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[[folder:House Muschio]]
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* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler:loses a hand trying to save Finesse from the Masked Assassin]].
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* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler:loses [[spoiler:Loses a hand trying to save Finesse from the Masked Assassin]].
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%% * TheEvilPrinceTheEvilPrince: He decided early on that he wanted to conquer the world. [[spoiler:Then it changes to saving the world by force.]]
* MindOverMatter: Muschio has a weak affinity with telekinesis. He can't use it in real life, but he can ''tear literal demons apart'' with ghost hands [[BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind in psychic dream battles]].
* MindOverMatter: Muschio has a weak affinity with telekinesis. He can't use it in real life, but he can ''tear literal demons apart'' with ghost hands [[BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind in psychic dream battles]].
%% * ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Maybe.
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%% * GroinAttack: Rare female version.
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%% * TheMedic
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--> ''"Ona''': RIGHT IN THE TACO! HNNGH!
* TheMedic
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A gnoll.
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* AnArmAndALeg: Pendle loses three arms and a foot [[spoiler:when Wes has to beat him unconscious to prevent Not Leonid from killing Ona]].
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%%** He admits he used to be a teenage rebel aristocrat.
!! "Not Leonid" *Spoilers*
A doppelganger masquerading as Pendle.
* SerialKiller: His M.O. was turning young ladies into venom-drowned canvases for a sigil he used as his brand.
* ProphecyTwist: Long ago, he had a vision of his own death and a strange sigil. He decided to use the sigil as a brand on his victims, thinking it would allow him to master his own death, until his killer turned it around and ripped ''his'' body into pieces that resembled the sigil.
!! "Not Leonid" *Spoilers*
A doppelganger masquerading as Pendle.
* SerialKiller: His M.O. was turning young ladies into venom-drowned canvases for a sigil he used as his brand.
* ProphecyTwist: Long ago, he had a vision of his own death and a strange sigil. He decided to use the sigil as a brand on his victims, thinking it would allow him to master his own death, until his killer turned it around and ripped ''his'' body into pieces that resembled the sigil.
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%% * VitriolicBestBuds: with Wes.
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%% * VitriolicBestBuds: with Wes.Wes.
!! Erisol Npoa
A Sprite from the city of Inzare Citta. She defected from the Czar because he was too busy shooting Muschio to care about her being in the way.
* BalefulPolymorph: The entire population of Inzare Citta was transformed into Sprites.
* CloudCuckoolander: She (and the rest of Inzare Citta) have been driven silly from the transformations.
* MadeOfMagic: As a Sprite, Erisol is made of magical energy and can cast powerful spells with minimal effort.
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!! Erisol Npoa
A Sprite from the city of Inzare Citta. She defected from the Czar because he was too busy shooting Muschio to care about her being in the way.
* BalefulPolymorph: The entire population of Inzare Citta was transformed into Sprites.
* CloudCuckoolander: She (and the rest of Inzare Citta) have been driven silly from the transformations.
* MadeOfMagic: As a Sprite, Erisol is made of magical energy and can cast powerful spells with minimal effort.
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* [[spoiler:AnArmAndALeg]]: [[spoiler:loses a hand trying to save Finesse from the Masked Assassin]].
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* [[spoiler:AnArmAndALeg]]: AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler:loses a hand trying to save Finesse from the Masked Assassin]].
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* TheCasanova[=/=]ChickMagnet: Slept with Ashedel and Arabella, is pursued by Finesse, and now Iesgip seems to have taken a shine to him.
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* TheCasanova[=/=]ChickMagnet: ChickMagnet: Slept with Ashedel and Arabella, is pursued by Finesse, and now Iesgip seems to have taken a shine to him.
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%% * [[spoiler: AnguishedDeclarationOfLove]] - It goes [[{{TearJerker}} HORRIBLY wrong.]]
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%% * [[spoiler: AnguishedDeclarationOfLove]] AnguishedDeclarationOfLove - It goes [[{{TearJerker}} HORRIBLY wrong.]]
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* AffablyEvil
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%% * AffablyEvil
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* AntiVillain
* BenevolentBoss: As the story progresses, he moves more and more into this.
* BenevolentBoss: As the story progresses, he moves more and more into this.
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%% * AntiVillain
%% * BenevolentBoss: As the story progresses, he moves more and more into this.
%% * BenevolentBoss: As the story progresses, he moves more and more into this.
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* EdibleThemeNaming: Muschio Malto = Moss Malt
* EvenEvilHasStandards: For someone who wants to become the Devil, Muschio has quite the set of moral codes and regulations.
* TheEvilPrince
* PlayingWithFire
* VillainProtagonist
* EvenEvilHasStandards: For someone who wants to become the Devil, Muschio has quite the set of moral codes and regulations.
* TheEvilPrince
* PlayingWithFire
* VillainProtagonist
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%% * EdibleThemeNaming: Muschio Malto = Moss Malt
%% * EvenEvilHasStandards: For someone who wants to become the Devil, Muschio has quite the set of moral codes and regulations.
%% * TheEvilPrince
%% * PlayingWithFire
%% * VillainProtagonist
%% * EvenEvilHasStandards: For someone who wants to become the Devil, Muschio has quite the set of moral codes and regulations.
%% * TheEvilPrince
%% * PlayingWithFire
%% * VillainProtagonist
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* [[spoiler: AnguishedDeclarationOfLove]] - It goes [[{{TearJerker}} HORRIBLY wrong.]]
* DeadpanSnarker
* {{Kawaiiko}}: Awwwww, Lil!Finesse~!
* OlderThanTheyLook: When Finesse was a little girl, her father was saved by the old Baron Molto, which explains her affection for the Molto line. Thing is, [[spoiler: Muschio's father was not a baron, but a king; Moltos "upgraded" from barons to kings generations ago]].
* TheSmartGuy
* SugarAndIcePersonality: Has warmed up as of late.
* WrenchWench
* DeadpanSnarker
* {{Kawaiiko}}: Awwwww, Lil!Finesse~!
* OlderThanTheyLook: When Finesse was a little girl, her father was saved by the old Baron Molto, which explains her affection for the Molto line. Thing is, [[spoiler: Muschio's father was not a baron, but a king; Moltos "upgraded" from barons to kings generations ago]].
* TheSmartGuy
* SugarAndIcePersonality: Has warmed up as of late.
* WrenchWench
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%% * [[spoiler: AnguishedDeclarationOfLove]] - It goes [[{{TearJerker}} HORRIBLY wrong.]]
%% * DeadpanSnarker
%% * {{Kawaiiko}}: Awwwww, Lil!Finesse~!
%% * OlderThanTheyLook: When Finesse was a little girl, her father was saved by the old Baron Molto, which explains her affection for the Molto line. Thing is, [[spoiler: Muschio's father was not a baron, but a king; Moltos "upgraded" from barons to kings generations ago]].
%% * TheSmartGuy
%% * SugarAndIcePersonality: Has warmed up as of late.
%% * WrenchWench
%% * DeadpanSnarker
%% * {{Kawaiiko}}: Awwwww, Lil!Finesse~!
%% * OlderThanTheyLook: When Finesse was a little girl, her father was saved by the old Baron Molto, which explains her affection for the Molto line. Thing is, [[spoiler: Muschio's father was not a baron, but a king; Moltos "upgraded" from barons to kings generations ago]].
%% * TheSmartGuy
%% * SugarAndIcePersonality: Has warmed up as of late.
%% * WrenchWench
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* [[spoiler: BreakTheCutie]]: [[spoiler: The explosion that cost most of her face. [[{{TearJerker}} Aw, man...!]] ]]
* CloudCuckooLander
* TheCutie
* PerkyFemaleMinion
* ViewerGenderConfusion
* CloudCuckooLander
* TheCutie
* PerkyFemaleMinion
* ViewerGenderConfusion
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%% * [[spoiler: BreakTheCutie]]: [[spoiler: The explosion that cost most of her face. [[{{TearJerker}} Aw, man...!]] ]]
%% * CloudCuckooLander
%% * TheCutie
%% * PerkyFemaleMinion
%% * ViewerGenderConfusion
%% * CloudCuckooLander
%% * TheCutie
%% * PerkyFemaleMinion
%% * ViewerGenderConfusion
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* [[spoiler: HiddenHeartOfGold]]
* TheStoic
* TheQuietOne
* TheStoic
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%% * [[spoiler: HiddenHeartOfGold]]
%% * TheStoic
%% * TheQuietOne
%% * TheStoic
%% * TheQuietOne
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%% * LadyOfWar
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* TheBigGuy
* ChivalrousPervert: At least he's nice about it.
* TheCollector
* LovableSexManiac
* ChivalrousPervert: At least he's nice about it.
* TheCollector
* LovableSexManiac
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%% * TheBigGuy
%% * ChivalrousPervert: At least he's nice about it.
%% * TheCollector
%% * LovableSexManiac
%% * ChivalrousPervert: At least he's nice about it.
%% * TheCollector
%% * LovableSexManiac
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Was able to [[spoiler: fix Tislomer good as new]], but not without a [[{{BodyHorror}} "mishap"]].
* GenkiGirl
* GroinAttack: Rare female version.
* TheMedic
* UnusualEuphemism: ...[[{{GroinAttack}} "Taco?"]]
* GenkiGirl
* GroinAttack: Rare female version.
* TheMedic
* UnusualEuphemism: ...[[{{GroinAttack}} "Taco?"]]
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%% * BunnyEarsLawyer: Was able to [[spoiler: fix Tislomer good as new]], but not without a [[{{BodyHorror}} "mishap"]].
%% * GenkiGirl
%% * GroinAttack: Rare female version.
%% * TheMedic
%% * UnusualEuphemism: ...[[{{GroinAttack}} "Taco?"]]
%% * GenkiGirl
%% * GroinAttack: Rare female version.
%% * TheMedic
%% * UnusualEuphemism: ...[[{{GroinAttack}} "Taco?"]]
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* CloudCuckooLander: apparently she has gone from AxCrazy to this.
-->''Master [[GagNose Bignose]] is upstairs talking to Lady Bigtits about Stupid Town No One Cares About''
* IJustWantToHaveFriends
* [[IJustWantToBeNormal I Just Want To Not Be Insane]]
* JerkassWoobie
* {{Yandere}}: with Dompag, though in a "big sister" way.
-->''Master [[GagNose Bignose]] is upstairs talking to Lady Bigtits about Stupid Town No One Cares About''
* IJustWantToHaveFriends
* [[IJustWantToBeNormal I Just Want To Not Be Insane]]
* JerkassWoobie
* {{Yandere}}: with Dompag, though in a "big sister" way.
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%% * CloudCuckooLander: apparently she has gone from AxCrazy to this.
%% -->''Master [[GagNose Bignose]] is upstairs talking to Lady Bigtits about Stupid Town No One Cares About''
%% * IJustWantToHaveFriends
%% * [[IJustWantToBeNormal I Just Want To Not Be Insane]]
%% * JerkassWoobie
%% * {{Yandere}}: with Dompag, though in a "big sister" way.
%% -->''Master [[GagNose Bignose]] is upstairs talking to Lady Bigtits about Stupid Town No One Cares About''
%% * IJustWantToHaveFriends
%% * [[IJustWantToBeNormal I Just Want To Not Be Insane]]
%% * JerkassWoobie
%% * {{Yandere}}: with Dompag, though in a "big sister" way.
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* AfraidOfNeedles: blacksmithing doesn't usually involve needles.
* BunnyEarsLawyer: despite his nervousness, he's a good blacksmith.
* DramaticStutter
* VitriolicBestBuds: with Emmy.
* BunnyEarsLawyer: despite his nervousness, he's a good blacksmith.
* DramaticStutter
* VitriolicBestBuds: with Emmy.
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%% * AfraidOfNeedles: blacksmithing doesn't usually involve needles.
%% * BunnyEarsLawyer: despite his nervousness, he's a good blacksmith.
%% * DramaticStutter
%% * VitriolicBestBuds: with Emmy.
%% * BunnyEarsLawyer: despite his nervousness, he's a good blacksmith.
%% * DramaticStutter
%% * VitriolicBestBuds: with Emmy.
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* AfraidOfBlood
* IdleRich: has shades of this.
* NotSoAboveItAll: he has inquired about, ahem, "curtesians".
* IdleRich: has shades of this.
* NotSoAboveItAll: he has inquired about, ahem, "curtesians".
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%% * AfraidOfBlood
%% * IdleRich: has shades of this.
%% * NotSoAboveItAll: he has inquired about, ahem, "curtesians".
%% * IdleRich: has shades of this.
%% * NotSoAboveItAll: he has inquired about, ahem, "curtesians".
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* IncendiaryExponent
* SamusIsAGirl
* VitriolicBestBuds: with Wes.
* SamusIsAGirl
* VitriolicBestBuds: with Wes.
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%% * IncendiaryExponent
%% * SamusIsAGirl
%% * VitriolicBestBuds: with Wes.
%% * SamusIsAGirl
%% * VitriolicBestBuds: with Wes.