History DisproportionateRetribution / FanWorks

* In [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4301633/1/ "Used"]], Tritter uses kidnapping, gang-rape, murder, stalking, and beating House half to death with his own cane to get revenge for the thermometer incident.

* In ''{{FanFic/Heir}}'' Voldemort hates muggles because as a child he was picked on at the orphanage and [[KickTheDog they killed his baby snake.]] Voldemort tracked down his childhood tormenter years later and killed her child.

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* In Fanfic/NarutoVeanganceRevelaitons, Ronan, who is [[PoliticallyIncorrectHero incredibly homophobic]] among other things, kills a gay man for merely liking his penis. He also considers Sakura [[spoiler:cutting off her own vagina]] appropriate punishment for cheating on him, although she was the one who proposed it.
* The reason the main protagonists of ''Fanfic/CalvinAndHobbesTheSeries'' stop [[MadScientist Dr.]] [[StupidEvil Brainstorm]] yet again? He shut down [=DirectTV's=] satellite.
* In the Lucky Star fanfic, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8026135/1/The_Day_Everything_Changed_Revised_Edition The Day Everything Changed]], the main antagonist of the story, [[BigBad Sakura Takahashi]], went on the attack, giving Kagami [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown the mother of all beatdowns]] and injuring the poor girl so badly that she had to be rushed to the hospital. What the hell did Kagami do to deserve this? The fact that she simply scored higher than Sakura on a midterm. If that's not DisproportionateRetribution, then I don't know what is. It doesn't help that she had secretly had a grudge towards Kagami for god knows how long. Luckily, [[LaserGuidedKarma justice quickly catches up with her]].
* In Shining Armor's side story in the ''FanFic/PonyPOVSeries'', the arc's BigBad [[GeneralRipper Makarov]]'s reaction to Shining not knowing who he is is to ''try to assassinate him''. And that's plan A -- plan B is to instead subject him to a FateWorseThanDeath.
** When Diamond Tiara went through her mother's jewelry and "borrowed" a tiara (earning her cutie mark in the process), her mother didn't take it well. And by that I mean she tried to ''strangle her own daughter to death''.
* In ''FanFic/TheNewRetcons'', Gavin Caine opposed Tracey's campaign to investigate [[spoiler: whether Millborough being built on a former nuclear test site had an adverse effect on the population]]. Why? To get back at his son Anthony through Tracey and her husband Gordon, first for Anthony working for them instead of him, then for opposing his expansion plans for being outdated.
** [[spoiler: Kortney Krelbutz wanted revenge on Moira and Elly, the former for firing her, the latter for not hiring her back. (Never mind that she was busted stealing.) She steals Elly's husband John from her (not that she ever knew, given her untimely death), inherited his millions when he died, then used that to buy out the store she was fired from and fire Moira in turn, then bought out most of Millborough to have it absorbed into Greater Scarborough.]]
* ''FanFic/{{Hivefled}}'': While imprisoned and horribly tortured, Gamzee was given a GlasgowGrin as punishment. His crime? [[StepfordSmiler Not smiling.]]
* There has existed at least one AxisPowersHetalia fanfic in which Canada brutally tortures or murders another character in response to their heinous crime of not remembering Canada's name.
* ''DeathNoteEquestria'': Twilight, as Kira, kills criminals of various caliber — her main targets are {{Karma Houdini}}s and those she considers unrepentant — so a pony with a life-long history of minor offences might also be offed. Second Kira [[spoiler: (Fluttershy)]], meanwhile, openly kills those who speak against Kira.
* In ''{{FanFic/Heir}}'' Voldemort hates muggles because as a child he was picked on at the orphanage and [[KickTheDog they killed his baby snake.]] Voldemort tracked down his childhood tormenter years later and killed her child.

* In ''FanFic/MyImmortal'', "Samoro" (allegedly James Potter) and "Lucian" (allegedly Lucius Malfoy) are in a band together. Lucian plays a few wrong notes during a concert, and Samoro responds by attempting to ''shoot off Lucian's arm''. But it was later revealed that Snap(e) used DemonicPossession on Samoro to make him do the above, meaning this trope is subverted.
** Not to mention when Ebony's friend Willow becomes a 'prep', she is then murdered and her body is dumped in the woods. And is raped by 'Loopin', because he's a '[[ILoveTheDead necphilak]]'.
** There's also the time Ebony and Satan start to have sex with each other in a movie theater while the movie is playing. When the woman seated behind them complains, Ebony retaliates by [[CrossesTheLineTwice killing her and sucking all her blood]]. (Well, she is a vampire.)
* Remember in ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheGobletOfFire'' when Ron and Harry were having an argument, because Ron was feeling OvershadowedByAwesome and he felt Harry was hiding something from him? Well, Rose Potter of ''The Girl Who Lived'' responded to this by throwing Ron around the room and carving words into his forehead.
* In the ''Series/{{House}}'' FanFic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4301633/1/ "Used"]], Tritter uses kidnapping, gang-rape, murder, stalking, and beating House half to death with his own cane to get revenge for the thermometer incident.
* Tends to be a trend with [[{{Kickassia}} Post-Kickassia]] fic where Critic is concerned. Yes, we know he was an epic dick during that week, but is it really necessary to make him the recipient of a dub-conny gangbang?
* In Fanfic/ChristianHumberReloaded, the main character goes after and kills a hunter who set a trap that he stepped into, even though the trap broke on his leg. He later kills his friend Soku, her entire family and all her friends because she turned him in to the police.
* In LatiasJourney, the Ghost King proposes to Latias after sending her several gifts. She refuses his advances, so he kills her family, and then destoys her home, Altomare, along with everyone in it. Judging by the city it is based on, he killed upwards of 800,000 people. Strangely enough, she still falls in [[AMillionIsAStatistic love with him.]]
* In the PokeWars series, [[BigBad Ho-Oh]] sees genocide as a fitting punishment for humanity's "enslavement" of [[{{Mons}} Pokémon]].

* [[VideoGame/XCOMEnemyUnknown X-COM]] in [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8861606/1/XCOM-Second-Contact XCOM: Second Contact]] outdoes the GDI in this. The Relay 314 Incident? X-COM's counterattack on the Turian patrol involved [[CurbStompBattle 400 fighters, a dozen cruisers and two dreadnoughts]]. Mindoir? Two words, "Chryssalid strikes”.
* In ''SonOfApophis'', a Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic, the villain gives a speech about how pointless the whole 'eye for an eye' thing is. It's better to take both eyes, and the other guy's arms while you're at it.
* The 'financialcrisis gangbang' comics in the ''Manga/AxisPowersHetalia'' fandom. I mean, really - was ''raping'' America ''really'' the best way to sort out the financial crisis?

* [[SarcasmMode Hey kids,]] is the nerd asking questions that the teacher holds off recess to answer? That's not cool! Let's trick her into going into a forest full of hungry monsters to an ancient and quite possibly cursed ruin [[spoiler:where she'll get [[MindRape mind raped]] by memories she didn't know she had!]] Sound harsh? [[Fanfic/PastSins Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon did it!]] [[spoiler:Although, to be fair, they didn't know that the mind rape thing would happen. The monsters, on the other hand, are common knowledge.]]
* A rather brutal example occurs in the ''KidsIncorporated'' fanfic, "The Kids Who Cried 'Ouch'", an answer fanfic to the episode "The Boy Who Cried Gorilla." In the fanfic, Ryan, Connie, and Renee get their "just desserts" for their initial treatment of Richie when he first sees the gorilla. Among other things, Ryan gets beaten to the point that he suffers a drug addiction that causes his grades to fall to flunking levels, Connie gets a knife up the vagina rendering her sterile, and Renee winds up repeatedly getting raped to the point that she winds up pregnant and ends up suffering a miscarriage.
* Inverted in ''Fanfic/WithStringsAttached''. Because the four are {{Actual Pacifist}}s, when they are treated very badly (even tortured in a way) by the Uneasy Alliance in Ehndris—at one point, part of George's ''soul'' is taken from him—and have a chance to get some of their own back, they just slap people around for a few seconds. The worst that happens is a few people get slammed into a wall or hosed down, and George does [[CatsAreMean “cat tornado”]] on [[spoiler: Brox's]] head.
** It's even more disproportionate when you realize that George did nothing else during the final battle except try not to get hurt, and Paul did nothing except absorb damage and hold Kerrun upside-down and tap her head on the floor to keep her from concentrating.
* ''FanFic/TurnaboutStorm'' shows murder as a very rare and serious crime in [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Equestria]], and the punishment for the guilty is banishment... [[TheNotSoHarmlessPunishment to the Moon or]] [[HurlItIntoTheSun the Sun]]. Upon hearing this, [[AceAttorney Phoenix Wright]] immediately takes it as going a bit too far. Oh well, more reasons for him to bring his A-game to the trial against his new client Rainbow Dash.
** Then there's Trixie, who took the job as the prosecutor as an opportunity to get revenge on Twilight, so she basically wants to get one of her friends killed because Twilight humiliated her before... Yep, Trixie seems to have taken retribution lessons from [[AmoralAttorney Manfred Von Karma]].

* In the pornographic ''Series/SesameStreet ([[CanonDefilement no, really]]), Maria responds to Elmo peeping on her and lying about being three years old for years by diapering him, and taking his temperature with a rectal thermometer, with several of the other girls joining in the latter, groping his penis in the process. In response, Elmo [[spoiler:ejaculates into her, getting her pregnant ([[ArtisticLicenseBiology because monster sperm gets people pregnant without fail]]), and tells her that if she doesn't want her husband Luis to find out, [[ScarpiaUltimatum she and her 14-year-old daughter will have sex with him whenever he wants]].]]

* Remember in ''HarryPotter/HarryPotterAndTheGobletOfFire'' when Ron and Harry were having an argument, because Ron was feeling OvershadowedByAwesome and he felt Harry was hiding something from him? Well, Rose Potter of ''The Girl Who Lived'' responded to this by throwing Ron around the room and carving words into his forehead.

* In the Lucky Star fanfic, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8026135/1/The_Day_Everything_Changed_Revised_Edition The Day Everything Changed]], the [[BigBad main antagonist]] of the story, Sakura Takahashi, went on the attack, giving Kagami [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown the mother of all beatdowns]] and injuring the poor girl so badly that she had to be rushed to the hospital. What the hell did Kagami do to deserve this? The fact that she simply scored higher than Sakura on a midterm. If that's not DisproportionateRetribution, then I don't know what is. It doesn't help that she had secretly had a grudge towards Kagami for god knows how long. Luckily, [[LaserGuidedKarma justice quickly catches up with her]].

* In the Lucky Star fanfic, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8026135/1/The_Day_Everything_Changed_Revised_Edition The Day Everything Changed]], the [[BigBad main antagonist]] of the story, Sakura Takahashi, went on the attack, giving Kagami [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown the mother of all beatdowns]] and injuring the poor girl so badly that she had to be rushed to the hospital. What the hell did Kagami do to deserve this? The fact that she simply scored higher than Sakura on a midterm. If that's not DisproportionateRetribution, then I don't know what is. Luckily, [[LaserGuidedKarma justice quickly catches up with her]].

* In the Lucky Star fanfic, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8026135/1/The_Day_Everything_Changed_Revised_Edition The Day Everything Changed]], the [[BigBad main antagonist]] of the story, [[CompleteMonster Sakura Takahashi]], went on the attack, giving Kagami [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown the mother of all beatdowns]] and injuring the poor girl so badly that she had to be rushed to the hospital. What the hell did Kagami do to deserve this? The fact that she simply scored higher than Sakura on a midterm. If that's not DisproportionateRetribution, then I don't know what is. Luckily, [[LaserGuidedKarma justice quickly catches up with her]].

* In the Lucky Star fanfic, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8026135/1/The_Day_Everything_Changed_Revised_Edition The Day Everything Changed]], the [[BigBad main antagonist]] of the story, [[CompleteMonster Sakura Takahashi]], went on the attack, giving Kagami [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown the mother of all beatdowns]] and injuring the poor girl so badly that she had to be rushed to the hospital. What the hell did Kagami do to deserve this? The fact that she simply scored higher than Sakura on a midterm. If that's not DisproportionateRetribution, then I don't know what is. Luckily, [[LaserGuidedKarma justice soon catches up to her]].

* In the Lucky Star fanfic, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8026135/1/The_Day_Everything_Changed_Revised_Edition The Day Everything Changed]], the [[BigBad main antagonist]] of the story, [[CompleteMonster Sakura Takahashi]], went on the attack, giving Kagami [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown the mother of all beatdowns]] and injuring her so badly that she had to be rushed to the hospital. What caused Sakura to attack? The fact that Kagami simply scored higher than Sakura on a test. If that's not DisproportionateRetribution, then I don't know what is. Luckily, [[LaserGuidedKarma justice soon catches up to her]].

* * In the Lucky Star fanfic, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8026135/1/The_Day_Everything_Changed_Revised_Edition The Day Everything Changed]], the [[BigBad main antagonist]] of the story, [[CompleteMonster Sakura Takahashi]], went on the attack, giving Kagami [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown the mother of all beatdowns]] and injuring her so badly that she had to be rushed to the hospital. What caused Sakura to attack? The fact that Kagami simply scored higher than Sakura on a test. If that's not DisproportionateRetribution, then I don't know what is. Luckily, [[LaserGuidedKarma justice soon catches up to her]].

* * In the Lucky Star fanfic, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8026135/1/The_Day_Everything_Changed_Revised_Edition The Day Everything Changed]], the [[BigBad main antagonist]] of the story, [[CompleteMonster Sakura Takahashi]], went on the attack and wound up injuring Kagami (who didn't even know her) so badly that the poor girl had to be rushed to the hospital. What caused Sakura to attack? The fact that Kagami simply scored higher than Sakura on a test. If that's not DisproportionateRetribution, then I don't know what is.

* In the ''{{Series/House}}'' FanFic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4301633/1/ "Used"]], Tritter uses kidnapping, gang-rape, murder, stalking, and beating House half to death with his own cane to get revenge for the thermometer incident.

* In [=~Latias' Journey~=], the Ghost King proposes to Latias after sending her several gifts. She refuses his advances, so he kills her family, and then destoys her home, Altomare, along with everyone in it. Judging by the city it is based on, he killed upwards of 800,000 people. Strangely enough, she still falls in [[AMillionIsAStatistic love with him.]]

* The reason the main protagonists of ''Fanfic/CalvinAndHobbesTheSeries'' stop [[MadScientist Dr.]] [[StupidEvil Brainstorm]] yet again? He shut down [=DirectTV's=] satellite.

* In the pornographic SesameStreet ([[CanonDefilement no, really]]), Maria responds to Elmo peeping on her and lying about being three years old for years by diapering him, and taking his temperature with a rectal thermometer, with several of the other girls joining in the latter, groping his penis in the process. In response, Elmo [[spoiler:ejaculates into her, getting her pregnant ([[ArtisticLicenseBiology because monster sperm gets people pregnant without fail]]), and tells her that if she doesn't want her husband Luis to find out, [[ScarpiaUltimatum she and her 14-year-old daughter will have sex with him whenever he wants]].]]

* Remember in ''HarryPotter/HarryPotterAndTheGobletOfFire'' when Ron and Harry were having an argument, because Ron was feeling OvershadowedByAwesome and he felt Harry was hiding something from him? Well, [[TheGirlWhoLived Rose Potter]] responded to this by throwing Ron around the room and carving words into his forehead.

* One conclusion to the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' DarkFic "{{Pattycakes}}"[[hottip:*:which, to be fair, is intended as parody]] ends with Fluttershy singing to Rainbow Dash about how Dash[[hottip:*:who does have a bad habit of saying things without thinking first]] will never hurt anyone's feelings again now that she's been ''[[MindRape mentally regressed to an infant]]''. The ''[[MultipleEndings other]]'' conclusion has Scootaloo fail to grasp Fluttershy's philosophy after going through the series of (twisted) tests, and if she fails the final test by ''drinking water instead of milk'', she's regressed even ''further'' than Dash (Dash had BabyTalk, Scoot loses the power of speech ''entirely''), with no hope of ever recovering. (For your daily humour-so-dark-light-cannot-escape-its-surface needs, her cutie mark takes the form of a baby's pacifier, since she's not exactly going to have the chance to demonstrate any ''other'' talents, now is she?)

* One conclusion to the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' DarkFic "Pattycakes"[[hottip:*:which, to be fair, is intended as parody]] ends with Fluttershy singing to Rainbow Dash about how Dash[[hottip:*:who does have a bad habit of saying things without thinking first]] will never hurt anyone's feelings again now that she's been ''[[MindRape mentally regressed to an infant]]''. The ''[[MultipleEndings other]]'' conclusion has Scootaloo fail to grasp Fluttershy's philosophy after going through the series of (twisted) tests, and if she fails the final test by ''drinking water instead of milk'', she's regressed even ''further'' than Dash (Dash had BabyTalk, Scoot loses the power of speech ''entirely''), with no hope of ever recovering. (For your daily humour-so-dark-light-cannot-escape-its-surface needs, her cutie mark takes the form of a baby's pacifier, since she's not exactly going to have the chance to demonstrate any ''other'' talents, now is she?)
* In the pornographic SesameStreet ([[CanonDefilement no, really]]), Maria responds to Elmo peeping on her and lying about being three years old for years by diapering him, and taking his temperature with a rectal thermometer, with several ove the other girls joining in the latter, groping his penis in the process. In response, Elmo [[spoiler:ejaculates into her, getting her pregnant ([[ArtisticLicenseBiology because monster sperm gets people pregnant without fail]]), and tells her that if she doesn't want her husband Luis to find out, [[ScarpiaUltimatum she and her 14-year-old daughter will have sex with him whenever he wants]].]]
* In Fanfic/NarutoVeanganceRevelaitons, Ronan, who is [[PoliticallyIncorrectHero incredibly homophobic]] among other things, kills a gay man for merely liking his penis. He also considers Sakura [[spoiler:cutting off her own vagina]] appropriate punishment for cheating on him, although she was the one who proposed it.

* One conclusion to the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' DarkFic "Pattycakes"[[hottip:*:which, to be fair, is intended as parody]] ends with Fluttershy singing to Rainbow Dash about how Dash[[hottip:*:who does have a bad habit of saying things without thinking first]] will never hurt anyone's feelings again now that she's been ''[[MindRape mentally regressed to an infant]]''. The ''[[MultipleEndings other]]'' conclusion has Scootaloo fail to grasp Fluttershy's philosophy after going through the series of (twisted) tests, and if she fails the final test by ''drinking water instead of milk'', she's regressed even ''further'' than Dash (Dash had BabyTalk, Scoot loses the power of speech ''entirely''), with no hope of ever recovering. (For your daily humour-so-dark-light-cannot-escape-its-surface needs, her cutie mark takes the form of a baby's pacifier, since she's not exactly going to have the chance to demonstrate any ''other'' talents, now is she?)

* Half of [[CompleteMonster Arestis']] actions in ''Arestis' Childhood'' would strongly classify. Hell, she commits the first such act at the age of four!