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* {{Cuckold}}: Anton is cuckolded by Zora and Robin.
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* LoveTriangle: Dramatic and ultimately tragic. Type 12, with Anton and Zora married but Zora sexually- (and perhaps emotionally) dissatisfied with Anton. Zora seeks sex (and maybe love) from Anton's nephew Robin, who in turn is madly in love with each other. Anton and Robin are close kin and normally affectionate toward one another. Anton is pushed by discovery of the infidelity to [[spoiler:MurderSuicide]]. Thus in the end [[spoiler:all betray the others, and all die for it]].
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* LoveTriangle: Dramatic and ultimately tragic. Type 12, with Anton and Zora married but Zora sexually- (and perhaps emotionally) dissatisfied with Anton. Zora seeks sex (and maybe love) from Anton's nephew Robin, who in turn is madly in love with each other.her. Anton and Robin are close kin and normally affectionate toward one another. Anton is pushed by discovery of the infidelity to [[spoiler:MurderSuicide]]. Thus in the end [[spoiler:all betray the others, and all die for it]].
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-->>'''Narrator:''' No poor dreamer was Anton. His dreams had brought him great riches. For he had turned his genius to practical matters, and, working miracles in his laboratory, had discovered ways of converting waste into things of commercial value -- cornstalks into cloth, weeds into paper, coal soot into lacquer - and from these and other such discoveries, Anton had derived much wealth.
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* LoveTriangle: Dramatic and ultimately tragic. TriangRelations/Type12, with Anton and Zora married but Zora sexually- (and perhaps emotionally) dissatisfied with Anton. Zora seeks sex (and maybe love) from Anton's nephew Robin, who in turn is madly in love with each other. Anton and Robin are close kin and normally affectionate toward one another. Anton is pushed by discovery of the infidelity to [[spoiler:MurderSuicide]]. Thus in the end [[spoiler:all betray the others, and all die for it]].
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* LoveTriangle: Dramatic and ultimately tragic. TriangRelations/Type12, Type 12, with Anton and Zora married but Zora sexually- (and perhaps emotionally) dissatisfied with Anton. Zora seeks sex (and maybe love) from Anton's nephew Robin, who in turn is madly in love with each other. Anton and Robin are close kin and normally affectionate toward one another. Anton is pushed by discovery of the infidelity to [[spoiler:MurderSuicide]]. Thus in the end [[spoiler:all betray the others, and all die for it]].
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* LoveTriangle: Dramatic and ultimately tragic. TriangRelations/Type12, with Anton and Zora married but Zora sexually- (and perhaps emotionally) dissatisfied with Anton. Zora seeks sex (and maybe love) from Anton's nephew Robin, who in turn is madly in love with each other. Anton and Robin are close kin and normally affectionate toward one another. Anton is pushed by discovery of the infidelity to [[spoiler:MurderSuicide]]. Thus in the end [[spoiler:all betray the others, and all die for it]].
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* LoveTriangle: Dramatic and ultimately tragic.
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* MurderSuicide: At the story's climax, [[spoiler:Anton]] shoots first [[spoiler:Robin]], then [[spoiler:Zora]] -- then -- after he makes certain they are dead -- ''himself''. His seemingly-perfect life has been ruined beyond repair, and he doesn't have the heart to face the inevitable consequences.
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* BedroomAdulteryScene: Though they don't get to complete the act (''that'' time, anyway), Anton witnesses Zora and Robin making out, while overhearing their conversation. He sees and hears enough to know they're having a serious affair.
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* MalMariee: An obvious factor inciting Zora's adultery is that Anton is 52, while Zora and Robin both seem to be in their early twenties. The story emphasizes this with their character descriptions, emphasizing Zora and Robin's youth and vitality.
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* AFamilyAffair: Robin is Zora's nephew-in-law.
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* DarkSecret: Zora and Robin are [[spoiler:having an affair]].
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* {{Cuckold}}: Anton is cuckolded by Zora and Robin.
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* ArtMajorPhysics: Metamaterial invisiblity (which is what the form used in this story is now called) doesn't work the way it's described in-story. Specifically, invisibility works by ''diverting light'', not by painting something a color invisible to the human eye. (That would merely make the ''paint'' invisible, not the object on which it was painted!).
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* DarkSecret: Zora and Robin are [[spoiler:having an affair]].
* ForScience: Anton believes that his invisibility paint has no practical value; he developed it simply because he thought it was an interesting problem to solve. (In reality, invisibility paint would have numerous military, intelligence and police applications -- and could of course be mis-used to commit crimes, as [[spoiler:Anton demonstrates]]!)
* ForScience: Anton believes that his invisibility paint has no practical value; he developed it simply because he thought it was an interesting problem to solve. (In reality, invisibility paint would have numerous military, intelligence and police applications -- and could of course be mis-used to commit crimes, as [[spoiler:Anton demonstrates]]!)
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* ClandestineChemist: Of the non-drug variety. Anton uses his invisibility paint to [[spoiler:spy on and murder his unfaithful wife and disloyal nephew]]. Though this was probably not his original intention.
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* ScienceIsGood: Despite the tragic outcome of the tale, and the role that Anton's invisibility paint plays in facilitating his [[spoiler:murder of Zora and Robin]], science itself, and Anton's discoveries therein, are portrayed as an unalloyed blessing for humanity. The sins and crimes committed by all three main characters stem from their personal weaknesses, rather than being inherent in Anton's discoveries.
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* RichGenius: Anton has profited greatly from his discoveries:
-->>'''Narrator:''' No poor dreamer was Anton. His dreams had brought him great riches. For he had turned his genius to practical matters, and, working miracles in his laboratory, had discovered ways of converting waste into things of commercial value -- cornstalks into cloth, weeds into paper, coal soot into lacquer - and from these and other such discoveries, Anton had derived much wealth.
* RichGenius: Anton has profited greatly from his discoveries:
-->>'''Narrator:''' No poor dreamer was Anton. His dreams had brought him great riches. For he had turned his genius to practical matters, and, working miracles in his laboratory, had discovered ways of converting waste into things of commercial value -- cornstalks into cloth, weeds into paper, coal soot into lacquer - and from these and other such discoveries, Anton had derived much wealth.
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Brilliant chemist Anton Slezak has had a happy career and life. By 52, he has made important discoveries, become famous and wealthy from them, and married the beauteous young blonde Zora. Now he's working on a ''truly'' amazing project -- a solution that can be painted on objects to make them invisible!///If only Zora would get along better with his nephew Robin, who is about her age.///And then he finds out that she ''does''.
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Brilliant chemist Anton Slezak has had a happy career and life. By 52, he has made important discoveries, become famous and wealthy from them, and married the beauteous young blonde Zora. Now he's working on a ''truly'' amazing project -- a solution that can be painted on objects to make them invisible!///If invisible!
If only Zora would get along better with his nephew Robin, who is about herage.///And age.
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Brilliant chemist Anton Slezak has had a happy career and life. By 52, he has made important discoveries, become famous and wealthy from them, and married the beauteous young blonde Zora. Now he's working on a ''truly'' amazing project -- a solution that can be painted on objects to make them invisible!///If only Zora would get along better with his nephew Robin, who is about her age.///And then he finds out that she ''does''.
Brilliant chemist Anton Slezak has had a happy career and life. By 52, he has made important discoveries, become famous and wealthy from them, and married the beauteous young blonde Zora. Now he's working on a ''truly'' amazing project -- a solution that can be painted on objects to make them invisible!///If only Zora would get along better with his nephew Robin, who is about her age.///And then he finds out that she ''does''.
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Baird may have been a bad businessman, but he was a pioneering editor who published and encouraged writers such as Creator/HPLovecraft, Creator/ClarkAshtonSmith, and Creator/SeaburyQuinn. He also wrote weird fiction in his own right.
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Baird may have been a bad businessman, but he was a pioneering editor who published and encouraged writers such as Creator/HPLovecraft, Creator/ClarkAshtonSmith, and Creator/SeaburyQuinn. Creator/SeaburyQuinn, establishing not only the magazine but the whole weird fiction genre.
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'''Edwin Baird (1886 - Sep 27, 1954)''' was the first editor of ''Magazine/WeirdTales.'' He put out the first issue, dated Mar 1923, and ran the magazine through the Apr 1924 issue, when the publisher J. C. Henneberger fired him for losing over $50,000 during his editorship, and instead put him on ''Detective Tales'', a position in which he remained when that magazine was later sold off.
Baird may have been a bad businessman, but he was a pioneering editor who published and encouraged writers such as Creator/HPLovecraft, Creator/ClarkAshtonSmith, and Creator/SeaburyQuinn. He also wrote weird fiction in his own right.
His own stories included:
[[folder:"Anton's Last Dream" (short story, 1937)]]
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Baird may have been a bad businessman, but he was a pioneering editor who published and encouraged writers such as Creator/HPLovecraft, Creator/ClarkAshtonSmith, and Creator/SeaburyQuinn. He also wrote weird fiction in his own right.
His own stories included:
[[folder:"Anton's Last Dream" (short story, 1937)]]
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