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* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler:After finding out that she and Mother are one in the same, Sam is also crushed by the guilt of the lives Mother has destroyed]].
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* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler:After finding out that she and Mother are one in and the same, Sam is also crushed by the guilt of the lives Mother has destroyed]].
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* BadBoss: Once Solomon, one of her most devoted minions, is of no use to her anymore she disposes of him in order to get a chance of possessing Sam.
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* BadBoss: Once Solomon, one of her most devoted minions, is of no use to her anymore anymore, she disposes of him in order to get a chance of at possessing Sam.
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* LightIsNotGood: As she, technically, is Sam she posses all of her powers and more. In the final battle Mother uses a lot of light based attacks as well.
* NoNameGiven: Even though she's referred as "Mother" her name in speech bubbles is always as "???".
* NoNameGiven: Even though she's referred as "Mother" her name in speech bubbles is always as "???".
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* LightIsNotGood: As she, technically, is Sam she posses technically is Sam, she possesses all of her powers and more. In the final battle Mother uses a lot of light based attacks as well.
* NoNameGiven: Even though she's referred as"Mother" "Mother", her name in speech bubbles is always as "???".
* NoNameGiven: Even though she's referred as
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* AlmightyJanitor: John is nothing but a simple digger (albeit one of the best), but he still fights monsters, mechanical abominations and even MIASMA spawns with nothing but his guts and his frying pan.
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* AlmightyJanitor: ActionSurvivor: John is nothing but a simple digger (albeit one of the best), but he still fights monsters, mechanical abominations and even MIASMA spawns with nothing but his guts and his frying pan.
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* {{Foil}}: To John. Both are protectors of people with great powers/knowledge. While John is always quiet Isabela is a woman that keeps mostly to herself. Both goes to great lengths to protect the ones they love [[spoiler:and both fail at some point, but whereas John chooses to push forward, Isabela falls into despair and becomes an easy prey for Mother's schemes]].
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* {{Foil}}: To John. Both are protectors of people with great powers/knowledge. While John is always quiet Isabela is a woman that keeps mostly to herself. Both goes to great lengths to protect the ones they love [[spoiler:and both fail at some point, but whereas John chooses to push forward, Isabela falls into despair and becomes an easy prey for Mother's schemes]].
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* DoesNotWearShoes: For the first two chapters, Sam doesn't wear any footwear until Alva gives her red boots, since John never considered actually giving Sam shoes.
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* BlindingBangs: John's hair is always covering his eyes, [[spoiler:at least until the epilogue where he says goodbye to Sam]].
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* EyesOutOfSight: John's hair is always covering his eyes, [[spoiler:at least until the epilogue where he says goodbye to Sam]].
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* RapunzelHair: Her white hair nearly reaches her ankles.
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* LightIsNotGood: As she, technically, is Sam she posses all of her powers and more.
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* LightIsNotGood: As she, technically, is Sam she posses all of her powers and more. In the final battle Mother uses a lot of light based attacks as well.
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* ProportionalAging: [[spoiler:Being a more "evolved" human Sam ages much slower than normal people.]]
* TomatoInTheMirror: [[spoiler:She is the one known as "Mother". It's implied that Sam is just one of her many bodies.]]
* BadBoss: Once Solomon, one of her most devoted minions, is of no use to her anymore she disposes of him in order to get a chance of possessing Sam.
* EvilIsPetty: For all her mysticism and power Mother makes sure to mock John's effort to save Sam in Charon in the pettiest of ways in her attempt to erode his morale.
* LightIsNotGood: As she, technically, is Sam she posses all of her powers and more.
* NoNameGiven: Even though she's referred as "Mother" her name in speech bubbles is always as "???".
* LightIsNotGood: As she, technically, is Sam she posses all of her powers and more.
* NoNameGiven: Even though she's referred as "Mother" her name in speech bubbles is always as "???".
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* NothingIsScarier: Nothing of her origins and very little of her past lives is made known.
* ShadowArchetype: To Sam. Mother destroys humankind in an endless cycle of death and rebirth with callous coldness, Sam on the other hand values every life and is the polar opposite of Mother in terms of personality.
* TheUnreveal: What lead her to create the MIASMA and gave her the twisted goal of "perfecting" humanity? Nothing about it is revealed.
* ShadowArchetype: To Sam. Mother destroys humankind in an endless cycle of death and rebirth with callous coldness, Sam on the other hand values every life and is the polar opposite of Mother in terms of personality.
* TheUnreveal: What lead her to create the MIASMA and gave her the twisted goal of "perfecting" humanity? Nothing about it is revealed.
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* EleventhHourSuperpower: [[spoiler:Sam fuses with his weapon in order to help him defeat Mother in the final battle.]]
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* ChefOfIron: The frying pan isn't just for cooking, it's also a real good bludgeon to whack enemies with.
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* ChefOfIron: The John is both parts great chef and great fighter.
* FryingPanOfDoom: His primary weapon is the frying panisn't just he uses for cooking, it's also a real good bludgeon cooking. Over the course of the game he upgrades to whack enemies with.larger frying pans.
* FryingPanOfDoom: His primary weapon is the frying pan
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* FryingPanOfDoom: His primary weapon is the frying pan he uses for cooking. Over the course of the game he upgrades to larger frying pans.
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* DrivenToVillainy: [[spoiler:[[SeeksAnothersResurrection After Alva dies she desperately wants her back and Mother offers Isabel this chance]] and this is why she chooses to joins Mother and opposes John and Sam.]]
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* DrivenToVillainy: [[spoiler:[[SeeksAnothersResurrection After Alva dies she desperately wants her back and Mother offers Isabel this chance]] and this is why she chooses leading her to joins join Mother and opposes opposing John and Sam.Sam. [[LoveMakesYouEvil All for Alva's sake]].]]