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* [[spoiler: WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds]]: Is revealed to be one in Memory.
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* [[spoiler: WeHardlyKnewYe: He doesn't even get a single line before his death.]]
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* [[spoiler: ShotgunWedding: To be fair, [[spoiler:Granted, it's implied that he forced her to marry him]].
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* [[spoiler: ShotgunWedding: It's implied that (one of the reasons) why she hates her life is that her husband forced her to marry him.]]
* [[spoiler: [[JerkassHasAPoint Villain Has A Point]]: Implied, see above.]]
* [[spoiler: WouldHurtAChild: More like "Would kill her own children".]]
* [[spoiler: Big Bad]]: Revealed to be so at the end of Toxic.
* [[spoiler: ShotgunWedding: It's implied that (one of the reasons) why she hates her life is that her husband forced her to marry him.]]
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* NamesTheSame: [[spoiler: Alice shares the same name with the BigBad of the story]].
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* NamesTheSame: [[spoiler: Alice shares the same name with the BigBad of the story]].
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!!''David Kelley''
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* KickTheDog: Her speciality [[spoiler: since everyone from her childhood did it to her first]].
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** [[spoiler: He is also given a rather sorrowful one from Imaginary!Uncle Grandpa at the end of Memory.]]
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* NiceGuy
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*[[spoiler: [[WhatTheHellHero What The Heck, Hero?]]: He calls Pizza Steve out for killing his dad.]]
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*[[spoiler: Like Father, Like Son: Because both of them get killed by Pizza Steve.]]
* NiceGuy
*[[spoiler: RoaringRampageOfRevenge: He decides to kill off Pizza Steve to avenge his dad.]]
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* [[spoiler: WouldHurtAChild: More like "Would kill her own children".]]
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*PetTheDog: Alice instantly forgives Pizza Steve for killing her dad]].
*NamesTheSame: [[spoiler: Alice shares the same name with the BigBad of the story]].
*{{NiceGirl}}s: They where very friendly to Pizza Steve when he visited them and their mother.
* [[spoiler: WouldHurtAChild: More like "Would kill her own children".]]
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*[[spoiler: {{KillTheCutie}}s]]
*PetTheDog: Alice instantly forgives Pizza Steve for killing her dad]].
*NamesTheSame: [[spoiler: Alice shares the same name with the BigBad of the story]].
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* [[spoiler: TheGhost: Not literally, but it wouldn't be surprising if this fanfic took that turn.]]
* [[spoiler: WeHardlyKnewYe: He doesn't even get a single line before his death.]]
[[WMG: Laura Oliver]]
*[[spoiler: AbusiveParents: She poisons both her daughters....due to hating her life apparently.]]
*[[spoiler: ShotgunWedding: It's implied that (one of the reasons) why she hates her life is that her husband forced her to marry him.]]
*[[spoiler: [[JerkassHasAPoint Villain Has A Point]]: Implied, see above.]]
* [[spoiler: TheGhost: Not literally, but it wouldn't be surprising if this fanfic took that turn.]]
* [[spoiler: WeHardlyKnewYe: He doesn't even get a single line before his death.]]
[[WMG: Laura Oliver]]
*[[spoiler: AbusiveParents: She poisons both her daughters....due to hating her life apparently.]]
*[[spoiler: ShotgunWedding: It's implied that (one of the reasons) why she hates her life is that her husband forced her to marry him.]]
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[[WMG: Andy]]
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[[WMG: Andy]]
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* AntiHero: Sympathetic, yes, but also a serial killer.
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* TookALevelInKindness: In [[WesternAnimation/UncleGrandpa the show he came from]], he was a bit of a jerk and infamously cried over his ice cream rather than Mr. Gus' "death", here he feels absolutely horrible for his crimes and even cries about the mere thought of letting the rest of the gang down.
* WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler: He is given a rather sorrowful one from Imaginary!Uncle Grandpa at the end of "Memory".]]
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* TookALevelInKindness: In [[WesternAnimation/UncleGrandpa the show he came from]], he was a bit of a jerk and infamously cried over his ice cream rather than Mr. Gus' "death", here "death". Here he feels absolutely horrible for his crimes and even cries about the mere thought of letting the rest of the gang down.
* WhatTheHellHero:[[spoiler: He has done plenty of horrible things throughout the story, but has his reasons.
**[[spoiler: He is given a rather sorrowful one from Imaginary!Uncle Grandpa at the end of"Memory".Memory.]]
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The one who controls Pizza Steve's mind like a puppeteer. [[spoiler: Alice]] is a immortal being who is mysterious with an unknown origin. She is sadistic, cruel, and manipulative to the poor pizza slice. She might have a special plan that may be uncovered in the fanfic.
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* TookALevelInKindness: In [[WesternAnimation/UncleGrandpa the show he came from]], he was a bit of a jerk and infamously cried over Ice Cream his ice cream rather than Mr. Gus' "death", here he feels absolutely horrible for his crimes and even cries about the mere thought of letting the rest of the gang down.
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* WhatTheHellHero?: See HeroicBSOD above.
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* HeroicBSOD: Has plenty of this these in the fanfic.
fanfic, since he's forced [[spoiler: by Alice]] to kill innocent people.
*WhatTheHellHero?: See HeroicBSOD above.
TookALevelInKindness: In [[WesternAnimation/UncleGrandpa the show he came from]], he was a bit of a jerk and infamously cried over Ice Cream rather than Mr. Gus' "death", here he feels absolutely horrible for his crimes and even cries about the mere thought of letting the rest of the gang down.
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The one who controls Pizza Steve's mind like a puppeteer. [[spoiler: Alice]] is a immortal being who is mysterious with an unknown origin.She is sadistic, cruel, and manipulative to the poor pizza slice. She might have a special plan that may be uncovered in the fanfic.fanfic.
*BigBad
*{{Expy}}: [[spoiler: Justified, since she was a fan of fairy tales growing up and was convinced that she really was the title character of ''Literature/AliceInWonderland''.]]
*NoSympathy: She couldn't give a flying cow pie about Pizza Steve's misery.
*[[spoiler: [[MadeOutToBeAJerkass Made Out To Be a Jerk]]: Everyone she knew turned against her and even banned her from the school play just for defending herself against a mean girl at school.]]
*[[spoiler: UsedToBeASweetKid]]
*[[spoiler: WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds]]: Is revealed to be one in "Memory".
*BigBad
*{{Expy}}: [[spoiler: Justified, since she was a fan of fairy tales growing up and was convinced that she really was the title character of ''Literature/AliceInWonderland''.]]
*NoSympathy: She couldn't give a flying cow pie about Pizza Steve's misery.
*[[spoiler: [[MadeOutToBeAJerkass Made Out To Be a Jerk]]: Everyone she knew turned against her and even banned her from the school play just for defending herself against a mean girl at school.]]
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Pizza Steve is the victim behind [[spoiler: Alice's]] schemes. Sure he did some bad things like murder and robbery, but deep down, he doesn't want to do it and usually hids his secret from his friends.
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Pizza Steve is the victim behind [[spoiler: Alice's]] schemes. Sure he did some bad things like murder and robbery, but deep down, he doesn't want to do it and usually hids hides his secret from his friends.friends.
* AnthropomorphicFood
*SympatheticMurderer: He was forced to kill people and of course he didn't wanted to do so.
*HeroicBSOD: Has plenty of this in the fanfic.
*WhatTheHellHero?: See HeroicBSOD above.
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The one who controls Pizza Steve's mind like a puppeteer. [[spoiler: Alice]] is a immortal being who is mysterious with an unknown origin.She is sadistic, cruel, and manipulative to the poor pizza slice. She might have a special plan that may be uncovered in the fanfic.
* AnthropomorphicFood
*SympatheticMurderer: He was forced to kill people and of course he didn't wanted to do so.
*HeroicBSOD: Has plenty of this in the fanfic.
*WhatTheHellHero?: See HeroicBSOD above.
[[WMG: [[spoiler: Alice the Wonder]]]]
The one who controls Pizza Steve's mind like a puppeteer. [[spoiler: Alice]] is a immortal being who is mysterious with an unknown origin.She is sadistic, cruel, and manipulative to the poor pizza slice. She might have a special plan that may be uncovered in the fanfic.
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These are the characters of Inner Demon that are either sympathetic or sadistically evil.
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Pizza Steve is the victim behind [[spoiler: Alice's]] schemes. Sure he did some bad things like murder and robbery, but deep down, he doesn't want to do it and usually hids his secret from his friends.