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* FashionVictimVillain: Badly Dressed wears a purple jacket, yellow gloves and red tights pants shoe things.
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* CommieNazis: Discussed. Sukran says a communist is a left-wing nazi. The teacher starts to explain why he consideres this wrong when he gets knocked out by an energy beam fired by Badly Dressed.
* DebateAndSwitch: Of the "Second Question" variety.
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* DebateAndSwitch: Of the "Second Question" variety.
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* CommieNazis: Discussed. Sukran says a communist is a left-wing nazi. The teacher starts to explain why he consideres this to be wrong when he gets knocked out by an energy beam fired by Badly Dressed.
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* MurderIsTheBestSolution: Naomi thinks like this.
* NoodlePeople: The star.
* OmnicidalManiac: The star says this is what the aliens want the crystal for.
* Tsundere: Sissi is like this to Junko.
* NoodlePeople: The star.
* OmnicidalManiac: The star says this is what the aliens want the crystal for.
* Tsundere: Sissi is like this to Junko.
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* WorldTree: There's a large tree on the aliens' home planet which has some kind of a connection to the fertility of the soil on the rest of the planet.
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* WorldTree: There's a large tree on the aliens' home planet which has some kind of a connection to the fertility of the soil on the rest of the planet.planet.
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* Sukran: Another classmate of Junko's. She has [[Literature/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs hair as white as snow, red skin and black eyes.]]
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* Sukran: Another classmate of Junko's. She has [[Literature/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs [[Literature/SnowWhite hair as white as snow, red skin and black eyes.]]
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* WorldTree: There's a large tree on the aliens' home planet which has some kind of a connection to the feryility of the soil on the rest of the planet.
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* WorldTree: There's a large tree on the aliens' home planet which has some kind of a connection to the feryility fertility of the soil on the rest of the planet.
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* WhiteHairedPrettyGirl: Sukran
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* Sukran: Another classmate of Junko's. She has [[SnowWhite hair as white as snow, red skin and black eyes.]]
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* Sukran: Another classmate of Junko's. She has [[SnowWhite [[Literature/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs hair as white as snow, red skin and black eyes.]]
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* FashionVictimVillain: Badly Dressed wears a purple jacket, yellow gloves and red tights pants shoe things.
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* WhiteHairedPrettyGirl: Sukran
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* WhiteHairedPrettyGirl: SukranSukran
* WorldTree: There's a large tree on the aliens' home planet which has some kind of a connection to the feryility of the soil on the rest of the planet.
* WorldTree: There's a large tree on the aliens' home planet which has some kind of a connection to the feryility of the soil on the rest of the planet.
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* CommieNazis: Discussed. Sukran says a communist is a left-wing nazi. The teacher starts to explain why he consideres this wrong when he gets knocked out by an energy beam fired by the wierdly dressed alien.
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* CommieNazis: Discussed. Sukran says a communist is a left-wing nazi. The teacher starts to explain why he consideres this wrong when he gets knocked out by an energy beam fired by the wierdly dressed alien.Badly Dressed.
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* DebateAndSwitch: Of the "Second Question" variety.
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Junko: A shy girl who wants to become a magic girl to impress Tomos.
Sissi: Junko's stepsister who is also in love with Tomos.
Tomos: A classmate of Junko and Sissi.
Sukran: Another classmate of Junko's. She has [[SnowWhite hair as white as snow, red skin and black eyes.]]
Sissi: Junko's stepsister who is also in love with Tomos.
Tomos: A classmate of Junko and Sissi.
Sukran: Another classmate of Junko's. She has [[SnowWhite hair as white as snow, red skin and black eyes.]]
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*The Teacher:
*The Dragon: Leader of the aliens.
*Badly Dressed: A male humanoid alien with green skin.
*Naomi: A female humanoid alien with green skin and OK fasion sense.
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* VaugeAge: Junko and her classmates.
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Charcaters:
Junko: A shy girl who wants to become a magic girl to impress Tomos.
Sissi: Junko's stepsister who is also in love with Tomos.
Tomos: A classmate of Junko and Sissi.
Sukran: Another classmate of Junko's. She has [[SnowWhite hair as white as snow, red skin and black eyes.]]
Junko: A shy girl who wants to become a magic girl to impress Tomos.
Sissi: Junko's stepsister who is also in love with Tomos.
Tomos: A classmate of Junko and Sissi.
Sukran: Another classmate of Junko's. She has [[SnowWhite hair as white as snow, red skin and black eyes.]]
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* ApatheticTeacher: The teacher doesn't actually hate his job, but he doesn't care about his students.
* CommieNazis: Discussed. Sukran says a communist is a left-wing nazi. The teacher starts to explain why he consideres this wrong when he gets knocked out by an energy beam fired by the wierdly dressed alien.
* GotVolunteered: The teacher volunteers the whole class for some charity in episode 2.
* MurderIsTheBestSolution: Naomi thinks like this.
* CommieNazis: Discussed. Sukran says a communist is a left-wing nazi. The teacher starts to explain why he consideres this wrong when he gets knocked out by an energy beam fired by the wierdly dressed alien.
* GotVolunteered: The teacher volunteers the whole class for some charity in episode 2.
* MurderIsTheBestSolution: Naomi thinks like this.
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* TwoPersonLoveTriangle: Junko loves her classmate Tomos who loves the Magic Girl.
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* Tsundere: Sissi is like this to Junko.
* TwoPersonLoveTriangle: Junko loves her classmate Tomos who loves the MagicGirl.Girl.
* VaugeAge: Junko and her classmates.
* WhiteHairedPrettyGirl: Sukran
* TwoPersonLoveTriangle: Junko loves her classmate Tomos who loves the Magic
* VaugeAge: Junko and her classmates.
* WhiteHairedPrettyGirl: Sukran
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This is an idea for a fanime about a girl named Junko who gets a transformation trinket from a star and then fights aliens. I've writen the script for the whole series and have started animating bits of episode 1.
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This is an idea for a fanime about a girl named Junko who gets a transformation trinket from a star and then fights aliens. I've writen the script for the whole series and have started animating bits of episode 1.1.
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!!This series provides examples of:
*NoodlePeople: The star.
*OmnicidalManiac: The star says this is what the aliens want the crystal for.
*TwoPersonLoveTriangle: Junko loves her classmate Tomos who loves the Magic Girl.
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!!This series provides examples of:
*NoodlePeople: The star.
*OmnicidalManiac: The star says this is what the aliens want the crystal for.
*TwoPersonLoveTriangle: Junko loves her classmate Tomos who loves the Magic Girl.
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This is an idea for a fanime about a girl named Junko who gets a transformation trinket from a star and then fights aliens. I've writen the script for the whole series and have started animating bits of episode 1.