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* AntiClimax: In this 'verse, she didn't heroically overcome her fear to sail to Nim, and feels terrible that she didn't.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: They all quit w/skeeziteskeeve on realising users from that page bullied Willa to suicide.
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* AbuseMistake: Moony thought the crooked cops got to them when he was sent to prison, but what actually happened was they witnessed Ace Yu being assaulted.
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* ItsAllMyFault: When Jack went missing for a few days, Alexandra blamed herself despite Jack pointing out there was no way for her to help him.
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* TheShutIn: Like the movie, she's agoraphobic, which in this fic is caused by OCD.
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!The Baseless Worrier ([[Film/NimsIsland Alexandra Rover]])
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* InnocentInaccurate: The doctor convinces ten-year-old Satsuki that letting him molest her will help her and Mei's mom recover from her illness. Satsuki really does think it's working since her mother's condition has been improving.
* UnreliableNarrator: Satsuki claims to Mei that the doctor molesting her didn't hurt and if Mei "helps" too, then their mom will recover, unaware that the doctor was lying to her.
* UnreliableNarrator: Satsuki claims to Mei that the doctor molesting her didn't hurt and if Mei "helps" too, then their mom will recover, unaware that the doctor was lying to her.
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!The Has-Been ([[Anime/MyNeighborTotoro Satsuki Kusakabe]]) and the Up-And-Comer (Mei Kusakabe)
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* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: Ghosts ''do'' exist in-'verse, but Alberto also hears voices because of his trauma, so it's not clear if the dead kids in the bay really are talking to him.
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* ImpliedLoveInterest: It's hinted he has a thing for Luca.
* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: Ghosts ''do'' exist in-'verse, but Alberto also hears voices because of his trauma, so it's not clear if the dead kids in the bay really are talking to him. A later chapter confirms that the voice sounds like his dad, so it could just be trauma.
* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: Ghosts ''do'' exist in-'verse, but Alberto also hears voices because of his trauma, so it's not clear if the dead kids in the bay really are talking to him. A later chapter confirms that the voice sounds like his dad, so it could just be trauma.
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* ThoroughlyMistakenIdentity: Rodrick's Fregoli Syndrome makes him think that several people (including a male physician and a ''baby'') are his mother.
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* ThoroughlyMistakenIdentity: Rodrick's Fregoli Syndrome makes him think that several people (including a male physician and a male Afro-American ''baby'') are his mother.
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* ScarsAreUgly: Invoked; Bill cut her up so badly to intentionally mutilate her.
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* AdaptationalNameChange: Jasper is Treasure, Skinny Jasper is Noreena, Amethyst is Amy, Carnelian is Cornelia, Lace Amethyst is Laci, and the other Amethysts are Axel, Gigi, Jay-Jay, Aicha, and Kay.
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* AdaptationalNameChange: Jasper is Treasure, Skinny Jasper is Noreena, Amethyst is Amy, Carnelian is Cornelia, Lace Amethyst is Laci, Lacey, and the other Amethysts are Axel, Gigi, Jay-Jay, Aicha, and Kay.
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* BoomerangBigot: Despite being disabled themselves, they all participate in a web community that mocks other disabled people, labeling them as "skeezites" or "fakers" and insisting some disabilities are made up entirely.
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* BoomerangBigot: Despite being disabled themselves, they all participate in a web community that mocks other disabled people, labeling them as "skeezites" or "fakers" and insisting some disabilities are made up entirely. However, they do end up leaving it after realizing the error of their ways.
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* OnlySaneMan: He's one of the few people in the Palace who knows that Jasper is the real abuser and that Mirabel isn't dangerous just because she has NPD.
* TransTribulations: Snake doesn't elaborate on his not-so-great childhood, but it's noted that he has an armband with the colors of the non-binary flag and there are scars from cutting himself underneath, implying that he had transphobic parents.
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* HatesTheirParent: Most of Gwen’s issues come from hating ''other'' people’s parents, but she has about as much respect for Stitches as she did in canon. And he does seem to her actual father here.
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* HatesTheirParent: Most of Gwen’s issues come from hating ''other'' people’s parents, but she has about as much respect for Stitches as she did in canon. And he does seem to be her actual father here.
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Gwen's not exactly villainous, but she uses the word "retarded" twice, first about the special ed class Sue was put in and then to refer to people who claim men don't hit women.
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* AmbiguouslyGay: Snake may have a thing for Ace, going off his blushing on stage, but nothing is clear.
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* AmbiguouslyGay: Snake may have a thing for Ace, going off his blushing on stage, but nothing is clear. [[AmbiguousGenderIdentity He might also be non-binary.]]
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* SelfHarm: Snake used to slit his wrists.
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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Going off the shock everyone has when Gwen reveals Steve was her mother's rapist, it's implied that he's still considered to be something of a hero in this world.
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* EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas: Gwen ‘’adores’’ Sue. Unfortunately this love motivates her villainy rather than tempering it.
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* EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas: Gwen ‘’adores’’ ''adores'' Sue. Unfortunately this love motivates her villainy rather than tempering it.
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* HatesTheirParent: Most of Gwen’s issues come from hating ‘’other people’s’ ''other'' people’s parents, but she has about as much respect for Stitches as she did in canon. And he does seem to her actual father here.
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* DisabledInTheAdaptation: Hero Support is made into Special Education and Sue herself is implied to be autistic.
* EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas: Gwen ‘’adores’’ Sue. Unfortunately this love motivates her villainy rather than tempering it.
* EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas: Gwen ‘’adores’’ Sue. Unfortunately this love motivates her villainy rather than tempering it.
* HatesTheirParent: Most of Gwen’s issues come from hating ‘’other people’s’ parents, but she has about as much respect for Stitches as she did in canon. And he does seem to her actual father here.
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* RapeAndRevenge: Steve Stronghold and his friends raped Sue, so Gwen avenged her by getting her friends together and raping his son Will.
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* RapeAndRevenge: Steve Stronghold and his friends raped Sue, so Gwen avenged her by getting her friends together and raping his son Will. It’s also pretty much stated she did the same thing to Warren Peace the year before.
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* GroinAttack: It's implied that she was going to do something to Will's genitals with a lighter and a hunting knife.
* SinsOfOurFathers: Steve Stronghold was one of Sue's worst bullies and orchestrated her gang-rape, so Gwen responded by assaulting Steve's son Will.
* SinsOfOurFathers: Steve Stronghold was one of Sue's worst bullies and orchestrated her gang-rape, so Gwen responded by assaulting Steve's son Will.
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* GroinAttack: It's implied that she Gwen was going to do something to Will's genitals with a lighter and a hunting knife.
* MamaBear: Sue was worried that Will would rape Gwen like how his father raped her, so she went to Maggie Creek Road with a pistol. When she heard Gwen screaming, she feared the worst and opened the car door ready to fire, only to discover that ''Gwen'' was the one assaulting ''Will''.
* RapeAndRevenge: Steve Stronghold and his friends raped Sue, so Gwen avenged her by getting her friends together and raping his son Will.
* SinsOfOurFathers: Steve Stronghold was one of Sue's worst bullies and orchestrated her gang-rape, so Sue's daughter Gwen responded by assaulting Steve's sonWill.Will.
* ShoutOut: References the song [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oHI3FrRVmyw "Maggie Creek Road"]]
* MamaBear: Sue was worried that Will would rape Gwen like how his father raped her, so she went to Maggie Creek Road with a pistol. When she heard Gwen screaming, she feared the worst and opened the car door ready to fire, only to discover that ''Gwen'' was the one assaulting ''Will''.
* RapeAndRevenge: Steve Stronghold and his friends raped Sue, so Gwen avenged her by getting her friends together and raping his son Will.
* SinsOfOurFathers: Steve Stronghold was one of Sue's worst bullies and orchestrated her gang-rape, so Sue's daughter Gwen responded by assaulting Steve's son
* ShoutOut: References the song [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oHI3FrRVmyw "Maggie Creek Road"]]
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* GroinAttack: It's implied that she was going to do something to Will's genitals with a lighter and a hunting knife.
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* AdaptationalSympathy: As she's not a supervillain, Sue is treated with far more sympathy than in the film.
* AdaptationalVillainy: Steve Stronghold was implied to have been the TheBully in his youth, but he never went as far as ''orchestrating a gang rape''.
* AdaptationalVillainy: Steve Stronghold was implied to have been the TheBully in his youth, but he never went as far as ''orchestrating a gang rape''.
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* DecompositeCharacter: They're separate people, mother and daughter.
* SinsOfOurFathers: Steve Stronghold was one of Sue's worst bullies and orchestrated her gang-rape, so Gwen responded by assaulting Steve's son Will.
* SinsOfOurFathers: Steve Stronghold was one of Sue's worst bullies and orchestrated her gang-rape, so Gwen responded by assaulting Steve's son Will.
