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* DoorStopper: The part of the story lining up with the R1 phase is fifty chapters and roughly half a million words, and the R2 phase is likely to be about the same. Euphie's coronation isn't until 800,000 words in, and the story isn't over yet.

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* DoorStopper: The part of the story lining up with the R1 phase is fifty chapters and roughly half a million words, and the R2 phase is likely to be about the same. Euphie's coronation isn't until 800,000 words in, and the story isn't over yet.finishes on chapter 157, at 1.3 million words.
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The [[ForWantOfANail "Nail"]] of this story is that both Nunnally and Lelouch's mother die in the "terrorist attack". Prompting Lelouch to despair and kill himself much to Euphemia's dismay after earlier asking her sister to keep him safe. This prompts her to change her outlook and direction in life.

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The [[ForWantOfANail "Nail"]] of this story is that both Nunnally and Lelouch's mother Marianne die in the "terrorist attack". Prompting Lelouch to despair and kill himself much to Euphemia's dismay after earlier asking her sister to keep him safe. This prompts her to change her outlook and direction in life.
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* UnexpectedCharacter: Many of the real life characters in the E.U are this: usually limited to just Rommel the E.U in Cold Calculus has a lot of other real life generals from this time period, and most of them of lesser renown than the Desert Fox.
** More importantly though, Chapter 39 has an appearance by [[spoiler:Zero]].
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** Come chapter 113, both Lauras appear in the same scene and the author trolls the audience by not specifying which Laura is doing or saying what.
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* BlackAndWhiteInsanity: Suzaku, more so than in canon. [[spoiler:Late into the story, his contorted way of thinking leads him to take a WithUsOrAgainstUs attitude towards absolutely everyone, believing that only he can bring things to a peaceful resolution and that everyone else would just perpetuate hate and conflict. Not to mention, the "With Us" part of that would involve being under MoreThanMindControl.]]
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* AscendedExtra: Naomi Inoue was a bit character mostly remembered for being voiced by KikukoInoue and dying at the end of Season 1. Here, she's the most prominent member of the resistance group after Kallen. [[spoiler:She still dies towards the end of the R1 phase, however.]]

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* AscendedExtra: Naomi Inoue was a bit character mostly remembered for being voiced by KikukoInoue Creator/KikukoInoue and dying at the end of Season 1. Here, she's the most prominent member of the resistance group after Kallen. [[spoiler:She still dies towards the end of the R1 phase, however.]]
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* TheseHandsHaveKilled: Kallen and Cole are shown to feel the weight of their deeds in the war against the Chinese.

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* KnowWhenToFoldThem: The Carolina Guard realizes that continued resistance after the arrival of [[spoiler:8th Fleet]] will just increase the body count while delaying the inevitable, and surrenders. This gets them a better deal when Empress Euphie decides what to do with the rebellious Provincial Guards.

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* KnowWhenToFoldThem: The Carolina Guard realizes that continued resistance after the arrival of [[spoiler:8th Fleet]] will just increase the body count while delaying the inevitable, and surrenders. This gets them a better deal when Empress Euphie decides what to do with the rebellious Provincial Guards.Guards (See TradingBarsForStripes).



* RedemptionQuest: The surviving members of the rebellious Provincial Guards are forcibly folded into the Imperial Army and sent to the front. The Virginians do so as a Penal Legion, but the Carolinians are promised that if they serve without further incident the record will state that they are honorably discharged veterans at the end of the war.


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* TradingBarsForStripes: The surviving members of the rebellious Provincial Guards are forcibly folded into the Imperial Army and sent to the front. The Virginians do so as a Penal Legion, getting the dubious honor of being first into the fray during dangerous operations like seizing a beachhead during landing operations, with no promised reward beyond the hope of not facing charges if they make it through the war alive, but the Carolinians (who had the sense to surrender without needing to be crushed by loyalist units first) are promised that if they serve without further incident the record will state that they are honorably discharged veterans at the end of the war.
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* AssassinOutclassin: Princess [[spoiler:Kallen]] was subjected to ''at least'' seven assassination attempts after being named Heir Secundus. She thwarted five of the seven confirmed incidents herself.
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* CorruptPolitician: Graft and corruption is a major part of the Britannian system. Euphie started her career as an auditor who rather firmly dealt with the more outrageous examples.

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* CorruptPolitician: Graft and corruption is a major part of the Britannian system.system - most policy makers are nobles, so they don't have to worry about elections. Euphie started her career as an auditor who rather firmly dealt with the more outrageous examples.
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* CorruptPolitician: Graft and corruption is a major part of the Britannian system. Euphie started her career as an auditor who rather firmly dealt with the more outrageous examples.

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* FictionalDocument: Every chapter begins with an excerpt from one of three in-universe books, ''Towards a New Dawn: The Rise of Euphemia I'' (About Euphie's rise to power), ''Of Blood and Iron: The Reign of Euphemia I'' (About things Euphie did after taking the throne) and ''In Blackest Night: The Great War'' (About non-Euphie related things that occur during the world war that breaks out in the R2 phase). Some of them are innocuous details that nonetheless help with the world building, such as Britannian succession procedures and Euphie's favoring of a Japanese artist. A few others are outright spoilers, such as [[spoiler:Euphie's patronage of Nina leading to the development of nuclear weapons.]]

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* FictionalDocument: Every chapter begins with an excerpt from one of three four in-universe books, ''Towards a New Dawn: The Rise of Euphemia I'' (About Euphie's rise to power), ''Of Blood and Iron: The Reign of Euphemia I'' (About things Euphie did after taking the throne) and , ''In Blackest Night: The Great War'' (About non-Euphie related things that occur during the world war that breaks out in the R2 phase).phase) and ''A Spare to Spare: The Royal Houses of [[spoiler:Ashford and Stadtfeld]]'' (About the noble houses Empress Euphie designates as SpareToTheThrone until she has children of her own). Some of them are innocuous details that nonetheless help with the world building, such as Britannian succession procedures and Euphie's favoring of a Japanese artist. A few others are outright spoilers, such as [[spoiler:Euphie's patronage of Nina leading to the development of nuclear weapons.]]


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** A non-military figure appears by reference: [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Boris_Spassky Boris Spassky]] is named as the only person in the EU who can beat [[spoiler:Lelouch]] at chess.
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** The first attempt to kill [[spoiler:a Krell-controlled Suzaku]] involved [[spoiler:'''nuking Toulon''']]. Unfortunately, the target had been moved shortly before the attack began.
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* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: Euphemia of all people, as the author has admitted. Kallen, Rai and Villetta among others are there to prevent her from crossing the point of no return.
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* NamesTheSame: The Damocles in the fic is different from [[NuclearOption the show's Damocles]]. [[spoiler:Compare a flying fleet to a giant, slowly hovering nuclear launch platform.]]
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** The Avalon. A flying ship is always cool, but the Float system's mobility advantages are offset by the thin armor, limited carriage capacity, exposed bridge and ludicrous maintenance costs. As such, it's the only ship of its kind.

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** The Avalon. A flying ship is always cool, but the Float system's mobility advantages are offset by the thin armor, limited carriage capacity, exposed bridge and ludicrous maintenance costs. As such, it's the only ship of its kind. [[spoiler:The impracticality actually gets deliberately advertised so that nobody realizes that the Empire has a secret program to make the technology more practical and use it to build a flying warfleet.]]
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** Chapter 97 has Britannia deliver a twofer to the world: [[spoiler:The nuclear bomb that came from Nina's research coupled with a stealth bomber built in secret under Marshall Vander. With these, the Britannians destroy Toulon.]]
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* GodzillaThreshold: [[spoiler:Considering the threat the Krell and Suzaku posed, Euphie elects to drop an atomic bomb on the city of Toulon when they get wind that the latter is there. They fail because he was being moved out when it was dropped, but they did manage to ensure the fiery nuclear death of Marshall Juin and the destruction of the bulk of the French navy.]]

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* KnowWhenToFoldThem: The Carolina Guard realizes that continued resistance after the arrival of [[spoiler:8th Fleet]] will just increase the body count while delaying the inevitable, and surrenders. This gets them a better deal when Empress Euphie decides what to do with the rebellious Provincial Guards.



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* RedemptionQuest: The surviving members of the rebellious Provincial Guards are forcibly folded into the Imperial Army and sent to the front. The Virginians do so as a Penal Legion, but the Carolinians are promised that if they serve without further incident the record will state that they are honorably discharged veterans at the end of the war.

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** Attempted by [[spoiler:Euphie after learning her entire family including her beloved sisters Cornelia and Nunnally died due to a Geass command. Thankfully, she snaps out thanks to Milly.]]



* SurprisinglySuddenDeath: Following the Britannian loyalists' victory in the Battle of Pendragon, [[spoiler:the '''entire''' Imperial family sans Euphie suddenly drops dead as though someone used a DeathNote on them. And "entire" means '''everybody''' with a blood tie to the Imperial line, no matter how distant, resulting in people spontaneously dropping dead because one of their ancestors was the unacknowledged illegitimate child of the younger sibling of an Emperor who died centuries ago, or something equally remote.]]

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* SurprisinglySuddenDeath: Following the Britannian loyalists' victory in the Battle of Pendragon, [[spoiler:the '''entire''' Imperial family sans Euphie suddenly drops dead as though someone used a DeathNote Manga/DeathNote on them. And "entire" means '''everybody''' with a blood tie to the Imperial line, no matter how distant, resulting in people spontaneously dropping dead because one of their ancestors was the unacknowledged illegitimate child of the younger sibling of an Emperor who died centuries ago, or something equally remote.]]
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** After taking the throne, Euphie names [[spoiler:Milly and Kallen]] as her heirs, although she makes it clear that they are placeholders until she has children of her own.
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* SurprisinglySuddenDeath: Following the Britannian loyalists' victory in the Battle of Pendragon, [[spoiler:the '''entire''' Imperial family sans Euphie suddenly drops dead as though someone used a DeathNote on them.]]

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* SurprisinglySuddenDeath: Following the Britannian loyalists' victory in the Battle of Pendragon, [[spoiler:the '''entire''' Imperial family sans Euphie suddenly drops dead as though someone used a DeathNote on them. And "entire" means '''everybody''' with a blood tie to the Imperial line, no matter how distant, resulting in people spontaneously dropping dead because one of their ancestors was the unacknowledged illegitimate child of the younger sibling of an Emperor who died centuries ago, or something equally remote.]]

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* DoorStopper: The part of the story lining up with the R1 phase is fifty chapters and roughly half a million words, and the R2 phase is likely to be about the same.

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* DoorStopper: The part of the story lining up with the R1 phase is fifty chapters and roughly half a million words, and the R2 phase is likely to be about the same. Euphie's coronation isn't until 800,000 words in, and the story isn't over yet.



* IHaveYourWife: The Geass Directorate and the Ordo Hereticus kidnap family members of Euphie's allies to use against her, but they're rescued before any significant moves can be done.
* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: Kallen invokes this in her final duel with [[spoiler:Suzaku]], not because she believes she can break him out of his Geassed state, but because she hopes that inducing a conflict between his true nature and the actions he is being compelled to take will distract him and provide her with an opening.

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* IHaveYourWife: The Geass Directorate and the Ordo Hereticus kidnap family members of Euphie's allies to use against her, but they're rescued before any significant moves can be done.
done. [[spoiler:It still puts Kallen's mother in a coma because her captivity caused her to miss a treatment in her Refrain detox program]].
* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: Kallen invokes this in her final duel with [[spoiler:Suzaku]], [[spoiler:Suzaku]] during the Tokyo Uprising, not because she believes she can break him out of his Geassed state, but because she hopes that inducing a conflict between his true nature and the actions he is being compelled to take will distract him and provide her with an opening.



* OneSteveLimit: So far there has been only one case of characters sharing a first name, and since the two Lauras have never once been on the same continent, much less the same scene, telling them apart isn't hard.

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* OneSteveLimit: So far there has been only one case of characters sharing a first name, and since the two Lauras have never once been on the same continent, much less end up in the same scene, telling them apart isn't hard.



* RagsToRoyalty: Not quite literal rags, but [[spoiler:Milly]] goes from disenfranchised nobility to Heir Primus (as a placeholder to ensure a defined succession until Empress Euphie has children). [[spoiler:Kallen]] ends up as placeholder for Heir Secundus.



* RetCon: [[spoiler:Suzaku]]'s role in the story originally had him die tragically as a result of [[spoiler:Lelouch]]'s manipulations. Then the author decided to rewrite his death scene so that he could be revived and used as an agent of the Directorate.

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* RetCon: [[spoiler:Suzaku]]'s role in the story originally had him die tragically as a result of [[spoiler:Lelouch]]'s manipulations. Then the author decided to rewrite his death scene so that he could be revived and used as an agent of the Directorate.Directorate [[spoiler:and later the Krell]].


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** [[spoiler:Luciano Bradley]]'s dismissal [[spoiler:from the Rounds]] involved reducing his estate to a crater.


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** WhatTheHellHero: Later on it gets pointed out to him that his paranoia actually did more damage to those members of the royal family who were the Directorate's enemies than its allies.
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* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler:Euphie basically shuts down upon returning from the New York Thought Elevator after she's just lost her entire family.]]

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* UnexpectedSuccessor: A terrorist group in the Britannian Homeland is being backed by a noble who technically isn't in the line of succession, but is highly ranked enough and closely related enough that if the Emperor and all his children were to die suddenly, he'd have a solid chance of becoming the next Emperor.

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A terrorist group in the Britannian Homeland is being backed by a noble who technically isn't in the line of succession, but is highly ranked enough and closely related enough that if the Emperor and all his children were to die suddenly, he'd have a solid chance of becoming the next Emperor.Emperor.
** At the end of the prologue, Euphie is sixth in the line of succession. She eventually becomes Empress.
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* FakeUltimateHero: Imperial propagandists gave a young Cornelia credit for victories that she wasn't really responsible for in order to justify the Emperor placing her in overall command of the army over the heads of many far more experienced officers. She would going to regard said battles as an OldShame, and in later years would make a point of ensuring that subordinates who performed noteworthy actions received the credit for them instead of stealing it for herself.

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** Another aversion: The Knights of the Round do not have their unique Knightmare Frames, owing to how resource-inefficient and nonsensical it would be to make one-off machines, are given variations of the Lancelot frame.

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** Another aversion: The Knights of the Round do not have their unique Knightmare Frames, owing to how resource-inefficient and nonsensical it would be to make one-off machines, and are instead given variations of the Lancelot frame.



** Britannian nurses are utterly unflappable in this fic. One even stares down Jeremiah and Monica Kruczewski, while recognizing that she had no authority to call them out.



* RedHerring: The Avalon. [[spoiler:All of [[AwesomeButImpractical the flaws that kept it from being a practical war asset]] were deliberately oversold so that Project Damocles can get a head start on a flying fleet well before everyone else.]]

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* RedHerring: The Avalon. [[spoiler:All of [[AwesomeButImpractical the flaws that kept it from being a practical war asset]] were deliberately oversold so that the rest of the world would see the endeavour as wasteful, giving Project Damocles can get a head start on a flying fleet well before everyone else.]]



* SuperweaponSurprise: [[spoiler:Damocles, also known as the Britannian 8th Fleet, which is comprised entirely of ships with Float Systems. This causes great shifts in known war doctrines as, even up to the war's end, there are no countermeasures adequate enough to counter this. And they already have another one nearing completion.]]

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* SuperweaponSurprise: [[spoiler:Damocles, also known as the Britannian 8th Fleet, which is comprised entirely of ships with Float Systems. This causes great shifts in known war doctrines as, even up to the war's end, there are no one is able to develop adequate countermeasures adequate enough to counter this.against it. And they already have another one nearing completion.]]
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** Another aversion: The Knights of the Round do not have their unique Knightmare Frames, owing to how resource-inefficient and nonsensical it would be to make one-off machines, are given variations of the Lancelot frame.

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* NamesTheSame: The Damocles in the fic is established by the author to be different from [[NuclearOption the show's Damocles]]. The exact nature of the former is currently unknown.

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* NamesTheSame: The Damocles in the fic is established by the author to be different from [[NuclearOption the show's Damocles]]. The exact nature of the former is currently unknown.Damocles]]. [[spoiler:Compare a flying fleet to a giant, slowly hovering nuclear launch platform.]]


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* SurprisinglySuddenDeath: Following the Britannian loyalists' victory in the Battle of Pendragon, [[spoiler:the '''entire''' Imperial family sans Euphie suddenly drops dead as though someone used a DeathNote on them.]]

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