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* ShoutOut: Yujo Shouhei a Akatsuki agent who inflitrates the chunin exams and uses mainly Taijutsu uses five jutsus that transform him into a humanoid mixture of a centipede, lizard, scorpion, toad, or snake. The special powers he gets from them are a clear reference to the FiveDeadlyVenoms.
** The song used in the Chapter when Naruto and Haku become BloodBrothers is based off the one used in the first episode of the Original RomanceOfTheThreeKingdoms Series that plays when Liu Bei, Guan Yu, and Zhang Fei swear their oath.

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* ShoutOut: Yujo Shouhei a Akatsuki agent who inflitrates the chunin exams and uses mainly Taijutsu uses five jutsus that transform him into a humanoid mixture of a centipede, lizard, scorpion, toad, or snake. The special powers he gets from them are a clear reference to the FiveDeadlyVenoms.
Film/FiveDeadlyVenoms.
** The song used in the Chapter when Naruto and Haku become BloodBrothers is based off the one used in the first episode of the Original RomanceOfTheThreeKingdoms Literature/RomanceOfTheThreeKingdoms Series that plays when Liu Bei, Guan Yu, and Zhang Fei swear their oath.
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* BewareMyStingerTail: When Naruto's opponent in The Chunin Exams uses a Jutsu that transforms him into an humanoid scorpion, he gains one of these.


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* CatFight: Happens between Tayuya and Temari
* ClingyJealousGirl: Tayuya veers into this, becoming furious when she spots Temari flirting with Naruto.


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* MustMakeAmends: Sakura has shades of this during the story.


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* TooFastToStop: Hanzo, (not that Hanzo, this one's an OC Akatsuki Agent) wears special bracelets that grant him super speed, however due to it he is unable to change his attacks in mid motion like other fighters and it leads to his downfall.


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An AU Naruto story written on Fanfiction.net by Saiyan Warrior 200 and is currently completed and can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4070794/1/A-Fathers-Wrath here.]] The story has a surprising change to it as instead of Minato, Orochimaru is Naruto's father instead, and is forced to witness Kyuubi being sealed inside him. This causes Orochimaru, (who is at best, an AntiHero type IV, and at worst, an Anti Villian in this) to swear revenge against Konoha for doing so. Sarutobi casts an Genjutsu on the newborn Naruto to hide his true appearance. Orochimaru joins Akatsuki and leaves after failing to defeat Itachi and creates the Hidden Sound Village in order to continue his plans to try and get his son. This is a more humane Orochimaru-centric story as he shows qualities that he could've had, had he not gone down the path he went.

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An AU Naruto story written on Fanfiction.net by Saiyan Warrior 200 and is currently completed and can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4070794/1/A-Fathers-Wrath here.]] The story A Father's Wrath has a surprising change to it as instead of Minato, Orochimaru is Naruto's father instead, and is forced to witness Kyuubi being sealed inside him. This causes Orochimaru, (who is at best, an AntiHero type IV, and at worst, an Anti Villian in this) to swear revenge against Konoha for doing so. Sarutobi casts an Genjutsu on the newborn Naruto to hide his true appearance. Orochimaru joins Akatsuki and leaves after failing to defeat Itachi and creates the Hidden Sound Village in order to continue his plans to try and get his son. This is a more humane Orochimaru-centric story as he shows qualities that he could've had, had he not gone down the path he went.


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* ForcedToWatch: Orochimaru attempts to stop Minato from using newborn Naruto as a vessel but is held back by Tsunade and Jiraiya and he can only look on as it happens.

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* BloodBrothers: Naruto and Haku become this, swearing an oath in a Peach Garden similar to RomanceOfTheThreeKingdoms

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* BloodBrothers: Naruto and Haku become this, swearing an oath in a Peach Garden similar to RomanceOfTheThreeKingdomsLiterature/RomanceOfTheThreeKingdoms



* PapaWolf: Orochimaru

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* PapaWolf: OrochimaruOrochimaru, threaten his son is one quick way to ensure your demise.
* PullingThemselvesTogether: Orochimaru during the fight with Hidan is [[HalfTheManHeUsedToBe sliced in two]] luckily he's able to reattach himself
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* ICallItVera: Muta Daidouji, an Akatsuki agent who becomes Naruto's main rival and enemy in the Story, is given a Nodachi that is enchanted and created to fight Jinchuurki and nullify their powers. He calls it Satsugaisha Kitsune, which translates to Slayer of Foxes.

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* ICallItVera: Muta Daidouji, an Akatsuki agent who becomes Naruto's main rival and enemy in the Story, is given a Nodachi that is enchanted and created to fight Jinchuurki and nullify their powers. He calls it Satsugaisha Kitsune, which translates to Slayer of Foxes.[[note]]Actually, it translates to "Fox of Slayers" since the author mixed up the Japanese subject and object.[[/note]]
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* VillainProtagionist: Orochimaru starts out as this.

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* VillainProtagionist: VillainProtagonist: Orochimaru starts out as this.
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* [[LukeIAmYourFather Naruto I Am Your Father]]


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* VillainProtagionist: Orochimaru starts out as this.
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* ICallItVera: Muta Daidouji, an Akatsuki agent who becomes Naruto's main rival and enemy in the Story, is given a Nodachi that is enchanted and created to fight Jinchuurki and nullify their powers. He calls it Satsugaisha No Kitsune, which translates to Slayer of Foxes.

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* ICallItVera: Muta Daidouji, an Akatsuki agent who becomes Naruto's main rival and enemy in the Story, is given a Nodachi that is enchanted and created to fight Jinchuurki and nullify their powers. He calls it Satsugaisha No Kitsune, which translates to Slayer of Foxes.

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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Keiji is defeated and killed by Naruto and Orochimaru when [[spoiler: Naruto shatters the crystal that he has formed that released a mist that brainwashed anyone it touched and releases all the chakra stored inside some of it Naruto's own he had drained of]] and it consumes and destroys him and The Jashinists ending the war.

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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Keiji is defeated and killed by Naruto and Orochimaru when [[spoiler: Naruto shatters the crystal that he has formed that released a mist that brainwashed anyone it touched and releases all the chakra stored inside some of it Naruto's own he had drained of]] and it consumes and destroys him and The Jashinists ending the war.war.
* KatanasAreJustBetter: Averted, Muta at first starts out with a Katana but drops it in favor of a Nodachi.



** LostInTranslation: Actually, anyone with a decent knowledge of Japanese will tell you it translates to [[EpicFail "Fox of Slayers"]].
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* CoolBigSis: Anko is like this towards Naruto.


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** The SomeonesTouchingMyButt bit below is based off of {{VideoGame/Grandia}}
* SomeonesTouchingMyButt: This happens between Naruto and Tayuya during their first mission.
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* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Naruto at times is referred to as Prince of Otogakure. He still leads from the front and often the first in the fight. His father is no slouch either.
** The Kages all of them are shown taking part in The Fourth Shinobi War. Either devising plans or taking part in battles.
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* RingOfPower: [[BigBad Keijo Sosano]] wields eight rings that Jashin poured his chakra into when he was alive and grant him multiple powers. Many readers have noted the similarities between them and the rings worn by ComicBook/IronMan nemesis The Mandarin.

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* RingOfPower: [[BigBad Keijo Keiji Sosano]] wields eight rings that Jashin poured his chakra into when he was alive and grant him multiple powers. Many readers have noted the similarities between them and the rings worn by ComicBook/IronMan nemesis The Mandarin.
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* [[spoiler: AndThenWhat: Pein asks this to Muta as he is near death at Sekigahara what he would've done afterwards if he had somehow managed to kill Naruto. Muta responds by saying he doesn't care what he does after that, so long as he can kill him.]]

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* [[spoiler: AndThenWhat: Pein asks this to Muta as he is near death at Sekigahara what he would've done afterwards if he had somehow managed to kill Naruto. Muta responds by saying he doesn't care what he does after that, so long as he can kill him.]]
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* MercyKill: Tayuya does this to Oboro in The Forest of Death.
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* [[MamaBear Sister Bear]]: Anko is one for Naruto as many learn not to hurt him when she's around. When she confronts Orochimaru in the Forest of Death instead of being in fear she threatens to kill him if he doesn't tell her where Naruto is.

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* FedToTheBeast: Pein attempts this on Orochimaru when he first joins Akatsuki, sending him down a trap door into a pit where a Dragon is waiting. Naturally since it happened in the Third chapter it doesn't work.



* FridgeHorror: [[BigBad Keiji Sosano]] was revealed to have been a child who was taken by Hidan after Hidan destroyed his village and killed his family and taught him the ways of Jashin. Considering how Hidan is, who knows what kind of life he lead growing up under him.



* MoralEventHorizon: The Jashinists do this when they [[spoiler: attack and destroy a temple killing numerous monks including children, why? Cause Keiji saw their pacifist ways an insult and ordered their destruction]] That makes them go from your average evil army into a psychotic butchers who seek to destroy all that oppose them.
** They done it again in a flashback as it's revealed that before the FinalBattle [[spoiler: they had destroyed a village and piled the bodies of men, women, and children, ontop of each other]]


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** Chapter 61, The Alliance of Sound and Konoha manage to get to Iwagakure and are at their gates and look to bring an end to the war before it begins. However they receive reports that Konoha is under attack and then it switches to Akatsuki and Pein discovers that Hidan has betrayed them and joined The Jashinists.
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* TheMillstone: Danzo becomes this during the Fourth Shinobi War, being a burden on them and telling Konoha they should drop out of The War due to his hatred of Orochimaru. He even decides to [[KickTheDog not send supplies to Kabuto and others thus leading to their defeat and several deaths.]]
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* FridgeHorror: [[BigBad Keiji Sosano]] was revealed to have been a child who was taken by Hidan after Hidan destroyed his village and killed his family and taught him the ways of Jashin. Considering how Hidan is, who knows what kind of life he lead growing up under him.
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* XanatosGambit: Keiji convinces and tempts Kumogakure to attack Suna in exchange for getting them The Byakugan. If they succeed, Suna is destroyed and that's one less enemy. If they fail, [[spoiler: Which they do]] he still manages to have his men get A Dragon's Claw that was hidden in The Tombs Of The Kazekages which was what he was really after.
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* AscendedExtra: In Canon Jashin and The Jashinists where given a mention as a religion that worshipped pain and destruction and we only saw Hidan as a member. Here, they are The BigBad.

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* FogOfDoom: Keiji's final plan is this to [[spoiler: Charge up a Crystal that produces a mist that brainwashes people into becoming followers of Jashin.]]
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: The Snow Ruler allies with The Jashinists siding with them because he believes they have the best chance at uniting the land and stopping the feuding ninja wars. It isn't until later that he realizes he's wrong about them.


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** Mitsunari Chono the ruler of Snow calls out the Kages and Sannins claiming that its because of them and the frequent rivalries and feuds between clans and countries that the Elemental Nations are at constant war and the people are suffering.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Orochimaru, WordOfGod stated that he did this because there was so many with Sasuke, Itachi, and others that he wanted to do something that few would do or think about doing.
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* [[spoiler: AndThenWhat: Pein asks this to Muta as he is near death at Sekigahara what he would've done afterwards if he had somehow managed to kill Naruto. Muta responds by saying he doesn't care what he does after that, so long as he can kill him.]]
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*EmpathicWeapon: Muta Daidouji's Nodachi is an enchanted weapon designed to fight Demons that glows blue whenever it senses the presence of a Jinchuurki and Bijuu. The closer it is to one the stronger it glows taking the form of fire on it. After being stabbed once by it [[spoiler: Kyuubi can be heard growling]] remembering the wound that had been given to him.
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* MoralEventHorizon: The Jashinists do this when they [[spoiler: attack and destroy a temple killing numerous monks including children, why? Cause Keiji saw their pacifist ways an insult and ordered their destruction]] That makes them go from your average evil army into a psychotic butchers who seek to destroy all that oppose them.
** They done it again in a flashback as it's revealed that before the FinalBattle [[spoiler: they had destroyed a village and piled the bodies of men, women, and children, ontop of each other]]


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* MythologyGag: If you know your history of Japan you'll recognize the final battle at Sekigahara and The [[BigBad Jashinists]] blatantly take up positions in the East which Tokugawa won from. Averted however [[spoiler: as unlike in history their key allies this time defect to the Western side of the field and help The Shinobi Alliance defeat them.]]
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* MakeWrongWhatOnceWentRight: [[spoiler: Hidan tries this, attemtping to go back in time and kill Infant Naruto and see to it that Kyuubi destroys Konoha. Thankfully, Orochimaru manages to stop him.]]
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* GoGoEnslavement: Tayuya is forced to be a captive during one mission and much to her irritation she is forced to wear [[ReturnOfTheJedi Leia's Slave costume]]


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* PapaWolf: Orochimaru
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* TookALevelInKindness: Unlike [[CompleteMonster Canon]] Orochimaru is portrayed in a much more positive light, caring deeply for his son and having loved Kushina. The Entire Sound Village is also portrayed better as well as Naruto becomes friends with many including [[FieryRedHead Tayuya]] who he is ShipTease with and others and when not on missions are seen as pretty laid back characters who are loyal to the man who took them off the streets and gave them a home.

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* TookALevelInKindness: Unlike [[CompleteMonster Canon]] Canon Orochimaru is portrayed in a much more positive light, caring deeply for his son and having loved Kushina. The Entire Sound Village is also portrayed better as well as Naruto becomes friends with many including [[FieryRedHead Tayuya]] who he is ShipTease with and others and when not on missions are seen as pretty laid back characters who are loyal to the man who took them off the streets and gave them a home.
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A sequel Son of The Serpent can be found here [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8840802/1/Son-of-The-Serpent.]]

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A sequel Son of The Serpent can be found here [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8840802/1/Son-of-The-Serpent.]]
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