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* HotScientist: Is described as being quite comely.
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* TheMark: The series begins with Kade's mission to get close to her and gain her confidence.
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* [[spoiler:BrainUploading: The first succesful instance actually, at least until her clone is killed and she's left alone in her computer with no contact with the outside world. For Six months.]]
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* [[spoiler:BrainUploading: The first succesful instance actually, at least until her clone is killed and she's she's left alone in her computer with no contact with the outside world. For Six six months.]]
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* [[spoiler:WetwareBody- She needs one to stay sane. First her clone body, then in an act of desperation, her daughter Ling at the end of "Crux".]]
* [[spoiler:YearInsideHourOutside: Time passes painfully slow for her inside her quantum computer. She even has time to create entire worlds Film/Inception style, at least until she starts going insane.]]
* [[spoiler:YearInsideHourOutside: Time passes painfully slow for her inside her quantum computer. She even has time to create entire worlds Film/Inception style, at least until she starts going insane.]]
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* [[spoiler:WetwareBody- [[spoiler:WetwareBody: She needs one to stay sane. First her clone body, then in an act of desperation, her daughter Ling at the end of "Crux".]]
* [[spoiler:YearInsideHourOutside: Time passes painfully slow for her inside her quantum computer. She even has time to create entire worldsFilm/Inception {{Film/Inception}} style, at least until she starts going insane.]]
* [[spoiler:YearInsideHourOutside: Time passes painfully slow for her inside her quantum computer. She even has time to create entire worlds
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* [[spoiler:Cloning Blues:Averted, Feng loves being apart of a "Big Familly" and laughs when Kade first calls him a robot, thinking it's a cool idea]]
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* [[spoiler:Cloning Blues:Averted, Blues: Averted, Feng loves being apart of a "Big Familly" Family" and laughs when Kade first calls him a robot, thinking it's a cool idea]]
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* [[spoiler:StealingTheCredit: Chen has been claiming his Uploaded Wife's accomplishments as his own. This comes to a head when he resorts to torturing her to get one last breakthrough before she's destroyed.]]
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* [[spoiler:StealingTheCredit: Chen has been claiming his Uploaded Wife's uploaded wife's accomplishments as his own. This comes to a head when he resorts to torturing her to get one last breakthrough before she's destroyed.]]
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* [[spoiler:EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas:Loves her mother dearly, and even her father too.]]
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* [[spoiler:EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas:Loves [[spoiler:EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas: Loves her mother dearly, and even her father too.]]
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* [[spoiler:Ubermensch:Is [[spoiler:Ubermensch: Is brought up to think of herself as this by her mother.]]
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* EmperorScientist: Carries a lot of influence in the east.
* TheMark: The series begins with Kade's mission to get close to her and gain her confidence.
* HotScientist: Is described as being quite comely.
* TheMark: The series begins with Kade's mission to get close to her and gain her confidence.
* HotScientist: Is described as being quite comely.
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* [[spoiler:BreakTheCutie]][[spoiler:BreakTheCutie: While she may be crazy, she's positively heartbroken when her father hits her and scalds her with hot tea that she had prepared especially for him (this was after he figured out she had caused the Shanghai disaster.) It gets worse when she finally gets to talk with her mother again, and Shu uses that opportunity to (reluctantly) download herself into her daughter, while Ling screams in pain.]]
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* [[spoiler:Ubermensche]]
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* [[spoiler:EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas [[spoiler:EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas:Loves her mother dearly, and even her father too.]]
*[[spoiler:PersonOfMassDestruction]]
[[spoiler:PersonOfMassDestruction: When she is thwarted in finding her mother in "Crux", she takes it out on Shanghai's power grid, effectively destroying the city.]]
*[[spoiler:Ubermensche]]
[[spoiler:Ubermensch:Is brought up to think of herself as this by her mother.]]
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Characters in Literature/TheNexusSeries who are primarily associated with the Chinese government:
[[foldercontrol]]
[[folder: Su-Yong Shu]]
*[[spoiler:AndIMustScream]]
*[[spoiler:BrainUploading: The first succesful instance actually, at least until her clone is killed and she's left alone in her computer with no contact with the outside world. For Six months.]]
*[[spoiler:BullyingADragon]]
*[[spoiler:ColdBloodedTorture]]
*[[spoiler:EmergencyTransformation: Shu's brain was uploaded to a computer bank as she was dying from an assassination attempt.]]
*[[spoiler:SanitySlippage: And she knows it's happening.]]
*[[spoiler:StartOfDarkness]]
*[[spoiler:TragicMonster: Shu was uploaded in a last ditch effort to save her life. After which her husband effectively rejected her and used her daughter as leverage to get her to work for the Chinese state.]]
*WellIntentionedExtremist
*[[spoiler:WetwareBody- She needs one to stay sane. First her clone body, then in an act of desperation, her daughter Ling at the end of "Crux".]]
*[[spoiler:YearInsideHourOutside: Time passes painfully slow for her inside her quantum computer. She even has time to create entire worlds Film/Inception style, at least until she starts going insane.]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Feng]]
Shu's driver [[spoiler: and clone SuperSoldier]].
*TheBigGuy
*[[spoiler:BioAugmentation]]
*[[spoiler:CloneArmy: Uplifted by Shu. All the clones love her as a mother and Feng is no exception.]]
*TheDriver
*[[spoiler:SuperReflexes]]
*NiceGuy: Is actually quite friendly.
*[[spoiler:SuperStrength]]
*[[spoiler:Cloning Blues:Averted, Feng loves being apart of a "Big Familly" and laughs when Kade first calls him a robot, thinking it's a cool idea]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Chen Pang]]
Shu's husband
*DirtyCoward
*EvilIsPetty
*ItsAllAboutMe
*[[spoiler:StealingTheCredit: Chen has been claiming his Uploaded Wife's accomplishments as his own. This comes to a head when he resorts to torturing her to get one last breakthrough before she's destroyed.]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Ling]]
Shu's Daughter with Chen
*[[spoiler:BioAugmentation]]
*[[spoiler:BreakTheCutie]]
*[[spoiler:CreepyChild]]
*[[spoiler:EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas ]]
*[[spoiler:PersonOfMassDestruction]]
*[[spoiler:Ubermensche]]
[[/folder]]
[[foldercontrol]]
[[folder: Su-Yong Shu]]
*[[spoiler:AndIMustScream]]
*[[spoiler:BrainUploading: The first succesful instance actually, at least until her clone is killed and she's left alone in her computer with no contact with the outside world. For Six months.]]
*[[spoiler:BullyingADragon]]
*[[spoiler:ColdBloodedTorture]]
*[[spoiler:EmergencyTransformation: Shu's brain was uploaded to a computer bank as she was dying from an assassination attempt.]]
*[[spoiler:SanitySlippage: And she knows it's happening.]]
*[[spoiler:StartOfDarkness]]
*[[spoiler:TragicMonster: Shu was uploaded in a last ditch effort to save her life. After which her husband effectively rejected her and used her daughter as leverage to get her to work for the Chinese state.]]
*WellIntentionedExtremist
*[[spoiler:WetwareBody- She needs one to stay sane. First her clone body, then in an act of desperation, her daughter Ling at the end of "Crux".]]
*[[spoiler:YearInsideHourOutside: Time passes painfully slow for her inside her quantum computer. She even has time to create entire worlds Film/Inception style, at least until she starts going insane.]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Feng]]
Shu's driver [[spoiler: and clone SuperSoldier]].
*TheBigGuy
*[[spoiler:BioAugmentation]]
*[[spoiler:CloneArmy: Uplifted by Shu. All the clones love her as a mother and Feng is no exception.]]
*TheDriver
*[[spoiler:SuperReflexes]]
*NiceGuy: Is actually quite friendly.
*[[spoiler:SuperStrength]]
*[[spoiler:Cloning Blues:Averted, Feng loves being apart of a "Big Familly" and laughs when Kade first calls him a robot, thinking it's a cool idea]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Chen Pang]]
Shu's husband
*DirtyCoward
*EvilIsPetty
*ItsAllAboutMe
*[[spoiler:StealingTheCredit: Chen has been claiming his Uploaded Wife's accomplishments as his own. This comes to a head when he resorts to torturing her to get one last breakthrough before she's destroyed.]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Ling]]
Shu's Daughter with Chen
*[[spoiler:BioAugmentation]]
*[[spoiler:BreakTheCutie]]
*[[spoiler:CreepyChild]]
*[[spoiler:EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas ]]
*[[spoiler:PersonOfMassDestruction]]
*[[spoiler:Ubermensche]]
[[/folder]]
