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** Becomes more of a GentleGiant after making peace with Nate, until they get back to the camp and [[spoiler: find that everyone else is gone.]] Though in both cases, his anger is more than justified.
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** GentleGiant: Becomes more of a GentleGiant this after making peace with Nate, until they get back to the camp and [[spoiler: find that everyone else is gone.]] Though in both cases, his anger is more than justified.
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* EmbarrassingFirstName: In the original, Nate thinks that "Sissy" is a terrible name (most likely due to the meaning of the word sissy in English). In the revamp, this becomes more of an embarrassing full name. "Sissy Boner", "Pissy Bonbon".
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* EmbarrassingFirstName: In the original, Nate thinks that "Sissy" is a terrible name (most likely due to the meaning of the word sissy "sissy" in English). In the revamp, this becomes more of an embarrassing full name. "Sissy Boner", "Pissy Bonbon".
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* SpockSpeak: Downplayed in the revamp.
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** WeakButSkilled: His skill as an archer makes up fr the fact that he's [[TheTwink not at all physically imposing]].
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** WeakButSkilled: His skill as an archer makes up fr for the fact that he's [[TheTwink not at all physically imposing]].
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* BabyTalk: Vaughan is the only one who does this.
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* BabyTalk: Vaughan is the only one who does this.this when speaking to the baby.
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* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: In the original story, [[spoiler: aside from the time where she cries at the idea of losing Vaughan and Nate in chapter 5,]] she seems to be very unfazed by the horrors of the apocalypse. In the revamp there are some hints in chapter 1 that things might be getting to her, but even those are mild at best and don't seem to last.
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* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: In the original story, [[spoiler: aside from the time where she cries at the idea of losing Vaughan and Nate in chapter 5,]] she seems to be very unfazed by the horrors of the apocalypse. In the revamp there are some hints in chapter 1 throughout the story that things might be getting to her, but even those are mild at best and don't seem to last.best.
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-> "If I took chemo it would be difficult to get rid of, and my chances aren’t as positive, but it’s not impossible that I’ll live."
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* ToughLove: Towards Nate and Vaughan.
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* ArcherArchetype: Averted. While he's a highly skilled archer, he's the warmest and most down-to-Earth of the trio.
* TheStraightAndArrowPath
** ArcherArchetype: Averted. He's the warmest and most down-to-Earth of the trio.
** WeakButSkilled: His skill as an archer makes up fr the fact that he's [[TheTwink not at all physically imposing]].
** ArcherArchetype: Averted. He's the warmest and most down-to-Earth of the trio.
** WeakButSkilled: His skill as an archer makes up fr the fact that he's [[TheTwink not at all physically imposing]].
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* WeakButSkilled: While not physically imposing, he is an Olympic-level archer, a skill he often utilizes in fights or on lookout duty.
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* NiceGuy: He gets on well with most everyone. He even offers Vaughan some of his weed, thinking it will help ease his affliction, despite the fact that he feels he would succumb to the horrors of the apocalypse without it.
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* NiceGuy: He gets on well with most everyone. He even [[TheKindnessOfStrangers offers Vaughan some of his weed, weed]], thinking it will help ease his affliction, despite the fact that he feels he would succumb to the horrors of the apocalypse without it.
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* TookALevelinKindness: Downplayed. In Chapter 4, it becomes more obvious that she really does care for Nate and Vaughan, as opposed to just feeling possessive towards them.
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* TookALevelinKindness: [[TookALevelinKindness Took A Level In Kindness]]: Downplayed. In Chapter 4, it becomes more obvious that she really does care for Nate and Vaughan, as opposed to just feeling possessive towards them.
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* NaturalizedName: From Senkirin to Charlie.
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* NaturalizedName: From Renkiyu to Vaughan.
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!!Other Characters
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* IncorruptiblePurePureness: When he's lucid, he maintains a policy of trying to avoid hurting others whenever possible. He even tries to convince Nate to spare Dan, despite the fact that, as far as he's aware, another bandit [[spoiler:is possibly raping Charlie at the time]]. [[PunishedForSympathy He does get called out on this.]]
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: He was on suicide watch in the past. It's the reason why he doesn't believe he'd be able to cope without being high all the time now that he's living in the apocalypse, because he was barely able to deal with life when things were normal.
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[[folder: Charlie]]
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[[folder: Charlie]]Charlie (Senkirin Wakahisa)]]
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[[folder: Vaughan]]Vaughan (Renkiyu)]]
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!!'''Vaughan'''
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* EmbarrassingFirstName: In the original, Nate thinks that "Sissy" is a terrible name (most likely due to the meaning of the word sissy in English). In the revamp, this becomes more of embarrassing full name. "Sissy Boner", "Pissy Bonbon".
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* EmbarrassingFirstName: In the original, Nate thinks that "Sissy" is a terrible name (most likely due to the meaning of the word sissy in English). In the revamp, this becomes more of an embarrassing full name. "Sissy Boner", "Pissy Bonbon".
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[[folder: Dr Naga]]
!!'''Dr Nāgá'''
!!'''Dr Nāgá'''
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[[folder: Dr Reva Naga]]
!!'''Dr Reva Nāgá'''
!!'''Dr Reva Nāgá'''
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[[folder: Sissy]]
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!!'''Sissy'''
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[[folder: Sissy]]
!!'''Sissy'''
Cecilia "Sissy" Bonnet]]
!!'''Cecilia "Sissy" Bonnet'''
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!!'''Cecilia "Sissy" Bonnet'''
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* EmbarrassingFirstName: In the original, Nate thinks that "Sissy" is a terrible name (most likely due to the meaning of the word sissy in English). In the revamp, this becomes more of embarrassing full name. "Sissy Boner", "Pissy Bonbon".
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* FunctionalAddict: Sort of. He is able to function like everyone else ultimately, but not with much clarity.
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* FunctionalAddict: Sort of. He is able to function like everyone else ultimately, but not with much clarity. Subverted slightly by his assertion that he needs his stash to be able to cope.
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** JerkassWoobie: Multiple events in the story makes it hard not feel sorry for him.
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* DeathByDespair: [[spoiler:It's implied that Vaughan allowed himself to be overcome by the walkers attracted by the gunshot out of guilt and despair]].
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* DeathByDespair: [[spoiler:It's implied that Vaughan allowed allows himself to be overcome by the walkers attracted by the gunshot out of guilt and despair]].
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* DeathByDespair: [[spoiler:It's implied that Vaughan allowed himself to be overcome by the walkers attracted by the gunshot out of guilt and despair]].
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* NiceGuy: He gets on well with most everyone, and even offers Vaughan some of his weed, thinking it will help ease his affliction.
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* NiceGuy: He gets on well with most everyone, and everyone. He even offers Vaughan some of his weed, thinking it will help ease his affliction.affliction, despite the fact that he feels he would succumb to the horrors of the apocalypse without it.
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* TheNicknamer: Calls Vaughan "Vee" and Charlie "Charles", among other things.
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* TheNicknamer: Calls Vaughan "Vee" and Charlie "Charles", among other things. Also, Sissy becomes "Baguette."
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** Becomes more of a GentleGiant after making peace with Nate, until they get back to the camp and find that everyone else is gone. Though in both cases, his anger is more than justified.
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** Becomes more of a GentleGiant after making peace with Nate, until they get back to the camp and [[spoiler: find that everyone else is gone. gone.]] Though in both cases, his anger is more than justified.