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* FiveTokenBand: Being that the Progeny are based on ''ComicBook/{{Runaways}}'', this was bound to happen, with June being Chinese-American, Maya being Indian-American (and a Jain), Niccolo being black and disabled, Billie being Latina, and Sasha being hearing-impaired.
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* FiveTokenBand: Being that the Progeny are based on ''ComicBook/{{Runaways}}'', this was bound to happen, with June being Chinese-American, Maya being Indian-American (and a Jain), Niccolo being black and disabled, Billie being Latina, and Sasha being hearing-impaired.deaf.
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* ShoutOut: The name "Queenshead" is a riff on "Kingsport", Creator/HPLovecraft's version of Marblehead.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** The name "Queenshead" is a riff on "Kingsport", Creator/HPLovecraft's version ofMarblehead.Marblehead.
** The Progeny derive their group name from Creator/Sophocles' lost tragedy of the same name.
** The name "Queenshead" is a riff on "Kingsport", Creator/HPLovecraft's version of
** The Progeny derive their group name from Creator/Sophocles' lost tragedy of the same name.
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* AlternateHistory: The play takes place in a universe where instead of the Yugoslav Wars, there was the Slavic-Lytonian War. It's also mentioned that the Cold War ended in a stalemate.
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* {{Capepunk}}: The play takes place in a universe where superpowers exist, albeit rarely and often in the hands of less-than-heroic individuals.
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* TotalPartyKill: [[spoiler:This was what actually happened to the Progeny, according to June; they all died from Ackerman's experiments, but she made a deal with the Queen to bring most of them back in exchange for killing Ackerman.]]
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* SecretProjectRefugeeFamily: The Progeny all fled from one of Ackerman's projects.
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* AgainstMyReligion: Maya is a devout Jain, and thus does not eat meat or engage in violence, and thus also refrains from using her powers, as the Jain concept of ''ahimsa'' mentions not harming people through words.
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* DealWithTheDevil: June made a deal with the Queen in Flames in order to gain superhuman abilities. Unfortunately for her, the contract was open-ended, and the Queen keeps coming up with new demands.
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* DealWithTheDevil: June made a deal with the The Queen in Flames in order to gain superhuman abilities. Unfortunately for her, the contract was open-ended, and the The Queen keeps coming up with new demands.
* GoshDarnItToHeck: Maya (almost) never uses profanity.
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* InconvenientSummons: The Queen In Fire and Her associates have an annoying habit of calling upon June when she's talking to her friends, which doesn't do her sanity any favors.
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* InconvenientSummons: The Queen In Fire and Her associates have an annoying habit of calling upon June when she's talking to her friends, which doesn't do her sanity any favors.
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* {{Mutants}}: Maya is an Abnormal, which is essentially this universe's version of a mutant.
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* {{Mutants}}: Maya is an Abnormal, Aberation, which is essentially this universe's version of a mutant.mutant.
* TheReliableOne: Niccolo handles all the practical matters in the group.
* TheReliableOne: Niccolo handles all the practical matters in the group.
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* CameBackWrong: The Palimpsest used to be more human, but after his death, Ackerman used him as a vessel for one of the Lytonian gods.
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* CameBackWrong: The Palimpsest used to be more human, but after his death, Ackerman used him as Ackerman's failed attempt to sacrifice him, he's become a vessel for one of the Lytonian gods.
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* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler:Played with. Dr. Ackerman helps Sasha save Billie's life for free, asking only that she remember that he helped her the next time they meet. It's left unclear what he will ask in return.]]
* DramaticIrony: [[spoiler:In the end, the other kids finally accept Sasha as one of them - after she's secretly agreed to betray them.]]
* EmptyShell: According to Ackerman, this is what has become of Paulie; his body's intact, but there's nothing inside.
* DramaticIrony: [[spoiler:In the end, the other kids finally accept Sasha as one of them - after she's secretly agreed to betray them.]]
* EmptyShell: According to Ackerman, this is what has become of Paulie; his body's intact, but there's nothing inside.
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* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler:Played with. Dr. Ackerman helps Sasha save Billie's life June made a deal with the Queen in Flames in order to gain superhuman abilities. Unfortunately for free, asking only that she remember that he helped her her, the next time they meet. It's left unclear what he will ask in return.]]
contract was open-ended, and the Queen keeps coming up with new demands.
* DramaticIrony: [[spoiler:In the end, the other kids finally accept Sasha as one of them - after she'ssecretly agreed to betray them.been exposed as TheMole.]]
* EmptyShell: According to Ackerman, this is what has become of Paulie; his body's intact, but there's nothing inside. [[spoiler:This turns out to be a lie, and Sasha manages to restore his personality.]]
* DramaticIrony: [[spoiler:In the end, the other kids finally accept Sasha as one of them - after she's
* EmptyShell: According to Ackerman, this is what has become of Paulie; his body's intact, but there's nothing inside. [[spoiler:This turns out to be a lie, and Sasha manages to restore his personality.]]
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* TheMole: [[spoiler:Sasha was supposed to lead the Progeny back to Ackerman.]]
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* FiveTokenBand: Being that the Progeny are based on ''ComicBook/{{Runaways}}'', this was bound to happen, with June being Chinese-American, Maya being Indian-American (and a Jain), Niccolo being black and disabled, Billie being Latina, and Sasha being hearing-impaired.
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* LovecraftCountry: The play takes place in Iron Hill, a small North Shore town in Massachusetts with a creepy fortress that houses an ancient evil... thing.
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* InsistentTerminology: Sasha is ''hearing-impaired'', not deaf.
* LovecraftCountry: The play takes place inIron Hill, Queenshead, a small North Shore town in Massachusetts with a creepy fortress that houses an ancient evil... thing.thing.
* NoCommunitiesWereHarmed: Queenshead is based on the town of Marblehead.
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* NoCommunitiesWereHarmed: Queenshead is based on the town of Marblehead.
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* StressInducedMentalVoices: All the other Breakouts think that June's claims that she's receiving orders from a god are just hallucinations from the stress of trying to lead a team.
* TownWithADarkSecret: Iron Hill is the home of a creepy fortress with something evil inside it.
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* ShoutOut: The name "Queenshead" is a riff on "Kingsport", Creator/HPLovecraft's version of Marblehead.
* StressInducedMentalVoices: All the otherBreakouts Progeny think that June's claims that she's receiving orders from a god are just hallucinations from the stress of trying to lead a team.
* TownWithADarkSecret:Iron Hill Queenshead is the home of a creepy fortress with something evil inside it.
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* InconvenientSummons: The Pyre and Her associates have an annoying habit of calling upon June when she's talking to her friends, which doesn't do her sanity any favors.
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* InconvenientSummons: The Pyre Queen In Fire and Her associates have an annoying habit of calling upon June when she's talking to her friends, which doesn't do her sanity any favors.
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* BlessedWithSuck: As a side-effect of the treatment that saved his life, Niccolo has heightened sensitivity to electricity.
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* BlessedWithSuck: As a side-effect of the treatment treatments that saved his life, Niccolo has heightened sensitivity to electricity.
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* LovecraftCountry: The play takes place in Iron Hill, a small North Shore town in Massachusetts with a creepy fortress that houses an ancient evil... thing.
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* StressInducedMentalVoices: All the other Breakouts think that June's claims that she's receiving orders from a god are just hallucinations from the stress of trying to lead a team.team.
* TownWithADarkSecret: Iron Hill is the home of a creepy fortress with something evil inside it.
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* AlternativeHistory: The play takes place in a universe where instead of the Yugoslav Wars, there was the Slavic-Lytonian War. It's also mentioned that the Cold War ended in a stalemate.
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* DramaticIrony: [[spoiler:In the end, the other Breakouts finally accept Sasha as one of them - after she's secretly agreed to betray them.]]
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* DramaticIrony: [[spoiler:In the end, the other Breakouts kids finally accept Sasha as one of them - after she's secretly agreed to betray them.]]]]
* EmptyShell: According to Ackerman, this is what has become of Paulie; his body's intact, but there's nothing inside.
* EmptyShell: According to Ackerman, this is what has become of Paulie; his body's intact, but there's nothing inside.
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* BlessedWithSuck: Niccolo has the ability to re-task his brainpower away from things like emotions or motor skills to boost his own intelligence. He is constantly forced to remind himself how to walk.
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* {{Mutants}}: Maya is an Abnormal, which is essentially this universe's version of a mutant.
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* StressInducedMentalVoices: All the other Breakouts think that June's claims that she's receiving orders from a god are just hallucinations from the stress of trying to lead a team.
* StressInducedMentalVoices: All the other Breakouts think that June's claims that she's receiving orders from a god are just hallucinations from the stress of trying to lead a team.
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* HumanoidAbomination: After years of experiments on himself, Dr. Ackerman still looks human, but he treats the people around him as though they're all members of some lesser species.
* InconvenientSummons: The Pyre and Her associates have an annoying habit of calling upon June when she's talking to her friends, which doesn't do her sanity any favors.
* InconvenientSummons: The Pyre and Her associates have an annoying habit of calling upon June when she's talking to her friends, which doesn't do her sanity any favors.
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In a small North Shore town in Massachusetts, teenage loner Sasha spends her time trying desperately not to be noticed, especially by her abusive grandmother. But then, one day, a impulsive act causes her to come on the radar of a group of other teenagers like herself, setting in motion a chain of events with dire consequences.
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In a small North Shore town in Massachusetts, teenage loner Sasha spends her time trying desperately not to be noticed, especially by her abusive grandmother. But then, one day, a an impulsive act causes her to come on the radar of a group of other teenagers like herself, setting in motion a chain of events with dire consequences.
* BlessedWithSuck: Niccolo has the ability to re-task his brainpower away from things like emotions or motor skills to boost his own intelligence. He is constantly forced to remind himself how to walk.
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* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler:Played with. Dr. Ackerman helps Sasha save Billie for free, asking only that she remember that he helped her the next time they meet. It's left unclear what he will ask in return.]]
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* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler:Played with. Dr. Ackerman helps Sasha save Billie Billie's life for free, asking only that she remember that he helped her the next time they meet. It's left unclear what he will ask in return.]]
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* TheAce: According to the other kids, Billie's older brother Paulie had all the makings of a superhero.
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* CompellingVoice: Maya's voice can make people do whatever she wants. She tries very hard not to accidentally use it.
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* AmbiguouslyHuman: Exactly what the hell Sasha and her grandmother are is not clear.
* BadPowersGoodPeople: Maya has mind control abilities, but is the last person who would ever want to use them.
* BlindWithoutEm: Sasha is almost completely deaf without her hearing aid.
* BadPowersGoodPeople: Maya has mind control abilities, but is the last person who would ever want to use them.
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* HalfHumanHybrid: Billie's mother was an alien heroine, while her dad was a Mexican, making her part alien. This also applies to her brother Paulie.
* HatesBeingTouched: Sasha is a profound haphephobe, the consequence of years ofabuse.abuse.
* {{Mutants}}: Maya is an Abnormal, which is essentially this universe's version of a mutant.
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* {{Mutants}}: Maya is an Abnormal, which is essentially this universe's version of a mutant.
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''The Figment'' is a play by Tropers/StrixObscuro.
In a small North Shore town in Massachusetts, teenage loner Sasha spends her time trying desperately not to be noticed, especially by her abusive grandmother. But then, one day, a impulsive act causes her to come on the radar of a group of other teenagers like herself, setting in motion a chain of events with dire consequences.
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!!This play contains examples of:
* AbandonTheDisabled: [[spoiler:When it becomes clear that their mission is blown, June makes the panicked decision to leave Sasha to fend for herself.]]
* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler:Played with. Dr. Ackerman helps Sasha save Billie for free, asking only that she remember that he helped her the next time they meet. It's left unclear what he will ask in return.]]
* DramaticIrony: [[spoiler:In the end, the other Breakouts finally accept Sasha as one of them - after she's secretly agreed to betray them.]]
* HatesBeingTouched: Sasha is a profound haphephobe, the consequence of years of abuse.
In a small North Shore town in Massachusetts, teenage loner Sasha spends her time trying desperately not to be noticed, especially by her abusive grandmother. But then, one day, a impulsive act causes her to come on the radar of a group of other teenagers like herself, setting in motion a chain of events with dire consequences.
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!!This play contains examples of:
* AbandonTheDisabled: [[spoiler:When it becomes clear that their mission is blown, June makes the panicked decision to leave Sasha to fend for herself.]]
* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler:Played with. Dr. Ackerman helps Sasha save Billie for free, asking only that she remember that he helped her the next time they meet. It's left unclear what he will ask in return.]]
* DramaticIrony: [[spoiler:In the end, the other Breakouts finally accept Sasha as one of them - after she's secretly agreed to betray them.]]
* HatesBeingTouched: Sasha is a profound haphephobe, the consequence of years of abuse.