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A wolf boy who escaped an educational institution because he didn't want to go vegan. Now craving meat, he stumbles upon Marcia and follows her into the house with intent to eat her. But things don't go as planned, and now he find himself her victim.
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A wolf boy who escaped an educational institution because he didn't want to go vegan. Now craving meat, he stumbles upon Marcia and follows her into the house with intent to eat her. But things don't go as planned, and now he find finds himself her victim.
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* MustHaveNicotine: While she doesn't go crazy about it, she does have an addiction to smoking, to the point that as a ghost she can and will only appear in places where there is smoke.
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* MustHaveNicotine: While she doesn't go crazy about it, she does have an addiction to smoking, to the point that as a ghost ghost, she can and will only appear in places where there is smoke.
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* EnfantTerrible: Her youth does not make her any less of a threat to Caroll's life.
* HairRaisingHare: An adorable bunny girl that it perfectly fine with draining Caroll's blood to use in a dark ritual.
* HairRaisingHare: An adorable bunny girl that it perfectly fine with draining Caroll's blood to use in a dark ritual.
* WhiteHairBlackHeart: She has white hair, as befitting her being a bunny girl, and kidnaps Caroll to take his blood and tries to kill him later. Downplayed as she is doing this in an attempt to revive her grandmother.
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* WhiteHairBlackHeart: She has white hair, as befitting her being a bunny girl, and kidnaps Caroll to take his blood and tries to kill him later. Downplayed as she is doing this in an attempt to revive her grandmother.
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* MyGreatestFailure: She deeply regrets her role in TheGreatOffscreenWar.
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* AdvancingBossOfDoom: Whenever she finds Caroll, she will chase after him.
* AdvancingBossOfDoom: Whenever she finds Caroll, she will chase after him.
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* LoveMakesYouEvil: her love for her adoptive grandmother Grace is what led her to steal people's blood to revive her after she died of an illness.
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* LoveMakesYouEvil: her Her love for her adoptive grandmother Grace is what led her to steal people's blood to revive her after she died of an illness.
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* DeadlyDoctor: Revealed to have been one in life, as she used plants to create biological weapons used in TheGreatOffscreenWar. She deeply regrets having done this.
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* MustHaveNicotine: While she doesn't go crazy about it, she does have an addiction to smoking, to the point that as a ghost she can and will only appear in places where there is smoke.
* OneLastSmoke: She asks Caroll to light up a cigar one last time. Since she is already a ghost, he has to fill the entire reception room with smoke.
* OneLastSmoke: She asks Caroll to light up a cigar one last time. Since she is already a ghost, he has to fill the entire reception room with smoke.
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* LoveMakesYouEvil: her love for her adoptive grandmother Grace is what led her to steal people's blood to revive her after she died of an illness.
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: She lost her parents to the war and was found by Grace all tattered and alone. She finally found another home and had a happy life again, but when Grace fell ill and died, Marcia snapped and became willing to do anything to bring her back, even take people's blood by force.
* WhiteHairBlackHeart: She has white hair, as befitting her being a bunny girl, and kidnaps Caroll to take his blood and tries to kill him later. Downplayed as she is doing this in an attempt to revive her grandmother.
* WhiteHairBlackHeart: She has white hair, as befitting her being a bunny girl, and kidnaps Caroll to take his blood and tries to kill him later. Downplayed as she is doing this in an attempt to revive her grandmother.
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: She lost her parents to the war and was found by Grace all tattered and alone. She finally found another home and had a happy life again, but when Grace fell ill and died, Marcia snapped and became willing to do anything to bring her back, even take people's blood by force.
* WhiteHairBlackHeart: She has white hair, as befitting her being a bunny girl, and kidnaps Caroll to take his blood and tries to kill him later. Downplayed as she is doing this in an attempt to revive her grandmother.
* WhiteHairBlackHeart: She has white hair, as befitting her being a bunny girl, and kidnaps Caroll to take his blood and tries to kill him later. Downplayed as she is doing this in an attempt to revive her grandmother.
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* AdvancingBossOfDoom: Whenever she finds Caroll, she will chase after him.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: He initially follows Marcia because he wants to eat her, and is generally rather rude. But his time in the house and Grace's mentorship does cause him to become nicer, and by the end he is willing to live with and care for Marcia.
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* ShipTease: In the Bonus Room, you can ask him if he likes Marcia, to which he will blush and act flustered.
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: She lost her parents to the war and was found by Grace all tattered and alone. She finally found another home and had a happy life again, but when Grace fell ill and died, Marcia snapped and became willing to do anything to bring her back, even take people's blood by force.
* WhiteHairBlackHeart: She has white hair, as befitting her being a bunny girl, and kidnaps Caroll to take his blood and tries to kill him later. Downplayed as she is doing this in an attempt to revive her grandmother.
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: She lost her parents to the war and was found by Grace all tattered and alone. She finally found another home and had a happy life again, but when Grace fell ill and died, Marcia snapped and became willing to do anything to bring her back, even take people's blood by force.
* WhiteHairBlackHeart: She has white hair, as befitting her being a bunny girl, and kidnaps Caroll to take his blood and tries to kill him later. Downplayed as she is doing this in an attempt to revive her grandmother.
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* CuteAndPsycho: A cute, small bunny girl dressed like ''Literature/LittleRedRidingHood'' who also happens to be stealing blood for a dark ritual to revive her grandmother.
* HeelFaceTurn: In the true ending, Caroll helps her get over Grace's death, and she stops trying to revive her by taking people's blood, instead deciding to live her life with Caroll and be happy.
* HeelFaceTurn: In the true ending, Caroll helps her get over Grace's death, and she stops trying to revive her by taking people's blood, instead deciding to live her life with Caroll and be happy.
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* TheBigBadWolf: He is modeled after the character, though he is more of an AntiHero and JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
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* MuggingTheMonster: He followed Marcia into her house with the specific intention of eating her. Unfortunately for him, she injected him with anesthesia and put him to sleep so she could draw his blood, and now he finds himself a prisoner in her house.
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* BigBad: As the one who imprisoned Caroll in her home.
* BigBad: As the one who imprisoned Caroll in her home.
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* DudeLooksLikeALady: Despite it being made clear early on that he is male by referring to him with male pronouns, he looks very much like a mermaid girl with his long hair and baby face. Then again, he has NoBiologicalSex and just identifies as male.
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* NoBiologicalSex: It is mentioned in his bio that his gender is actually unknown, so he probably just identifies as male.
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* NoBiologicalSex: His bio mentions that he has no real gender, being a water spirit; presumably, he identifies as male.
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* EvenBeggarsWontChooseIt: He escaped the institution specifically so he could finally find some good food, but even then he refuses to eat [[LethalChef Grace's unpalatable carrot cake]].
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* LethalChef: A RunningGag is how terrible her carrot cake is. The hungry Caroll won't eat it, the monsters won't either, and the only ones who seem to like it are Marcia and Ripple, and purely for sentimental reasons.
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A giant flower monster that resides in the house. He rules over a bunch of smaller flower monsters.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Despite initially acting antagonistic to Caroll, he isn't really evil. He is willing to get along with Caroll when the latter shows he is not a threat.
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A plant spirit girl that resides in the house.
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* BarbieDollAnatomy: Being a plant, she has no nipples.
* PlantPerson: A plant spirit of sorts.
* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: She casually mentions that she has lived for hundreds of years.
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A merman spirit that resides in the house.
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* LethalChef: A RunningGag is how terrible her carrot cake is. The hungry Caroll won't eat it, the monsters won't either, and the only ones who seem to like it are Marcia and Ripple, and purely for sentimental reasons.
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A giant flower monster that resides in the house. He rules over a bunch of smaller flower monsters.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Despite initially acting antagonistic to Caroll, he isn't really evil. He is willing to get along with Caroll when the latter shows he is not a threat.
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A plant spirit girl that resides in the house.
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* PlantPerson: A plant spirit of sorts.
* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: She casually mentions that she has lived for hundreds of years.
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A merman spirit that resides in the house.
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[[folder:Caroll]]
A wolf boy who escaped an educational institution because he didn't want to go vegan. Now craving meat, he stumbles upon Marcia and follows her into the house with intent to eat her. But things don't go as planned, and now he find himself her victim.
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[[folder:Marcia]]
A bunny girl who lives with her adoptive grandmother, Grace, in the woods. Her parents died in the war, and Grace took her in, training her in the ways of medicine. Grace died long ago, and she has been looking to revive her ever since, turning to dark magic. She needs the blood of others to complete the ritual, and Caroll has just the right amount she needs.
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[[folder:Grace]]
The woman who owns the house in the forest. An accomplished doctor, she took in Marcia after seeing her during the war and mentored her in the ways of medicine. She tragically died of an illness, but remains as a ghost.
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A wolf boy who escaped an educational institution because he didn't want to go vegan. Now craving meat, he stumbles upon Marcia and follows her into the house with intent to eat her. But things don't go as planned, and now he find himself her victim.
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[[folder:Marcia]]
A bunny girl who lives with her adoptive grandmother, Grace, in the woods. Her parents died in the war, and Grace took her in, training her in the ways of medicine. Grace died long ago, and she has been looking to revive her ever since, turning to dark magic. She needs the blood of others to complete the ritual, and Caroll has just the right amount she needs.
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The woman who owns the house in the forest. An accomplished doctor, she took in Marcia after seeing her during the war and mentored her in the ways of medicine. She tragically died of an illness, but remains as a ghost.
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