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* DeathSeeker: The immortal, enchanted-jewel bound Chiridans wish to free the god Eternity in exchange of which they will be finally permitted to go into the afterlife. [[spoiler: Too bad Master Kirikiri has [[TakeOverTheWorld other ideas]].]]
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** [[spoiler: Danael gets a case of this after he murders Tenebris, and wonders why the sight of an anguished Razzia cradling her dead body doesn't make him feel anything. After his golden Dynameis halo is removed, his emotions come back to him in a tidal wave of grief, anger and sadness that hits him all at once [[CallBack as he cradles Jadina's dead body]].]]
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* AmbiguouslyBrown: The people of Orchidia more often than not tend to have olive skin. The people of Sabledoray, the Comanshawa tribe and the Maraka warrior women are a FantasyCounterpartCulture to Saudi Arabia, the Comanches and the Dahomey Amazons, respectively. Captain Ceyderom is similarly dark-skinned, though his origin remains undefined.
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* AmbiguouslyBrown: The people of Orchidia more often than not tend to have olive skin. The people of Sabledoray, the Comanshawa tribe and the Maraka warrior women are a FantasyCounterpartCulture to Saudi Arabia, the Ottoman Empire, the Comanches and the Dahomey Amazons, respectively. Captain Ceyderom is similarly dark-skinned, though his origin remains undefined.
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* AmbiguouslyBrown: the inhabitant of Orchidia and Sabledoray are this, though Orchidia seems to have some white men as well. The Marakas and Comanshawas as well. Captain Ceyderom too, though his origin is undefined.
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* AmbiguouslyBrown: the inhabitant The people of Orchidia and Sabledoray are this, though Orchidia seems more often than not tend to have some white men as well. olive skin. The Marakas people of Sabledoray, the Comanshawa tribe and Comanshawas as well. the Maraka warrior women are a FantasyCounterpartCulture to Saudi Arabia, the Comanches and the Dahomey Amazons, respectively. Captain Ceyderom too, is similarly dark-skinned, though his origin is remains undefined.
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* AnimeHair: Several characters, elves most prominently, are portrayed with unusual hair colours: Shimy's hair is turquoise [[spoiler:and later turns white]], Regen's hair is pink, Ceyderom, Shun-Day and Halan all have hair in different shades of green, and some Jaguarians even have blue fur. Tellingly, most humans tend to come with more... well, [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment human]] hair colors.
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* AnimeHair: Several characters, elves most prominently, are portrayed with unusual hair colours: Shimy's hair is turquoise [[spoiler:and later turns white]], Regen's hair is pink, Ceyderom, Shaki, Shun-Day and Halan all have hair in different shades of green, and some Jaguarians even have blue fur. Tellingly, most humans tend to come with more... well, [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment human]] hair colors.
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* BigBad: Darkhell, later replaced by Abyss.
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* BigBad: Darkhell, later replaced succeeded by Abyss.
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** Gryf gets two in book 7: One from Jadina when he mutters that he should have slaughtered the villagers for hunting his kind like beasts, and one from Danael when he threatens Jadina and leaves her thoroughly shaken.
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** Gryf gets two in book 7: One from Jadina when he mutters that he should have slaughtered the villagers for hunting his kind like beasts, and one from Danael when after he threatens Jadina and leaves her thoroughly shaken.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Gryf seems to have this kind of relationship with both Shimy and Shun-Day, [[DoubleStandardAbuseFemalOnMale and both tend to either verbally abuse or beat the snot out of him at the smallest provocation]].
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Gryf seems to have this kind of relationship with both Shimy and Shun-Day, [[DoubleStandardAbuseFemalOnMale [[DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale and both tend to either verbally abuse or beat the snot out of him at the smallest provocation]].
