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* EvilerThanThou: Makima proves herself to be this to Lung in their "[[CurbStompBattle fight]]".

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* EvilerThanThou: Makima proves herself to be this to Lung in their "[[CurbStompBattle fight]]". She later makes him one of her thralls.
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* EvilerThanThou: Makima herself to be this to Lung in their "fight".

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* EvilerThanThou: Makima proves herself to be this to Lung in their "fight"."[[CurbStompBattle fight]]".
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* EvilerThanThou: Makima herself to be this to Lung in their "fight".
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Tattletale's power tells her Makima is 23-years-old, but she's ''much'' older than that (as old as humanity itself). [[Really700YearsOld You wouldn't guess her true age based on her youthful looks alone.]]

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* OlderThanTheyLook: Tattletale's power tells her Makima is 23-years-old, but she's ''much'' older than that [[TimeAbyss (as old as humanity itself). [[Really700YearsOld You wouldn't guess her true age based on her youthful looks alone.]]itself)]].
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Tattletale's power tells her Makima is 23-years-old, but she's ''much'' older than that (as old as humanity itself). You wouldn't guess her true age based on her youthful looks alone.

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* OlderThanTheyLook: Tattletale's power tells her Makima is 23-years-old, but she's ''much'' older than that (as old as humanity itself). [[Really700YearsOld You wouldn't guess her true age based on her youthful looks alone.]]
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* DatingCatwoman: Subverted. Makima maybe dating Bakuda but she does not love her back, she's just monopolizing her for her Tinkertech and is a case of EvilerThanThou.

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* DatingCatwoman: Subverted. Makima maybe may be dating Bakuda but she does not love her back, she's just monopolizing her for her Tinkertech and is a case of EvilerThanThou.
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** Lung does this at one point when Makima waterboards him in a shallow puddle.
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* PsychicNosebleed: When Tattletale tries to use her power on Makima, it eventually goes MadnessMantra mode, repeatedly telling her to trust Makima, giving her this until she turns it off.
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* StatusQuoIsGod: Director Piggot is a firm believer of maintaining this.

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* StatusQuoIsGod: Director Piggot is a firm believer of maintaining this. Everyone else not so much.
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* TheBeastmaster: Makima tells Dragon she can control [[ExactWords "lower lifeforms"]], giving her a Master ranking, and leading the latter to conclude that former can only control animals. Makima is of course leaving out that she can control anyone she deems lesser than her, like human beings.

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* TheBeastmaster: Makima tells Dragon she can control [[ExactWords "lower lifeforms"]], giving her a Master ranking, and leading the latter to conclude that the former can only control animals. Makima is of course leaving out that she can control anyone she deems lesser than her, like including human beings.
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** Lung, of all people, tries this with Makima, acting grateful for being rescued by her from the PRT when in reality he's trying to gauge whether she's a friend or foe. He soon discards the act after she insults him.

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** Lung, of all people, tries this with Makima, acting grateful for being rescued by her from the PRT when in reality he's trying to gauge whether she's a friend potential minion or foe. a foe to be eliminated. He soon discards the act after she insults him.him and tries to kill her.
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** When questioned by Dragon and Watchdog regarding whether she can Master others, Makima states that her powers only work on "lower lifeforms", leading them to assume she can only control animals, completely leaving out the fact that being the "Control Devil" her power applies to anything she considers "lower lifeforms", which includes humans.
** Makima tells Bakuda that "wold peace" would be a consequence of her end goal, leaving out that she intends to take over Earth-Bet to create a WorldOfSilence.

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** When questioned by Dragon and Watchdog regarding whether she can Master others, Makima states that her powers only work on "lower lifeforms", leading them to assume she can only control animals, completely leaving out the fact that being the "Control Devil" Control Devil her power applies to anything she considers "lower lifeforms", which includes humans.
** Makima tells Bakuda that "wold "world peace" would be a consequence of her end goal, leaving out that she intends to take over Earth-Bet to create a WorldOfSilence.
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** Makima tells Bakuda that "work peace" would be a consequence of her endgame, leaving out she intends to take over Earth-Bet.

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** Makima tells Bakuda that "work "wold peace" would be a consequence of her endgame, end goal, leaving out that she intends to take over Earth-Bet.Earth-Bet to create a WorldOfSilence.
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* TheBeastmaster: Makima tells Dragon she can [[ExactWords control lesser beings, leaving out that she can control anyone she deems lesser than her, like human beings]], giving her a Master ranking, and leading them to conclude that she can only control animals.

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* TheBeastmaster: Makima tells Dragon she can control [[ExactWords "lower lifeforms"]], giving her a Master ranking, and leading the latter to conclude that former can only control lesser beings, animals. Makima is of course leaving out that she can control anyone she deems lesser than her, like human beings]], giving her a Master ranking, and leading them to conclude that she can only control animals.beings.



* EvenTheGirlsWantHer: Her superhuman beauty is commented on by Shadow Stalker, Tattletale and various women in the PHO threads. [[AmbiguousSituation May also apply]] to Bakuda, since as detailed in AmbiguouslyGay, her baseline sexuality is currently unclear.

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* EvenTheGirlsWantHer: Her superhuman beauty is commented on by Shadow Stalker, Tattletale Tattletale, and various women in the PHO threads. [[AmbiguousSituation May also apply]] to Bakuda, since as detailed in AmbiguouslyGay, her baseline sexuality is currently unclear.



* HeroesLoveDogs: Well, not really a hero in this case, but Makima's love for dogs is the same as it was back in ''Manga/ChainsawMan''. When she visits Rachel's dog shelter, in addition to trying to recruit her, she's also there to adopt a dog. Furthermore, she's shown to be exceedingly good with Bitch's dogs, with all three of them quickly coming to like her.

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* HeroesLoveDogs: Well, not really a hero in this case, but Makima's Inverted. [[VillainProtagonist Makima's]] love for dogs is the same as it was back in ''Manga/ChainsawMan''. When she visits Rachel's dog shelter, in addition to trying to recruit her, she's also there to adopt a dog. Furthermore, she's shown to be exceedingly good with Bitch's dogs, with all three of them quickly coming to like her.



** Leviathan uses the full extent of his power and demonstrates more strategic thinking when attacking Brockton Bay to get at Makima, even ignoring the other Protectorate heroes to do so. A few heroes observe that the [[EldritchAbomination Endbringer]] wouldn't do this unless he viewed Makima as that much of a threat.

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** Leviathan uses the full extent of his power and demonstrates more strategic thinking when attacking Brockton Bay to get at Makima, even ignoring the other Protectorate heroes to do so. A few heroes observe that the [[EldritchAbomination Endbringer]] wouldn't do this unless he viewed Makima as that much of a threat.



* UndignifiedDeath: At Makima's mercy Lung believes he's going to die powerless, [[DyingAlone alone]], completely naked, drowning in a puddle of his own StressVomit at the hands a woman because [[ItAmusedMe she felt like it]] and never heard of him, believing he wasted his life. Not a dignified end for the Dragon of Kyushu. [[spoiler:Then, he gets a second trigger and Makima decides to spare his life to make use of him.]]

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* UndignifiedDeath: At Makima's mercy Lung believes he's going to die powerless, [[DyingAlone alone]], completely naked, drowning in a puddle of his own StressVomit at the hands of a woman because [[ItAmusedMe she felt like it]] and never heard of him, believing he wasted his life. Not a dignified end for the Dragon of Kyushu. [[spoiler:Then, he gets a second trigger and Makima decides to spare his life to make use of him.]]
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* TheBeastmaster: Makima tells Dragon she can [[ExactWords control lesser beings, leaving out that she can control anyone she deems lesser than her]], giving her a Master ranking, and leading them to conclude that she can only control animals.

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* TheBeastmaster: Makima tells Dragon she can [[ExactWords control lesser beings, leaving out that she can control anyone she deems lesser than her]], her, like human beings]], giving her a Master ranking, and leading them to conclude that she can only control animals.

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** [[spoiler:Emma]], as while being reduced to LudicrousGibs while cowering alone in fear in your bedroom is definitely an awful fate, considering that she was a sadistic SmugSnake who betrayed her best friend [[spoiler:Taylor]], and went on a one-year-and-half long bullying campaign against her, including defiling the last memento of her deceased mother, and is also known to have [[BullyingTheDisabled bullied a disabled girl]], many readers would probably cheer at her death at Makima's hands.



** Ditto for [[spoiler:Emma]], as while being reduced to LudicrousGibs while cowering alone in fear in your bedroom is definitely an awful fate, considering that she was a sadistic SmugSnake who betrayed her best friend [[spoiler:Taylor]], and went on a one-year-and-half long bullying campaign against her, including defiling the last memento of her deceased mother, and is also known to have [[BullyingTheDisabled bullied a disabled girl]], many readers would probably cheer at her death at Makima's hands.



** Lung, [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil a rapist who runs a prostitution ring]] [[PaedoHunt that preys on underage girls]] and a cape with the power to take on the entire Protectorate by himself, is [[VillainsWantMercy reduced to begging for his life]] after he finds out the hard way how hopelessly outmatched he is by Makima.

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** Lung, [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil a rapist who runs a prostitution ring]] [[PaedoHunt that preys on underage girls]] and a cape with the power to take on the entire Protectorate by himself, is [[VillainsWantMercy reduced to begging for his life]] after he finds out the hard way how hopelessly outmatched he is by against Makima.



** Makima killing [[TheBully Emma]] to kick start her HealingFactor can be seen as this.
** When Makima is delivering a CurbStompBattle to Lung before that, the villain asks if she's out for {{Revenge}} against him only for the Control Devil to inform him she's never even ''heard'' of Lung until not long ago.



** When Makima is delivering a CurbStompBattle to Lung before that, the villain asks if she's out for {{Revenge}} against him only for the Control Devil to inform him she's never even ''heard'' of Lung until not long ago.
** Makima killing [[TheBully Emma]] to kick start her HealingFactor can be seen as this.



* ProperlyParanoid: Tagg believes that Makima could be secretly a {{Supervillain}} and (correctly) deduces she has some kind of MindControl power. Most of his colleagues think he's ImproperlyParanoid but he's actually closer to realising Makima's true nature than anyone else. [[spoiler:He's also first to figure out that Makima has mastered the ABB to attack the PRT in order to get rid of the competition.]]

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* ProperlyParanoid: Tagg believes that Makima could be secretly a {{Supervillain}} and (correctly) deduces she has some kind of MindControl power. Most of his colleagues think he's ImproperlyParanoid but he's actually closer to realising realizing Makima's true nature than anyone else. [[spoiler:He's also first to figure out that Makima has mastered the ABB to attack the PRT in order to get rid of the competition.]]
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* DudeNotFunny: One commenter calls out another on PHO for making an "disarming" joke about Armsmaster.

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* DudeNotFunny: One commenter calls out another on PHO for making an "disarming" joke about Armsmaster.Armsmaster, after he loses an arm to Leviathan.



* EvenTheGirlsWantHer: Her superhuman beauty is commented by Shadow Stalker, Tattletale and various women in the PHO threads. [[AmbiguousSituation May also apply]] to Bakuda, since as detailed in AmbiguouslyGay, her baseline sexuality is currently unclear.

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* EvenTheGirlsWantHer: Her superhuman beauty is commented on by Shadow Stalker, Tattletale and various women in the PHO threads. [[AmbiguousSituation May also apply]] to Bakuda, since as detailed in AmbiguouslyGay, her baseline sexuality is currently unclear.

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* ForTheEvulz: When Lung asks Makima why she's waterboarding him in a shallow puddle as he comes up for air, (he's assumes he either [[ButForMeItWasTuesday attacked her at some point before in the past]] or [[YouKilledMyFather killed someone she loved]]), her response? "[[ForTheEvulz I just enjoy killing the country mouse]]." and that she had never heard him before today and [[{{Sadist}} she found this to be good way to pass the time]].

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* ForTheEvulz: When Lung asks Makima why she's waterboarding him in a shallow puddle as he comes up for air, (he's assumes he either [[ButForMeItWasTuesday attacked her at some point before in the past]] or [[YouKilledMyFather killed someone she loved]]), her response? "[[ForTheEvulz I "I just enjoy killing the country mouse]].mouse." and that she had never heard him before today and [[{{Sadist}} she found this to be good way to pass the time]].



* FullFrontalAssault: Makima ends up doing this near the end of her fight with Leviathan, as a result of the massive amounts of ClothingDamage her outfit's taken earlier. It's caught on camera from Uber and Leet's drone.

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* FullFrontalAssault: Makima ends up doing this near the end of her fight with Leviathan, as a result of the massive amounts of ClothingDamage her outfit's taken earlier. It's caught on camera from Uber and Leet's drone.drone, much to the appreciation of several men and [[EvenTheGirlsWantHer women]] on the PHO threads.


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** Leviathan uses the full extent of his power and demonstrates more strategic thinking when attacking Brockton Bay to get at Makima, even ignoring the other Protectorate heroes to do so. A few heroes observe that the [[EldritchAbomination Endbringer]] wouldn't do this unless he viewed Makima as that much of a threat.
** Lung, [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil a rapist who runs a prostitution ring]] [[PaedoHunt that preys on underage girls]] and a cape with the power to take on the entire Protectorate by himself, is [[VillainsWantMercy reduced to begging for his life]] after he finds out the hard way how hopelessly outmatched he is by Makima.
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* DatingCatwoman: Subverted. Makima maybe dating Bakuda but she does not love her back, she's just monopolizing her for her Tinkertech and is a case of EvilerThanThou.
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* StunnedSilence: The Directors of the PRT have this reaction after they first hear that [[spoiler:Makima has defeated Leviathan permanently by lasting him into Mercury]].
* StupidSexyFlanders: More than a few characters comment on how beautiful Makima is including the heterosexual [[DarkActionGirl Shadow Stalker]], the UsefulNotes/{{Asexual}} Tattletale and the StraightGay Legend.

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* StunnedSilence: The Directors of the PRT have this reaction after they first hear that [[spoiler:Makima has defeated Leviathan permanently by lasting blasting him into Mercury]].
* StupidSexyFlanders: More than a few characters comment on how beautiful Makima is including the heterosexual [[DarkActionGirl Shadow Stalker]], the UsefulNotes/{{Asexual}} Tattletale and even the StraightGay Legend.

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