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And most take that as gospel; living their lives from birth to death, in the hopes of prolonging the pony race. Most do, if not all—it certainly wasn't the case before, but with the Grandwatcher's son out the door, the situation's certainly improved, to say the least.
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And most take that as gospel; living their lives from birth to death, in the hopes of prolonging the pony race. Most do, if not all—it certainly wasn't In fact, all but one do now, after a daring escape schemed by none other but the case before, but with youngest son to the Grandwatcher's son out Grandwatcher himself. A definite improvement to the door, the situation's certainly improved, situation, to say the least.
least. Now the only problems that still remain a priority to the Grandwatcher would be to make amends with the conspirators plotting his murder; the coming extinction of the griffons; and his ever-declining health.
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Stable 64 is… paradise; far as anyone's concerned. Sure, it may have had its fair bout of controversies over the years, and the way the concurrent Grandwatcher[[note]]their rather unnecessarily pompous nomenclature for Overstallion[[/note]] took over the last: certainly not particularly chivalrous in description—but, in all honesty: it couldn't get any worse than what were out there. With that, anyone could agree.
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Stable 64 is… paradise; far as anyone's concerned. Sure, it may have had its fair bout of controversies over the years, and the way the concurrent Grandwatcher[[note]]their rather unnecessarily pompous nomenclature for Overstallion[[/note]] took over the last: certainly not particularly chivalrous in description—but, in all honesty: it couldn't get any worse than what were horrors could possibly lay out there.yonder. With that, anyone could agree.
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A member of [[spoiler:the Steel Rangers]], Lavish Frost is a second lieutenant (of many) to an enemy of [[spoiler:the Speedsters]], who takes up Maudlin as a double-agent recruit. Enticed by her, [[spoiler:though mostly because she is aware of the fact that she's working against]][[spoiler:the Enclave]], she decides to (allegedly) take her under her wing as a 'sister' of sorts, and take her along onto her journeys throughout Equestria.
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A member of [[spoiler:the Steel Rangers]], Lavish Frost is a second lieutenant (of many) to an enemy of [[spoiler:the Speedsters]], who takes up Maudlin as a double-agent recruit. Enticed by her, [[spoiler:though mostly because she is aware of the fact that she's working against]][[spoiler:the Enclave]], Steel Rangers]], she decides to (allegedly) take her under her wing as a 'sister' of sorts, and take her along onto her journeys throughout Equestria.
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A member of [[spoiler:the Steel Rangers]], Frostbite is a second lieutenant (of many) to an enemy of [[spoiler:the Speedsters]], who takes up Maudlin as a double-agent recruit. Enticed by her, [[spoiler:though mostly because she is aware of the fact that she's working against]][[spoiler:the Enclave]], she decides to (allegedly) take her under her wing as a 'sister' of sorts, and take her along onto her journeys throughout Equestria.
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A member of [[spoiler:the Steel Rangers]], Frostbite Lavish Frost is a second lieutenant (of many) to an enemy of [[spoiler:the Speedsters]], who takes up Maudlin as a double-agent recruit. Enticed by her, [[spoiler:though mostly because she is aware of the fact that she's working against]][[spoiler:the Enclave]], she decides to (allegedly) take her under her wing as a 'sister' of sorts, and take her along onto her journeys throughout Equestria.
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!!![[center:Frostbite]]
A member of [[spoiler:the Enclave]], Frostbite is a second lieutenant (of many) to an enemy of [[spoiler:the Speedsters]], who takes up Maudlin as a double-agent recruit. Enticed by her, [[spoiler:though mostly because she is aware of the fact that she's working against]][[spoiler:the Enclave]], she decides to (allegedly) take her under her wing as a 'sister' of sorts, and take her along onto her journeys throughout Equestria.
A member of [[spoiler:the Enclave]], Frostbite is a second lieutenant (of many) to an enemy of [[spoiler:the Speedsters]], who takes up Maudlin as a double-agent recruit. Enticed by her, [[spoiler:though mostly because she is aware of the fact that she's working against]][[spoiler:the Enclave]], she decides to (allegedly) take her under her wing as a 'sister' of sorts, and take her along onto her journeys throughout Equestria.
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Stable 64 is… paradise; far as anyone's concerned. Sure, it may have had its fair bout of controversies over the years, and the way the concurrent Grandwatcher[[note]]their quite pompous nomenclature for Overstallion[[/note]] took over the last: certainly not particularly chivalrous in description—but, in all honesty: it couldn't get any worse than what were out there. With that, anyone could agree.
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Stable 64 is… paradise; far as anyone's concerned. Sure, it may have had its fair bout of controversies over the years, and the way the concurrent Grandwatcher[[note]]their quite rather unnecessarily pompous nomenclature for Overstallion[[/note]] took over the last: certainly not particularly chivalrous in description—but, in all honesty: it couldn't get any worse than what were out there. With that, anyone could agree.
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Stable 64 is… paradise; far as anyone's concerned. Sure, it may have had its fair bout of controversies over the years, and the way the concurrent Overstallion took over the last: certainly not particularly chivalrous in description—but, in all honesty: it couldn't get any worse than what were out there. With that, anyone could agree.
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Stable 64 is… paradise; far as anyone's concerned. Sure, it may have had its fair bout of controversies over the years, and the way the concurrent Overstallion Grandwatcher[[note]]their quite pompous nomenclature for Overstallion[[/note]] took over the last: certainly not particularly chivalrous in description—but, in all honesty: it couldn't get any worse than what were out there. With that, anyone could agree.
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The Twenty-Sixth Grand Watcher of Stable Sixty-Four, Brevity; of the Rebels. A goldenrod-coated unicorn known for his solemn vigilance, as his unrelenting strategy in the art of warfare, (one he'd learnt from his leading family of the Stable,) Brevity comes from both a past of dignity and a time of independency and hedonism. A tired servant to his good commune; Brevity, over all else, waits now longing for the one thing which he prolongs: another fallout.
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The Twenty-Sixth Grand Watcher of Stable Sixty-Four, Brevity; of the Rebels. A goldenrod-coated unicorn known for his solemn vigilance, as his unrelenting strategy in the art of warfare, (one he'd learnt from his leading mother, the remnant of a once-leading family of the Stable,) Brevity comes from both a past of dignity and a time of independency and hedonism. A tired servant to his good commune; Brevity, over all else, waits now longing for the one thing which he prolongs: another fallout.
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* PosthumousCharacter; As is the tradition with [[spoiler:(almost)]] every former Grand Watcher.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: As with any of the Grand Watchers; this tends to be a common belief among some up and coming Dwellers, which tend to turn more and more open to the idea of freedom of entry and to pioneer the Wasteland yonder.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: As with any of the Grand Watchers; this tends to be a common belief among some up and coming Dwellers, which tend to turn more and more open to the idea of freedom of entry and to pioneer the Wasteland yonder.Wasteland.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: As with any of the Grand Watchers; this tends to be a common belief among some up and coming Dwellers.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: As with any of the Grand Watchers; this tends to be a common belief among some up and coming Dwellers.Dwellers, which tend to turn more and more open to the idea of freedom of entry and to pioneer the Wasteland yonder.
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And most take that for gospel; living their lives from birth to death, in the hopes of prolonging the pony race. Most do, if not all—it certainly weren't the case before, but with the Overstallion's son out the door, the situation's certainly improved, to say the least.
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And most take that for as gospel; living their lives from birth to death, in the hopes of prolonging the pony race. Most do, if not all—it certainly weren't wasn't the case before, but with the Overstallion's Grandwatcher's son out the door, the situation's certainly improved, to say the least.
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The Twenty-Sixth Grand Watcher of Stable Sixty-Four, Brevity; of the Rebels. A goldenrod-coated unicorn known for his solemn vigilance, as his unrelenting strategy in the art of warfare, (one he'd learnt from his leading family of the Stable,) Brevity comes from both a past of dignity, and a time of independency and hedonism. A tired servant to his good commune; Brevity, over all else, waits now longing for the one thing which he prolongs: another fallout.
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The Twenty-Sixth Grand Watcher of Stable Sixty-Four, Brevity; of the Rebels. A goldenrod-coated unicorn known for his solemn vigilance, as his unrelenting strategy in the art of warfare, (one he'd learnt from his leading family of the Stable,) Brevity comes from both a past of dignity, dignity and a time of independency and hedonism. A tired servant to his good commune; Brevity, over all else, waits now longing for the one thing which he prolongs: another fallout.
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* InTheBlood; [[spoiler:Zigzagged. Even though his father had been the most ruthless, most violent fighter in the Stable's recent history, he prefers to affirm himself as his own personality, a calmer alternative to his father; despite that, though, he is constantly ridiculed for the demeaning, bullying personality that he'd withheld when he was a foal (and still holds to a lesser degree now); and is mocked more for his callousness in regards to him being of 'the stallion breed' of the Stable.]]
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* InTheBlood; [[spoiler:Zigzagged. Even though his father had been the most ruthless, most violent fighter in the Stable's recent history, he prefers to affirm himself as his own personality, a calmer alternative to his father; despite that, though, he is constantly ridiculed for the demeaning, bullying personality that he'd withheld when he was a foal (and still holds to a lesser degree now); and is mocked more for his callousness in regards to him being of 'the stallion breed' of the Stable.]]
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'''Fallout: Equestria - Featherbound''' is an (unpublished as of yet) RecursiveFanfiction to Fanfic/FalloutEquestria written by Your Dad.
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!!![[center:Lavish Frost]]
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A member of [[spoiler:the Enclave]], Lavish is a second lieutenant (of many) to an enemy of [[spoiler:the Speedsters]], who takes up Maudlin as a double-agent recruit. Enticed by her, [[spoiler:though mostly because she is aware of the fact that she's working against]][[spoiler:the Enclave]], she decides to (allegedly) take her under her wing as a 'sister' of sorts, and take her along onto her journeys throughout Equestria.
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The Twenty-Sixth Grand Watcher of Stable Sixty-Four, Brevity; of the Rebels. A goldenrod-coated unicorn known for his solemn vigilance, as his unrelenting strategy in the art of warfare, (one he'd learnt from his leading family of the Stable,) Brevity comes from both a past of dignity, and a time of independency and hedonism. A tired servant to his good commune; Brevity, over all else, waits now for what he only prolongs: another fallout.
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The Twenty-Sixth Grand Watcher of Stable Sixty-Four, Brevity; of the Rebels. A goldenrod-coated unicorn known for his solemn vigilance, as his unrelenting strategy in the art of warfare, (one he'd learnt from his leading family of the Stable,) Brevity comes from both a past of dignity, and a time of independency and hedonism. A tired servant to his good commune; Brevity, over all else, waits now longing for what the one thing which he only prolongs: another fallout.
