StuffBlowingUp: [[spoiler: Constantly during the Arceus/Flare battle, to the point where Pinkie wonders if [[Creator/MichaelBay Michael Neigh]] directed [[MediumAwareness this chapter]].]]



* ThisIsSomethingHesGotToDoHimself: [[spoiler:Flare refuses his friends' help fighting Arceus.]]

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* ThisIsSomethingHesGotToDoHimself: [[spoiler:Flare spoiler:Flare refuses his friends' help fighting Arceus.]]
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* SuddenNameChange: The Giant [[SssssnakeTalk Snake]] was change from Ichneumon to an Titanoboa, a [[SssssnakeTalk snake]] that existed roughly 60 million years ago.

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* SuddenNameChange: The Giant [[SssssnakeTalk Snake]] from Chapter 7 was change from Ichneumon to an Titanoboa, a [[SssssnakeTalk snake]] that existed roughly 60 million years ago.
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* SuddenNameChange: The Giant [[SssssnakeTalk Snake]] was change from Ichneumon to an Titanoboa, a [[SssssnakeTalk snake]] that existed roughly 60 million years ago.
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* ExactWords[=/=]LoopholeAbuse: [[spoiler:Because Flare won the Solar Run as a Rapidash rather than a Ponyta, Arceus goes back on his agreement.]]

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* ExactWords[=/=]LoopholeAbuse: [[spoiler:Because Because Flare won the Solar Run as a Rapidash rather than a Ponyta, Arceus goes back on his agreement.]]



* SweetAndSourGrapes: [[spoiler: After he wins the Solar Run, Flare asks Celestia to grant the wishes of Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Vanilla Bean rather than his own wish to stay in Equestria. However, this is because he believes he's already fulfilled Arceus's condition for him remaining in Equestria.]]

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* SweetAndSourGrapes: [[spoiler: After he wins the Solar Run, Flare asks Celestia to grant the wishes of Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Vanilla Bean rather than his own wish to stay in Equestria. However, this is because he believes he's already fulfilled Arceus's condition for him remaining in Equestria.]]
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* EleventhHourSuperpower: [[spoiler: Flare evolves into a Rapidash during the Solar Run, which gives him both the speed boost he needs and access to Unicorn Magic.]]

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* EleventhHourSuperpower: [[spoiler: Flare evolves into a Rapidash during the Solar Run, which gives him both the speed boost he needs and [[spoiler:and access to Unicorn Magic.]]
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* [[spoiler:IChooseToStay: Flare. Arceus does not take it well]].

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* [[spoiler:IChooseToStay: IChooseToStay: Flare. Arceus does not take it well]].well.
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* GoThroughMe: [[spoiler: Twilight, Shining Armor and Cadance, when Arceus attempts to take Flare home against his wishes. Celestia herself makes it clear that she will do the same if Flare passes the condition she sets for him remaining in Equestria.]]

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* GoThroughMe: [[spoiler: Twilight, Shining Armor and Cadance, when Arceus attempts to take Flare home against his wishes. Celestia herself makes it clear that she will do the same if Flare passes the condition she sets for him remaining in Equestria.]]



** [[spoiler: Flare's challenge to Arceus after the Solar Run]].

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** [[spoiler: Flare's challenge to Arceus after the Solar Run]].Run.
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-->“Space, Time and Distortion, worlds beyond worlds and all are linked to [[OlympusMons the]] [[God Creator]]. Born form nothing and encompassing everything, the fate of light and darkness, the bearer and destined. The eternal nightmare and the light of destiny. One born from the union of love and will, dreams given form and hope eternal.”

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-->“Space, Time and Distortion, worlds beyond worlds and all are linked to [[OlympusMons the]] [[God the Creator]]. Born form nothing and encompassing everything, the fate of light and darkness, the bearer and destined. The eternal nightmare and the light of destiny. One born from the union of love and will, dreams given form and hope eternal.”
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-->“Space, Time and Distortion, worlds beyond worlds and all are linked to [[God the]][[OlympusMons Creator]]. Born form nothing and encompassing everything, the fate of light and darkness, the bearer and destined. The eternal nightmare and the light of destiny. One born from the union of love and will, dreams given form and hope eternal.”

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-->“Space, Time and Distortion, worlds beyond worlds and all are linked to [[OlympusMons the]] [[God the]][[OlympusMons Creator]]. Born form nothing and encompassing everything, the fate of light and darkness, the bearer and destined. The eternal nightmare and the light of destiny. One born from the union of love and will, dreams given form and hope eternal.”
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-->“Space, Time and Distortion, worlds beyond worlds and all are linked to [[God the]] [[OlympusMons Creator]]. Born form nothing and encompassing everything, the fate of light and darkness, the bearer and destined. The eternal nightmare and the light of destiny. One born from the union of love and will, dreams given form and hope eternal.”

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-->“Space, Time and Distortion, worlds beyond worlds and all are linked to [[God the]] [[OlympusMons the]][[OlympusMons Creator]]. Born form nothing and encompassing everything, the fate of light and darkness, the bearer and destined. The eternal nightmare and the light of destiny. One born from the union of love and will, dreams given form and hope eternal.”
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-->“Space, Time and Distortion, worlds beyond worlds and all are linked to [[OlympusMons the Creator]]. Born form nothing and encompassing everything, the fate of light and darkness, the bearer and destined. The eternal nightmare and the light of destiny. One born from the union of love and will, dreams given form and hope eternal.”

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-->“Space, Time and Distortion, worlds beyond worlds and all are linked to [[God the]] [[OlympusMons the Creator]]. Born form nothing and encompassing everything, the fate of light and darkness, the bearer and destined. The eternal nightmare and the light of destiny. One born from the union of love and will, dreams given form and hope eternal.”
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* [[spoiler: CrowdSong: In Chapter 6 of the revision Flare sang the theme song of {{The Greatest American Hero}} with the rest Ponyville and the Mane 6 sang along.]]

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* [[spoiler: CrowdSong: In Chapter 6 of the revision Flare sang the theme song of {{The Greatest American Hero}} with the rest Ponyville and the Mane 6 sang along.]]

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