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* MiscarriageOfJustice: [[spoiler: After the El Cheese Market gang rioted on day 2, killing 6 guards, Solev falsely believed that they had masterminded the attack because [=ST0RMINGHELL=] was running ahead of the rioters as they launched their attack, not knowing that [=ST0RMINGHELL=] had no idea about these actions. As a result, Solev slowly had them rounded and executed for not admitting to the crime, causing the prison to become even more discontent with the prison administration, including several guards who knew the Mafia better.]]
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* MiscarriageOfJustice: [[spoiler: After the El Cheese Market gang rioted on day 2, killing 6 guards, Solev falsely believed that they had masterminded the attack because [=ST0RMINGHELL=] was running ahead of the rioters as they launched their attack, mobbed the guards, not knowing that [=ST0RMINGHELL=] had no idea about these actions.was simply running away from the chaos. As a result, Solev slowly had them rounded and executed for not admitting to the crime, causing the prison to become even more discontent with the prison administration, including several guards who knew the Mafia better.]]
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* MiscarriageOfJustice: [[spoiler: After the El Cheese Market gang rioted on day 2, killing 6 guards, Solev falsely believed that they had masterminded the attack because [=ST0RMINGHELL=] was running ahead of the rioters as they launched their attack, not knowing that [=ST0RMINGHELL=] had no idea about these actions. As a result, Solev slowly had them rounded and executed for not admitting to the crime, causing the prison to become even more discontent with the prison administration, including several guards who knew the Mafia better.]]
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* NonIndicativeName: Despite being called [[TheMafia a mafia]], they rarely actually threatened or signed protection deals with people in the prison, instead mostly telling people to not snitch, organizing resistance against guards and hostile gangs, [[NeighbourhoodFriendlyGangsters being popular with the prison community as a result]], and [[spoiler: getting rounded up and executed by Solev because he mistakenly believed they masterminded the attack led by the El Cheeze Market gang]].
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* NonIndicativeName: Despite being called [[TheMafia a mafia]], they rarely actually threatened or signed protection deals with people in the prison, instead mostly telling people to not snitch, organizing resistance against guards and hostile gangs, [[NeighbourhoodFriendlyGangsters being popular with the prison community as a result]], and [[spoiler: getting rounded up and executed by Solev because he mistakenly believed they masterminded the attack led by the El Cheeze Cheese Market gang]].
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!El Cheeze Market
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!El Cheeze Cheese Market
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* RecurringElement: Davarit is also associately closely with the rest of the Amazon members, though usually as a second in command of whatever element they are a part of.
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* RecurringElement: RecurringExtra: Davarit is is, just like Zombta, also associately associated closely with the rest of the Amazon members, though usually as a second in command background second-in-command of whatever element group they are a part of. of, and he tends to not show up for very long in all but the most recent episode.
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* NonIndicativeName: Not actually a alliance of cheese sellers, but rather a [[spoiler: group of murderous criminals seeking to massacre as many guards as they could get their hands on.]]
%% You wouldn't expect a game with such a silly name to be any more than a footnote, but [[spoiler: [[SmallRoleBigImpact they single-handedly caused the prison to slide into chaos]] by causing a riot that killed many guards, which massively increased tensions on the server.]] %%example for a different trope that I may be able to add later
%% You wouldn't expect a game with such a silly name to be any more than a footnote, but [[spoiler: [[SmallRoleBigImpact they single-handedly caused the prison to slide into chaos]] by causing a riot that killed many guards, which massively increased tensions on the server.]] %%example for a different trope that I may be able to add later
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* NeighbourhoodFriendlyGangsters: Were very popular with the prisoners, despite being a --[[ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything purportedly]] -- criminal conglomerate, which made them very mad when [[spoiler: Solev took to scapegoating them for the El Cheeze Market riot.]]
* ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything: Despite purporting to be [[TheMafia a mafia]], they rarely actually threatened or signed protection deals with people in the prison, instead mostly telling people to not snitch, [[NeighbourhoodFriendlyGangsters being popular with the prison community]], and [[spoiler: getting rounded up and executed by Solev on false assumption they were behind the major gang attack led by the El Cheeze Market gang]].
* ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything: Despite purporting to be [[TheMafia a mafia]], they rarely actually threatened or signed protection deals with people in the prison, instead mostly telling people to not snitch, [[NeighbourhoodFriendlyGangsters being popular with the prison community]], and [[spoiler: getting rounded up and executed by Solev on false assumption they were behind the major gang attack led by the El Cheeze Market gang]].
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* NeighbourhoodFriendlyGangsters: Were very popular with the prisoners, despite being a --[[ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything purportedly]] -- criminal conglomerate, which made due to banding them very mad when together against abusive guards and hostile gangs, while avoiding abusive behavior themselves. Thus, [[spoiler: when Solev took to scapegoating blamed them for starting the El Cheeze Market riot.riot on day 2, many prisoners objected, greatly contributing to the discontent festering within the prison.]]
*ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything: NonIndicativeName: Despite purporting to be being called [[TheMafia a mafia]], they rarely actually threatened or signed protection deals with people in the prison, instead mostly telling people to not snitch, organizing resistance against guards and hostile gangs, [[NeighbourhoodFriendlyGangsters being popular with the prison community]], community as a result]], and [[spoiler: getting rounded up and executed by Solev on false assumption because he mistakenly believed they were behind masterminded the major gang attack led by the El Cheeze Market gang]].
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* NeighbourhoodFriendlyGangsters: Were very popular with the prisoners, despite being a --[[ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything purportedly]] -- criminal conglomerate, which made them very mad when [[spoiler: Solev took to scapegoating them for the El Cheeze Market riot.]]
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* NeighbourhoodFriendlyGangsters: Were very popular with the prisoners, despite being a --[[ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything purportedly]] -- criminal conglomerate, which made them very mad when [[spoiler: Solev took to scapegoating them for the El Cheeze Market riot.]]
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* NeighbourhoodFriendlyGangsters: Were very popular with the prisoners, despite being a --[[ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything purportedly]] -- criminal conglomerate, which made them very mad UnfortunateNames: Elanuelo [[invoked]] [[{{Corpsing}} audibly laughed when [[spoiler: Solev took describing their name to scapegoating them for the El Cheeze Market riot.]]Ish.]] Ish's thoughts?
--> ''[[ActuallyPrettyFunny "Nice"]]''
--> ''[[ActuallyPrettyFunny "Nice"]]''
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* ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything: Despite purporting to be [[TheMafia a mafia]], they rarely actually threatened or signed protection deals with people in the prison, instead mostly telling people to not snitch, [[FriendlyNeighborhoodGangsters being popular with the prison community]], and [[spoiler: getting rounded up and executed by Solev on false assumption they were behind the major gang attack led by the El Cheeze Market gang]].
* FriendlyNeighborhoodGangsters: Were very popular with the prisoners, despite being a --[[ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything purportedly]] -- criminal conglomerate, which made them very mad when [[spoiler: Solev took to scapegoating them for the El Cheeze Market riot.]]
* FriendlyNeighborhoodGangsters: Were very popular with the prisoners, despite being a --[[ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything purportedly]] -- criminal conglomerate, which made them very mad when [[spoiler: Solev took to scapegoating them for the El Cheeze Market riot.]]
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* ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything: Despite purporting to be [[TheMafia a mafia]], they rarely actually threatened or signed protection deals with people in the prison, instead mostly telling people to not snitch, [[FriendlyNeighborhoodGangsters [[NeighbourhoodFriendlyGangsters being popular with the prison community]], and [[spoiler: getting rounded up and executed by Solev on false assumption they were behind the major gang attack led by the El Cheeze Market gang]].
*FriendlyNeighborhoodGangsters: NeighbourhoodFriendlyGangsters: Were very popular with the prisoners, despite being a --[[ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything purportedly]] -- criminal conglomerate, which made them very mad when [[spoiler: Solev took to scapegoating them for the El Cheeze Market riot.]]
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* ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything: Despite purporting to be [[TheMafia a mafia]], they rarely actually threatened or signed protection deals with people in the prison, instead mostly telling people to not snitch, [[FriendlyNeighborhoodGangsters being popular with the prison community]], and [[spoiler: getting rounded up and executed by Solev on false assumption they were behind the major gang attack led by the El Cheeze Market gang]].
* FriendlyNeighborhoodGangsters: Were very popular with the prisoners, despite being a --[[ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything purportedly]] -- criminal conglomerate, which made them very mad when [[spoiler: Solev took to scapegoating them for the El Cheeze Market riot.]]
* FriendlyNeighborhoodGangsters: Were very popular with the prisoners, despite being a --[[ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything purportedly]] -- criminal conglomerate, which made them very mad when [[spoiler: Solev took to scapegoating them for the El Cheeze Market riot.]]
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* DisneyVillainDeath: [[spoiler: [[{{Irony}} Ironically]], given that he was a ReasonableAuthorityFigure, but, just as he was making his final statements in his speech about [=BoyJedi's=] rehabilitation, he stepped close to the edge of the balcony, and [[BitchInSheepsClothing BoyJedi]] punched him off the ledge to his demise in the courtyard down below in front of all of the prisoners.]]
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* NotSoStoic: Despite usually presenting an unemotional facade (even if he's a DeadpanSnarker), Solev reacted badly to [[spoiler: Ish opening the prison gates on him due to lack of funding, letting out a BigWhat before sending out the guards to contain the incident]].
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* DecapitatedArmy: [[spoiler: After dying an UndignifiedDeath, his army immediately abandons their attack plans on the Volcano, running off into the Jungle, giving up on the CivilWar and, as revealed in supplemental videos, went off raiding other states instead.]]
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-->-- "I was hungry"
* UndignifiedDeath: [[spoiler: During his attack on the volcano base, he managed to catch a lone jungle member out on one of the steep slopes of the mountain, getting some good hits in. However, he chases him a little too zealously, and accidentally flies down the mountain's slope, forcing him to pull out his water bucket. He then manages to ''[[EpicFail miss]]'' a [[SoftWater water bucket clutch]], causing him to die to fall damage, all while in the sight of pretty much all of the Jungle members. His army quickly surrenders and disbands afterward, [[CurbStompBattle having caused no casualties in the process]].]]
* UndignifiedDeath: [[spoiler: During his attack on the volcano base, he managed to catch a lone jungle member out on one of the steep slopes of the mountain, getting some good hits in. However, he chases him a little too zealously, and accidentally flies down the mountain's slope, forcing him to pull out his water bucket. He then manages to ''[[EpicFail miss]]'' a [[SoftWater water bucket clutch]], causing him to die to fall damage, all while in the sight of pretty much all of the Jungle members. His army quickly surrenders and disbands afterward, [[CurbStompBattle having caused no casualties in the process]].]]
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-->-- "I '"I was hungry"
hungry"'
* UndignifiedDeath: [[spoiler: During his attack on the volcano base, he managed to catch a lone jungle member out on one of the steep slopes of the mountain,getting "getting some good hits in. in." However, he chases him a little too zealously, and accidentally flies down the mountain's slope, forcing him to pull out his water bucket. He then manages to ''[[EpicFail miss]]'' a [[SoftWater water bucket clutch]], causing him to die to fall damage, all while in the sight of pretty much all of the Jungle members. His army quickly surrenders and disbands afterward, [[CurbStompBattle having caused no casualties in the process]].]]
* UndignifiedDeath: [[spoiler: During his attack on the volcano base, he managed to catch a lone jungle member out on one of the steep slopes of the mountain,
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