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* TeamMemberInTheAdaptation: In canon, Naruto was a member of Team 7. Here, he's instead a member of Team 8 by switching places with Kiba and Akamaru.
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* BadassAdorable: Shes very cute but a very competent shinobi who shouldn’t be underestimated.
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* BadassAdorable: Shes She's very cute cute, but a very competent shinobi who shouldn’t shouldn't be underestimated.
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* BreakTheHaughty: The failure of the Wave Country mission was hard on the entire team, as is what they go through in the Chunin Exams, including their being eliminated by the end of the first round.
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* CharacterDevelopment: Begins moving away from her Tsundere tendencies, tries to rebuild her friendship with Ino and begins taking a sincere, non-fangirl look at her attraction to Sasuke.
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* BoisterousBruiser: It wouldn’t be Gai if he wasn’t loud and dynamic.
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* {{JerkAss}}: Rude, arrogant, fatalistic and violent towards Hinata. He certainly earned his beat down with his actions.
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* BerserkButton: While Kakashi dances around the issue a bit, Asuma tells Hiashi point blank that if [[spoiler: he interrupts Kurenai's funeral to reprimand Hinata]], [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown he will not hesitate to beat the tar out of him.]]
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* BerserkButton: While Kakashi dances around the issue a bit, Asuma tells Hiashi point blank that if [[spoiler: he [[spoiler:he interrupts Kurenai's funeral to reprimand Hinata]], [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown he will not hesitate to beat the tar out of him.]]
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* BrilliantButLazy: It's the former TropeNamer, for crying out loud. [[spoiler: He actually manages to win his prelim match without moving from his starting stance, but gives it up, realizing Temari is up to something.]]
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* BrilliantButLazy: It's the former TropeNamer, for crying out loud. [[spoiler: He [[spoiler:He actually manages to win his prelim match without moving from his starting stance, but gives it up, realizing Temari is up to something.]]
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* TeenGenius: The best strategist in the village after his father and [[spoiler: like Shino, it was only a matter of time before he figured out what Naruto really was.]]
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* TeenGenius: The best strategist in the village after his father and [[spoiler: like [[spoiler:like Shino, it was only a matter of time before he figured out what Naruto really was.]]
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* ParentalAbandonment: His parents were killed by bandits, and he was taken in by Konoha. As such, [[spoiler: no one knows how he got the Byakugan]].
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* ParentalAbandonment: His parents were killed by bandits, and he was taken in by Konoha. As such, [[spoiler: no [[spoiler:no one knows how he got the Byakugan]].
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* GuileHero: Best seen in the Chuunin Exams arc, where he disguises himself and essentially cons several Hyuugas out of their money and investments. [[spoiler: He also, along with Kurenai and Sarutobi are trying to unravel the GovernmentConspiracy against Naruto.]]
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* GuileHero: Best seen in the Chuunin Exams arc, where he disguises himself and essentially cons several Hyuugas out of their money and investments. [[spoiler: He [[spoiler:He also, along with Kurenai and Sarutobi are trying to unravel the GovernmentConspiracy against Naruto.]]
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* HandicappedBadass: [[spoiler: Thanks to Haku's intervention, he escapes the fight with Orochimaru with his life and without his arm. [[SparedByTheAdaptation It's an acceptable sacrifice.]]]]
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* HandicappedBadass: [[spoiler: Thanks [[spoiler:Thanks to Haku's intervention, he escapes the fight with Orochimaru with his life and without his arm. [[SparedByTheAdaptation It's an acceptable sacrifice.]]]]
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* SternTeacher: To [[spoiler: Hinata]]. Though she already shows signs of being impressed.
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* SternTeacher: To [[spoiler: Hinata]].[[spoiler:Hinata]]. Though she already shows signs of being impressed.
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* ShoutOut: To ''{{Literature/Spellsinger}}''.
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* ShoutOut: To ''{{Literature/Spellsinger}}''.''Literature/{{Spellsinger}}''.
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* NaginatasAreFeminine: {{Averted|Trope}}. He wields one and is unambiguously male.
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* BladeOnAStick: Wields a naginata.
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* GagBoobs: Her assets are described as such in their girth.
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* LocalHangout: Moritake's Restaurant, where Kurenai later takes Team 8.
* OriginalCharacters: Never existed in the source.
* PosthumousCharacter: All three of them, besides Kurenai.
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* LocalHangout: Moritake's Restaurant, where Kurenai later takes Team 8.
* OriginalCharacters: Never existed in the source.
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* ProudScholarRaceGuy: They are described as a race that values wisdom above everything else.
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* ProudScholarRaceGuy: ProudScholarRace: They are described as a race that values wisdom above everything else.
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* TurtlePower: [[spoiler:Naruto]] acquires the [[spoiler:Turtle Contract from Guy.]]
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* TurtlePower: He uses turtles as his summon contract.
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* TurtlePower: Well he is a turtle.
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* KnifeNut: Kunai tend to appear in her hands when she's upset.
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* TurtlePower: Naruto acquires the [[spoiler:Turtle Contract from Guy.]]
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* TurtlePower: Naruto [[spoiler:Naruto]] acquires the [[spoiler:Turtle Contract from Guy.]]
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* MixedAncestry: His mother in this fic was born in Kiri.
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* RealityEnsues: Naruto, a good friend of his, [[ForWantOfANail advises him against hitting on Sakura]] because she's kind of a bitch. Lee listens.
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* ShameIfSomethingHappened: Takes this route to stop Hiashi from making a scene at [[spoiler:Kurenai's funeral]], outright stating that he knows a dozen ways to overpower eye-based bloodlines that he could hand over to the ninja academy.
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* YouAreWhatYouHate: Minor, but Kurenai is awfully quick to assume Naruto is being sexist on more than one occasion, and awfully nonchalant about her ability to "play to the male egos" of experienced fellow Jonin, for someone who claims to hate sexism so much.
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* ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies: When Kurenai demands to know why Jiraiya stayed out of Naruto's absolutely shitshow of a life despite being his godfather, Jiraiya points out that a child with connections to him ''would'' die, either by Jiraiya's enemies, or by Minato's ennemies putting two and two together about who Naruto is.
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* LogicalWeakness: As it turns out, water has the effect of weighing sand down, making it slower to respond to oncoming threats. Furthermore, even encasing himself in a hard shell of sand won't save Gaara from drowning if he finds himself suddenly immersed in a mire. Thus, Naruto is able to beat his seemingly impenetrable defenses through simple water jutsus.
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** ItsAllMyFault: Luckily, Naruto forgives him for it.
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** ItsAllMyFault: EasilyForgiven: Luckily, Naruto forgives him for it.
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* ObliviousToLove: Deconstructed. Hinata's shyness and his childhood means he doesn't notice the signs. [[spoiler:Kurenai spells it out for him [[DeadManWriting in a letter.]]]]
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* ObliviousToLove: Deconstructed. Hinata's shyness and his childhood means he doesn't notice the signs. [[spoiler:Kurenai Kurenai spells it out for him [[DeadManWriting [[spoiler:[[DeadManWriting in a letter.]]]]
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* [[spoiler:SpannerInTheWorks: To SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler:To Orochimaru.]]
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* {{Original Characters}}s: Never existed in the source.
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* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: In hindsight, the information given are different from what canon has given, in particular when she was a Genin herself.
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* ForWantOfANail[=/=]InSpiteOfTheNail: He’s paired against Gaara in the Chūnin Exams preliminaries here in canon, but thanks to Team 8's reconnaissance, he's not crippled by him thanks to Guy’s early intervention.
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* ForWantOfANail[=/=]InSpiteOfTheNail: ForWantOfANail[=/=]InSpiteOfANail: He’s paired against Gaara in the Chūnin Exams preliminaries here in canon, but thanks to Team 8's reconnaissance, he's not crippled by him thanks to Guy’s early intervention.
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* ForWantOfANail/InSpiteOfTheNail: ForWantOfANail[=/=]InSpiteOfTheNail: He’s paired against Gaara in the Chūnin Exams preliminaries, preliminaries here in canon, but thanks to Team 8's reconnaissance, he's not crippled by him thanks to Guy’s early intervention.
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* AscendedExtra: The other members due to Naruto taking Kiba and Akamaru’s spot on the team.
* DemotedToExtra: With the exception of Kiba and Akamaru partially due to the team swap.
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* DemotedToExtra: Asuma and Shikamaru become more important as the Exams wear on and even Choji has his moment in the sun. Ino, however, hasn't yet escaped this treatment.
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* DishingOutDirt: Naturally, his primary weapon is [[SandBuster sand]].
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* DishingOutDirt: Naturally, his primary weapon is [[SandBuster [[SandBlaster sand]].
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* [[spoiler: SparedByTheAdaptation: Sarutobi survives the fight with Orochimaru thanks to Haku.]]
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* [[spoiler: GovernmentConspiracy: Involved in two: the murder of Mattai, a non-Hyuuga possessor of the Byakugan and another that concerns Naruto.]]
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* [[spoiler: GovernmentConspiracy: Involved in two: the [[spoiler:the murder of Mattai, a non-Hyuuga possessor of the Byakugan and another that concerns Naruto.]]
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* [[spoiler:SoleSurvivor: Of the assassination of her old team]].
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The characters of ''Fanfic/Team8'' bear many similarities to their counterparts in ''Characters/Naruto'', but the altered story has also changed them in various ways.
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The characters of ''Fanfic/Team8'' bear many similarities to their counterparts in ''Characters/Naruto'', ''Characters/{{Naruto}}'', but the altered story has also changed them in various ways.
