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* TechnicolorEyes: Tortoiseshell eyes. Shall I explain further?
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* TechnicolorEyes: Tortoiseshell eyes. Shall I explain further?
further? Unless the author actually means that she has eyes colored like those of a tortoiseshell cat, which usually tend to be bright yellow or orange.
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* HasTwoMommies: [[spoiler:Moontree took her and Crimsonpaw in]]
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* HasTwoMommies: [[spoiler: R.I.P Crimsonpaw and Angelpaw's old parents...]]
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!Angelpaw
* AndThatsTerrible:
-->['''Firepaw''']: And Riverclan is holding her hostage!
-->['''Angelpaw''']: Oh no! That's terrible!
* TheChosenOne: She is told by Firepaw that [[spoiler:Crimsonpaw got kidnapped by Riverclan]], and then she starts running to rescue [[spoiler:Crimsonpaw]] without telling [[spoiler:Moontree or any other adult cat]].
* {{Emoticon}}: "You bet! I've been waiting for this day my whole life! :D"
* EnfanteTerrible: Angelpaw and Crimsonpaw's [[spoiler: parents died off due to unknown reasons]]
* {{The Hero}}es: [[spoiler:Angelpaw runs to rescue Crimsonpaw with Firepaw without telling anybody]]
* HappilyAdopted: [[spoiler:Moontree]] took her and Crimsonkit/paw in when [[spoiler:their biological parents, Quailfeather and Whitestar die mysteriously.]]
* HasTwoMommies: [[spoiler:Moontree took her and Crimsonpaw in]]
* IncorruptiblePurePureness
* LoveAtFirstSight: Angelpaw and [[spoiler:Firepaw]]
* LuminescentBlush: When Angelpaw [[spoiler: saw Firepaw]]
* MeaningfulName: Because of her snowy white pelt
* ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler:Her and Crimsonpaw's parents are dead.]]
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!Crimsonpaw
* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Crimsonpaw has '''red''' eyes despite being a '''black cat''', not an albino.
* BigNo: When Crimsonpaw's mentor was revealed to be [[spoiler: Marijuanaskin]].
* DamselInDistress: [[spoiler: After getting kidnapped by Riverclan]]
* EnfanteTerrible: When [[spoiler: Her and Angelpaw's parents die with no context]].
* {{The Hero}}es: Presumably.
* HappilyAdopted: [[spoiler:Moontree]], taking in her and Angelpaw
* HasTwoMommies: [[spoiler: R.I.P Crimsonpaw and Angelpaw's old parents...]]
* MeaningfulName: Because of her red eyes.
* ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler: Her and Angelpaw's parents are dead. Like, dead dead.]]
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Well...
* TechnicolorEyes: She has red eyes, despite being a black cat
* TheUnFavorite: At least to Rainstar.
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!Firepaw
* TheAce: Apparently, he's the most handsome and attractive apprentice in the forest.
* ChickMagnet: Firepaw, because of his good looks
* LoveAtFirstSight: Firepaw and [[spoiler: Angelpaw]].
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!Rainstar
* AmazingTechnicolorWildlife: "Rain-colored fur and blue eyes", anyone?
* CardCarryingVillain: Assigning herself to mentor [[spoiler: Angelpaw]], and then assigning [[spoiler: Marijuanaskin]] as [[spoiler: Crimsonpaw]]'s mentor.
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!Lightningstrike
* CaptainObvious:
-->'''Rainstar''': ...And your mentor will be... me!
-->'''Lightningstrike''': That's special!
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!Marchpoppy
* CardCarryingVillain: She [[spoiler: kidnapped Crimsonpaw and dragged her to the Riverclan camp]]
* [[spoiler: TheKidnapper: When kidnapping Crimsonpaw]]
* TechnicolorEyes: Tortoiseshell eyes. Shall I explain further?
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! Marijuanaskin
* AddledAddict: He has no hair because of his drug addiction. He is also said to be unfit to mentor [[spoiler: Crimsonpaw]] because of his addiction.
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!Angelpaw
* AndThatsTerrible:
-->['''Firepaw''']: And Riverclan is holding her hostage!
-->['''Angelpaw''']: Oh no! That's terrible!
* TheChosenOne: She is told by Firepaw that [[spoiler:Crimsonpaw got kidnapped by Riverclan]], and then she starts running to rescue [[spoiler:Crimsonpaw]] without telling [[spoiler:Moontree or any other adult cat]].
* {{Emoticon}}: "You bet! I've been waiting for this day my whole life! :D"
* EnfanteTerrible: Angelpaw and Crimsonpaw's [[spoiler: parents died off due to unknown reasons]]
* {{The Hero}}es: [[spoiler:Angelpaw runs to rescue Crimsonpaw with Firepaw without telling anybody]]
* HappilyAdopted: [[spoiler:Moontree]] took her and Crimsonkit/paw in when [[spoiler:their biological parents, Quailfeather and Whitestar die mysteriously.]]
* HasTwoMommies: [[spoiler:Moontree took her and Crimsonpaw in]]
* IncorruptiblePurePureness
* LoveAtFirstSight: Angelpaw and [[spoiler:Firepaw]]
* LuminescentBlush: When Angelpaw [[spoiler: saw Firepaw]]
* MeaningfulName: Because of her snowy white pelt
* ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler:Her and Crimsonpaw's parents are dead.]]
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!Crimsonpaw
* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Crimsonpaw has '''red''' eyes despite being a '''black cat''', not an albino.
* BigNo: When Crimsonpaw's mentor was revealed to be [[spoiler: Marijuanaskin]].
* DamselInDistress: [[spoiler: After getting kidnapped by Riverclan]]
* EnfanteTerrible: When [[spoiler: Her and Angelpaw's parents die with no context]].
* {{The Hero}}es: Presumably.
* HappilyAdopted: [[spoiler:Moontree]], taking in her and Angelpaw
* HasTwoMommies: [[spoiler: R.I.P Crimsonpaw and Angelpaw's old parents...]]
* MeaningfulName: Because of her red eyes.
* ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler: Her and Angelpaw's parents are dead. Like, dead dead.]]
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Well...
* TechnicolorEyes: She has red eyes, despite being a black cat
* TheUnFavorite: At least to Rainstar.
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!Firepaw
* TheAce: Apparently, he's the most handsome and attractive apprentice in the forest.
* ChickMagnet: Firepaw, because of his good looks
* LoveAtFirstSight: Firepaw and [[spoiler: Angelpaw]].
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!Rainstar
* AmazingTechnicolorWildlife: "Rain-colored fur and blue eyes", anyone?
* CardCarryingVillain: Assigning herself to mentor [[spoiler: Angelpaw]], and then assigning [[spoiler: Marijuanaskin]] as [[spoiler: Crimsonpaw]]'s mentor.
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!Lightningstrike
* CaptainObvious:
-->'''Rainstar''': ...And your mentor will be... me!
-->'''Lightningstrike''': That's special!
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!Marchpoppy
* CardCarryingVillain: She [[spoiler: kidnapped Crimsonpaw and dragged her to the Riverclan camp]]
* [[spoiler: TheKidnapper: When kidnapping Crimsonpaw]]
* TechnicolorEyes: Tortoiseshell eyes. Shall I explain further?
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! Marijuanaskin
* AddledAddict: He has no hair because of his drug addiction. He is also said to be unfit to mentor [[spoiler: Crimsonpaw]] because of his addiction.
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