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Woman In White is no longer a trope
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* TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture: It's vaguely stated to be around the future, but it looks more like it's gone into the past.
* WomanInWhite: The protagonist wears a white dress and occasionally white flats, although her shoes sometimes change color.
* WomanInWhite: The protagonist wears a white dress and occasionally white flats, although her shoes sometimes change color.
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* TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture: It's vaguely stated to be around the future, but it looks more like it's gone into the past.
* WomanInWhite: The protagonist wears a white dress and occasionally white flats, although her shoes sometimes change color.past.
* WomanInWhite: The protagonist wears a white dress and occasionally white flats, although her shoes sometimes change color.
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Moving to Unpublished Works as there's no evidence of existence.
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A girl is sent to a women's correction facility for something she's not really sure of. What exactly ''did'' she commit?
But the prison seems more like a safe house. A defense. The protagonist goes around doing chores and living a life not entirely (obviously) shackled. On the way she meets a multitude of people and gets entangled in their own stories.
The thing is, this place is her ''prison''. Her punishment. It's not easy to escape.
And things get dark quickly.
!!This game contains examples of:
* ArcWords: ''"This is your prison."''
* EmpathicEnvironment: On the first day the sky is still nice and fair. But as the days pass, more clouds loom and the weather becomes darker and darker. One can actually hear a faint rumble of thunder every now and then if the protagonist stays outside. Also creative, as a sort of title drop: Nimbus clouds bring rain.
* FetchQuest: Boring fetch quests actually help you get around and see the very beginnings of certain events.
* NoNameGiven: The protagonist isn't addressed by name.
* TheRoaringTwenties: The Roaring Twenties in the future?
* TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture: It's vaguely stated to be around the future, but it looks more like it's gone into the past.
* WomanInWhite: The protagonist wears a white dress and occasionally white flats, although her shoes sometimes change color.
But the prison seems more like a safe house. A defense. The protagonist goes around doing chores and living a life not entirely (obviously) shackled. On the way she meets a multitude of people and gets entangled in their own stories.
The thing is, this place is her ''prison''. Her punishment. It's not easy to escape.
And things get dark quickly.
!!This game contains examples of:
* ArcWords: ''"This is your prison."''
* EmpathicEnvironment: On the first day the sky is still nice and fair. But as the days pass, more clouds loom and the weather becomes darker and darker. One can actually hear a faint rumble of thunder every now and then if the protagonist stays outside. Also creative, as a sort of title drop: Nimbus clouds bring rain.
* FetchQuest: Boring fetch quests actually help you get around and see the very beginnings of certain events.
* NoNameGiven: The protagonist isn't addressed by name.
* TheRoaringTwenties: The Roaring Twenties in the future?
* TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture: It's vaguely stated to be around the future, but it looks more like it's gone into the past.
* WomanInWhite: The protagonist wears a white dress and occasionally white flats, although her shoes sometimes change color.
