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* ReliableTraitor: Maria is this to the Pale Court. She sees them entirely as a means to an end and has absolutely no personal loyalty to them beyond what's required for her to get her hands on Bernie's scythe and the veilrippers. The Court is even fully aware that [[spoiler: Maria's ultimate goal includes claiming Bernie's scythe and using it to destroy them]].
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-->'''Hugin''': SHUT THE HELL UP, JAMES!
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* TheCameo: During Jon and Clara's date at the beginning of Issue One, there is a brief single-panel cameo of two of Sejic's other characters, [[{{Webcomic/Sunstone}} Ally and Lisa]], also having a nice dinner.
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* {{Badass}}: All of the death knights.
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* {{Badass}}: All Every member of the death knights.Vigil.
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* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler: Wulf was once a member of the Vigil, until he fell in love with Maria Benes and became a surrogate father to her daughter. When the she was fatally injured in a car accident, Wulf called on Bernie to bring her back as a member of the Vigil since the girl was gifted. When Bernie told him that there was nothing she could do, it drove him to joining the Necromancers as part of Maria's plot to steal Bernie's scythe to resurrect her.]]
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* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler: Wulf was once a member of the Vigil, until he fell in love with Maria Benes and became a surrogate father to her daughter. daughter Alicia. When the she Alicia was fatally injured in a car accident, Wulf called on Bernie to bring her back as a member of the Vigil since the girl was gifted. When Bernie told him that there was nothing she could do, it drove him to joining the Necromancers as part of Maria's plot to steal Bernie's scythe to resurrect her.]]
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** Mia as well. She normally appears as a cute teenaged girl. However she's actually a True Primordial, making her one of ''the'' most powerful entities in the series. Regular EldritchAbomination drive normal people insane. Anyone seeing a True Primordial in her true form like her is outright ''killed'' (and unlike Bernie, we have seen her Primordial form: it is not pretty).
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** Mia as well. She normally appears as a cute teenaged girl. However she's actually a True Primordial, making her one of ''the'' most powerful entities in the series. Regular EldritchAbomination The sight of regular {{Eldritch Abomination}}s is enough to drive normal people insane. Anyone seeing a A True Primordial in her Primordial's true form like her is outright ''killed'' (and enough to ''kill'' any normal person who looks upon it -- and unlike Bernie, we have seen her Mia's Primordial form: it form. It is not pretty).'''not''' pretty.
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** Maria's entire plan was intended to bind the Primordial called the Thorn to Alicia's body, which is this trope all on its own. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, Alicia's soul was ''already gone'' when Maria bound her, meaning that Alicia's body was just a shell and the Thorn took control of her body ''entirely''. "Came Back Wrong" doesn't even ''begin'' to cover it.]]
* ChekhovsGun: Bernie distracts a necromancer in issue four by introducing her presence, letting the other members of the Vigil seal his powers away. [[spoiler:She distracts The Thorn in issue eight similarly, giving the other members of the Vigil the opportunity to destroy it.]]
* ChekhovsGun: Bernie distracts a necromancer in issue four by introducing her presence, letting the other members of the Vigil seal his powers away. [[spoiler:She distracts The Thorn in issue eight similarly, giving the other members of the Vigil the opportunity to destroy it.]]
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** Maria's entire plan was intended to bind the Primordial called the Thorn to Alicia's body, which is this trope all on its own. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, [[spoiler:Unfortunately, Alicia's soul was ''already gone'' when Maria bound her, meaning that Alicia's body was just a shell and the Thorn took control of her body ''entirely''. ''entirely'']]. "Came Back Wrong" doesn't even ''begin'' to cover it.]]
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* ChekhovsGun: Bernie distracts a necromancer in issue four by introducing her presence, letting the other members of the Vigil seal his powers away. [[spoiler:She distractsThe the Thorn in issue eight similarly, giving the other members of the Vigil the opportunity to destroy it.]]
* ChekhovsGun: Bernie distracts a necromancer in issue four by introducing her presence, letting the other members of the Vigil seal his powers away. [[spoiler:She distracts
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* {{Determinator}}: Sam is very headstrong--crossing into LeeroyJenkins territory at times. He manages to overcome the paralyzing effect of Banshee screams multiple times when other Vigil members were all knocked out ''by sheer force of will''.
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* {{Determinator}}: Sam is very headstrong--crossing headstrong -- crossing into LeeroyJenkins territory at times. He manages to overcome the paralyzing effect of Banshee screams multiple times when other Vigil members were all knocked out ''by sheer force of will''.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Gallows is a necromancer. All of his colleagues are necromancers. His boss is an EldritchAbomination. They've all done some pretty awful stuff in their day. And even ''he'' thinks that turning the orach loose in a metropolitan area just to draw the Vigil's attention was cruel.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Gallows is a necromancer. All of his colleagues are necromancers. His boss is an EldritchAbomination. They've all done some pretty awful stuff in their day. And even ''he'' thinks that turning Maria's plan to turn the orach Orach loose in a metropolitan area just to draw the Vigil's attention was cruel.
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* AlasPoorVillain: Despite her arrogance, and all the things she's done and lives she's put at risk (if not outright destroyed), it's still hard not to feel sorry for Maria. She's ultimately a broken woman driven off the deep end of the Slippery Slope by her daughter's death, only to be swept up into events she didn't ''truly'' understand, and was so misguided she genuinely believed what she was doing was right. [[spoiler: It makes the means by which "Alicia" betrayed her and revealed that Bernie had been telling the truth all along that much more heartbreaking.]]
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* AlasPoorVillain: Despite her arrogance, and all the things she's done and lives she's put at risk (if not outright destroyed), it's still hard not to feel sorry for Maria.Maria Benes. She's ultimately a broken woman driven off the deep end of the Slippery Slope by her daughter's death, only to be swept up into events she didn't ''truly'' understand, and was so misguided she genuinely believed what she was doing was right. [[spoiler: It makes the means by which "Alicia" betrayed her and revealed that Bernie had been telling the truth all along that much more heartbreaking.]]
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Our story begins with a man named Sam Lewis, who died trying to rescue two women from a mugger. But when the grim reaper showed up, instead of passing on, he was recruited into the Death Vigil - a group of fighters under the Reaper's command who protect the world from the forces of evil.
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Our story begins with a man named Sam Lewis, who died trying to rescue two women from a mugger. But when the grim reaper TheGrimReaper showed up, instead of passing on, he was recruited into the Death Vigil - a group of fighters under the Reaper's command who protect the world from the forces of evil.
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* ASinisterClue: Clara uses Starlock with her left hand. It's implied she's not entirely right after Jon attempted to bind a Primordial to her.
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* ASinisterClue: Clara uses Starlock with her left hand. It's implied she's [[IncrediblyLamePun not entirely right right]] after Jon attempted to bind a Primordial to her.
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* RestrainingBolt: Allistor's Sigils act as one for Mia, helping her keep the Beast under control, particularly after she was first bonded. Maria's later due the same for Alicia. [[spoiler: At least until Alicia ''tears Maria's arm off'' to break her hold over her.]] Notably, despite this Allistor's control over Maria isn't absolute. [[spoiler: When he betrays the Vigil after Wulf plays on his sympathies, Mia rebels against him and remains true to the them instead.]]
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* RestrainingBolt: Allistor's Sigils sigils act as one for Mia, helping her keep the Beast under control, particularly after she was first bonded. Maria's later due do the same for Alicia. Alicia, [[spoiler: At at least until Alicia ''tears Maria's arm off'' to break her hold over her.control.]] Notably, despite this this, Allistor's control over Maria Mia isn't absolute. [[spoiler: When he betrays the Vigil after Wulf plays on his sympathies, Mia rebels against him and remains true to the them Vigil instead.]]
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** [[spoiler: It turns out that Bernie really was simply unable to help. The little girl's soul had already moved on. Which means that the ''thing'' egging Maria on is not her...]]
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Gallows is a necromancer. All of his colleagues are necromancers. His boss is an EldritchAbomination. They've all done some pretty awful stuff in their day. And even ''he'' thinks that turning the orach loose in a metropolitan area just to draw the Vigil's attention was cruel.
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* FantasticRacism: The Thorn is disgusted by the existence of "impure" Primordials like Mia and The Abyss. The Abyss [[BoomerangBigot seems to agree]], at least to the extent of gushing over how much more "pure" and "powerful" the Thorn is than himself.
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* AffablyEvil: The Abyss is surprisingly polite, patient, and NiceToTheWaiter for an Unspeakable Horror From Beyond The Veil. It probably helps that he's getting pretty much everything he ever wanted.
** FauxAffablyEvil: The Thorn, on the other hand, limits her affability to [[spoiler: continuing to call Maria "mother", even after she's ripped her arm off.]]
** FauxAffablyEvil: The Thorn, on the other hand, limits her affability to [[spoiler: continuing to call Maria "mother", even after she's ripped her arm off.]]
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* CutShort: On account of the cancellation of volume 2, the ultimate plans of the Pale Court are never shown, nor is the means for [[spoiler:Maria's survival]].
* UpgradeArtifact: The Scythe is the source of Bernie's powers, and Maria, the antagonist of the first arc, plots to take the Scythe and use it power to bring her daughter back.
* UnCancelled: Sejic announced early in December, 2015, that plans for the second arc had been cancelled as a result of the combination of poor sales, health, and technology issues. However this was reversed mere ''days'' later after widespread outpouring of support from fans and, of course, his wife.
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* UpgradeArtifact: The Scythe is the source of Bernie's powers, and Maria, the antagonist of the first arc, plots to take the Scythe and use it power to bring her daughter back.
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Sejic has apparently retracted the cancellation, and intends to go ahead with the second arc.
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In December 2014, Sejic announced that the 8-issue initial miniseries will be followed by a four-part miniseries focusing on how James became a member of the Vigil and first met and befriended Mia, after which the main series would resume as a full ongoing. However poor sales in spite of its critical acclaim, compounded by Sejic's health and technology issues eventually led to [[https://twitter.com/stjepansejic/status/671612239619760128 the cancellation of plans to continue the series]] in December 2015.
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In December 2014, Sejic announced that the 8-issue initial miniseries will be followed by a four-part miniseries focusing on how James became a member of the Vigil and first met and befriended Mia, after which the main series would resume as a full ongoing. However poor Poor sales in spite of its critical acclaim, compounded by Sejic's health and technology issues eventually led to [[https://twitter.com/stjepansejic/status/671612239619760128 issues, threatened the cancellation of plans to continue the series]] in second volume. However on December 2015.
4, 2015, Sejic posted on Facebook that he would be making one more attempt at the series with a second arc.
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The 8-issue series was planned as a miniseries from the start. It\'s the second volume that was cancelled.
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In December 2014, Sejic announced that the 8-issue initial miniseries will be followed by a four-part miniseries focusing on how James became a member of the Vigil and first met and befriended Mia, after which the main series would resume as a full ongoing. However poor sales in spite of its critical acclaim, compounded by Sejic's health and technology issues eventually led to [[https://twitter.com/stjepansejic/status/671612239619760128 its cancellation]] the cancellation of plans to continue the series]] in December 2015.
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* CutShort: On account of the series' cancellation at issue 8, the ultimate plans of the Pale Court are never shown, nor is the means for [[spoiler:Maria's survival]].
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* CutShort: On account of the series' cancellation at issue 8, of volume 2, the ultimate plans of the Pale Court are never shown, nor is the means for [[spoiler:Maria's survival]].
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In December, December 2014, Sejic announced that the 8-issue initial miniseries will be followed by a four-part miniseries focusing on how James became a member of the Vigil and first met and befriended Mia, after which the main series would resume as a full ongoing. However poor sales in spite of its critical acclaim, compounded by Sejic's health and technology issues leading eventually led to delays of the last few issues of the first volume, have put these plans [[https://twitter.com/stjepansejic/status/671612239619760128 its cancellation]] in doubt.
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* TheBigGuy: Sam notes that while the other members of the Vigil can do clever things with their veilrippers, he just hits stuff. And he's certainly one of the biggest and physically strongest (human) member.
** Hugin plays with the trope. He may not ''usually'' look like much, being a typically-sized raven. But in combat he turns into a friggen ''dinosaur'', making him both one of the biggest ''and'' most powerful of the Death Knights.
** There's also Hector, who only plays a small role [[spoiler: when he falls into Maria's BatmanGambit and is forced to summon Bernadette away from the battle in New York]]. He's a ''{{bear|s are bad news}}''.
** Hugin plays with the trope. He may not ''usually'' look like much, being a typically-sized raven. But in combat he turns into a friggen ''dinosaur'', making him both one of the biggest ''and'' most powerful of the Death Knights.
** There's also Hector, who only plays a small role [[spoiler: when he falls into Maria's BatmanGambit and is forced to summon Bernadette away from the battle in New York]]. He's a ''{{bear|s are bad news}}''.
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* NewcomerSavesTheDay: In the end of the first volume, it is the newest member of the Vigil, Clara, who saves everyone from the Pale Court's trap with her teleportation abilities and good old investigative skill, although this isn't the straightest example, as [[spoiler:she is all but revealed to be the host of a [[EldritchAbomination Primordial]]--who is even older than the Vigil itself and just happens to work with them at the moment without them knowing]].
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* BeenThereShapedHistory: Bernie notes that the last copy of a text she wanted gone was kept in the Library of Alexandria...
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* BeenThereShapedHistory: Bernie notes that the last copy known translation of a text she wanted gone the Dreamer's Codex was kept in the Library of Alexandria...Alexandria, and that that [[KillItWithFire had been taken care of]] long ago.
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** Wulf has a lot of elements connected to Literature/{{Beowulf}}. [[spoiler:It's all but stated he ''is'' him.]]
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** Wulf has a lot of elements connected to Literature/{{Beowulf}}. [[spoiler:It's all but stated [[spoiler:In Issue 8, he reveals this is because it ''is'' him.]]
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Now has a [[Characters/DeathVigil character sheet]] that NeedsWikiMagicLove.
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Misuse. It\'s Genre Savvy, not just \"savvy\".
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* GenreSavvy: Gallows. Upon learning that Maria intends to betray the Court once she has what she wants, he immediately warns against continuing the agreement. He's overruled by the Abyss, who is willing to go along with the whole charade so long as it gets ''them'' what ''they'' want, but Gallows remains unconvinced that the whole thing isn't just going to blow up in their faces, and continues to speak out against the whole plan even though he's powerless to change anything.
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* ReligiousAndMythologicalThemeNaming: Hugin is named after Huginn of Myth/NorseMythology, who is one of Odin's ravens.
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** Hugin is named after Huginn of Myth/NorseMythology, who is one of Odin'sravens.ravens.
** Anubis, another member of the Vigil, is named for the God of Mummification in Myth/EgyptianMythology.
** Wulf has a lot of elements connected to Literature/{{Beowulf}}. [[spoiler:It's all but stated he ''is'' him.]]
** Hugin is named after Huginn of Myth/NorseMythology, who is one of Odin's
** Anubis, another member of the Vigil, is named for the God of Mummification in Myth/EgyptianMythology.
** Wulf has a lot of elements connected to Literature/{{Beowulf}}. [[spoiler:It's all but stated he ''is'' him.]]
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: In a world invaded by EldritchAbomination, there are a couple of things that can make those accursed beings run in the other direction as fast as they can if they are clever enough to know what they are dealing with: True Primordials (such as Mia) and [[TheReaper Bernardette]].
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: In a world invaded by EldritchAbomination, there are a couple of things that can make those accursed beings run in the other direction as fast as they can if they are clever enough to know what they are dealing with: True Primordials (such as Mia) and [[TheReaper [[DontFearTheReaper Bernardette]].
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* FreakyIsCool: In a supplemental comic, Mia expresses FreakinessShame to James after not being able to fully revert her hair to normal. James thinks it looks cool.
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* FreakyIsCool: In [[http://nebezial.deviantart.com/art/death-vigil-mia-and-allistor-are-different-430364311 a supplemental comic, comic]], Mia expresses FreakinessShame to James after not being able to fully revert her hair to normal.normal after feeding. James thinks it looks cool.
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* BeachEpisode: Sejic has a drawing of the cast on the beach on his [=deviantART=] page. He lampshades the scene, "because they totally look like summer types".
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* BeachEpisode: Sejic has [[http://nebezial.deviantart.com/art/death-vigil-coming-this-summer-XD-449568019 a drawing drawing]] of the cast on the beach on his [=deviantART=] page. He lampshades the scene, "because they totally look like summer types".