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The series is planned to have seven entries, with each member having their own OriginStory in each one. The comic is being funded on Website/{{Kickstarter}}.
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The series is planned to have seven entries, with each member having their own OriginStory OriginsEpisode in each one. The comic is being funded on Website/{{Kickstarter}}.
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* BareYourMidriff: Patience's outfit includes a vest that shows off his arms and abs.
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* MismatchedEyes: Kindness. His left eye is brown, and his right eye is blue.
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* BadassBeard: If you look under Patience's mask, you can see that he has a beard.
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Pack is a planned seven-part ComicBook by Oneshi Press.
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''Pack'' is a planned seven-part ComicBook by Oneshi Press.
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* BareYourMidriff: Patience's outfit includes a vest that shows of off his arms and abs.
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* HeroicDog: The Pack has six of them. There's Chastity, Humility, Patience, Kindness, Temperance, and Liberty.
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* HeroicDog: The Pack has six of them. There's Chastity, Humility, Patience, Diligence, Kindness, Temperance, and Liberty.
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* VigilanteMan: Patience.
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* VigilanteMan: Patience.Patience, who patrols the streets of Brooklyn with his pack of dogs, siccing them on any criminal they come across.
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* CoolMask: Patience wears a dog face mask.
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* MismatchedEyes: Kindness. His left eye is brown, and his right eye is blue.
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* MysteriousPast: Diligence. All that's really known about her is that she has been with Patience the longest out of all the pack's dogs.
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* FeelNoPain: Chastity has an immunity to pain, caused by a head injury she got when shot by Vincent.
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* DirtyCop: Vincent Marcello. He was taking a cut of the profits a drug cartel made off the blood of innocent dogs. He used the work on the K-9 Unit, but is now a beat cop.
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* VigilanteMan: Patience.
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* DirtyCop: Vincent Marcello. He was taking a cut of the profits a drug cartel made off the blood of innocent dogs. He used the work on the K-9 Unit, but is now a beat cop.
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* TokenHuman: Among the Pack, Patience is the only human.
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* TheLoner: Temperance is this among the Pack.
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* TheLoner: Temperance is this among the Pack.
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* SoleSurvivor: Humility. When he and his litter mates were born, they were all dumped into the East River. When Patience found them and pulled them out, he was the only one still alive.
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* CorruptPolitician: Sally Huffman. Brooklyn Borough President with dreams of being a state senator, she'll do whatever it takes to win it.
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* TwoGirlsToATeam: Chastity and Diligence are the only female members of the Pack.
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Pack is a planned seven-part ComicBook by Oneshi Press.
The streets of Brooklyn are a place where crime and corruption reign supreme. The cops who [=AREN'T=] [[DirtyCop on the take]] can probably be counted on one hand, politicians have their hands in every pocket the city has to offer, and the only true justice comes from one source.
The Pack.
Led by a mysterious masked vigilante known only by the name "Patience", the Pack is a group of dogs who mete out justice wherever it's deserved, usually in a pretty brutal fashion. Naturally, the corrupt presences in the city don't like that, and are willing to pull all the stops to put these dogs down.
The series is planned to have seven entries, with each member having their own OriginStory in each one. The comic is being funded on Website/{{Kickstarter}}.
The first entry was released on August 13th, 2019.
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The streets of Brooklyn are a place where crime and corruption reign supreme. The cops who [=AREN'T=] [[DirtyCop on the take]] can probably be counted on one hand, politicians have their hands in every pocket the city has to offer, and the only true justice comes from one source.
The Pack.
Led by a mysterious masked vigilante known only by the name "Patience", the Pack is a group of dogs who mete out justice wherever it's deserved, usually in a pretty brutal fashion. Naturally, the corrupt presences in the city don't like that, and are willing to pull all the stops to put these dogs down.
The series is planned to have seven entries, with each member having their own OriginStory in each one. The comic is being funded on Website/{{Kickstarter}}.
The first entry was released on August 13th, 2019.
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