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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11962940/1/A-Brighter-Dark A Brighter Dark]]'' is a {{dead|Fic}} ''VideoGame/FireEmblemFates'' story by a fanfiction writer going by the username [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3371139/DeathDealer-Inc DeathDealer Inc]] that acts as a retelling of the ''Conquest'' storyline of the original game, with several noticeable differences.
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The story can be found on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11962940/1/A-Brighter-Dark FanFiction.net]]. There's also a link on [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/8836594/chapters/20260645 AO3]], but the author stopped updating that version after Chapter 25 and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/8836594/chapters/37522757 officially closed it in September of 2018]].
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The story can be found on [[https://www.Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11962940/1/A-Brighter-Dark FanFiction.net]]. net/s/11962940/ here]]). There's also a link on [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/8836594/chapters/20260645 AO3]], Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn ([[https://archiveofourown.org/works/8836594/ here]]), but the author stopped updating that version after Chapter 25 and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/8836594/chapters/37522757 officially closed it in September of 2018]].
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* AdaptationExplanationExtrication: Removing [[spoiler:Anankos and Valla]] from the plot leaves a massive number of plot holes, the ''smallest'' of which being that Lilith's friendship with Corrin makes no sense anymore.
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* AdaptationalModesty: Charlotte's canonical {{Stripperiffic}} outfit is deemed unacceptable for a frontline combatant, and she is forced to change into some more practical armor.
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* AdaptationExplanationExtrication: Removing [[spoiler:Anankos and Valla]] from the plot leaves a massive number of plot holes, the ''smallest'' of which being that Lilith's friendship with Corrin makes no sense anymore.
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: The Hoshido royal family describes Corrin (then known as Kamui) as having been a kind and cheerful little girl before her kidnapping and are shocked over how starkly different her violent and hostile adult self is. Silas also recalls Corrin as being a nice girl during her early days at Nohr.
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: The Hoshido royal family describes Corrin (then known as Kamui) as having been a kind and cheerful little girl before her kidnapping and are shocked over how starkly different her violent and hostile adult self is. Silas also recalls Corrin as being a nice girl to him during her early days at Nohr.
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* OfficialCouple: According to the Chapter 45 notes, [[spoiler:Xander would have married Sakura]] and [[spoiler:Silas would have married Charlotte]].
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* OfficialCouple: According to the Chapter 45 notes, [[spoiler:Xander would have married Sakura]] Sakura (though they also would have never consummated it, meaning it would have been a [[AltarDiplomacy purely political marriage]])]] and [[spoiler:Silas would have married Charlotte]].
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: The Hoshido royal family describes Corrin (then known as Kamui) as having been a kind and cheerful little girl before her kidnapping and are shocked over how starkly different her violent and hostile adult self is. Silas also recalls Corrin as being a nice girl during her early days at Nohr.
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** When Selena is in [[spoiler: Mokushu, berating the local sheriff for not keeping proper order, said sheriff has a prostitute in his office that he continuously gets distracted by due to her [[BoobsOfSteel well-endowed figure.]] Perceptive viewers can identify this 'prostitute' as Kagero, master of disguise and infiltration. In case they didn't, she describes the event in the very next scene when debriefing with Saizo.]]
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** When Selena is in [[spoiler: Mokushu, berating the local sheriff for not keeping proper order, said sheriff has a prostitute in his office that he continuously gets distracted by due to her [[BoobsOfSteel well-endowed figure.]] figure. Perceptive viewers can identify this 'prostitute' as Kagero, master of disguise and infiltration. In case they didn't, she describes the event in the very next scene when debriefing with Saizo.]]
