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* RealMenLoveJesus: She's a devout Jewish practitioner, and no weaker for it.
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* RealMenLoveJesus: Or rather "Real Women Are Jewish". She's a devout Jewish practitioner, and no weaker for it.
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* AmbiguouslyGay: It's strongly implied that Naomi is a lesbian but heavily closeted, as she's not especially interested in Theo even apart from the fact that they're entering an arranged marriage, but ''is'' very interested in Aria.
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* AmbiguouslyGay: It's strongly implied that Naomi is a lesbian but heavily closeted, as she's not especially interested in Theo even apart from the fact that they're entering an arranged marriage, but ''is'' very interested in Aria. The "ambiguous" part is eventually subverted through Iakov's Interlude, which shows that she's truly closeted.
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* {{Determinator}}: As a manifestation of Struggle, they represent fighting to the bitter end.
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* {{Determinator}}: As a manifestation of Struggle, [[DoNotGoGentle they represent fighting to the bitter end. end.]]
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* AmbiguouslyGay: It's strongly implied that Naomi is a lesbian or other sort of female-attracted queer person but heavily closeted, as she's not especially interested in Theo even apart from the fact that they're entering an arranged marriage, but is ''is'' very interested in Aria.
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* ImprovisedWeapon: Has a special talent for finding a weapon in a pinch, and can pass the skill to Naomi via their familiar bond. .
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* {{Determinator}}: As a manifestation of Struggle, they represent fighting to the bitter end.
* ImprovisedWeapon: Has a special talent for finding a weapon in a pinch, and can pass the skill to Naomi via their familiar bond. .
* ImprovisedWeapon: Has a special talent for finding a weapon in a pinch, and can pass the skill to Naomi via their familiar bond.
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* BloodKnight: Iakov loves a good fight.
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* RascallyRabbit: Mostly to Naomi and her friends-- they take the form of a fare have a constant instinct to poke and prod at the powerful.
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* RascallyRabbit: Mostly to Naomi and her friends-- they take the form of a fare hare and have a constant instinct to poke and prod at the powerful.
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* AmbiguouslyGay: It's strongly implied that Naomi is a lesbian or other sort of female-attracted queer person but heavily closeted, as she's not especially interested in Theo even apart from the fact that they're entering an arranged marriage, but is very interested in Aria.
* TheMentor: She serves as Julian's primary teacher in Practice.
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* RealMenLoveJesus: She's a devout Jewish practitioner, and no weaker for it.
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The protagonist of Pass, an Orthodox Jewish practitioner of historic and heroic magic.
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The protagonist of Pass, ''Pass'', an Orthodox Jewish practitioner of historic and heroic magic.
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!! Naomi's Family and Friends
[[folder: Levi Cohen]]
Naomi's older brother. Works as an investigator and combat practitioner in the Cohen family.
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!! The Blancs
A powerful practitioner family centered in Queenslake, Maine. They make use of a wide variety of immaterial practices, particularly working with echoes, incarnations, and spiritual flows.
[[folder: Levi Cohen]]
Naomi's older brother. Works as an investigator and combat practitioner in the Cohen family.
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!! The Blancs
A powerful practitioner family centered in Queenslake, Maine. They make use of a wide variety of immaterial practices, particularly working with echoes, incarnations, and spiritual flows.
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* MustHaveCaffeine: She drinks coffee, sometimes multiple cups, whenever she reasonably can.
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The protagonist of Pass, an Orthodox Jewish practitioner of historic and heroic magic. She's
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!! Naomi's Family and Friends
[[folder: Levi Cohen]]
Naomi's older brother. Works as an investigator and combat practitioner in the Cohen family.
[[/folder]]
!! The Blancs
A powerful practitioner family centered in Queenslake, Maine. They make use of a wide variety of immaterial practices, particularly working with echoes, incarnations, and spiritual flows.
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!! Main Characters
[[folder:Naomi Cohen]]
The protagonist of Pass, an Orthodox Jewish practitioner of historic and heroic magic. She's
* DoesNotLikeMen: Downplayed. Being an Orthodox Jew, she's been raised to limit close interactions with men, and is uncomfortable when alone with men as a result. It makes it difficult for her to get close to Theodore.
* JewishAndNerdy: Devoutly Jewish, and a practitioner whose practice involves close study of history. She has a tendency to go off on long tangents about history, her practice, and the intersections thereof.
* MagicalEye: Her Sight is extremely strong and in-depth, allowing her to analyze connections, emotions, major incarnate forces, and even look backwards in time.
* PowersViaPossession: She can channel the skills and personalities of long-dead Names to fight, learn, or socialize better.
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[[folder:Iakov]]
Naomi's familiar, a Pawn of Struggle who takes the form of a hare.
* ImprovisedWeapon: Has a special talent for finding these when they need, and can pass it to Naomi.
* NoBiologicalSex: They're a sexless Other.
* RascallyRabbit: Mostly to Naomi and her friends-- they have a constant instinct to poke and prod at the powerful.
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!! Main Characters
[[folder:Naomi Cohen]]
The protagonist of Pass, an Orthodox Jewish practitioner of historic and heroic magic. She's
* DoesNotLikeMen: Downplayed. Being an Orthodox Jew, she's been raised to limit close interactions with men, and is uncomfortable when alone with men as a result. It makes it difficult for her to get close to Theodore.
* JewishAndNerdy: Devoutly Jewish, and a practitioner whose practice involves close study of history. She has a tendency to go off on long tangents about history, her practice, and the intersections thereof.
* MagicalEye: Her Sight is extremely strong and in-depth, allowing her to analyze connections, emotions, major incarnate forces, and even look backwards in time.
* PowersViaPossession: She can channel the skills and personalities of long-dead Names to fight, learn, or socialize better.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Iakov]]
Naomi's familiar, a Pawn of Struggle who takes the form of a hare.
* ImprovisedWeapon: Has a special talent for finding these when they need, and can pass it to Naomi.
* NoBiologicalSex: They're a sexless Other.
* RascallyRabbit: Mostly to Naomi and her friends-- they have a constant instinct to poke and prod at the powerful.
[[/folder]]
