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!!Zhina
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!!Jorgen
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* BrickJoke: When he first meets Anequs (when she's staying with her brother Niquiat before her first term) the first words out of his mouth in front of her are "Sweet Fyra's tits, it's a dragon!" When she later visits with Theod, Marta, and Sander--and all their dragons with them--the first words he says are "Sweet Fyra's tits, it's ''four'' dragons!" Albeit a lot less shocked than before.
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* BrickJoke: When he first meets Anequs (when she's staying with her brother Niquiat before her first term) the first words out of his mouth in front of her are "Sweet Fyra's tits, it's a dragon!" When she later visits with Theod, Marta, and Sander--and Sander -- and all their dragons with them--the them -- the first words he says are "Sweet Fyra's tits, it's ''four'' dragons!" Albeit a lot less shocked than before.
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!!Ekaitz
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!!Strida
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!!Jarl Leiknir Joervasson
The jarl--ruler--of Vaster Hold, and representative of High King Yngvarr. A Freemensthede who succeeded the prior jarl, Kjeld Niklasson, in 1836.
The jarl--ruler--of Vaster Hold, and representative of High King Yngvarr. A Freemensthede who succeeded the prior jarl, Kjeld Niklasson, in 1836.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He considers all smallfolk as citizens, nackie and Norsemen alike--when five of them are killed along with the Anglish Hakan Gilvertsson in a fight, he speaks of all six of the dead as his citizens. When Anequs speaks up to ask a question of the council--even after being warned ''not'' to speak unless spoken to by Frau Kuiper--he laughs and then tells her to go ahead. Then, when Anequs then asks Thane Stafn if the Anglish plan to [[ArmorPiercingQuestion provoke the Masquisit to violence]] the way they did the Naquisit in 1825--and he loses his temper in the process--Jarl Joervasson says to Frau Kuiper that he likes Anequs; she's got fire. He also calls out the thanes for their lax and appalling behavior that's led to the situations that have occurred (including neglecting the peoples of Mask and Nack Island and Thane Stafn for his editorial letter that he didn't approve of) and openly confronts them all, saying the prior jarl let them rule their thedes as if they were jarls themselves. He issues statement [[spoiler:after the assassination attempt]] that all persons on outlying islands of Lindmarden--namely, Nack and Mask Island--are citizens of the country and thus any violent action taken would be addressed legally the same as any Anglishman.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He considers all smallfolk as citizens, nackie and Norsemen alike--when alike; when five of them are killed along with the Anglish Hakan Gilvertsson in a fight, he speaks of all six of the dead as his citizens. When Anequs speaks up to ask a question of the council--even council (even after being warned ''not'' to speak unless spoken to by Frau Kuiper--he Kuiper) he laughs and then tells her to go ahead. Then, when Anequs then asks Thane Stafn if the Anglish plan to [[ArmorPiercingQuestion provoke the Masquisit to violence]] the way they did the Naquisit in 1825--and he loses his temper in the process--Jarl Joervasson says to Frau Kuiper that he likes Anequs; Anequs and she's got fire. He also calls out the thanes for their lax and appalling behavior that's led to the situations that have occurred (including neglecting the peoples of Mask and Nack Island and Thane Stafn for his editorial letter that he didn't approve of) and openly confronts them all, saying the prior jarl let them rule their thedes as if they were jarls themselves. He issues statement [[spoiler:after the assassination attempt]] that all persons on outlying islands of Lindmarden--namely, Lindmarden -- namely, Nack and Mask Island--are Island -- are citizens of the country and thus any violent action taken would be addressed legally the same as any Anglishman.
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!!Thane Arjan Stafn
Thane of Vastergot, and Ivar Stafn's father. A member of the Ravens of Joden, who believe they have the right to return to colonizing other lands in the ways of their ancestors--through raids and slaughter.
Thane of Vastergot, and Ivar Stafn's father. A member of the Ravens of Joden, who believe they have the right to return to colonizing other lands in the ways of their ancestors--through raids and slaughter.
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Thane of Vastergot, and Ivar Stafn's father. A member of the Ravens of Joden, who believe they have the right to return to colonizing other lands in the ways of their
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!!Ingrid Hakansdottir
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* BigBrotherInstinct: She is--unlike her mother--not ashamed of Sander or his behavior, and tries to assist him and accept his differences where their mother refuses. When her mother states that Lisbet will never marry properly if Sander can't make a decent presentation, Lisbet snaps back that she won't marry ''any'' man who says awful things about her younger brother.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: She is--unlike her mother--not is not ashamed of Sander or his behavior, behavior unlike their mother, and tries to assist him and accept his differences where their mother refuses.refuses and tries to force him either into seclusion or "proper" behavior. When her mother states that Lisbet will never marry properly if Sander can't make a decent presentation, Lisbet snaps back that she won't marry ''any'' man who says awful things about her younger brother.
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* MyBelovedSmother: Frau Jansen, especially to Sander and ''especially'' regarding his autism. She often refuses to let him have his tablet to write his communication as he prefers, lectures him for "blurting" rather than speaking smoothly, and frequently makes him go to his room at home to keep him out of the public eye. She even delayed Lisbet's coming out two years--while she said it was to hone Lisbet's accomplishments, the truth is because she thinks that Sander cannot make a good presentation and will hold Lisbet back from good marriage. Lisbet was also sent away to primary school for years so she wouldn't be "tainted" by Sander.
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* MyBelovedSmother: Frau Jansen, especially to Sander and ''especially'' regarding his autism. She often refuses to let him have his tablet to write his communication as he prefers, lectures him for "blurting" rather than speaking smoothly, and frequently makes him go to his room at home to keep him out of the public eye. She even delayed Lisbet's coming out two years--while years and while she said it was to hone Lisbet's accomplishments, the truth is because she thinks that Sander cannot make a good presentation and will hold Lisbet back from good marriage. Lisbet was also sent away to primary school for years so she wouldn't be "tainted" by Sander.
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* RichesToRags: The cost of Sander's [[PrivateTutor governess]] Miss Keitl for four years--she charged the family a large amount of money to teach him because of his autism and poor behavior--and the purchase of Inga's egg have led to the Jansens being financially crippled, but Frau Jansen won't admit it.
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* ImpoverishedPatrician: Thanks to the death of her husband, the high cost of Sander's governess (who overcharged because he was autistic) and the purchase of Inga's egg for Sander later on, the Jansen family is financially crippled. Frau Jansen won't admit it and still acts as if she's well off.
* RichesToRags: The cost of Sander's [[PrivateTutor governess]] Miss Keitl for fouryears--she years -- she charged the family a large amount of money to teach him because of his autism and poor behavior--and behavior -- and the purchase of Inga's egg have led to the Jansens being financially crippled, but Frau Jansen won't admit it.
* RichesToRags: The cost of Sander's [[PrivateTutor governess]] Miss Keitl for four
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* IdleRich: Dagny comes from enough money to spend her whole day doing nothing but hosting parties for ladies of higher society and going about town.
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* IdleRich: Dagny comes from enough money to spend her whole day doing nothing but hosting parties for ladies of higher society society, shopping, and going about town.
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* {{Socialite}}: As part of the wealthy Vastergot Sørensen family, Marta states that Dagny is ''the'' arbiter of who is and isn't connected in polite society among young women. Marta even takes it personally when she's not invited to a tea party, as the snub implies she's not good enough--or more damning, too strange now, as a dragoneer and later seen being friendly with Anequs, Theod, and Sander--to be included in Dagny's social circle.
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* {{Socialite}}: As part of the wealthy Vastergot Sørensen family, Marta states that Dagny is ''the'' arbiter of who is and isn't connected in polite society among young women. Marta even takes it personally when she's not invited to a tea party, as the snub implies she's not good enough--or enough to be included in Dagny's social circle-- or more damning, too strange now, as a dragoneer and later seen being friendly with Anequs, Theod, and Sander--to be included in Dagny's social circle.Sander.
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* DisappearedDad: Her father Hakan Gilvertsson is killed in a mead hall brawl. [[spoiler:Shortly after she meets Anequs for the first time.]]
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* DisappearedDad: Her father Hakan Gilvertsson is killed in a mead hall brawl. [[spoiler:Shortly brawl [[spoiler:shortly after she meets Anequs for the first time.]]time, as part of the outcry from her attending Fyrafax with Anglish children]].
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* BrickJoke: When he first meets Anequs (when she's staying with her brother Niquiat before term) the first words out of his mouth in front of her are "Sweet Fyra's tits, it's a dragon!" When she later visits with Theod, Marta, and Sander--and all their dragons with them--the first words he says are are "Sweet Fyra's tits, it's ''four'' dragons!" Albeit a lot less shocked than before.
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* BrickJoke: When he first meets Anequs (when she's staying with her brother Niquiat before her first term) the first words out of his mouth in front of her are "Sweet Fyra's tits, it's a dragon!" When she later visits with Theod, Marta, and Sander--and all their dragons with them--the first words he says are are "Sweet Fyra's tits, it's ''four'' dragons!" Albeit a lot less shocked than before.
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* BrickJoke: When he first meets Anequs (when she's staying with her brother Niquiat before term) the first words out of his mouth in front of her are "Sweet Fyra's tits, it's a dragon!" When she later visits with Theod, Marta, and Sander--and all their dragons with them--the first words he says are are "Sweet Fyra's tits, it's ''four'' dragons!" Albeit a lot less shocked than before.
* AbhorrentAdmirer: To Anequs, even though it's just quick references. [[EstablishingCharacterMoment As soon as they meet]], he says he didn't know that Niquiat's sister was "so beautiful," which she acknowledges with only a head nod. Later Zhina mentions that they got gold from a ring he provided, but no more is said about why he got it in the first place.
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* {{Socialite}}: As part of the wealthy Vastergot Sørensen family, Marta states that Dagny is ''the'' arbiter of who is and isn't connected in polite society among young women. Marta even takes it personally when she's not invited to a tea party, as the snub implies she's not good enough--or more damning, too strange now, as a dragoneer and later seen with Anequs--to be included in Dagny's social circle.
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* {{Socialite}}: As part of the wealthy Vastergot Sørensen family, Marta states that Dagny is ''the'' arbiter of who is and isn't connected in polite society among young women. Marta even takes it personally when she's not invited to a tea party, as the snub implies she's not good enough--or more damning, too strange now, as a dragoneer and later seen being friendly with Anequs--to Anequs, Theod, and Sander--to be included in Dagny's social circle.
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* {{Socialite}}: As part of the wealthy Vastergot Sørensen family, Marta states that Dagny is ''the'' arbiter of who is and isn't connected in polite society among young women. Marta even takes it personally when she's not invited to a tea party, as the snub implies she's not good enough to be in Dagny's circle.
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* {{Socialite}}: As part of the wealthy Vastergot Sørensen family, Marta states that Dagny is ''the'' arbiter of who is and isn't connected in polite society among young women. Marta even takes it personally when she's not invited to a tea party, as the snub implies she's not good enough to enough--or more damning, too strange now, as a dragoneer and later seen with Anequs--to be included in Dagny's social circle.
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* UnnamedParent: She is only referred to as Frau ("Mrs.") Jansen.
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* IdleRich: Dagny comes from enough money to spend her whole day doing nothing but hosting parties for ladies of higher society.
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* IdleRich: Dagny comes from enough money to spend her whole day doing nothing but hosting parties for ladies of higher society.society and going about town.
* OldMoney: Part of the vastly wealthy and influential Sørensens; they're known as the Vastergot Sørensens.
* OldMoney: Part of the vastly wealthy and influential Sørensens; they're known as the Vastergot Sørensens.
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* {{Socialite}}: As part of the wealthy Vastergot Sørensen family, Marta states that Dagny is ''the'' arbiter of who is and isn't connected in polite society among young women.
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* {{Socialite}}: As part of the wealthy Vastergot Sørensen family, Marta states that Dagny is ''the'' arbiter of who is and isn't connected in polite society among young women. Marta even takes it personally when she's not invited to a tea party, as the snub implies she's not good enough to be in Dagny's circle.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Anequs first meets Frau Jansen at the meeting for students and parents on the first day of school. Frau Jansen lectures her son Sander about making introductions properly, gripping his shoulder tightly to correct him. When Anequs recognizes the kind of dragon Inga is, she reacts as if Anequs has done a fascinating trick, calling her a "dear creature" before telling Frau Brinkenhoff that she and Karina are dear to take in the "savage" children to educate them properly. This is followed by asking Anequs if Vastergot is a grand city to her since she's lived in "a little bark house" her whole life. This shows that she's bigoted, looks down on nackies as if they were primitive and simple people, and suppresses her son's autism out of her own shame about it.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Anequs first meets Frau Jansen at the meeting for students and parents on the first day of school. Frau Jansen lectures her son Sander about making introductions properly, gripping his shoulder tightly to correct him. When Anequs recognizes the kind of dragon Inga is, she reacts as if Anequs has done a fascinating trick, calling her a "dear creature" before telling Frau Brinkenhoff that she and Karina are dear to take in the "savage" children to educate them properly. This is followed by asking Anequs if Vastergot is a grand city to her since she's lived in "a little bark house" her whole life. This shows that she's bigoted, [[NobleBigot looks down on nackies nackies]] as if they were primitive and primitive, unadvanced, simple people, people in need of Anglish guidance to be civilized, and suppresses her son's autism out of her own shame about it.
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The mother of Lisbet and Sander Jansen, a widow.
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The mother of Lisbet and Sander Jansen, a widow.widow since her husband's passing. She is also the niece of Elsie Brinkerhoff.
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* MyBelovedSmother: Frau Jansen, especially to Sander and ''especially'' regarding his autism. She often refuses to let him have his tablet to write his communication as he prefers, lectures him for "blurting" rather than speaking smoothly, and frequently makes him go to his room at home to keep him out of the public eye. She even delayed Lisbet's coming out two years--while she said it was to hone Lisbet's accomplishments, the truth is because she thinks that Sander cannot make a good presentation and will hold Lisbet back from good marriage. Lisbet was also sent away to primary school for years, so that she wouldn't be "tainted" by Sander.
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* MyBelovedSmother: Frau Jansen, especially to Sander and ''especially'' regarding his autism. She often refuses to let him have his tablet to write his communication as he prefers, lectures him for "blurting" rather than speaking smoothly, and frequently makes him go to his room at home to keep him out of the public eye. She even delayed Lisbet's coming out two years--while she said it was to hone Lisbet's accomplishments, the truth is because she thinks that Sander cannot make a good presentation and will hold Lisbet back from good marriage. Lisbet was also sent away to primary school for years, years so that she wouldn't be "tainted" by Sander.Sander.
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Anequs first meets Frau Jansen at the meeting for students and parents on the first day of school. Frau Jansen lectures her son Sander about making introductions properly, gripping his shoulder tightly to correct him. When Anequs recognizes the kind of dragon Inga is, she reacts as if Anequs has done a fascinating trick, calling her a "dear creature" before telling Frau Brinkenhoff that she and Karina are dear to take in the "savage" children to educate them properly. This is followed by asking Anequs if Vastergot is a grand city to her since she's lived in "a little bark house" her whole life. This shows that she's bigoted, looks down on nackies as if they were primitive and simple people, and suppresses her son's autism out of her own shame about it.
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Anequs first meets Frau Jansen at the meeting for students and parents on the first day of school. Frau Jansen lectures her son Sander about making introductions properly, gripping his shoulder tightly to correct him. When Anequs recognizes the kind of dragon Inga is, she reacts as if Anequs has done a fascinating trick, calling her a "dear creature" before telling Frau Brinkenhoff that she and Karina are dear to take in the "savage" children to educate them properly. This is followed by asking Anequs if Vastergot is a grand city to her since she's lived in "a little bark house" her whole life. This shows that she's bigoted, looks down on nackies as if they were primitive and simple people, and suppresses her son's autism out of her own shame about it.
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The mother of Lisbet and Sander Jassen, a widow.
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The mother of Lisbet and Sander Jassen, Jansen, a widow.
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* RichesToRags: The cost of Sander's [[PrivateTutor governess]] Miss Keitl for four years--she charged the family a large amount of money to teach him--and the purchase of Inga's egg have led to the Jansens being financially crippled, but Frau Jansen won't admit it.
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* RichesToRags: The cost of Sander's [[PrivateTutor governess]] Miss Keitl for four years--she charged the family a large amount of money to teach him--and him because of his autism and poor behavior--and the purchase of Inga's egg have led to the Jansens being financially crippled, but Frau Jansen won't admit it.
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One of the members of the tinker shop, a Kindah girl studying minglinglore and enginekraft and the chief apprentice.
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One of the members of the tinker shop, a Kindah girl studying minglinglore and enginekraft and the chief apprentice. She and Niquiat, while not openly dating, are starting a relationship.
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* WrenchWench: Zhina is skilled in mechanics; she has build multiple things and wants to build an airship.
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* WrenchWench: Zhina is skilled in mechanics; she has build built multiple things and wants to build an airship. airship, working on draft plans for it.
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One of the members of the tinker shop, an Anglish girl.
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One of the members of the tinker shop, an Anglish girl.girl, who is skilled in blacksmithing.
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* WrenchWench: Like Zhina, Strida is skilled with tools and tinkering.
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* WrenchWench: Like Zhina, Strida is skilled with tools and tinkering.tinkering, specifically blacksmithing.
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One of the members of the tinker shop, a Kindah girl studying minglinglore and enginekraft.
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One of the members of the tinker shop, a Kindah girl studying minglinglore and enginekraft.enginekraft and the chief apprentice.
* NeverBareheaded: Being the world's version of Muslim, Zhina always wears a headscarf.
* WrenchWench: Zhina is skilled in mechanics; she has build multiple things and wants to build an airship.
* WrenchWench: Zhina is skilled in mechanics; she has build multiple things and wants to build an airship.
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One of the members of the tinker shop, an Anglish man who mostly fixes engines.
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One of the founding members of the tinker shop, an a middle-aged Anglish man who mostly fixes engines.
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* WrenchWench: Like Zhina, Strida is skilled with tools and tinkering.
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[[folder:Lisbet Jansen]]
!!Lisbet Jansen
The older sister of Sander Jansen.
!!Lisbet Jansen
The older sister of Sander Jansen.
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!!Lisbet Jansen
The
!!Ingrid Hakansdottir
A half-nackie girl who is ten years old; her mother is descended from the daughter of the ruler of the Naregannisit and her father is Anglish, and she has an older
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* BigBrotherInstinct: She is--unlike her mother--not ashamed of Sander or his behavior, and tries to assist him and accept his differences where their mother refuses. When her mother states that Lisbet will never marry properly if Sander can't make a decent presentation, Lisbet snaps back that she won't marry ''any'' man who says awful things about her younger brother.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: She is--unlike her mother--not ashamed of Sander or his behavior, DisappearedDad: Her father Hakan Gilvertsson is killed in a mead hall brawl. [[spoiler:Shortly after she meets Anequs for the first time.]]
* PenPals: How she andtries to assist him and accept his differences where their mother refuses. When her mother states that Lisbet will never marry properly if Sander can't make a decent presentation, Lisbet snaps back that she won't marry ''any'' man who says awful things Anequs start out communicating, after Anequs has an article published about her younger brother.
to improve her (and Theod's) image during her first term. The two don't meet face to face until Fyrafax, when Anequs invites her to attend.
* PenPals: How she and
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[[folder:Frau Jansen]]
!! Frau Jansen
The mother of Lisbet and Sander Jassen, a widow.
!! Frau Jansen
The mother of Lisbet and Sander Jassen, a widow.
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The
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* MyBelovedSmother: Frau Jansen, especially to Sander and ''especially'' regarding his autism. She often refuses to let him have his tablet to write his communication as he prefers, lectures him for "blurting" rather than speaking smoothly, and frequently makes him go to his room at home to keep him out of the public eye. She even delayed Lisbet's coming out two years--while she said it was to hone Lisbet's accomplishments, the truth is because she thinks that Sander cannot make a good presentation and will hold Lisbet back from good marriage. Lisbet was also sent away to primary school for years, so that she wouldn't be "tainted" by Sander.
* RichesToRags: The cost of Sander's [[PrivateTutor governess]] Miss Keitl for four years--she charged the family a large amount of money to teach him--and the purchase of Inga's egg have led to the Jansens being financially crippled, but Frau Jansen won't admit it.
* RichesToRags: The cost of Sander's [[PrivateTutor governess]] Miss Keitl for four years--she charged the family a large amount of money to teach him--and the purchase of Inga's egg have led to the Jansens being financially crippled, but Frau Jansen won't admit it.
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* MyBelovedSmother: Frau Jansen, especially to BigBrotherInstinct: She is--unlike her mother--not ashamed of Sander or his behavior, and ''especially'' regarding tries to assist him and accept his autism. She often refuses to let him have his tablet to write his communication as he prefers, lectures him for "blurting" rather than speaking smoothly, and frequently makes him go to his room at home to keep him out of the public eye. She even delayed Lisbet's coming out two years--while she said it was to hone Lisbet's accomplishments, the truth is because she thinks differences where their mother refuses. When her mother states that Lisbet will never marry properly if Sander cannot can't make a good presentation and will hold decent presentation, Lisbet snaps back from good marriage. Lisbet was also sent away to primary school for years, so that she wouldn't be "tainted" by Sander.won't marry ''any'' man who says awful things about her younger brother.
* RichesToRags: The cost of Sander's [[PrivateTutor governess]] Miss Keitl for four years--she charged the family a large amount of money to teach him--and the purchase of Inga's egg have led to the Jansens being financially crippled, but Frau Jansen won't admit it.
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[[folder:Ingrid Hakansdottir]]
!!Ingrid Hakansdottir
A half-nackie girl who is ten years old; her mother is descended from the daughter of the ruler of the Naregannisit and her father is Anglish, and she has an older brother, Aksel. She first writes to Anequs after an article is written about her in the ''Vastergot Weekly Gazette'', and they start a correspondence and friendship. She wants to be a dragoneer like Anequs, despite it being a very long shot.
!!Ingrid Hakansdottir
A half-nackie girl who is ten years old; her mother is descended from the daughter of the ruler of the Naregannisit and her father is Anglish, and she has an older brother, Aksel. She first writes to Anequs after an article is written about her in the ''Vastergot Weekly Gazette'', and they start a correspondence and friendship. She wants to be a dragoneer like Anequs, despite it being a very long shot.
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!!Ingrid Hakansdottir
A half-nackie girl who is ten years old; her
!! Frau Jansen
The mother
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* DisappearedDad: Her father Hakan Gilvertsson is killed in a mead hall brawl. [[spoiler:Shortly after she meets Anequs for the first time.]]
* PenPals: How she and Anequs start out communicating, after Anequs has an article published about her to improve her (and Theod's) image during her first term. The two don't meet face to face until Fyrafax, when Anequs invites her to attend.
* PenPals: How she and Anequs start out communicating, after Anequs has an article published about her to improve her (and Theod's) image during her first term. The two don't meet face to face until Fyrafax, when Anequs invites her to attend.
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* DisappearedDad: Her father Hakan Gilvertsson is killed in a mead hall brawl. [[spoiler:Shortly after MyBelovedSmother: Frau Jansen, especially to Sander and ''especially'' regarding his autism. She often refuses to let him have his tablet to write his communication as he prefers, lectures him for "blurting" rather than speaking smoothly, and frequently makes him go to his room at home to keep him out of the public eye. She even delayed Lisbet's coming out two years--while she meets Anequs said it was to hone Lisbet's accomplishments, the truth is because she thinks that Sander cannot make a good presentation and will hold Lisbet back from good marriage. Lisbet was also sent away to primary school for years, so that she wouldn't be "tainted" by Sander.
* RichesToRags: The cost of Sander's [[PrivateTutor governess]] Miss Keitl for four years--she charged thefirst time.]]
* PenPals: How shefamily a large amount of money to teach him--and the purchase of Inga's egg have led to the Jansens being financially crippled, but Frau Jansen won't admit it.
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[[folder:Dagny Sørensen]]
!!Dagny Sørensen
The older sister of Niklas Sørensen, andAnequs start out communicating, after Anequs part of the influential Vastergot Sørensen family.
* IdleRich: Dagny comes from enough money to spend her whole day doing nothing but hosting parties for ladies of higher society.
* ProperLady: Very much so; Dagny hasan article published about her to improve her (and Theod's) image during her first term. The two don't meet face to face until Fyrafax, when Anequs invites her to attend.influence and pull and is nothing less than absolutely proper.
* {{Socialite}}: As part of the wealthy Vastergot Sørensen family, Marta states that Dagny is ''the'' arbiter of who is and isn't connected in polite society among young women.
* RichesToRags: The cost of Sander's [[PrivateTutor governess]] Miss Keitl for four years--she charged the
* PenPals: How she
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[[folder:Dagny Sørensen]]
!!Dagny Sørensen
The older sister of Niklas Sørensen, and
* IdleRich: Dagny comes from enough money to spend her whole day doing nothing but hosting parties for ladies of higher society.
* ProperLady: Very much so; Dagny has
* {{Socialite}}: As part of the wealthy Vastergot Sørensen family, Marta states that Dagny is ''the'' arbiter of who is and isn't connected in polite society among young women.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He considers all smallfolk as citizens, including the nackies--when five of them are killed along with the Anglish Hakan Gilvertsson in a fight, he speaks of all six of the dead as his citizens. When Anequs speaks up to ask a question of the council--even after being warned ''not'' to speak unless spoken to by Frau Kuiper--he laughs and then tells her to go ahead. Then, when Anequs then asks Thane Stafn if the Anglish plan to [[ArmorPiercingQuestion provoke the Masquisit to violence]] the way they did the Naquisit in 1825--and he loses his temper in the process--Jarl Joervasson says to Frau Kuiper that he likes Anequs; she's got fire. He also calls out the thanes for their lax and appalling behavior that's led to the situations that have occurred (including neglecting the peoples of Mask and Nack Island and Thane Stafn for his editorial letter that he didn't approve of) and openly confronts them all, saying the prior jarl let them rule their thedes as if they were jarls themselves. He issues statement [[spoiler:after the assassination attempt]] that all persons on outlying islands of Lindmarden--namely, Nack and Mask Island--are citizens of the country and thus any violent action taken would be addressed legally the same as any Anglishman.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He considers all smallfolk as citizens, including the nackies--when nackie and Norsemen alike--when five of them are killed along with the Anglish Hakan Gilvertsson in a fight, he speaks of all six of the dead as his citizens. When Anequs speaks up to ask a question of the council--even after being warned ''not'' to speak unless spoken to by Frau Kuiper--he laughs and then tells her to go ahead. Then, when Anequs then asks Thane Stafn if the Anglish plan to [[ArmorPiercingQuestion provoke the Masquisit to violence]] the way they did the Naquisit in 1825--and he loses his temper in the process--Jarl Joervasson says to Frau Kuiper that he likes Anequs; she's got fire. He also calls out the thanes for their lax and appalling behavior that's led to the situations that have occurred (including neglecting the peoples of Mask and Nack Island and Thane Stafn for his editorial letter that he didn't approve of) and openly confronts them all, saying the prior jarl let them rule their thedes as if they were jarls themselves. He issues statement [[spoiler:after the assassination attempt]] that all persons on outlying islands of Lindmarden--namely, Nack and Mask Island--are citizens of the country and thus any violent action taken would be addressed legally the same as any Anglishman.
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The jarl--ruler--of Vaster Hold, and representative of High King Yngvarr.
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The jarl--ruler--of Vaster Hold, and representative of High King Yngvarr. A Freemensthede who succeeded the prior jarl, Kjeld Niklasson, in 1836.
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* AssassinationAttempt: Made against him soon after he holds council. [[spoiler:He survives, with the would-be assassin destroyed crisply by Kasaqua.]]
* FirstNameBasis: With Frau Kuiper; through a good portion of the meeting, he calls her by her first name, Karina.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He considers all smallfolk as citizens, including the nackies--when five of them are killed along with the Anglish Hakan Gilvertsson in a fight, he speaks of all six of the dead as his citizens. When Anequs speaks up to ask a question of the council--even after being warned ''not'' to speak unless spoken to by Frau Kuiper--he laughs and then tells her to go ahead. Then, when Anequs then asks Thane Stafn if the Anglish plan to [[ArmorPiercingQuestion provoke the Masquisit to violence]] the way they did the Naquisit in 1825--and he loses his temper in the process--Jarl Joervasson says to Frau Kuiper that he likes Anequs; she's got fire. He also calls out the thanes for their lax and appalling behavior that's led to the situations that have occurred (including neglecting the peoples of Mask and Nack Island and Thane Stafn for his editorial letter that he didn't approve of) and openly confronts them all, saying the prior jarl let them rule their thedes as if they were jarls themselves. He issues statement [[spoiler:after the assassination attempt]] that all persons on outlying islands of Lindmarden--namely, Nack and Mask Island--are citizens of the country and thus any violent action taken would be addressed legally the same as any Anglishman.
* FirstNameBasis: With Frau Kuiper; through a good portion of the meeting, he calls her by her first name, Karina.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He considers all smallfolk as citizens, including the nackies--when five of them are killed along with the Anglish Hakan Gilvertsson in a fight, he speaks of all six of the dead as his citizens. When Anequs speaks up to ask a question of the council--even after being warned ''not'' to speak unless spoken to by Frau Kuiper--he laughs and then tells her to go ahead. Then, when Anequs then asks Thane Stafn if the Anglish plan to [[ArmorPiercingQuestion provoke the Masquisit to violence]] the way they did the Naquisit in 1825--and he loses his temper in the process--Jarl Joervasson says to Frau Kuiper that he likes Anequs; she's got fire. He also calls out the thanes for their lax and appalling behavior that's led to the situations that have occurred (including neglecting the peoples of Mask and Nack Island and Thane Stafn for his editorial letter that he didn't approve of) and openly confronts them all, saying the prior jarl let them rule their thedes as if they were jarls themselves. He issues statement [[spoiler:after the assassination attempt]] that all persons on outlying islands of Lindmarden--namely, Nack and Mask Island--are citizens of the country and thus any violent action taken would be addressed legally the same as any Anglishman.
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!!Thane Arjan Stafn
Thane of Vastergot, and Ivar Stafn's father. A member of the Ravens of Joden, who believe they have the right to return to colonizing other lands in the ways of their ancestors--through raids and slaughter.
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* IcyBlueEyes: He and his son Ivar have the same color eyes.
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!!Thane Arjan Stafn
Thane of Vastergot, and Ivar Stafn's father. A member of the Ravens of Joden, who believe they have the right to return to colonizing other lands in the ways of their ancestors--through raids and slaughter.
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* IcyBlueEyes: He and his son Ivar have the same color eyes.
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* DisappearedDad: Her father is killed in a mead hall brawl. [[spoiler:Shortly after she meets Anequs for the first time.]]
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* DisappearedDad: Her father Hakan Gilvertsson is killed in a mead hall brawl. [[spoiler:Shortly after she meets Anequs for the first time.]]
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* PenPals: How she and Anequs start out communicating, after Anequs has an article published about her to improve her (and Theod's) image. The two don't meet face to fact until Fyrafax, when Anequs invites her to attend.
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* PenPals: How she and Anequs start out communicating, after Anequs has an article published about her to improve her (and Theod's) image. image during her first term. The two don't meet face to fact face until Fyrafax, when Anequs invites her to attend.
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* DisappearedDad: Her father is killed in a mead hall brawl. [[Shortly after she meets Anequs for the first time.]]
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* DisappearedDad: Her father is killed in a mead hall brawl. [[Shortly [[spoiler:Shortly after she meets Anequs for the first time.]]
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A half-Native young girl who is ten years old; her mother is descended from the daughter of the ruler of the Naregannisit and she has an older brother, Aksel. She first writes to Anequs after an article is written about her in the ''Vastergot Weekly Gazette'', and they start a correspondence and friendship. She wants to be a dragoneer like Anequs.
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A half-Native young half-nackie girl who is ten years old; her mother is descended from the daughter of the ruler of the Naregannisit and her father is Anglish, and she has an older brother, Aksel. She first writes to Anequs after an article is written about her in the ''Vastergot Weekly Gazette'', and they start a correspondence and friendship. She wants to be a dragoneer like Anequs.Anequs, despite it being a very long shot.
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* DisappearedDad: Her father is killed in a mead hall brawl. [[Shortly after she meets Anequs for the first time.]]
* PenPals: How she and Anequs start out communicating, after Anequs has an article published about her to improve her (and Theod's) image. The two don't meet face to fact until Fyrafax, when Anequs invites her to attend.
* PenPals: How she and Anequs start out communicating, after Anequs has an article published about her to improve her (and Theod's) image. The two don't meet face to fact until Fyrafax, when Anequs invites her to attend.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: She is--unlike her mother--not ashamed of Sander or his behavior, and tries to assist him where their mother refuses. When her mother states that Lisbet will never marry properly if Sander can't make a decent presentation, Lisbet snaps back that she won't marry ''any'' man who says awful things about her younger brother.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: She is--unlike her mother--not ashamed of Sander or his behavior, and tries to assist him and accept his differences where their mother refuses. When her mother states that Lisbet will never marry properly if Sander can't make a decent presentation, Lisbet snaps back that she won't marry ''any'' man who says awful things about her younger brother.
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* RichesToRags: The cost of Sander's [[PrivateTutor governess]] Miss Keitl for four years--she charged the family a large amount of money to teach him--and the purchase of Inga's egg have led to the Jansens being financially crippled, but Frau Jansen won't admit it.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: She is--unlike her mother--not ashamed of Sander or his behavior, and tries to assist him where their mother refuses. When her mother states that Lisbet will never marry properly if Sander can't make a decent presentation, Lisbet snaps back that she won't marry ''any'' man who says awful things about her younger brother.
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* MyBelovedSmother: Frau Jansen, especially to Sander and ''especially'' regarding his autism. She often refuses to let him have his tablet to write his communication as he prefers, lectures him for "blurting" rather than speaking smoothly, and frequently makes him go to his room at home to keep him out of the public eye. She even delayed Lisbet's coming out two years--while she said it was to hone Lisbet's accomplishments, the truth is because she thinks that Sander cannot make a good presentation and will hold Lisbet back from good marriage.
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* MyBelovedSmother: Frau Jansen, especially to Sander and ''especially'' regarding his autism. She often refuses to let him have his tablet to write his communication as he prefers, lectures him for "blurting" rather than speaking smoothly, and frequently makes him go to his room at home to keep him out of the public eye. She even delayed Lisbet's coming out two years--while she said it was to hone Lisbet's accomplishments, the truth is because she thinks that Sander cannot make a good presentation and will hold Lisbet back from good marriage. Lisbet was also sent away to primary school for years, so that she wouldn't be "tainted" by Sander.
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[[folder:Ingrid Hakansdottir]]
!!Ingrid Hakansdottir
A half-Native young girl who is ten years old; her mother is descended from the daughter of the ruler of the Naregannisit and she has an older brother, Aksel. She first writes to Anequs after an article is written about her in the ''Vastergot Weekly Gazette'', and they start a correspondence and friendship. She wants to be a dragoneer like Anequs.
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[[folder:Ingrid Hakansdottir]]
!!Ingrid Hakansdottir
A half-Native young girl who is ten years old; her mother is descended from the daughter of the ruler of the Naregannisit and she has an older brother, Aksel. She first writes to Anequs after an article is written about her in the ''Vastergot Weekly Gazette'', and they start a correspondence and friendship. She wants to be a dragoneer like Anequs.
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!!Captain Johan Einarsson
A representative for the Ministry of Dragon Affairs at Kuiper's.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Before Frau Kuiper can introduce any of the other members of staff at Kuiper's to Anequs, he demands to know how she came to possess Kasaqua. He then calls Anequs impudent for saying that she doesn't "own" her dragon, and when Frau Kuiper cuts him off and they have a silent stand off about it Anequs realizes that the two have a well-established rivalry that she's walked in the middle of.
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!!Captain Johan Einarsson
A representative for the Ministry of Dragon Affairs at Kuiper's.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Before Frau Kuiper can introduce any of the other members of staff at Kuiper's to Anequs, he demands to know how she came to possess Kasaqua. He then calls Anequs impudent for saying that she doesn't "own" her dragon, and when Frau Kuiper cuts him off and they have a silent stand off about it Anequs realizes that the two have a well-established rivalry that she's walked in the middle of.
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* MyBelovedSmother: Frau Jansen, especially to Sander and ''especially'' regarding his autism. She often refuses to let him have his tablet to write his communication as he prefers, lectures him for "blurting" rather than speaking smoothly, and frequently makes him go to his room at home to keep him out of the public eye. She even delayed Lisbet's coming out two years--while she said it was to hone Lisbet's accomplishments, the truth is because she thinks that Sander cannot make a good presentation and will hold Lisbet back from good marriage.
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!!Members of the Enginekrafters Co-Op
[[folder:Zhina]]
!!Zhina
One of the members of the tinker shop, a Kindah girl studying minglinglore and enginekraft.
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!!Jorgen
One of the members of the tinker shop, an Anglish man who mostly fixes engines.
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!!Ekaitz
One of the members of the tinker shop, a Vakoshish.
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!!Strida
One of the members of the tinker shop, an Anglish girl.
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!!Government
[[folder:Captain Johan Einarsson]]
!!Captain Johan Einarsson
A representative for the Ministry of Dragon Affairs at Kuiper's.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Before Frau Kuiper can introduce any of the other members of staff at Kuiper's to Anequs, he demands to know how she came to possess Kasaqua. He then calls Anequs impudent for saying that she doesn't "own" her dragon, and when Frau Kuiper cuts him off and they have a silent stand off about it Anequs realizes that the two have a well-established rivalry that she's walked in the middle of.
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!!Jarl Leiknir Joervasson
The jarl--ruler--of Vaster Hold, and representative of High King Yngvarr.
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!! Others
[[folder:Lisbet Jansen]]
!!Lisbet Jansen
The older sister of Sander Jansen.
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!! Frau Jansen
The mother of Lisbet and Sander Jassen, a widow.
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!!Members of the Enginekrafters Co-Op
[[folder:Zhina]]
!!Zhina
One of the members of the tinker shop, a Kindah girl studying minglinglore and enginekraft.
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[[folder:Jorgen]]
!!Jorgen
One of the members of the tinker shop, an Anglish man who mostly fixes engines.
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!!Ekaitz
One of the members of the tinker shop, a Vakoshish.
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[[folder:Strida]]
!!Strida
One of the members of the tinker shop, an Anglish girl.
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!!Government
[[folder:Captain Johan Einarsson]]
!!Captain Johan Einarsson
A representative for the Ministry of Dragon Affairs at Kuiper's.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Before Frau Kuiper can introduce any of the other members of staff at Kuiper's to Anequs, he demands to know how she came to possess Kasaqua. He then calls Anequs impudent for saying that she doesn't "own" her dragon, and when Frau Kuiper cuts him off and they have a silent stand off about it Anequs realizes that the two have a well-established rivalry that she's walked in the middle of.
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!!Jarl Leiknir Joervasson
The jarl--ruler--of Vaster Hold, and representative of High King Yngvarr.
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!! Others
[[folder:Lisbet Jansen]]
!!Lisbet Jansen
The older sister of Sander Jansen.
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!! Frau Jansen
The mother of Lisbet and Sander Jassen, a widow.
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