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* OverprotectiveDad: Although considering Mausami got pregnant with another man's child while married, maybe he should've been a little better at being overprotective.
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* CorruptQuartermaster: Or rather an incompetent one, due to his drinking, and absolute refusal to make any deal without haggling.
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* CorruptQuartermaster: Or rather an incompetent one, due to his drinking, and absolute refusal to make any deal without haggling.DoYouWantToHaggle: Walt is a PhraseCatcher for the thought "the price is never the price", as he ''always'' asks the storeroom customers for prices that are too high but that he isn't really interested in making them pay.
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!The Watch
[[folder:Soo]]
!!Soo Ramirez
The stern Captain of the Watch with a hidden soft spot.
[[folder:Soo]]
!!Soo Ramirez
The stern Captain of the Watch with a hidden soft spot.
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[[folder:Soo]]
!!Soo Ramirez
The stern Captain of the Watch with a hidden soft spot.
!!Dana Jaxson-Curtis
Peter and Theo's older cousin.
* ActionMom: She has two daughters and trains Watch recruits in combat.
* EyeContactAsProof: She repeatedly looks at the table and not Peter while sitting on a council that's issuing several decisions which upset him and which Sanjay suggests he has her support on.
* KilledOffScreen: [[spoiler:Jimmy kills her in his delusions while they'r both off-page.]]
* TheQuietOne: She appears in several scenes but has little dialogue.
* RefusalOfTheCall: She initially declines to inherit her father's seat on the Household running the First Colony. Later, Sanjay poisons her against the idea of Peter having it and persuades her to take it after all.
[[/folder]]
!The Watch
[[folder:Soo]]
!!Soo Ramirez
The stern Captain of the Watch with a hidden soft spot.
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* EyeContactAsProof: She repeatedly looks at the table and not Peter while sitting on a council that's issuing several decisions which upset him and which Sanjay suggests he has her support on.
* KilledOffScreen: [[spoiler:Jimmy kills her in his delusions while they'r both off-page.]]
* TheQuietOne: She appears in several scenes but has little dialogue.
* RefusalOfTheCall: She initially declines to inherit her father's seat on the Household running the First Colony. Later, Sanjay poisons her against the idea of Peter having it and persuades her to take it after all.
[[/folder]]
!The Watch
[[folder:Soo]]
!!Soo Ramirez
The stern Captain of the Watch with a hidden soft spot.
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[[folder:Leigh]]
!!Leigh Jaxson-Wilson
Dana's sister, Arlo's wife, and Peter and Theo's cousin. She is a nervous woman with an infant daughter.
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* BusCrash: The second book says she died sometime after she and the other survivors of the First Colony were taken to the Homeland.
* FaintInShock: She faints when she hears about an attack on the way and is worried about her husband.
* TextileWorkIsFeminine: Leigh is a NeutralFemale who is always knitting.
[[/folder]]
!!Leigh Jaxson-Wilson
Dana's sister, Arlo's wife, and Peter and Theo's cousin. She is a nervous woman with an infant daughter.
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* BusCrash: The second book says she died sometime after she and the other survivors of the First Colony were taken to the Homeland.
* FaintInShock: She faints when she hears about an attack on the way and is worried about her husband.
* TextileWorkIsFeminine: Leigh is a NeutralFemale who is always knitting.
[[/folder]]
