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** Her Ephermal Dream skill was buffed via Rank Up Quest for "Ordeal Call II" to add a self-NP battery of 30~50%, helping to better supplement her offensive nature.
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** Her Ephermal Ephemeral Dream skill was buffed via Rank Up Quest for "Ordeal Call II" to add a self-NP battery of 30~50%, helping to better supplement 30~50%. This makes her offensive nature.compatible with the double Koyanskaya strategy, letting her farm odd 1-1-1 fights as well as generally making it easier to blast her foes with her Noble Phantasm as soon as possible.
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* BlackSwordsAreBetter: Played With. Her version of La Pucelle is a black sword to vanilla Jeanne's silver, and while it's not an EX-Rank NP that can annihilate anything, it's still incredibly destructive one that doesn't kill her after one use.
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* BlackSwordsAreBetter: Played With.Zigzagged. Her version of La Pucelle is a black sword to vanilla Jeanne's silver, and while it's not an EX-Rank NP that can annihilate anything, it's still incredibly destructive one that doesn't kill her after one use.
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* {{Catchphrase}}: "Wait and hope" ("Attendre et espérer"), which originally was part of the closing thoughts from the novel.
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* {{Catchphrase}}: CharacterCatchphrase: "Wait and hope" ("Attendre et espérer"), which originally was part of the closing thoughts from the novel.
* ArmorIsUseless: Jeanne Alter sheds more and more of her armor as she ascends until she's left with nothing but a black dress, gauntlets, and greaves by her Third and Final Ascensions even though she has greater HP and Attack. She's never shown to suffer any loss of defense from wearing modern clothes either.
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* LighterAndSofter: Despite being summoned in the Avenger Class, the playable Jeanne Alter is this to the antagonist Ruler Jeanne Alter fought in the "First Singularity: Hundred Years' War of the Evil Dragons: Orleans". Ruler Jeanne Alter was stoic and cold compared to the much more emotive and funny playable Jeanne Alter. The most obvious sign of this is Avenger Jeanne Alter has an ahoge that the Ruler variant is missing.
** In a way she ironically can be considered this to the original Jeanne, since due to not having any of Jeanne's memories it means Jeanne Alter has no experiences going to war, or even being burned at the stake, and despite her crass nature does have a more innocent way of viewing things than the original Jeanne does, this is even lampshaded with the "Three Little Jeannes" story in Salem where Jeanne Alter spends the story acting as the StraightMan to Jeanne's violent antics.
--->'''Jeanne''': "Not yet! I won't run away after merely having my castle burned down! This time, I shall vanquish them!"
--->'''Jeanne Alter''': "Kinda weird that she's the most bloodthirsty of all of us, don'tcha think?"
** In a way she ironically can be considered this to the original Jeanne, since due to not having any of Jeanne's memories it means Jeanne Alter has no experiences going to war, or even being burned at the stake, and despite her crass nature does have a more innocent way of viewing things than the original Jeanne does, this is even lampshaded with the "Three Little Jeannes" story in Salem where Jeanne Alter spends the story acting as the StraightMan to Jeanne's violent antics.
--->'''Jeanne''': "Not yet! I won't run away after merely having my castle burned down! This time, I shall vanquish them!"
--->'''Jeanne Alter''': "Kinda weird that she's the most bloodthirsty of all of us, don'tcha think?"
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** Despite being summoned in the Avenger Class, the playable Jeanne Alter is this to the antagonist Ruler Jeanne Alter fought in the "First Singularity: Hundred Years' War of the Evil Dragons: Orleans". Ruler Jeanne Alter was stoic and cold compared to the much more emotive and funny playable Jeanne Alter. The most obvious sign of this is Avenger Jeanne Alter has an ahoge that the Ruler variant is missing.
** In a way she ironically can be considered this to the original Jeanne, since due to not having any of Jeanne's memories it means Jeanne Alter has no experiences going towar, war or even being burned at the stake, and despite stake. Despite her crass nature nature, Jeanne Alter does have a more innocent way of viewing things than the original Jeanne does, this is even lampshaded with the "Three Little Jeannes" story in Salem where Jeanne Alter spends the story acting as the StraightMan to Jeanne's violent antics.
--->'''Jeanne''':"Not Not yet! I won't run away after merely having my castle burned down! This time, I shall vanquish them!"
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--->'''Jeanne Alter''':"Kinda Kinda weird that she's the most bloodthirsty of all of us, don'tcha think?"think?
** Despite being summoned in the Avenger Class, the playable Jeanne Alter is this to the antagonist Ruler Jeanne Alter fought in the "First Singularity: Hundred Years' War of the Evil Dragons: Orleans". Ruler Jeanne Alter was stoic and cold compared to the much more emotive and funny playable Jeanne Alter. The most obvious sign of this is Avenger Jeanne Alter has an ahoge that the Ruler variant is missing.
** In a way she ironically can be considered this to the original Jeanne, since due to not having any of Jeanne's memories it means Jeanne Alter has no experiences going to
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* SupernaturalGoldenEyes: Like Saber Alter before her, Jeanne Alter's eyes are a shining gold to distinguish her from her original counterpart, who has InnocentBlueEyes to match her saintliness.
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* CatchPhrase: ItCantBeHelped.
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* CatchPhrase: ItCantBeHelped.CharacterCatchPhrase: Like her original Archer version, it's "Shikata ga nai." or "ItCantBeHelped."
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* {{Catchphrase}}: The Genji must die. It doubles as her MadnessMantra, as she repeats it constantly in most of her lines.
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* DopplegangerAttack: In her Third Ascension, she clones herself multiple times to attack her opponent from all sides for her Quick and Extra attack animations in a replication of Ushiwakamaru's Dan-no-ura Hassou Tobi as depicted in ''Anime/FateGrandOrderAbsoluteDemonicFrontBabylonia''.
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->''"I am the avenger! The King of the Cavern, the Count of Monte Cristo! --- Oh dear. There's a limit to being out of the norm, looking at this."''
-->'''--Summon line before clearing Ordeal Call 2'''
->''"... Good grief, you surprise me. I doubted my eyes about what was happening. But, fine then. If you truly request it from your heart! It will only be for the slight time until I disappear, but these flames ---You may use them to your heart's content!"''
-->'''--Summon line after clearing Ordeal Call 2'''
-->'''--Summon line before clearing Ordeal Call 2'''
->''"... Good grief, you surprise me. I doubted my eyes about what was happening. But, fine then. If you truly request it from your heart! It will only be for the slight time until I disappear, but these flames ---You may use them to your heart's content!"''
-->'''--Summon line after clearing Ordeal Call 2'''
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Another version of the Counter of Monte Cristo, Edmond Dantes. He debuted in Ordeal Call II: Id - Irreparable Wasteland Hole as the main antagonist.
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Another version of the Counter Count of Monte Cristo, Edmond Dantes. He debuted in Ordeal Call II: Id - Irreparable Wasteland Hole as the main antagonist.
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-> '''Voiced by''': Creator/NobunagaShimazaki\\
'''Illustrated by ''': Usagi Routo
Another version of the Counter of Monte Cristo, Edmond Dantes. He debuted in Ordeal Call II: Id - Irreparable Wasteland Hole as the main antagonist.
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* ArcVillain: For the second Ordeal Call, handily outdoing his rival Cagliostro, being the one responsible for the Singularity's existence and the protagonist's torment... all so they can achieve the Avenger Complex Breakthrough and he can get rid of Cagliostro.
* BadassInANiceSuit: Like his previous form, the Count is once again in a very dashing suit for his earlier Ascensions.
* BigGood: In addition to creating the Singularity, he ''wants'' the protagonist to solve it and punish him for his crimes, which he subtly guides them towards doing... and he wants to lure in Cagliostro all so he can destroy the Singularity with both of them in it.
* DarkIsEvil: Likely an invoked example, considering his final goal is to have the Master strike him down in hatred and allow him to destroy both himself and Cagliostro.
* FinalBoss: The Avenger Complex Breakthrough is essentially already obtained by defeating his Final Ascension. The icing on the cake is when he actually assists the Master in defeating Cagliostro too, making the latter more of a PostFinalBoss.
* OneWingedAngel: For his FinalBoss fight, he uses his Final Ascension, a far more menacing, powerful, and complex design than his previous ones.
* SwappedRoles: This version of Edmond Dantes is actually the same one summoned by Goetia in the Prison Tower Event, who has been working in the background to ensure the protagonist's mental security, while a different version summoned by Chaldea assists in fighting. However, since Id occurs inside of the protagonist's mind, the mental Dantes takes center-stage as a fighter and mastermind of the plot, while the physical Dantes is limited in how much aid he can provide.
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-> '''Voiced by''': Creator/NobunagaShimazaki\\
'''Illustrated by ''': Usagi Routo
Another version of the Counter of Monte Cristo, Edmond Dantes. He debuted in Ordeal Call II: Id - Irreparable Wasteland Hole as the main antagonist.
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* ArcVillain: For the second Ordeal Call, handily outdoing his rival Cagliostro, being the one responsible for the Singularity's existence and the protagonist's torment... all so they can achieve the Avenger Complex Breakthrough and he can get rid of Cagliostro.
* BadassInANiceSuit: Like his previous form, the Count is once again in a very dashing suit for his earlier Ascensions.
* BigGood: In addition to creating the Singularity, he ''wants'' the protagonist to solve it and punish him for his crimes, which he subtly guides them towards doing... and he wants to lure in Cagliostro all so he can destroy the Singularity with both of them in it.
* DarkIsEvil: Likely an invoked example, considering his final goal is to have the Master strike him down in hatred and allow him to destroy both himself and Cagliostro.
* FinalBoss: The Avenger Complex Breakthrough is essentially already obtained by defeating his Final Ascension. The icing on the cake is when he actually assists the Master in defeating Cagliostro too, making the latter more of a PostFinalBoss.
* OneWingedAngel: For his FinalBoss fight, he uses his Final Ascension, a far more menacing, powerful, and complex design than his previous ones.
* SwappedRoles: This version of Edmond Dantes is actually the same one summoned by Goetia in the Prison Tower Event, who has been working in the background to ensure the protagonist's mental security, while a different version summoned by Chaldea assists in fighting. However, since Id occurs inside of the protagonist's mind, the mental Dantes takes center-stage as a fighter and mastermind of the plot, while the physical Dantes is limited in how much aid he can provide.
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* ThePowerOfHate: Avengers, as their name implies, are fueled by hatred and [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge a lust for revenge]] so intense they'd destroy the world to attain it. Only their [[MoralityPet Masters and whoever else they still cherish in spite of their rage]] can keep them from going on a rampage. Their Avenger class skill is The Power of Hate weaponized, making them more powerful the more hatred others have for them.
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* ThePowerOfHate: Avengers, as their name implies, are fueled by hatred and [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge a lust for revenge]] so intense they'd destroy the world to attain it. Only their [[MoralityPet Masters and whoever else they still cherish in spite of their rage]] can keep them from going on a rampage. Their Avenger class skill is The Power of Hate weaponized, making them more powerful the more hatred others have for them. [[spoiler:This is ultimately why the Avengers choose to leave Chaldea at the end of Ordeal Call II, as their methods and motives don't align with the Protagonist's hopeful outlook and they don't want the Protagonist to become like them.]]
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* LostInTranslation: In the original Japanese version of the game Jeanne Alter calls Ritsuka "Master-Chan" as an AffectionateNickname, this isn't present in translations most likely because it wouldn't make sense why a French woman would be using Japanese honorifics. This is reinforced by the fact characters like Osakabehime and Sei Shounagon who are Japanese and use variants of the same nickname[[note]]Ma-Chan for Osakabehime, and Chan-Mas for Sei[[/note]] are kept in other versions.
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* LostInTranslation: In the original Japanese version of the game Jeanne Alter calls Ritsuka the Protagonist "Master-Chan" as an AffectionateNickname, this isn't present in translations most likely because it wouldn't make sense why a French woman would be using Japanese honorifics. This is reinforced by the fact characters like Osakabehime and Sei Shounagon who are Japanese and use variants of the same nickname[[note]]Ma-Chan for Osakabehime, and Chan-Mas for Sei[[/note]] are kept in other versions.
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* GoOutWithASmile: [[spoiler:At the end of Ordeal Call II, when she's starting to disappear from the instability of her Spirit Origin in conflict with the plot, she manages to give Fujimaru one last smile before she vanishes from right in front of him.]]
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** [[spoiler:Shown off during Ordeal Call II to a wonderful degree. While the reason for Fujimaru being placed into those events was less than ideal, she goes in with them to give them one last happy memory while covered under her usual tsundere nature. The true goldness of her heart shows just before she disappears where she prioritizes making sure Fujimaru gets one last happy memory before they need to part ways.]]
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** [[spoiler:Shown off during Ordeal Call II to a wonderful degree. While the reason for Fujimaru the Protagonist being placed into those events was less than ideal, she goes in with them to give them one last happy memory while covered under her usual tsundere nature. The true goldness of her heart shows just before she disappears where she prioritizes making sure Fujimaru the Protagonist gets one last happy memory before they need to part ways.]]
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: In Ordeal Call II when the Avengers talk about what they like about Fujimaru, Jeanne Alter says that she knows that they're popular, [[{{Tsundere}} but it's not like she's into that]]. Unfortunately for her EveryoneCanSeeIt as her classmates smirk and Hessian shrugs, causing her to threaten to burn them all.
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: In Ordeal Call II when the Avengers talk about what they like about Fujimaru, the Protagonist, Jeanne Alter says that she knows that they're popular, [[{{Tsundere}} but it's not like she's into that]]. Unfortunately for her EveryoneCanSeeIt as her classmates smirk and Hessian shrugs, shrugs (even prompting a smirk from ''[[PerpetualFrowner Lobo]]''), causing her to threaten to burn them all.
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* SuspciouslySpecificDenial: In Id when the Avengers talk about what they like about Fujimaru, Jeanne Alter says that she knows that they're popular, [[{{Tsundere}} but it's not like she's into that]]. Unfortunately for her EveryoneCanSeeIt as her classmates smirk and Hessian shrugs, causing her to threaten to burn them all.
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* SuspciouslySpecificDenial: SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: In Id Ordeal Call II when the Avengers talk about what they like about Fujimaru, Jeanne Alter says that she knows that they're popular, [[{{Tsundere}} but it's not like she's into that]]. Unfortunately for her EveryoneCanSeeIt as her classmates smirk and Hessian shrugs, causing her to threaten to burn them all.
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* IChooseToStay: [[spoiler:At the end of Id, she chooses to remain with Chaldea instead of going on ahead to Antartica with the rest of the Avengers, reasoning that since she's not a "conventional" Avenger, its okay for her to stick around.]]
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* DoNotCallMePaul: She doesn't like to be called Jeanne, only Jeanne Alter. Which makes sense because they're entirely different people.
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* DoNotCallMePaul: She doesn't like to be called Jeanne, only Jeanne Alter. Which which makes sense because they're entirely different people.people. She quickly grows tired of being called Alter as well, since there's like twenty Alters in Chaldea already. So she only really accepts being called Jeanne Alter, but it's pretty long so most people around her end up defaulting to one or the other, to her annoyance.
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The world's most popular [[BestServedCold revenge-seeking hero]], popularly known as the Count of Monte Cristo. He was imprisoned in the hellish Château d'If due to a false charge by an unscrupulous conspiracy, but he did not fall to despair thanks to a mind of steel. He eventually acquired the treasure of Monte Cristo and swooped upon Paris, dragging down many French leading figures who deceived him into hell.\\\
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The world's most popular [[BestServedCold revenge-seeking hero]], popularly known as the Count of Monte Cristo.Literature/TheCountOfMonteCristo. He was imprisoned in the hellish Château d'If due to a false charge by an unscrupulous conspiracy, but he did not fall to despair thanks to a mind of steel. He eventually acquired the treasure of Monte Cristo and swooped upon Paris, dragging down many French leading figures who deceived him into hell.\\\
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* TheScapegoat: This Marie reflects the slander she received from the French people over the country's failings. Her Bloodstained Necklace skill is a reference to the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Affair_of_the_Diamond_Necklace Affair of the Diamond Necklace]], an incident in which she allegedly defrauded the Crown's jewellers to obtain an opulent diamond necklace even as the country's coffers were strained to the brink. In truth, her signature had been forged by Jeanne de Valois-Saint-Rémy, but the story was one of many that gave moral weight to the French Revolution. In-lore, it functions like the Innocent Monster skill, warping her with the many slanderous tellings of her story. This is so severe that her Alignment changed from Man to Earth, meaning that she is more fiction than fact despite being a historical figure. This is a trait she shares with Antonio Sallieri, a fellow Avenger who was warped into an unrecognizable figure by the many false stories of him hating Mozart.
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* TheScapegoat: This Marie reflects the slander she received from the French people over the country's failings. Her Bloodstained Necklace skill is a reference to the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Affair_of_the_Diamond_Necklace Affair of the Diamond Necklace]], an incident in which she allegedly defrauded the Crown's jewellers to obtain an opulent diamond necklace even as the country's coffers were strained to the brink. In truth, her signature had been forged by Jeanne de Valois-Saint-Rémy, but the story was one of many that gave moral weight to the French Revolution. In-lore, it functions like the Innocent Monster skill, warping her with the many slanderous tellings of her story. This is so severe that her Alignment Attribute changed from Man to Earth, meaning that she is more fiction than fact despite being a historical figure. This is a trait she shares with Antonio Sallieri, a fellow Avenger who was warped into an unrecognizable figure by the many false stories of him hating Mozart.
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* BalanceBuff: Her NP was buffed via Rank Up Quest for the 6th Anniversary to not only increase the base damage, but also drops 30 Critical Stars to better serve her ability as a CriticalHitClass.
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** Her NP was buffed via Rank Up Quest for the 6th Anniversary to not only increase the base damage, but also drops 30 Critical Stars to better serve her ability as aCriticalHitClass.CriticalHitClass.
** Her Ephermal Dream skill was buffed via Rank Up Quest for "Ordeal Call II" to add a self-NP battery of 30~50%, helping to better supplement her offensive nature.
** Her NP was buffed via Rank Up Quest for the 6th Anniversary to not only increase the base damage, but also drops 30 Critical Stars to better serve her ability as a
** Her Ephermal Dream skill was buffed via Rank Up Quest for "Ordeal Call II" to add a self-NP battery of 30~50%, helping to better supplement her offensive nature.
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* OffWithTheirHead: Her first Noble Phantasm, Guillotine Ricanement: Gullotine of Mockery, allows her to summon the very guillotine that killed her to use as a weapon. Her primary attacks in her later Ascensions involve summoning this guillotine to behead her foes. She can summon multiple copies of the blade to rain from the sky, swing the blade by its rope to slit her foes' throats, or summon the entire apparatus to trap and finish her opponent.
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* OffWithTheirHead: OffWithHisHead: Her first Noble Phantasm, Guillotine Ricanement: Gullotine of Mockery, allows her to summon the very guillotine that killed her to use as a weapon. Her primary attacks in her later Ascensions involve summoning this guillotine to behead her foes. She can summon multiple copies of the blade to rain from the sky, swing the blade by its rope to slit her foes' throats, or summon the entire apparatus to trap and finish her opponent.
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Per rules: use the Protagonist when talking about the game.
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* ButNowIMustGo: [[spoiler:At the end of Ordeal Call II, most of Chaldea's Avengers leave with prompting from Dantès, as they and Fujimaru conclude that their focus on anger and vengeance doesn't fit with Fujimaru's personality and how Fujimaru wants to resolve the CHALDEAS plot. The Avengers choose to leave because they want Fujimaru to stay true to themselves. In-game this is represented by most of the Avenger Servants in the Spiritron Record system are labeled "Link Lost", similar to Musashi but without the finality that her "Data Lost" status meant, meaning that they can still come back one day (indeed, Dantès refers to Abigail Williams as the "key"). The Three Summer Avengers (Kama, Erice and Chloe), the three non-Proper Human History avengers (Maou Nobunaga, Ranmaru X and Space Ishtar) along with Aŋra, Marie Alter and Ushi-Gozen, remain with Chaldea, presumably due to not being "proper" avengers]]
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* ButNowIMustGo: [[spoiler:At the end of Ordeal Call II, most of Chaldea's Avengers leave with prompting from Dantès, as they and Fujimaru the Protagonist conclude that their focus on anger and vengeance doesn't fit with Fujimaru's the Protagnist personality and how Fujimaru the Protagonist wants to resolve the CHALDEAS plot. The Avengers choose to leave because they want Fujimaru the Protagonist to stay true to themselves. In-game this is represented by most of the Avenger Servants in the Spiritron Record system are labeled "Link Lost", similar to Musashi but without the finality that her "Data Lost" status meant, meaning that they can still come back one day (indeed, Dantès refers to Abigail Williams as the "key"). The Three Summer Avengers (Kama, Erice and Chloe), the three non-Proper Human History avengers (Maou Nobunaga, Ranmaru X and Space Ishtar) along with Aŋra, Marie Alter and Ushi-Gozen, remain with Chaldea, presumably due to not being "proper" avengers]]
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* PassingTheTorch: In Ordeal Call II, [[spoiler:when the Avengers choose to leave Chaldea he entrusts Abigail Williams to fulfill his role as the Master's mental guardian.]]
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* ButNowIMustGo: [[spoiler:At the end of Ordeal Call II, most of Chaldea's Avengers leave with prompting from Dantès, as they and Fujimaru conclude that their focus on anger and vengeance doesn't fit with Fujimaru's personality and how Fujimaru wants to resolve the CHALDEAS plot. The Avengers choose to leave because they want Fujimaru to stay true to themselves. In-game this is represented by most of the Avenger Servants in the Spiritron Record system are labeled "Link Lost", similar to Musashi but without the finality that her "Data Lost" status meant, meaning that they can still come back one day (indeed, Dantès refers to Abigail Williams as the "key"). The Three Summer Avengers (Kama, Erice and Chole), the three non-Proper Human History avengers (Maou Nobunaga, Ranmaru X and Space Ishtar) along with Aŋra, Marie Alter and Ushi-Gozen, remain with Chaldea, presumably due to not being "proper" avengers]]
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* ButNowIMustGo: [[spoiler:At the end of Ordeal Call II, most of Chaldea's Avengers leave with prompting from Dantès, as they and Fujimaru conclude that their focus on anger and vengeance doesn't fit with Fujimaru's personality and how Fujimaru wants to resolve the CHALDEAS plot. The Avengers choose to leave because they want Fujimaru to stay true to themselves. In-game this is represented by most of the Avenger Servants in the Spiritron Record system are labeled "Link Lost", similar to Musashi but without the finality that her "Data Lost" status meant, meaning that they can still come back one day (indeed, Dantès refers to Abigail Williams as the "key"). The Three Summer Avengers (Kama, Erice and Chole), Chloe), the three non-Proper Human History avengers (Maou Nobunaga, Ranmaru X and Space Ishtar) along with Aŋra, Marie Alter and Ushi-Gozen, remain with Chaldea, presumably due to not being "proper" avengers]]
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* FlowerMotifs: Her Noble Phantasm: Vae Victis: Tragedy - Black Funeral Procession, has her create a black iris, the inverse of France's signature fleur de lis, that explodes and curses everyone in range if it doesn't instantly kill the victims first. If the fleur de lis is a symbol of France's faith, DivineRightOfKings, and hope for the future, Marie Alter's black lily is the despair of the defeated and disdain born of hatred and loss.
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* FlowerMotifs: Her Noble Phantasm: Vae Victis: Tragedy - Black Funeral Procession, has her create a black iris, the inverse of France's signature fleur de lis, that explodes and curses everyone in range if it doesn't instantly kill the victims first. If the fleur de lis is a symbol of France's faith, DivineRightOfKings, and hope for the future, Marie Alter's black lily is the despair of the defeated and defeated, disdain born of hatred and loss.loss, and prophesized defeat for the prideful.
* OffWithTheirHead: Her first Noble Phantasm, Guillotine Ricanement: Gullotine of Mockery, allows her to summon the very guillotine that killed her to use as a weapon. Her primary attacks in her later Ascensions involve summoning this guillotine to behead her foes. She can summon multiple copies of the blade to rain from the sky, swing the blade by its rope to slit her foes' throats, or summon the entire apparatus to trap and finish her opponent.
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* SingleTear: She sheds a single tear of dark blood while using her Noble Phantasm.
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* SingleTear: She sheds a single tear of dark blood while using her Noble Phantasm.Phantasm or uses her skills.
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* ButNowIMustGo: [[spoiler:During Ordeal Call 2, it's revealed that the Avenger class is being mass summoned inside CHALDEAS to fight it due to their role of weeping injustices, so all the Avengers leave Chaldea to fight in the Foreign World in the meantime while the "key" (mentioned to be Abigail) solves that. In-game this is represented by most of the Avenger Servants in the Spiritron Record system turning into "Lost Links", similar to Musashi, but without the finality that means "Data Lost", meaning that they can still come back one day. The Three Summer Avengers (Kama, Erice and Chole), the three non-Proper Human History avengers (Maou Nobunaga, Ranmaru X and Space Ishtar) along with Aŋra, Marie Alter and Ushi-Gozen, remain with Chaldea due to not being "Proper" avengers]]
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* ButNowIMustGo: [[spoiler:During [[spoiler:At the end of Ordeal Call 2, it's revealed that the Avenger class is being mass summoned inside CHALDEAS to fight it due to their role II, most of weeping injustices, so all the Chaldea's Avengers leave Chaldea with prompting from Dantès, as they and Fujimaru conclude that their focus on anger and vengeance doesn't fit with Fujimaru's personality and how Fujimaru wants to fight in resolve the Foreign World in the meantime while the "key" (mentioned CHALDEAS plot. The Avengers choose to be Abigail) solves that. leave because they want Fujimaru to stay true to themselves. In-game this is represented by most of the Avenger Servants in the Spiritron Record system turning into "Lost Links", are labeled "Link Lost", similar to Musashi, Musashi but without the finality that means her "Data Lost", Lost" status meant, meaning that they can still come back one day. day (indeed, Dantès refers to Abigail Williams as the "key"). The Three Summer Avengers (Kama, Erice and Chole), the three non-Proper Human History avengers (Maou Nobunaga, Ranmaru X and Space Ishtar) along with Aŋra, Marie Alter and Ushi-Gozen, remain with Chaldea Chaldea, presumably due to not being "Proper" "proper" avengers]]
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* ADayInTheLimelight: She has two, fitting her BreakoutCharacter Status. She shares "Pseudo-Singularity I: Quarantined Territory of Malice: Shinjuku" with Altria Alter, and "Ordeal Call II - Irreversible Trash Heap, Id" is mostly for her, though it touches on Avengers as a whole as well.
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* EvilCostumeSwitch: This spiteful, cynical version of Marie trades her Rider version's rosy pinks and silken white dress for black, red, and gold to illustrate her anger and sadness.
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* EvilCostumeSwitch: This spiteful, cynical version of Marie trades her Rider version's rosy pinks and silken white dress for [[RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver black, red, red]], and gold to illustrate her anger and sadness.
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* DramaticIrony: [[spoiler: He's the First Avenger Servant and the origin of the entire Class. But he isn't counted as a ''real'' Avenger, a revealed by Ordeal Call II.]]
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* DramaticIrony: [[spoiler: He's the First Avenger Servant and the origin of the entire Class. But he isn't counted as a ''real'' Avenger, a as revealed by Ordeal Call II.]]
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* BattleBallgown: Marie's Third Ascension decks her out in an opulent black ballgown and a cape bearing the fleur de lis on her back.
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* BattleBallgown: Marie's Third Ascension decks her out in an opulent black ballgown and a cape bearing the fleur de lis on her back. According to regular Marie's comments about the fake one, this was her mourning gown.
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Based on what I have seen, we didn't fail the Ordeal Call, as the Human Foundation Level still rises after we complete it.
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* ButNowIMustGo: [[spoiler:During Ordeal Call 2, it's revealed that the Avenger class is being mass summoned inside CHALDEAS to fight it. Not only that, Chaldea loses the Ordeal Call, so Avengers aren't allowed to pass through the barrier in any other way, so all the Avengers leave Chaldea to fight in the Foreign World in the meantime while the "key" (mentioned to be Abigail) solves that. In-game this is represented by most of the Avenger Servants in the Spiritron Record system turning into "Lost Links", similar to Musashi, but without the finality that means "Data Lost", meaning that they can still come back one day. The Three Summer Avengers (Kama, Erice and Chole), the three non-Proper Human History avengers (Maou Nobunaga, Ranmaru X and Space Ishtar) along with Aŋra, Marie Alter and Ushi-Gozen, remain with Chaldea due to not being "Proper" avengers]]
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* ButNowIMustGo: [[spoiler:During Ordeal Call 2, it's revealed that the Avenger class is being mass summoned inside CHALDEAS to fight it. Not only that, Chaldea loses the Ordeal Call, so Avengers aren't allowed it due to pass through the barrier in any other way, their role of weeping injustices, so all the Avengers leave Chaldea to fight in the Foreign World in the meantime while the "key" (mentioned to be Abigail) solves that. In-game this is represented by most of the Avenger Servants in the Spiritron Record system turning into "Lost Links", similar to Musashi, but without the finality that means "Data Lost", meaning that they can still come back one day. The Three Summer Avengers (Kama, Erice and Chole), the three non-Proper Human History avengers (Maou Nobunaga, Ranmaru X and Space Ishtar) along with Aŋra, Marie Alter and Ushi-Gozen, remain with Chaldea due to not being "Proper" avengers]]
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** Gorgon is a story-locked SR/4*--and is probably one of three Avengers you can conceivably use on most days... even if she came after the seventh Order. Salieri is a similar case, albeit as a R/3* he's much easier to get... but he's only available after completing first Lostbelt of the ''second'' storyline. He is, however, easy to get in Class-based Rate-Ups since he is only one of two 3* Extra-class Servants.
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** Gorgon is a story-locked SR/4*--and is probably one of three Avengers you can conceivably use on most days... even if she came after the seventh Order. Salieri is a similar case, albeit as a R/3* he's much easier to get... but he's only available after completing first Lostbelt of the ''second'' storyline. He is, however, easy to get in Class-based Rate-Ups since he is only one of two 3* Extra-class Servants. Marie Alter is also story-locked as well for a Ordeal Call chapter that newer players won't have access to for quite a while, and she is also SSR/5* as well.