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Cool Loser TRS cleanup
, has been renamed to Unconvincingly Unpopular Character and is a YMMV audience reaction.
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* CoolLoser: Jasper is hated by his entire hometown, but is a very brave and resourceful young colt. Justified since [[spoiler: Promise is a town founded by [[FeelingOppressedByTheirExistence Earth pony bigots who hate non-Earth ponies, and Jasper was born a unicorn]] ]].
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* CorruptHick: The community of Promise qualifies due to [[spoiler: all of them being members of an earth pony supremacist organization]], but Sheriff Brass takes the cake.
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* ImTakingHerHomeWithMe: [[spoiler: Trixie does this to Jasper, knowing that the citizens of Promise can't be trusted to look after him.]]
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Mixup with the previous edit reason. The Lost Woods has been split between a video game level of the same name and Enchanted Forest. Cutting non-examples, zero-context potholes and ZCEs.
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[[https://web.archive.org/web/20190330043058/https://www.fimfiction.net/story/9160/a-great-and-powerful-heart A Great and Powerful Heart]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Deep+Pond Deep Pond]]. Deep Pond would eventually give his permission for the characters and events to be used in [[Creator/RalphHayesJr RHJunior's]] fanfic ''FanFic/TheGreatAlicornHunt''.
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[[https://web.archive.org/web/20190330043058/https://www.fimfiction.net/story/9160/a-great-and-powerful-heart A Great and Powerful Heart]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Deep+Pond Deep Pond]]. Deep Pond would eventually give his permission for the characters and events to be used in [[Creator/RalphHayesJr RHJunior's]] fanfic ''FanFic/TheGreatAlicornHunt''.
''Fanfic/TheGreatAlicornHunt''.
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* TheLostWoods: Dusky Dale. When a foal gets lost in there, odds are they are as good as dead.
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* TheLostWoods: Dusky Dale. When a foal gets lost in there, [[AdultFear odds are they are as good as dead]].
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* TheLostWoods: Dusky Dale. When a foal gets lost in there, [[AdultFear odds are they are as good as dead]].dead.
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* AdultFear: This story is ''made of it'', since it is set in a town full of [[spoiler: racial bigots]].
** Trixie is harassed and targeted by a racist police force, who give her a choice between being locked up indefinitely or paying an outrageous fine.
** [[spoiler: Jasper spent his young life being bullied and abused by his peers for being a racial outcast, and was virtually left to die by the authorities who were supposed to care for him]].
** Derpy has to deal her child going missing ending up in a forest full of dangerous creatures, and the law enforcement refusing to help her [[spoiler: out of sheer bigotry]].
** Trixie is harassed and targeted by a racist police force, who give her a choice between being locked up indefinitely or paying an outrageous fine.
** [[spoiler: Jasper spent his young life being bullied and abused by his peers for being a racial outcast, and was virtually left to die by the authorities who were supposed to care for him]].
** Derpy has to deal her child going missing ending up in a forest full of dangerous creatures, and the law enforcement refusing to help her [[spoiler: out of sheer bigotry]].
