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* TheDreaded: Proximus for the Zertonians. Him simply moving and talking was enough to bring another Zertonian to his knees ''in tears.'' Zalilak is more composed with regards to Proximus, but even he's not happy that the situation has come to this.
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* TheDreaded: Proximus for the Zertonians. Him simply moving and talking was enough to bring another Zertonian to his knees ''in tears.'' Zalilak is more composed with regards to Proximus, but even he's not happy that the situation has come to this. When Solila realizes Proximus is after her and Darak, she manages to [[OhCrap convey fear through her helmet]].
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* VaguenessIsComing: Goliant is coming. Who or what Goliant is, or if it is even an entity at all, is unclear. Even how it will come is agreed upon, with Darak's vision saying that the two sides will need to reunite to defend against it, while Zalilak is of the opinion that the Agorrans and Zertonians reuniting will be the catalyst that Goliant needs. All we know is that whatever Goliant is, both Zalilak and Proximus, neither of whom are timid individuals, fear its coming.
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* AdiposeRex: Both Dulin and Zalilak, the respective leaders of the Agorrians and Zertonians, are heavyset men. Zalilak is more stocky than truly fat like Dulin is, but he's also shown as [[VillainousGlutton the only one sitting at a table covered in food]].
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* TheDreaded: Proximus for the Zertonians. Him simply moving and talking was enough to bring another Zertonian to his knees ''in tears.'' Zalilak is more composed with regards to Proximus, but even he's not happy that the situation has come to this.
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Void Rivals serves as the first entry in the ''Comicbook/EnergonUniverse'': A SharedUniverse incorporating ''Franchise/{{Transformers}}'' and ''Franchise/GIJoe'' and by extension serves as the first original IP in the setting.
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* PunchClockVillain: Skuxxoid is barely even a villain, being a mere bounty hunter/scrapper who works to support his family and nothing more. He holds Darak and Solila, but only until his finds that they have no bounty, at which point he genially apologizes for any trouble and sends them on their way after they trade the alloy on their trashed ship for a new shuttle.
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* PunchClockVillain: Skuxxoid is barely even a villain, being a mere bounty hunter/scrapper who works to support his family and nothing more. He holds Darak and Solila, but only until his he finds that they have no bounty, at which point he genially apologizes for any trouble and sends them on their way after they trade the alloy on their trashed ship for a new shuttle.
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* MythologyGag: Much like in the original ''WesternAnimation/TheTransformers'' cartoon, Jetfire first appears waking up after being buried for millions of years and wearing no faction symbol, implying he is unaware of the Great War between the Autobots and Decepticons.
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* MythologyGag: MythologyGag:
** Much like in the original ''WesternAnimation/TheTransformers'' cartoon, Jetfire first appears waking up after being buried for millions of years and wearing no faction symbol, implying he is unaware of the Great War between the Autobots andDecepticons.Decepticons.
** The TPB for the first six issues is titled "More Than Meets The Eye" after the iconic Transformers tagline.
** Much like in the original ''WesternAnimation/TheTransformers'' cartoon, Jetfire first appears waking up after being buried for millions of years and wearing no faction symbol, implying he is unaware of the Great War between the Autobots and
** The TPB for the first six issues is titled "More Than Meets The Eye" after the iconic Transformers tagline.
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* ScaryScorpions: Darak and Solila fight a scorpion-like alien creature, the Scorpia, in issue 3.
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* YouHaveFailedMe: In issue 5, the Skuxxoid decides to return the Inquisitor to Quintessa hoping that he can get some compensation for bringing him back. The Imperial Magistrate asks the Inquisitor about the "Scorpia" (the scorpion-like creature that Darak and Solila fought in issue 3) he was transporting on his ship. When told that creature was destroyed, the Magistrate angrily has the Inquisitor taken away for punishment.
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'''Shockwave:''' Remove this foul creature from my sight before I commandeer your vessel and strip it for parts!\\
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'''Shockwave:''' [[GetOut Remove this foul creature from my sight before I commandeer your vessel and strip it for parts!\\parts!]]\\
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'''Darak:''' Maybe they're not hostile? Let's start with "Hello" or "Have you any food?"\\
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'''Darak:''' Maybe they're not hostile? Let's start with "Hello" or "Have you any food?"\\food?".\\
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* LateArrivalSpoiler: The variant covers for the second printing of issue 1 feature Jetfire, one of which being a parody of ''Literature/TheMonsterAtTheEndOfThisBook'', and a special variant from the first printing of that issue featuring the character was withheld from display until after the publication date.
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* LateArrivalSpoiler: The variant covers for the second printing of issue 1 feature Jetfire, one of which being a parody of ''Literature/TheMonsterAtTheEndOfThisBook'', and a special variant from the first printing of that issue featuring the character was withheld from display until after the publication date.
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-->'''Dulin:''' Darak, in a matter of moments, you will launch as the greatest Agorrian pilot in history. That is the ''only'' thing that has spared you from my wrath. Return with the same sterling reputation... or do not return at all.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Darak and Salila.
-->'''Darak:''' I thought we were friends.\\
'''Salila:''' '''''Friends?!''''' No. I'm sorry, but there's just too much at stake for my people. I will admit I no longer consider us enemies. But friends? No. More like... '''rivals'''.\\
'''Darak:''' I like that. Okay. Rivals it is.
-->'''Darak:''' I thought we were friends.\\
'''Salila:''' '''''Friends?!''''' No. I'm sorry, but there's just too much at stake for my people. I will admit I no longer consider us enemies. But friends? No. More like... '''rivals'''.\\
'''Darak:''' I like that. Okay. Rivals it is.
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-->'''Shockwave:''' You ''dare'' bring a ''Quintesson'' to Cybertron?!\\
'''Skuxxoid:''' To sell! As a prisoner. Am I missing something here? I thought you hated each other.\\
'''Shockwave:''' What currency would you expect me to have that I haven't already spent on resources? I barely have enough Energon to sustain myself! My fellow Decepticons are in stasis.\\
'''Skuxxoid:''' Well, then I expect you to relate to my plight, friend. I've got mouths to feed. Surely such a hated enemy to your kind is of value? Maybe you have something to trade? I'm sure we can work something out. Let's be reasonable.\\
'''Shockwave:''' Remove this foul creature from my sight before I commandeer your vessel and strip it for parts!\\
'''Skuxxoid:''' Fine fine fine. I can tell when my services are not appreciated.
'''Skuxxoid:''' To sell! As a prisoner. Am I missing something here? I thought you hated each other.\\
'''Shockwave:''' What currency would you expect me to have that I haven't already spent on resources? I barely have enough Energon to sustain myself! My fellow Decepticons are in stasis.\\
'''Skuxxoid:''' Well, then I expect you to relate to my plight, friend. I've got mouths to feed. Surely such a hated enemy to your kind is of value? Maybe you have something to trade? I'm sure we can work something out. Let's be reasonable.\\
'''Shockwave:''' Remove this foul creature from my sight before I commandeer your vessel and strip it for parts!\\
'''Skuxxoid:''' Fine fine fine. I can tell when my services are not appreciated.
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-->'''Dulin:''' Darak, in a matter of moments, you will launch as the greatest Agorrian pilot in history. That is the ''only'' thing that has spared you from my wrath. Return with the same sterling reputation... or do not return at all.
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-->'''Dulin:''' Darak, in a matter of moments, you will launch as the greatest Agorrian pilot in history. That is the ''only'' thing that has spared you from my wrath. Return with the same sterling reputation... or do not return at all.
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-->'''Jetfire:''' Cybertron... After all these years... I'm sorry. I have to get home.
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-->'''Inquisitor:''' I have many dealings with many civilizations across the cosmos. My kind have made enemies.
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* ServileSnarker: Darak's Handroid.
-->'''Solila:''' How much charge does your blaster have?\\
'''Darak:''' Maybe they're not hostile? Let's start with "Hello" or "Have you any food?"\\
'''Handroid:''' I'm with the Zertonian on this one.
-->'''Solila:''' How much charge does your blaster have?\\
'''Darak:''' Maybe they're not hostile? Let's start with "Hello" or "Have you any food?"\\
'''Handroid:''' I'm with the Zertonian on this one.
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Void Rivals serves as the first entry in the ''Comicbook/EnergonUniverse''. ''Comicbook/EnergonUniverse'': A SharedUniverse incorporating ''Franchise/{{Transformers}}'' and ''Franchise/GIJoe'' and by extension serves as the first original IP in the setting.
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* ObviouslyEvil: Deconstructed. The Quintesson is so blatantly sinister in his behavior and demeanor that Darak and Solila have zero compunctions about turning him over to Skuxxoid at the drop of a hat, since he's blatantly going to turn on them the instant he gets an excuse.
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* ObviouslyEvil: Deconstructed. The Quintesson Inquisitor is so blatantly sinister in his behavior and demeanor that Darak and Solila have zero compunctions about turning him over to Skuxxoid at the drop of a hat, since he's blatantly going to turn on them the instant he gets an excuse.
