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* MrExposition: Spends most of the early descent explaining the perils of prolonged deep water diving to Navy [=SEALs=] who already know all about it (and are able to finish her sentences on the topic); though her explanation is used both for the audience's sake and to demonstrate that Coffey knows ''exactly'' what is happening to him and chooses to ignore it (in his defense, if things had gone according to plan they would have been on the sub back to the surface before his condition deteriorated badly).
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* MrExposition: [[MrExposition Ms. Exposition]]: Spends most of the early descent explaining the perils of prolonged deep water diving to Navy [=SEALs=] who already know all about it (and are able to finish her sentences on the topic); though her explanation is used both for the audience's sake and to demonstrate that Coffey knows ''exactly'' what is happening to him and chooses to ignore it (in his defense, if things had gone according to plan they would have been on the sub back to the surface before his condition deteriorated badly).
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* HumanityOnTrial: Horrified by the news and documentaries they gathered from TV of man's countless atrocities, the Builders decided to observe humans to see if there was anything redeemable about us. Fortunately for the mankind, when they learn of Bud and Lindsey Brigman's love for each other, they implement a BenevolentAlienInvasion and abort a FinalSolution plan.
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* HumanityOnTrial: Horrified by the news and documentaries they gathered from TV of man's countless atrocities, the Builders decided to observe humans to see if there was anything redeemable about us. Fortunately for the mankind, when they learn of Bud and Lindsey Brigman's love for each other, they implement a BenevolentAlienInvasion and abort a FinalSolution plan.
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* BenevolentAlienInvasion: Information gathering, archiving and the peaceful colonization of habitable oceans are their primary goals on Earth. They will ''not'' tolerate humans warring on each other.
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* BenevolentAlienInvasion: Information gathering, archiving and the peaceful colonization of habitable oceans are their primary goals on Earth.Earth, as it is across the galaxy. They will ''not'' tolerate humans warring on each other.
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* BeneloventAlienInvasion: Information gathering, archiving and the peaceful colonization of habitable oceans are their primary goals on Earth. They will ''not'' tolerate humans warring on each other.
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* BeneloventAlienInvasion: BenevolentAlienInvasion: Information gathering, archiving and the peaceful colonization of habitable oceans are their primary goals on Earth. They will ''not'' tolerate humans warring on each other.
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* HumanityOnTrial: Horrified by the news and documentaries they gathered from TV of man's countless atrocities, the Builders decided to observe humans to see if there was anything redeemable about us. Fortunately for the mankind, when they learn of Bud and Lindsey Brigman's love for each other, they implement a BeneloventAlienInvasion and abort a FinalSolution plan.
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* HumanityOnTrial: Horrified by the news and documentaries they gathered from TV of man's countless atrocities, the Builders decided to observe humans to see if there was anything redeemable about us. Fortunately for the mankind, when they learn of Bud and Lindsey Brigman's love for each other, they implement a BeneloventAlienInvasion BenevolentAlienInvasion and abort a FinalSolution plan.
