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* TechnicolorEyes: In the original and tumblr revamped versions, Charlie has violet eyes. In the PDF and fanfiction.net versions, this is averted with her eyes being brown.
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* TechnicolorEyes: In the original and tumblr revamped versions, Charlie has violet eyes. In the PDF and fanfiction.net revamped versions, this is averted with her eyes being brown.
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* TechnicolorEyes: In the original and tumblr revamped versions, Charlie has violet eyes. In the PDF and fanfiction.net versions, this is averted with her eyes being brown.
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* DeclarationOfProtection: Other than surviving, keeping Vaughan and Charlie safe is one of Nate's main goals in the story. He also takes the baby under his wing in Chapter 2.
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* DeclarationOfProtection: Other than surviving, keeping Vaughan and Charlie safe is one of Nate's main goals in the story. He also takes the baby under his wing in Chapter 2.2 and Sissy in Chapter 4.
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** At least, he definitely is in the original version.
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** At least, he definitely is in the original version. [[UncertainDoom In the revamp however...]]
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** At least, he definitely is in the original version.
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* UncertainDoom: Thanks to the revamp, [[spoiler: Vaughan's fate is now unknown.]]
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* OurGhostsAreDifferent: In the revamp [[spoiler: it appears as though Casey came back to Nate as a ghost, but it turns out Nate was actually sleeping.]]
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* DomesticAbuser: He is blatantly show to be this to his children and implied to be this toward his wife.
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* DomesticAbuser: He is blatantly show shown to be this to his children and implied to be this toward his wife.
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* DrowningMySorrows: Her explanation for why she drinks implies this, and apparently points Nate's father as the reason for her need to drink, but this is most likely an excuse to keep drinking even if her husband is making her miserable.
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* DrowningMySorrows: Her explanation for why she drinks implies this, and apparently points to Nate's father as the reason for her need to drink, but this is most likely an excuse to keep drinking even if her husband is making her miserable.
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* AscendedExtra: Downplayed. He's still a minor character in the revamp and only appears in flashbacks, but his role is bigger than it was in the original.
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* AscendedExtra: Downplayed. He's still a minor character in the revamp and only appears in flashbacks, flashbacks and dreams, but his role is bigger than it was in the original.
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* MoodSwinger: As his illness progresses.
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* AscendedExtra: Downplayed. He's still a minor character in the revamp and only appears in flashbacks, but his role is bigger than it was in the original.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Downplayed in the revamp.
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The bandit who wrote about the doctor camp and took Charlie away after she gets knocked out by Duke.
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The bandit who wrote about the doctor camp and took [[spoiler: Charlie away after she gets knocked out by Duke.]]
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** ILetGwenStacyDie [[spoiler:His brother committed suicide, and Nate appears to shoulder a certain amount of blame.]]
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** ILetGwenStacyDie ILetGwenStacyDie: [[spoiler:His brother committed suicide, and Nate appears to shoulder a certain amount of blame.]]
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** ILetGwenStacyDie [[spoiler:His brother committed suicide, and Nate appears to shoulder a certain amount of blame. He definitely blames himself for the baby's death]]
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** ILetGwenStacyDie [[spoiler:His brother committed suicide, and Nate appears to shoulder a certain amount of blame. He definitely blames himself for the baby's death]]]]
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Nate's mom.
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Nate's dad.
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* EasilyForgiven: [[spoiler: Averted. Nate almost kills her, Charlie punches her in the face, and they both threaten her]] when she tries to help them.
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* EasilyForgiven: [[spoiler: Averted. Nate almost kills her, Charlie punches her in the face, and they both threaten her]] when she tries to help them. Played straight with Vaughan, who seems not to hold what she did against her.
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* PluckyComicRelief: A weird conversation in Chapter 4 and a stint crawling around in air vents in Chapter 5 mark him as such.
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* PluckyComicRelief: A weird conversation in Chapter 4 and [[spoiler: a stint crawling around in air vents in Chapter 5 5]] mark him as such.
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** HiddenDepths: His past is what keeps him from being solely a comic relief character.
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* SophisticatedAsHell: When she swears.
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* DeathByDespair: [[spoiler:It's implied that Vaughan allows himself to be overcome by the walkers attracted by the gunshot out of guilt and despair]].
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* DeathByDespair: [[spoiler:It's implied that Vaughan allows himself to be overcome by the walkers attracted by the gunshot out of Eddie's gunshot, due to his guilt and despair]].over Charlie's death]].
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* JailBait: Nate was planning on sleeping with her (and the feeling was mutual) until [[spoiler: he found out how old she really was.]]
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* JailBait: Nate was planning on sleeping with her (and the feeling was mutual) until [[spoiler: he found out how old she really was.]]
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* JailBait: Nate was planning on sleeping with her (and the feeling was mutual) until [[spoiler: he found out how old she really was.]]
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* ConvenientlyAnOrphan: [[spoiler: Her parents' deaths allows Nate to care for her and leads to her eventual death.]]
