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Note: The original story is currently undergoing a major revision, and any chapter after chapter nine is currently unavailable.

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-->“Space, Time and Distortion, worlds beyond worlds and all are linked to the Creator. Born form nothing and encompassing everything, the fate of light and darkness, the bearer and destined. The eternal nightmare and the light of destiny. One born from the union of love and will, dreams given form and hope eternal.”

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-->“Space, Time and Distortion, worlds beyond worlds and all are linked to [[OlympusMons the Creator.Creator]]. Born form nothing and encompassing everything, the fate of light and darkness, the bearer and destined. The eternal nightmare and the light of destiny. One born from the union of love and will, dreams given form and hope eternal.”
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* TheProphecy: In Chapter 6 of the revision an Prophecy by Starswirl was written.
-->“Space, Time and Distortion, worlds beyond worlds and all are linked to the Creator. Born form nothing and encompassing everything, the fate of light and darkness, the bearer and destined. The eternal nightmare and the light of destiny. One born from the union of love and will, dreams given form and hope eternal.”
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* WhamEpisode: At the end of [[spoiler: Chapter 8, Arceus arrives to bring Flare back to Sinnoh.]]

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* WhamEpisode: At the end of [[spoiler: Chapter 8, 8 in the original version, Arceus arrives to bring Flare back to Sinnoh.]]
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* BigWhat in the revision Twilight tells Flare she and Sparkler found a way to send Flare back home and Flare did a reaction.
-->'''Twilight''': And the other day, well… we figured it out. How to get you home that is.
-->'''Flare''': Well that’s grea- wait. What!?
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** In the revision after Flutershy's yay Flare admits Between Dinky, Twilight and Fluttershy. He thinks he'll die from it.

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** In the revision after Flutershy's yay Flare admits Between between Dinky, Twilight and Fluttershy. He thinks he'll die from it.
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** In the revision after Flutershy's yay Flare admits Between Dinky, Twilight and Fluttershy. He thinks he'll die from it.
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Now has a sequel in progress, entitled ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/92316/flames-and-twilight Flames and Twilight]]''.

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Now has a sequel in progress, progress (now on hiatus), entitled ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/92316/flames-and-twilight Flames and Twilight]]''.
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When Dialga and Palkia start to attack one another in Alamos Town, a Ponyta named Flare Blitz is caught in the crossfire. After falling into the dimensional rift, he finds himself in a strange new land filled with brightly coloured ponies. Flare doesn't know how he got here or if he can even get back home... The question is, will he even want to go home?

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When Dialga and Palkia start to attack one another in Alamos Town, a Ponyta named Flare Blitz is caught in the crossfire. After falling into the dimensional rift, he finds himself in a strange new land filled with brightly coloured colored ponies. Flare doesn't know how he got here or if he can even get back home... The question is, will he even want to go home?



Note: The original story is currently undergoing a major revision, and most chapters are currently unavailable.

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Note: The original story is currently undergoing a major revision, and most chapters are any chapter after chapter eight is currently unavailable.



* AccidentalPervert: Twilight gives Flare a massage after the race, not realising the book she's going by is intended for couples. HilarityEnsues.

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* AccidentalPervert: Twilight gives Flare a massage after the race, not realising realizing the book she's going by is intended for couples. HilarityEnsues.
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** Dinky and Sparkler, too. Same universe.
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* [[spoiler: CrowdSong: In Chapter 6 of the revision Flare sang the theme song of {{TheGreatestAmericanHero}} with the rest Ponyville and the Mane 6 sang along.]]

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* [[spoiler: CrowdSong: In Chapter 6 of the revision Flare sang the theme song of {{TheGreatestAmericanHero}} {{The Greatest American Hero}} with the rest Ponyville and the Mane 6 sang along.]]
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* [[spoiler: CrowdSong: In Chapter 6 of the revision Flare sang {{TheGreatestAmericanHeroBelieveitornot}} with the rest Ponyville and the Mane 6 sang along.]]

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* [[spoiler: CrowdSong: In Chapter 6 of the revision Flare sang {{TheGreatestAmericanHeroBelieveitornot}} the theme song of {{TheGreatestAmericanHero}} with the rest Ponyville and the Mane 6 sang along.]]
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* [[spoiler: CrowdSong: Flare sang {{TheGreatestAmericanHeroBelieve it or not}} with the rest Ponyville and the Mane 6 sang along.]]

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* [[spoiler: CrowdSong: In Chapter 6 of the revision Flare sang {{TheGreatestAmericanHeroBelieve it or not}} {{TheGreatestAmericanHeroBelieveitornot}} with the rest Ponyville and the Mane 6 sang along.]]
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* [[spoiler: CrowdSong: Flare sang [[TheGreatestAmericanHeroBelieve it or not]] with the rest Ponyville and the Mane 6 sang along.]]

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* [[spoiler: CrowdSong: Flare sang [[TheGreatestAmericanHeroBelieve {{TheGreatestAmericanHeroBelieve it or not]] not}} with the rest Ponyville and the Mane 6 sang along.]]
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* [[spoiler: CrowdSong: Flare sang [[TheGreatestAmericanHeroBelieve]] it or not with the rest Ponyville and the Mane 6 sang along.]]

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* [[spoiler: CrowdSong: Flare sang [[TheGreatestAmericanHeroBelieve]] [[TheGreatestAmericanHeroBelieve it or not not]] with the rest Ponyville and the Mane 6 sang along.]]
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* [[spoiler: CrowdSong: Flare sang TheGreatestAmericanHeroBelieve it or not with the rest Ponyville and the Mane 6 sang along.]]

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* [[spoiler: CrowdSong: Flare sang TheGreatestAmericanHeroBelieve [[TheGreatestAmericanHeroBelieve]] it or not with the rest Ponyville and the Mane 6 sang along.]]
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* ShoutOut: [[Fanfic/TheLifeAndTimesOfAWinningPony Cloudkicker and Blossomforth]] make an appearance at Flare's welcome party.

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** The revised version has Pinkie hint that the party will be at Sugarcube Corner, but when Flare and the others go there to find it closed, they return to the library to find that Pinkie has set up the party there. In a matter of minutes.



* ThrowingDownTheGauntlet: Rainbow Dash challenges Flare Blitz to race the minute they meet.

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* ThrowingDownTheGauntlet: In the original version, Rainbow Dash challenges Flare Blitz to race the minute they meet.
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** Averted in the revision: Flare keeps his firey mane and tail and his fire attacks.


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* TranslatorMicrobes: In the revision, Twilight performs a translation spell so that Flare and the Equestrians can understand each other. The first version had him speaking and understanding Equestrian on arrival.
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* CombatCommentator: [[spoiler:Pinkie and Luna during the Flare/Arceus battle, the latter having somehow played ''VideoGame/PokemonBlack Version'' on DS.]]

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* CombatCommentator: [[spoiler:Pinkie and Luna during the Flare/Arceus battle, the latter having somehow played ''VideoGame/PokemonBlack ''VideoGame/{{Pokemon Black|AndWhite}} Version'' on DS.]]

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* CallForward: While talking with Twilight, Flare theorises that ponies can become alicorns in a similar fashion to Pokemon evolution. Princess and Knight roleplaying ensues. Celestia also drops various hints about Twilight's destiny.

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* CallForward: While talking with Twilight, Flare theorises that ponies can become alicorns in a similar fashion to Pokemon evolution. Princess and Knight roleplaying ensues. ensues.
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* BurningWithAnger: Twilight's reaction when [[spoiler:Virizion mistakenly attacks Flare, thinking she's defending Keldeo]]. Flare's response, naturally, is, "[[MemeticMutation When… did my Twilight evolve into a Rapidash?]]"



* CallForward: While talking with Twilight, Flare theorises that ponies can become alicorns in a similar fashion to Pokemon evolution. Princess and Knight roleplaying ensues.

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* BurningWithAnger: Twilight's reaction when [[spoiler:Virizion mistakenly attacks Flare, thinking she's defending Keldeo]]. Flare's response, naturally, is, "[[MemeticMutation When… did my Twilight evolve into a Rapidash?]]"
* CallForward: While talking with Twilight, Flare theorises that ponies can become alicorns in a similar fashion to Pokemon evolution. Princess and Knight roleplaying ensues. Celestia also drops various hints about Twilight's destiny.
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* BurningWithAnger: Twilight's reaction when [[spoiler:Virizion mistakenly attacks Flare, thinking she's defending Keldeo]]. Flare's response, naturally, is, "[[MemeticMutation When… did my Twilight evolve into a Rapidash?]]"
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* NoodleImplements: During the race, Pinkie's commentary mentions, out of nowhere, how “Mr. Cake took some rope and half the store's stock of whipped cream home with him,” causing the Cakes to turn “almost every shade of red on the colour spectrum.”

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* NoodleImplements: During the race, Flare's race against Rainbow Dash, Pinkie's commentary mentions, out of nowhere, how “Mr. Cake took some rope and half the store's stock of whipped cream home with him,” causing the Cakes to turn “almost every shade of red on the colour spectrum.”

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''A Pony Out of Place'' is a crossover/romance fanfic between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}''. It is published on FIMFiction [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/34694/a-pony-out-of-place here]] and written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/Ausbrony Ausbrony]].

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''A Pony Out of Place'' is a crossover/romance fanfic between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}''. It is published on FIMFiction [=FIMFiction=] [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/34694/a-pony-out-of-place here]] and written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/Ausbrony Ausbrony]].



* ShoutOut: Mention is made of [[Fanfic/TheLifeAndTimesOfAWinningPony the Kicker Clan]], a prestigious Pegasus family,

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* ShoutOut: Mention is made of [[Fanfic/TheLifeAndTimesOfAWinningPony the Kicker Clan]], a prestigious Pegasus family,family, mostly connected with the military.
** Flare uses the courting ritual involving flowers introduced in ''Fanfic/{{Xenophilia}}''.
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Now has a sequel in progress, entitled [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/92316/flames-and-twilight Flames and Twilight]].

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Now has a sequel in progress, entitled [[https://www.''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/92316/flames-and-twilight Flames and Twilight]].
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''A Pony Out of Place'' is a crossover/romance fanfic between WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic and Anime/{{Pokemon}}. It is published on FIMFiction [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/34694/a-pony-out-of-place here]] and written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/Ausbrony Ausbrony]].

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''A Pony Out of Place'' is a crossover/romance fanfic between WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and Anime/{{Pokemon}}.''Anime/{{Pokemon}}''. It is published on FIMFiction [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/34694/a-pony-out-of-place here]] and written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/Ausbrony Ausbrony]].
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''A Pony Out of Place'' is a crossover/romance fanfic between WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic and Anime/{{Pokemon}}. It is published on FIMFiction [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/34694/a-pony-out-of-place here]] and written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/Ausbrony Ausbrony]].

When Dialga and Palkia start to attack one another in Alamos Town, a Ponyta named Flare Blitz is caught in the crossfire. After falling into the dimensional rift, he finds himself in a strange new land filled with brightly coloured ponies. Flare doesn't know how he got here or if he can even get back home... The question is, will he even want to go home?

Now has a sequel in progress, entitled [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/92316/flames-and-twilight Flames and Twilight]].

!! ''A Pony Out of Place'' contains examples of:

* AccidentalPervert: Twilight gives Flare a massage after the race, not realising the book she's going by is intended for couples. HilarityEnsues.
* AllergicToLove: Twilight goes to see Nurse Redheart, complaining of increased heart rate, sweating and a foggy head, and that they started shortly after Flare rescued Twilight and others from a snake monster. It doesn't take Redheart long to figure out the cause.
* BabyCarriage: The day of his arrival in Ponyville, Flare saves the Cake twins from rolling over a cliff, using his Quick Attack to catch up to them.
* BehindTheBlack[=/=]FailedASpotCheck: Much like in “Fall Weather Friends”, Twilight fails to notice the large crowd of spectators until Pinkie points them out to her.
-->'''Pinkie''': All right everypony! Let's all give a hoof to our two competitors!
-->'''Twilight''': Pinkie? Who the hay are you talking to?
-->'''Pinkie''': (''pointing'') Them.
-->'''Twilight''': One of these days... I'm going to learn not to ask.
* BroughtDownToNormal[=/=][[HumanityEnsues Equinity Ensues]]: Variant: On arriving in Equestria, Flare is turned from a tall flame-haired Ponyta to a regular Earth Pony of the same colouring, and he loses access to his fire-type attacks [[spoiler: at first]], though keeping Quick Attack, Tackle and Double Kick. He also loses his weakness against water and comes to really love baths.
* CombatCommentator: [[spoiler:Pinkie and Luna during the Flare/Arceus battle, the latter having somehow played ''VideoGame/PokemonBlack Version'' on DS.]]
* CutenessOverload: Flare's reaction to Fluttershy, as described by the chapter title.
* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler: Flare doesn't actually defeat Arceus, but puts up enough of a fight that he agrees to let him stay.]]
* EleventhHourSuperpower: [[spoiler: Flare evolves into a Rapidash during the Solar Run, which gives him both the speed boost he needs and access to Unicorn Magic.]]
* ExactWords[=/=]LoopholeAbuse: [[spoiler:Because Flare won the Solar Run as a Rapidash rather than a Ponyta, Arceus goes back on his agreement.]]
* FullNameUltimatum: Cadance gives one to “Shining Starsparkle Armor” after finding out that he picked a fight with a civillian.
* GoThroughMe: [[spoiler: Twilight, Shining Armor and Cadance, when Arceus attempts to take Flare home against his wishes. Celestia herself makes it clear that she will do the same if Flare passes the condition she sets for him remaining in Equestria.]]
* HonorBeforeReason: [[spoiler:During the Solar Run, Flare refuses to tell his friends and competitors what's at stake for him, because it's not a fair race if they drop out for his sake.]]
** [[spoiler: Justifiably subverted when he willingly accepts Arceus's decision to handicap himself by not using Super Effective attacks or Judgement]].
* [[spoiler:IChooseToStay: Flare. Arceus does not take it well]].
* LamePunReaction:
-->'''Flare Blitz''': So are there any rules? Or just an all-out dash to the finish?
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': Oh, hadeeharhar!
* NiceGuy: Flare Blitz.
* NoodleImplements: During the race, Pinkie's commentary mentions, out of nowhere, how “Mr. Cake took some rope and half the store's stock of whipped cream home with him,” causing the Cakes to turn “almost every shade of red on the colour spectrum.”
* RunningGag: Flare [[SurpriseJump clinging to the ceiling]] whenever he's surprised by Pinkie Pie.
* ShipperOnDeck: Cadance, who Twilight forbids from using any kind of spell to help them along.
* SurpriseParty: Pinkie, naturally, throws one for Flare at Sugarcube Corner – curiously, no part of this plan actually involved having someone lead him there, Twilight just happened to take him there by coincidence. The surprise leads to Flare [[SurpriseJump hanging from the rafters]].
* StuffBlowingUp: [[spoiler: Constantly during the Arceus/Flare battle, to the point where Pinkie wonders if [[Creator/MichaelBay Michael Neigh]] directed [[MediumAwareness this chapter]].]]
* SweetAndSourGrapes: [[spoiler: After he wins the Solar Run, Flare asks Celestia to grant the wishes of Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Vanilla Bean rather than his own wish to stay in Equestria. However, this is because he believes he's already fulfilled Arceus's condition for him remaining in Equestria.]]
* ThisIsSomethingHesGotToDoHimself: [[spoiler:Flare refuses his friends' help fighting Arceus.]]
* ThrowingDownTheGauntlet: Rainbow Dash challenges Flare Blitz to race the minute they meet.
** Flare himself challenges Shining Armor, before finding out that he's Twilight's brother.
** [[spoiler: Flare's challenge to Arceus after the Solar Run]].
* TrappedInAnotherWorld
* WhamEpisode: At the end of [[spoiler: Chapter 8, Arceus arrives to bring Flare back to Sinnoh.]]
* WillTheyOrWontThey: Flare and Twilight.


!!''Flames And Twilight'' contains examples of:

* CallForward: While talking with Twilight, Flare theorises that ponies can become alicorns in a similar fashion to Pokemon evolution. Princess and Knight roleplaying ensues.
* FirstNameBasis: Flare reaches this with Celestia and Luna.
* IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer: [[spoiler:Set up but subverted when Shining pulls Flare in for a friendly hug after learning that he's daring Twilight. DoubleSubverted when he tells Flare that he's obligated and required to threaten to have him gelded and quarted if he hurts her.]]
* IllNeverTellYouWhatImTellingYou: Flare admits to calling Twilight [[spoiler:”my little Element of Harmony”]] in this manner.
* InnocentInnuendo: [[spoiler:Twilight and Flare's first night as a couple.]]
-->'''Flare''': Are you sure you want to do this so soon? I don’t want you to feel uncomfortable.
-->'''Twilight''': No, this is something I’ve wanted to do for a very long time. (''Looks down and gasps in surprise'') I didn’t think it would be so big though.
-->'''Flare''': Well what did you expect? And I’m so happy right now; I could keep going all night.
-->'''Twilight''': Don’t make promises you can’t keep.
** [[spoiler: They're talking about reading a huge book together.]]
* [[spoiler:RelationshipUpgrade: Flare and Twilight, at the end of “Of Suns, Moons and Stars”]]
* ShoutOut: Mention is made of [[Fanfic/TheLifeAndTimesOfAWinningPony the Kicker Clan]], a prestigious Pegasus family,

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