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* IKnewIt: the author made a habit of this:
** Naruto's mom had a similar personality? Check.
** Attacking with a multitude of miniature Rasengans? Check.
** [[spoiler: Yugito Nii resurrected as a Path of Pain? Check.]]
** [[spoiler: Kyuubi openly and readily working with Naruto to keep out from under Madara's thumb? Check.]]
** Naruto's mom had a similar personality? Check.
** Attacking with a multitude of miniature Rasengans? Check.
** [[spoiler: Yugito Nii resurrected as a Path of Pain? Check.]]
** [[spoiler: Kyuubi openly and readily working with Naruto to keep out from under Madara's thumb? Check.]]
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* IHaveYourWife[[IHaveYourWife I Have Your Daughter]]
* IKnewIt: the author made a habit of this:
** Naruto's mom had a similar personality? Check.
** Attacking with a multitude of miniature Rasengans? Check.
** [[spoiler: Yugito Nii resurrected as a Path of Pain? Check.]]
** [[spoiler: Kyuubi openly and readily working with Naruto to keep out from under Madara's thumb? Check.]]
* IKnewIt: the author made a habit of this:
** Naruto's mom had a similar personality? Check.
** Attacking with a multitude of miniature Rasengans? Check.
** [[spoiler: Yugito Nii resurrected as a Path of Pain? Check.]]
** [[spoiler: Kyuubi openly and readily working with Naruto to keep out from under Madara's thumb? Check.]]
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* TwinSwitch: The Kouin sisters are identical twins except that their hair and eye colors are reversed. But in reality that's a low level transformation so they can switch back and forth, making their opponents think they are more skilled than they actually are (each having heavily studied one type of ninja combat). [[spoiler: Even better, they are triplets who pretend to be twins, letting the one who is not fighting rest and provide tactical support.]]
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* HookedUpAfterwards Gaara and Matsuri are married in the DistantFinale with very little build up. At least Sakura and Lee had one date in the story, and [[spoiler:Hanabi was obviously after an [[ObliviousToLove oblvious Kiba.]]]]
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* HookedUpAfterwards Gaara and Matsuri are married in the DistantFinale with very little build up. At least Sakura and Lee had one date in the story, and [[spoiler:Hanabi was obviously after an [[ObliviousToLove oblvious oblivious Kiba.]]]]
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* YouSaidYouCouldntDance: Naruto skipped out on dance classes at the Academy, so Hinata is surprised when he asks her to go dancing. He explains that Jiraiya forced him to learn, and the he found out that he likes it.
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* YouSaidYouCouldntDance: Naruto skipped out on dance classes at the Academy, so Hinata is surprised when he asks her to go dancing. He explains that Jiraiya forced him to learn, and the that he found out that he likes it.
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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: Target 4 of the Otogakure Invasion (chapter 31), the Kouin twins. Not only the target is more than one person, they differ only in eye and hair color and use primarily different combat methods. [[spoiler: Kakashi catches on to this quick and explains the color/combat to his teammates. As well as the fact the Kouin twins are actually triplets.]]
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* InstantExpertInstantExpert: [[spoiler:Gouki has Madara use Susano-o to download the skills of a Chunin level ninja into regular people.]]
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* IKnowKungFu: [[spoiler:Gouki has Madara use Susano-o to download the skills of a Chunin level ninja into regular people.]]
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* CoolBigSis: Yugao Uzuki
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* LineInTheSand: Before going to rescue Naruto, Hinata offers her friends this (at Naruto's prior request).
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* IKnowYouAreInThereSomewhereFight: [[spoiler: Naruto inadvertently saves Hinata from a vampire demon in this manner. The discovery also assists in the freeing of Neji, Sakura, and Sasuke.]]
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* IKnowYouAreInThereSomewhereFight: IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: [[spoiler: Naruto inadvertently saves Hinata from a vampire demon in this manner. The discovery also assists in the freeing of Neji, Sakura, and Sasuke.]]
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* BiTheWay: [[spoiler: Hana Inuzuka and Shizune both like men, yet they end up falling in love and getting married. And Ino considers making a pass at Sakura and later is just as interested in seeing Hinata and Tenten naked as she is in seeing Neji and Naruto.]]
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* BiTheWay: [[spoiler: Hana Inuzuka and Shizune both like men, yet they end up falling in love and getting married. And married.
** Ino considers making a pass at Sakura and later isjust almost as interested in seeing Hinata and Tenten naked as she is in seeing Neji and Naruto.]]
** Ino considers making a pass at Sakura and later is
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Hinata almost accidentally breaks up with Naruto due to a poor choice of words. Despite being a WarriorTherapist, Naruto sometimes has a little trouble explaining why his opponent is wrong.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Hinata almost accidentally breaks up with Naruto due to a poor choice of words.
** Despite being a WarriorTherapist, Naruto sometimes has a little trouble explaining why his opponent is wrong.
** Despite being a WarriorTherapist, Naruto sometimes has a little trouble explaining why his opponent is wrong.
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* ThemeTuneCameo: Go!!! (a.k.a. Fighting Dreamers) shows up as Hinata's ring tone.
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* MassiveMultiplayerScam: Neji's plan during the real SaveThePrincess arc
** Ino and Choji attempt to sneak in while disguised, Choji blows it
** Naruto and Hinata jump in to help, drawing out most of the guards, but ultimately slowly lose due to being outnumbered and under-equipped
** After the fight starts, Neji and Tenten use plan C, sneaking in the back, however they are overwhelmed by the final guard, [[spoiler:the Reaper of Shinobi]]
** Neji orders a retreat
** [[spoiler:It was all a big distraction, so the real Naruto and Hinata (the ones fighting were clones) can sneak in and replace the hostages with Naruto's transformed clones. All so they would not be pursued (since they appeared to have failed), and Naruto could get a face to face with Gouki.]]
** Ino and Choji attempt to sneak in while disguised, Choji blows it
** Naruto and Hinata jump in to help, drawing out most of the guards, but ultimately slowly lose due to being outnumbered and under-equipped
** After the fight starts, Neji and Tenten use plan C, sneaking in the back, however they are overwhelmed by the final guard, [[spoiler:the Reaper of Shinobi]]
** Neji orders a retreat
** [[spoiler:It was all a big distraction, so the real Naruto and Hinata (the ones fighting were clones) can sneak in and replace the hostages with Naruto's transformed clones. All so they would not be pursued (since they appeared to have failed), and Naruto could get a face to face with Gouki.]]
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* AngstWhatAngst: Naruto has to deal with the deaths of certain close people, but in both cases he gets over it in a few days, with Hinata's help.
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* AngstWhatAngst: Naruto has to deal with the deaths of certain close people, but in both cases he gets over it in a few days, with Hinata's help.
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** Not quite artificial, but Kabuto grafting Kimimaro's arm onto his body probably counts.
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* BetterThanNew: Shino, Naruto, and Gai all have examples, which are spoiled other places.
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* HookedUpAfterwards Gaara and Matsuri are married in the DistantFinale with very little build up. At least Sakura and Lee had one date in the story, and [[spoiler:Hanabi was obviously after an [[ObliviousToLove oblvious Kiba.]]
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* HookedUpAfterwards Gaara and Matsuri are married in the DistantFinale with very little build up. At least Sakura and Lee had one date in the story, and [[spoiler:Hanabi was obviously after an [[ObliviousToLove oblvious Kiba.]]]]]]
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Death is not involved, but it still fits: Hyuota Hyuga (Hinata's grandfather) attempts to use the Hyuga Clan laws to break up Naruto and Hinata. But when he says the wrong thing in the wrong place and time, those same rules are used against him, and he loses his position and authority.
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* ChainmailBikini: Though not visible in most cases, kunoichi in this fic all wear armored undergarments.
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* ChainmailBikini: Though not visible in most cases, kunoichi in this fic all wear armored undergarments. At least on missions.
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* BadassInDistress
* DistractedByTheSexy: Kaede Mizuno's fighting style, at least against men. Also, Hinata's naked apron incident.
* DistressedDamsel
* DistressedDamsel
* DyingMomentOfAwesome: Might Gai
* EnergyAbsorption: Pein's Preta path, and [[spoiler: Gouki's axe Syphon.]]
* EnergyAbsorption: Pein's Preta path, and [[spoiler: Gouki's axe Syphon.]]
* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: Both the name of the fic, and some of the chapter titles.
* FirstNameUltimatum: Sakura and Tsunade are both very good at making Naruto's name sound like a swear word.
* HookedUpAfterwards Gaara and Matsuri are married in the DistantFinale with very little build up. At least Sakura and Lee had one date in the story, and [[spoiler:Hanabi was obviously after an [[ObliviousToLove oblvious Kiba.]]
* IAmNotLeftHanded: Arguably many times, but the best example is in Gai's fight with Kisame.
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* LittleMissAlmighty: The Reaper (the real one, not the crazy woman).
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: In addition to the included members of the regular cast, the fic promotes many secondary and filler characters, and adds a number of OCs.
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: In addition to the included members of the regular cast, the fic promotes many secondary and filler characters, and adds a number of OCs.
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* LovingAShadow: Hinata admits in chapter twelve that she didn't know Naruto as well as she should, but that she loves him even more now that they are friends. Naruto accuses Sakura of this after she comes on to him
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* NamesTheSame: There are two very different reoccurring characters called "The Reaper".
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* SaveThePrincess
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* ThisIsReality: Naruto mentions the unlikely but still theoretically possible scenario that he and Hinata both fall in love with a second woman. And then admits that that really only happens in bad romance novels.
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* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Hinata and Hana Inuzuka both show signs of this.
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* WhatDoesSheSeeInHim: Sakura to Hinata during the slumber party, both why Hinata wants Naruto and why he wants her. [[spoiler:It's really just her depression over Sasuke's surrender to Orochimaru talking.]]
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* AFriendInNeed: Naruto's Nakama doesn't hesitate to go AWOL to rescue him [[spoiler:after he is captured by the Akatsuki]]. Even after Hinata tells them about the Fox Demon, all but one of them are still on board after only a few minutes of discussion.
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* ChainmailBikini: Though not visible in most cases, kunoichi in this fic all wear armored undergarments.
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* HourOfPower: Naruto's Ascendant Fox Jutsu will drain him in seven minutes.
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* ShonenUpgrade: Naruto, Hinata, and Sakura's weapons. Hinata's Suigin Byakugan. Naruto's [[transformations]].
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* ShonenUpgrade: Naruto, Hinata, and Sakura's weapons. Hinata's Suigin Byakugan. Naruto's [[transformations]].transformations.
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* OneWingedAngel: Orchimaru, but in this story his 'Soul Shell' looks more like an [[EvilAlbino albino version]] or [[MastersOfTheUniverse King Hiss]]. [[spoiler:Also, when taunted, the spirits of the first four Hokages show that they can do the same thing.]]
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* OneWingedAngel: Orchimaru, but in this story his 'Soul Shell' looks more like an [[EvilAlbino albino version]] of [[MastersOfTheUniverse King Hiss]]. [[spoiler:Also, when taunted, the spirits of the first four Hokages show that they can do the same thing.]]
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: Kaede Mizuno would prefer that everyone think she gets by on her looks and family connections, rather than being a fully qualified Jonin.
