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* BigBeautifulMan: Seen as this by Dylan.
* FormerlyFit: Was a lot less pudgy as Maura then as Paul.
* StoutStrength: Hey, Paul’s in the army.
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* TalkDarkandSnarky: Slips into this territory sometimes.
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* CharacterTics: Carries around an unlit cigarette in her mouth.
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* ImprobableHairstyle: Of the anachronistic variation, as she never puts gel in it and it just flips up on its own and never goes down.
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!Main Characters
[[folder:[=Maura=]]]
A somewhat stubborn yet intelligent girl who ends up as Paul when pulled from their home dimension, and the very likely reason Dylan hasn’t keeled over from fear yet.
* BigOlEyebrows: Ends up with these at the end of Chapter One, and is stuck with them for the rest of the story.
* DeadpanSnarker: Cracks a few of these every now and then.
* MeaningfulName[=/=]StealthPun: Maura is also the name of a city in Norway, which just so happened to be where they end up.
[[folder:[=Dylan=]]]
Gentle as a lamb ~~And as anxious as one too,~~ Dylan is Maura’s best friend who ends up as Patryck after quickly dozing off in class
* LeanAndMean: Largely subverted in that Maura is far more aggressive, although Dylan can have her moments of snark as well.
* MrFanservice: Is largely portrayed as being absolutely gorgeous in universe, [[HoYay mostly when the story enters Maura’s perspective for a bit.]]
* NiceGuy: As sweet as they come.
!Main Characters
[[folder:[=Maura=]]]
A somewhat stubborn yet intelligent girl who ends up as Paul when pulled from their home dimension, and the very likely reason Dylan hasn’t keeled over from fear yet.
* BigOlEyebrows: Ends up with these at the end of Chapter One, and is stuck with them for the rest of the story.
* DeadpanSnarker: Cracks a few of these every now and then.
* MeaningfulName[=/=]StealthPun: Maura is also the name of a city in Norway, which just so happened to be where they end up.
[[folder:[=Dylan=]]]
Gentle as a lamb ~~And as anxious as one too,~~ Dylan is Maura’s best friend who ends up as Patryck after quickly dozing off in class
* LeanAndMean: Largely subverted in that Maura is far more aggressive, although Dylan can have her moments of snark as well.
* MrFanservice: Is largely portrayed as being absolutely gorgeous in universe, [[HoYay mostly when the story enters Maura’s perspective for a bit.]]
* NiceGuy: As sweet as they come.
