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* AffablyEvil: Downplayed. Natoru isn't ''evil'' per se, he's just following orders.
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* AffablyEvil: Downplayed. Natoru isn't ''evil'' per se, he's [[JustFollowingOrders just following orders.trying to do his job]].
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* DelayedReaction: Haru comes home from school to find her mother hard at work, and asks her if cats can talk. Naoko absentmindedly responds that she doesn't know. There's a [[{{Beat}} beat]], followed by Naoko letting out a FlatWhat.
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* DelayedReaction: Haru comes home from school to find her mother hard at work, and asks her if cats can talk. Naoko Her mother absentmindedly responds that says she doesn't know. There's a [[{{Beat}} beat]], followed by Naoko letting know, before she realizes what Haru actually said and lets out a FlatWhat.''[[FlatWhat "What?"]]''.
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* DelayedReaction: Haru comes home from school to find her mother hard at work, and asks her if cats can talk. Naoko absentmindedly responds that she doesn't know. There's a [[{{Beat}} beat]], followed by Naoko letting out a FlatWhat.
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* TextileWorkIsFeminine: Her job seems to involve textiles, since she is seen working on a patchwork design, and several spools of fabric can be seen in her bedroom.
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* TextileWorkIsFeminine: Her job seems to involve textiles, since she is seen working on a patchwork design, and several spools bolts of fabric can be seen in her bedroom.
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* LuminescentBlush: When the Baron carries her to the portal and looks at her face. We can't blame her.
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* LuminescentBlush: When the Baron carries scoops Haru up and effortlessly charges up the tower stairs while carrying her, she goes very pink in the face when he catches her to the portal and looks at her face.staring. We can't blame her.