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* WhateverHappenedToTheMouse: She hasn't been seen again after the end of Unity arc, despite the fact she was confirmed to have survived the Topsider drone attack.
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* DirtyCoward: At least early on in the comic, when he is the first to look for cover at even the smallest sign of danger. [[{{Aversion}} Averted]] near the end of Milk Trial, when he stares down Octavius, who just pointed his gun at him, and dares him to shoot.
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* DirtyCoward: At least early on in the comic, when he is the first to look for cover at even the smallest sign of danger. [[{{Aversion}} Averted]] Possibly averted]] near the end of Milk Trial, when he stares down Octavius, who just pointed his gun at him, and dares him to shoot.shoot, but in that instance he was standing behind an invisible Marx's bulletproof shield.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Crosses with BatmanGambit. His scheme to take over Endtown involves manipulating the town's resident KnightTemplar, Octavius Allgood, and the rat security forces, into causing such a mess that the citizens will be more than happy to accept him as their new leader. Milk Trial (and Aaron Marx's intervention) only helped him achieve his goals sooner than expected.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Crosses with BatmanGambit. His scheme to take over Endtown involves manipulating the town's resident KnightTemplar, Octavius Allgood, and the rat security forces, into causing such a mess that the citizens will be more than happy to accept him as their new leader. The Milk Trial (and Aaron Marx's intervention) only helped him achieve his goals sooner than expected.
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** This subplot has seemingly been abandoned as of the Pigs arc, as Jacob has apparently taken his duties as mayor seriously and is more focused on keeping the peace and investigating the disappearance of Endtown's pig mutant citizens.
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* SkewedPriorities: Pretty much his biggest character flaw is that he's ''so'' devoted to expanding knowledge that he literally allows Sanders, a known [[AxCrazy psychopath]] to live and attempts to get testimonies out of him.
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* SkewedPriorities: Pretty much his biggest character flaw is that he's ''so'' devoted to expanding knowledge that he literally allows Sanders, a known [[AxCrazy psychopath]] homicidal maniac]] to live and attempts to get testimonies out of him.
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* FragileSpeedster: Her small, mousey form lets her be very quick on her feet. She once managed to skid past a slammed door with no problems.
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* FragileSpeedster: Her small, mousey form lets her be very quick on her feet. She once managed to skid past a slammed door with no problems.in almost FlashStep fashion.
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* [[spoiler:KilledOffForReal: While initially claiming that Holly is still alive in the dream bubble, Aaron eventually confirmed her [[KilledOffscreen offscreen demise]] in [[https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/29194018/#29310429 a Patreon email]], listing her among all the characters who died up to the end of Pigs arc. Then again, Aaron's emails have a reputation for unreliability and flip-flopping, her popularity endures, and she or someone very much like her has just made an appearance in the current storyline as of January 2021...]]
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* [[spoiler:KilledOffForReal: While initially claiming that Holly is still alive in the dream bubble, Aaron eventually confirmed her [[KilledOffscreen offscreen demise]] in [[https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/29194018/#29310429 a Patreon email]], listing her among all the characters who died up to the end of Pigs arc. Then again, Aaron's emails have a reputation for unreliability and flip-flopping, NeverFoundTheBody is in play, her popularity endures, and she or someone very much like her has just made an appearance in the current storyline as of January 2021...]]
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* [[spoiler:PutOnABus: Looks that way, as of the [[http://www.gocomics.com/endtown/2016/11/23 23/11/2016 strip]], which appears to end with her disappearing along with the Fitzgerald. Time will tell if the bus ever comes back, but at least she may be safe for now - not only is she the captain of the ship (or she claims to be - no explanation is given for how it came to be), but the AI of the Fitzgerald seemed to have fallen in love with her, deciding it was her husband, Lyn, and is therefore unlikely to harm her and, hopefully, feeding off her positive emotions at living in a simulation of her old life...which was eventually painfully subverted, as seen in KilledOffForReal entry.]]
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* [[spoiler:PutOnABus: Looks that way, as of the [[http://www.gocomics.com/endtown/2016/11/23 23/11/2016 strip]], which appears to end with her disappearing along with the Fitzgerald. Time will tell if the bus ever comes back, but at least she may be safe for now - not only is she the captain of the ship (or she claims to be - no explanation is given for how it came to be), but the AI of the Fitzgerald seemed to have fallen in love with her, deciding it was her husband, Lyn, and is therefore unlikely to harm her and, hopefully, feeding off her positive emotions at living in a simulation of her old life...which was eventually ]]
** [[spoiler:As of 2020, may or may not have been painfullysubverted, as seen subverted by the developments mentioned in the KilledOffForReal entry.]]
** [[spoiler:As of 2020, may or may not have been painfully
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* DumbIsGood: Dumb enough not to notice or be affected by the horrible things going on in Unity.
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* DumbIsGood: Dumb Even with slight changes to suit her status as a main character, Kirbee's intellect still hovers somewhere below "bag of hammers", with her notably being dumb enough not to notice or be affected by the horrible things going on in Unity.Unity. Highlights include:
** Willingly crawling into a crawlspace recently filled with poison gas to collect the corpse of a violent maniac.
** Being a ''repeat'' victim of snipe hunts.
** Believing that her adoptive son had spontaneously mutated into [[SleepingDummy a pile of pillows]] (later appearance of [[spoiler:people who had mutated into toothbrushes]] notwithstanding, since she had no way of knowing such a patently ludicrous thing was possible).
** Willingly crawling into a crawlspace recently filled with poison gas to collect the corpse of a violent maniac.
** Being a ''repeat'' victim of snipe hunts.
** Believing that her adoptive son had spontaneously mutated into [[SleepingDummy a pile of pillows]] (later appearance of [[spoiler:people who had mutated into toothbrushes]] notwithstanding, since she had no way of knowing such a patently ludicrous thing was possible).
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* NoNameGiven/OnlyOneName: Finally averted. Her surname was not given for several years and was originally treated by the author as a big upcoming reveal destined for a future storyline, but it was eventually just revealed to be the uncommon but not particularly significant "Durfee" via merchandise titling on the website Redbubble.
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** Actually probably the opposite. Raccoons have a baculum (penis bone) five or six inches long. A three or four foot anthro is probably half again larger at least. The glans and shaft are also covered with spines. Lizards, on the other hand, have a petite, delicate cloaca. This may explain Sarah's angry storming off, as opposed to laughing, which would be more in line with a teeny-weenie.
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** Actually probably the opposite. Raccoons have a baculum (penis bone) five or six inches long. A three or four foot anthro is probably half again larger at least. The glans and shaft are also covered with spines. Lizards, on the other hand, have a petite, delicate cloaca. This may explain Sarah's running away, as opposed to laughing, which would be more in line with a teeny-weenie.
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** Actually probably the opposite. Raccoons have a baculum (penis bone) five or six inches long. A three or four foot anthro is probably half again larger at least. The glans and shaft are also covered with spines. Lizards, on the other hand, have a petite, delicate cloaca. This may explain Sarah's running away, angry storming off, as opposed to laughing, which would be more in line with a teeny-weenie.
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** Actually probably the opposite. Raccoons have a baculum (penis bone) five or six inches long. A three or four foot anthro is probably half again larger at least. The glans and shaft are also covered with spines. Lizards, on the other hand, have a petite, delicate cloaca. This may explain Sarah's running away, as opposed to laughing, which would be more in line with a teeny-weenie.
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* PlotIncitingInfidelity: The very first major thing she does upon engaging with Unity society is cheat on the man to whom she mutually pledged herself and who threw away his old life to be with her. Jim, for his part, may just about win the award for "[[{{DemonicPossession}} Not Taking It Well]]".
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* YourCheatingHeart: The very first major thing she does upon engaging with Unity society is cheat on the man to whom she mutually pledged herself and who threw away his old life to be with her. Jim, for his part, may just about win the award for "[[{{DemonicPossession}} Not Taking It Well]]".
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* FlatCharacter: There's currently not much to her characterization besides "Kind, optimistic, somewhat dim helpmeet with feelings for Wally". Possibly the result of her being a bit part character that the author admits was upgraded to main character status when he realised she appealed to him and could be used to solve several looming plot issues.
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* FlatCharacter: There's currently not much to her characterization besides "Kind, optimistic, somewhat dim helpmeet help meet with feelings for Wally". Possibly the result of her being a bit part character that the author admits was upgraded to main character status when he realised she appealed to him and could be used to solve several looming plot issues.
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* LizardFolk: Specifically created to show that they were not all xenophobic sociopaths.
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* VillainousBreakdown: Her smug gleefulness at the prospect of ruling over survivors of Unity while sacrificing Wally & co. to the incoming Topsider drones quickly evaporates once Wally realizes he has control over the Dittos and uses them to shield himself and his group, leaving Sarah and Unity survivors exposed. As the drones open fire on the lizards she begins to break down in fury and disbelief, running off into the waste after pushing Piotr into the line of fire.
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* [[spoiler:PutOnABus: Looks that way, as of the [[http://www.gocomics.com/endtown/2016/11/23 23/11/2016 strip]], which appears to end with her disappearing along with the Fitzgerald. Time will tell if the bus ever comes back, but at least she may be safe for now - not only is she the captain of the ship (or she claims to be - no explanation is given for how it came to be), but the AI of the Fitzgerald seemed to have fallen in love with her, deciding it was her husband, Lyn, and is therefore unlikely to harm her and, hopefully, feeding off her positive emotions at living in a simulation of her old life...]]
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* [[spoiler:PutOnABus: Looks that way, as of the [[http://www.gocomics.com/endtown/2016/11/23 23/11/2016 strip]], which appears to end with her disappearing along with the Fitzgerald. Time will tell if the bus ever comes back, but at least she may be safe for now - not only is she the captain of the ship (or she claims to be - no explanation is given for how it came to be), but the AI of the Fitzgerald seemed to have fallen in love with her, deciding it was her husband, Lyn, and is therefore unlikely to harm her and, hopefully, feeding off her positive emotions at living in a simulation of her old life...which was eventually painfully subverted, as seen in KilledOffForReal entry.]]
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* OhCrap: Her reaction when she realizes her plan to lure out the butcher did not go as planned.
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** Her reaction when she realizes her plan to lure out the butcher did not go as planned.
** Her reaction when she realizes her plan to lure out the butcher did not go as planned.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: He's absolutely livid when rats charge Foxworthy with murder of pig citizens and sentence him to death by hanging, despite Jacob pointing out just moments ago that he's innocent. Philo's only crime was sedition, for which Jacob sentenced him to exile from the colony.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: He's absolutely livid when rats charge security charges Foxworthy with murder of pig citizens and sentence him to death by hanging, despite Jacob pointing out just moments ago that he's innocent. Philo's only crime he was found innocent of murder[[note]]Philo was guilty of sedition, for which so Jacob sentenced him to exile from and ReassignedToAntarctica[[/note]].
** The security general then warns Jacob that if he fails to prevent another riot, they will resort to [[spoiler:massacring thecolony.colony and lobotomizing the survivors to be used as breeding livestock]]. Jacob is visibly horrified.
** The security general then warns Jacob that if he fails to prevent another riot, they will resort to [[spoiler:massacring the
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One of three possible results of a plague mutation, "anthros" are literally animal people, having gained semi-accurate (as in, somewhat cartoonish, for an unknown reason) animal features during the transformation from their human form. Said transformations are highly variable (one person may become a [[{{PettingZooPeople}} tall sexy cat woman]], while another man mutates into [[{{FunnyAnimals}} a tiny moggy]]) and WordOfGod states that they are affected by ''cultural stereotypes'', so there is definitely something unusual at work...
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One of three possible results of a plague mutation, "anthros" are literally animal people, having gained semi-accurate (as in, somewhat cartoonish, for an unknown reason) animal features during the transformation from their human form. Said transformations are highly variable (one person may become a [[{{PettingZooPeople}} [[CatFolk tall sexy cat woman]], while another man mutates into [[{{FunnyAnimals}} a tiny moggy]]) and WordOfGod states that they are affected by ''cultural stereotypes'', so there is definitely something unusual at work...
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Not the trope. A Boy And His X is when they form a bond with the "X" that "changes them forever, usually starting them down the path to adulthood."
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*NiceJobBreakingItHero: Suggests to Jacob to use Portia as bait for the mysterious butcher, while she stalks Portia's place to intercept the culprit. The problem? Velda forgot to double-check if Portia is still at her last known place of residence, unaware that she moved over to Walt's apartment (and that the butcher knows this information). By the time she realizes this, things have already gone south. Later on, she prevents Grout from stopping Walt before he could catch the butcher, [[spoiler:Denise, and as a result both Walt and Denise die when fire breaks out on the bridge where Walt cornered her.]]
*OhCrap: Her reaction when she realizes her plan to lure out the butcher did not go as planned.
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[[folder:Velda Van der Veezil]]
Octavius Allgood's liaison between security and Endtown's citizens, Velda is a tricky, manipulative woman with secrets of her own.
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*ActionGirl: Not afraid of getting her hands dirty when situation calls for it.
*AwesomenessByAnalysis: As soon as she sees Cooper's photo in the obituary (having remembered seeing him at Mavis' place not long ago), Velda makes a connection between him, Mavis and the mysterious butcher. She promptly goes to confront Mavis.
*BadassBureaucrat: Member of Octavius', then Jacob's political party, and seemingly skilled in close combat and handling firearms.
*BatmanGambit: [[spoiler:Turns out to have concocted one with Jacob in order to discredit Octavius.]]
*BehindEveryGreatMan: During the Pig arc she acts as Jacob's right-hand woman, providing him with moral and emotional support in difficult times, occasionally giving him some sound advice.
*BitchInSheepsClothing: Polite and suave at first impression, but it's just a cover for her more cunning, manipulative side.
*CrazyPrepared: She doesn't skip a beat when confronting Mavis at her place, first incapacitating her by spilling alcohol in her eyes, then hitting her with a wine bottle as she tries to escape, before finally drugging her with ketamine in order to pacify her and carry her off for interrogation.
*EvilIsSexy: She's definitely one of the more attractive female mutants in the story.
*FemmeFatale: Possesses traits of one. Even Aaron himself described her as such. She also falls under:
*FemmeFataleSpy: See under TheMole.
*GirlsWithGuns: She carries a pistol with her at all times.
*IronLady: Stoic, professional and hardly anything can faze or unnerve her.
*MagnificentBastard: or a Magnificent Bitch in Velda's case. She expertly manipulates and coaxes Octavius into going along with his extremist agenda which further villifies him in the eyes of Endtown's populace. [[spoiler:All according to hers and Jacob's plan.]]
*PlatonicLifePartners: She seems to have this kind of relationship with Jacob. While she's very affectionate and supportive towards him, there hasn't been many hints of any more serious relationship going on between them.
*SmokingIsCool: She's rarely seen without her cigarette holder.
*TheMole: While she initially seems to support Octavius' moral crusade, it's all a ruse. [[spoiler:She's actually working for Jacob, undermining Octavius' efforts and reputation from within.]]
*TinyGuyHugeGirl: While she's short compared to most other mutants and humans, Velda towers over Jacob.
*UndyingLoyalty: She's unquestionably loyal to Jacob's cause, doing everything to help him.
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Octavius Allgood's liaison between security and Endtown's citizens, Velda is a tricky, manipulative woman with secrets of her own.
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*ActionGirl: Not afraid of getting her hands dirty when situation calls for it.
*AwesomenessByAnalysis: As soon as she sees Cooper's photo in the obituary (having remembered seeing him at Mavis' place not long ago), Velda makes a connection between him, Mavis and the mysterious butcher. She promptly goes to confront Mavis.
*BadassBureaucrat: Member of Octavius', then Jacob's political party, and seemingly skilled in close combat and handling firearms.
*BatmanGambit: [[spoiler:Turns out to have concocted one with Jacob in order to discredit Octavius.]]
*BehindEveryGreatMan: During the Pig arc she acts as Jacob's right-hand woman, providing him with moral and emotional support in difficult times, occasionally giving him some sound advice.
*BitchInSheepsClothing: Polite and suave at first impression, but it's just a cover for her more cunning, manipulative side.
*CrazyPrepared: She doesn't skip a beat when confronting Mavis at her place, first incapacitating her by spilling alcohol in her eyes, then hitting her with a wine bottle as she tries to escape, before finally drugging her with ketamine in order to pacify her and carry her off for interrogation.
*EvilIsSexy: She's definitely one of the more attractive female mutants in the story.
*FemmeFatale: Possesses traits of one. Even Aaron himself described her as such. She also falls under:
*FemmeFataleSpy: See under TheMole.
*GirlsWithGuns: She carries a pistol with her at all times.
*IronLady: Stoic, professional and hardly anything can faze or unnerve her.
*MagnificentBastard: or a Magnificent Bitch in Velda's case. She expertly manipulates and coaxes Octavius into going along with his extremist agenda which further villifies him in the eyes of Endtown's populace. [[spoiler:All according to hers and Jacob's plan.]]
*PlatonicLifePartners: She seems to have this kind of relationship with Jacob. While she's very affectionate and supportive towards him, there hasn't been many hints of any more serious relationship going on between them.
*SmokingIsCool: She's rarely seen without her cigarette holder.
*TheMole: While she initially seems to support Octavius' moral crusade, it's all a ruse. [[spoiler:She's actually working for Jacob, undermining Octavius' efforts and reputation from within.]]
*TinyGuyHugeGirl: While she's short compared to most other mutants and humans, Velda towers over Jacob.
*UndyingLoyalty: She's unquestionably loyal to Jacob's cause, doing everything to help him.
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* WomenAreWiser: Originally depicted as Wally's emotional anchor and guide in life, as well as having more of a knack for helping others than he did and having a level of emotional intelligence bordering on TheEmpath (the sequence with the [[spoiler:little girl monster in the desert, for instance, or her outreach to both Linda and Chic]]). [[spoiler:This largely disappeared at the end of her time in the comic as she fell out of favor with the author.]]
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* OmniscientMoralityLicense: ''Apparently''. Responsible for everything bad that's happened since the Milk Trial (by virtue of arranging for it to happen and putting Jacob in power), including [[spoiler: Holly finding the ship]] (according to Word of God, as the result of an apparent knowledge of how events proceed across Endtown iterations and the ability to arrange those events to get desired outcomes), and yet not one ounce of his supposed "Greater Good" is visible so far... just a lot of senseless death and misery.
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* CharacterizationMarchesOn: Goes from being a random news reporter, to a vicious and small-minded hack writer, to a cult-leading self-help guru and agitator with a broad anti-human racist streak, to a scheming, gloating political mastermind villain happy to see others die if it'll aid his goals of power and implied to be on course to lead a purge of Endtown's non-anthro citizens, to a beleaguered public servant who just wants the best for his people and who hasn't done much in the two years since he was elected apart from adjust the foraging methods. It can't really be called character development, because we never see the transitions - he just changes every time we see him again with no real explanation.
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*CharacterizationMarchesOn: Goes from being a random news reporter, to a vicious and small-minded hack writer, to a cult-leading self-help guru and agitator with a broad anti-human racist streak, to a scheming, gloating political mastermind villain happy to see others die if it'll aid his goals of power and implied to be on course to lead a purge of Endtown's non-anthro citizens, to a beleaguered public servant who just wants the best for his people and who hasn't done much in the two years since he was elected apart from adjust the foraging methods. It can't really be called character development, because we never see the transitions - he just changes every time we see him again with no real explanation.