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[[folder:Will's Sister [[spoiler: Teddy/Theodora]]]]
Will's deceased [[spoiler: twin sister]]. She's the creator of ''Diminish'', a game tailor-made for her brother.
Will's deceased [[spoiler: twin sister]]. She's the creator of ''Diminish'', a game tailor-made for her brother.
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[[folder:Will's Sister [[spoiler: Teddy/Theodora]]]]
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Will'sdeceased [[spoiler: twin sister]].[[spoiler:deceased twin]] sister. She's the creator of ''Diminish'', a game tailor-made for her brother. Her name is [[spoiler:Teddy/Theodora]].
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* AcademicAthlete: On top of making a functional, detailed game in the span of 4 months, she was [[spoiler: training to be an Olympic swimmer prior to her death]].
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* AcademicAthlete: On top of making a functional, detailed game in the span of 4 months, she was [[spoiler: training [[spoiler:training to be an Olympic swimmer prior to her death]].
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* CoolBigSis: While Teddy and Will are [[spoiler: twins (with Will being born first)]], Will still sees her as this.
* ExtremeDoormat: Downplayed. [[spoiler: Teddy sees herself as such, and worries that this will have major consequences after her death. It's unclear if she ''was'' a doormat, or this view was a product of her impending death]].
* ExtremeDoormat: Downplayed. [[spoiler: Teddy sees herself as such, and worries that this will have major consequences after her death. It's unclear if she ''was'' a doormat, or this view was a product of her impending death]].
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* CoolBigSis: While Teddy and Will are [[spoiler: twins [[spoiler:twins (with Will being born first)]], Will still sees her as this.
* ExtremeDoormat: Downplayed.[[spoiler: Teddy [[spoiler:Teddy sees herself as such, and worries that this will have major consequences after her death. It's unclear if she ''was'' a doormat, or this view was a product of her impending death]].
* ExtremeDoormat: Downplayed.
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* ParentalFavoritism: On the receiving end of this. [[spoiler: An in-game text conversation in ''Act 1, Episode 16'' shows a conversation between Teddy and one of their parents about Will. The parent praises Teddy for all of her accomplishments while dismissing all of Will's hobbies as lesser. Teddy is clearly uncomfortable with this treatment]].
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* ParentalFavoritism: On the receiving end of this. [[spoiler: An [[spoiler:An in-game text conversation in ''Act 1, Episode 16'' shows a conversation between Teddy and one of their parents about Will. The parent praises Teddy for all of her accomplishments while dismissing all of Will's hobbies as lesser. Teddy is clearly uncomfortable with this treatment]].
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* SecretKeeper: Has a horrible secret that she has been keeping from Will. What it is [[spoiler: is implied to be rather gruesome, given the horrific imagery that usually accompanies any mention of it]].
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* SecretKeeper: Has a horrible secret that she has been keeping from Will. What it is [[spoiler: is [[spoiler:is implied to be rather gruesome, given the horrific imagery that usually accompanies any mention of it]].
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* BadassDecay: Downplayed.[[spoiler: In their notes, Apollo writes that they feel weaker than usual, although they don't know why. This may explain why they have trouble holding onto ledges and have no fighting abilities at the start]].
* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: On the [[spoiler: first playthrough]], they constantly zigzag between this and despair. Played straight on the [[spoiler: second playthrough, where their "death" counter turns into a "tries" counter]].
* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: On the [[spoiler: first playthrough]], they constantly zigzag between this and despair. Played straight on the [[spoiler: second playthrough, where their "death" counter turns into a "tries" counter]].
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* {{Determinator}}: Despite all the pain Apollo goes through, they never give up their mission to help other people. Exemplified in ''Act 1, Episode 9'' where, [[spoiler: after being stuck in a constant loop of dying due to never saving at a checkpoint, they force their way out of the loop by using pain as a source of power. In the process, this changes the "death" counter into a "tries" counter, showing their new-found strength]].
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* {{Determinator}}: Despite all the pain Apollo goes through, they never give up their mission to help other people. Exemplified in ''Act 1, Episode 9'' where, [[spoiler: after [[spoiler:after being stuck in a constant loop of dying due to never saving at a checkpoint, they force their way out of the loop by using pain as a source of power. In the process, this changes the "death" counter into a "tries" counter, showing their new-found strength]].
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A Skull that chases down Apollo in the later parts of the level
A Skull that chases down Apollo in the later parts of the level
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The main character of the game. He's the immortal Olympian himself.
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The main character of the game. He's They are the immortal Olympian himself.themself.
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* BadassDecay: Downplayed.[[spoiler: In his notes, Apollo writes that he feels weaker than usual, although he doesn't know why. This may explain why he has trouble holding onto ledges and has no fighting abilities at the start]].
* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: On the [[spoiler: first playthrough]], he constantly zigzags between this and despair. Played straight on the [[spoiler: second playthrough, where his "death" counter turns into a "tries" counter]].
* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: On the [[spoiler: first playthrough]], he constantly zigzags between this and despair. Played straight on the [[spoiler: second playthrough, where his "death" counter turns into a "tries" counter]].
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* BadassDecay: Downplayed.[[spoiler: In his their notes, Apollo writes that he feels they feel weaker than usual, although he doesn't they don't know why. This may explain why he has they have trouble holding onto ledges and has have no fighting abilities at the start]].
* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: On the [[spoiler: first playthrough]],he they constantly zigzags zigzag between this and despair. Played straight on the [[spoiler: second playthrough, where his their "death" counter turns into a "tries" counter]].
* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: On the [[spoiler: first playthrough]],
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* {{Determinator}}: Despite all the pain Apollo goes through, he never gives up his mission to help other people. Exemplified in ''Act 1, Episode 9'' where, [[spoiler: after being stuck in a constant loop of dying due to never saving at a checkpoint, he forces his way out of the loop by using pain as a source of power. In the process, this changes the "death" counter into a "tries" counter, showing his new-found strength]].
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* {{Determinator}}: Despite all the pain Apollo goes through, he they never gives give up his their mission to help other people. Exemplified in ''Act 1, Episode 9'' where, [[spoiler: after being stuck in a constant loop of dying due to never saving at a checkpoint, he forces his they force their way out of the loop by using pain as a source of power. In the process, this changes the "death" counter into a "tries" counter, showing his their new-found strength]].
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* FriendlyEnemy: After a couple of deaths, he begins to form a friendship with Apollo. Even Apollo himself cheers him own to do his best.
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* FriendlyEnemy: After a couple of deaths, he begins to form a friendship with Apollo. Even Apollo himself cheers him own on to do his best.
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[[folder:Unknown Voice]]
A voice that follows Apollo around. Little is known about them.
A voice that follows Apollo around. Little is known about them.
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[[caption-width-right:310: Let's shoot for one hour, yeah?]]
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*DemBones: He's a talking skull.
*FriendlyEnemy: After a couple of deaths, he begins to form a friendship with Apollo. Even Apollo himself cheers him own to do his best.
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[[folder:Unknown Voice]]
A voice that follows Apollo around. Little is known about them.
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* MirthlessLaughter: Understandable, given [[NintendoHard how insane the game can get]].
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* ChildishOlderSibling: Implied to be this (or at least be seen as this), despite he and [[spoiler: Teddy being twins]].
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* TheUnfavorite: Shows shades of this, especially in ''Act 1, Episode 16''. [[spoiler: Will and Teddy's parents see all of his hobbies as lesser when compared to Teddy's achievements]].
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* TheUnfavorite: Shows shades of this, especially in ''Act 1, Episode 16''. [[spoiler: Will and Teddy's parents see all of his hobbies as lesser when compared to Teddy's achievements]].achievements, even though he's a straight A student]].
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* TheGift: Insanely talented. High academic scores, high athletic scores ([[spoiler:given she was accepted into the Olympic swim team]]), and a talented artist and game designer to boot.
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* TheUnfavorite: Shows shades of this, especially in ''Act 1, Episode 16''. [[spoiler: Will and Teddy's parents see all of his hobbies as lesser when compared to Teddy's achievements]].
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* CoolBigSis: While Teddy and Will are [[spoiler: twins (with Will being born first)]], Will looks up to her.
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* CoolBigSis: While Teddy and Will are [[spoiler: twins (with Will being born first)]], Will looks up to her.still sees her as this.
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* ParentalFavoritism: On the receiving end of this. [[spoiler: An in-game text conversation in ''Act 1, Episode 16'' shows a conversation between Teddy and one of their parents about Will. The parent praises Teddy for all of her accomplishments while dismissing all of Will's hobbies as lesser. Teddy is clearly uncomfortable with this treatment]].
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* SecretKeeper: Has a horrible secret that she has been keeping from Will. What it is [[spoiler: is implied to be rather gruesome, given the horrific imagery that usually accompanies any mention of it]].
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* ExtremeDoormat: Downplayed. [[spoiler: Teddy sees herself as such, and worries that this will have major consequences after her death. It's unclear if she ''is'' actually a doormat, or this view was a product of her impending death]].
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* ExtremeDoormat: Downplayed. [[spoiler: Teddy sees herself as such, and worries that this will have major consequences after her death. It's unclear if she ''is'' actually ''was'' a doormat, or this view was a product of her impending death]].
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* SuccessfulSiblingSyndrome: Averted. In the game, Teddy said that she was worried that her various successes would cause Will to feel this way, but he immediately denies this when it comes up.
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* ExtremeDoormat: Downplayed. [[spoiler: Teddy sees herself as such, and worries that this will have major consequences after her death. It's unclear if she ''is'' actually a doormat, or this view is was a product of her impending death]].
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The main character of the game. He's the actual Greek god Apollo.
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The main character of the game. He's the actual Greek god Apollo.immortal Olympian himself.
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* BadassDecay: Downplayed.[[spoiler: In his notes, Apollo writes that he feels weaker than usual, although he doesn't know why. This may explain why he has trouble holding onto ledges and has no fighting abilities at the start]].
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A voice that follows Apollo around. Little is known about them.
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* ArcWords: "It's me".
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[[folder:Teddy/Theodora]]
Will's deceased twin sister. She's the creator of ''Diminish'', a game meant for her brother.
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Will's deceased [[spoiler: twin
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* ExtremeDoormat: Downplayed. Teddy sees herself as such, and worries that this will have major consequences after her death. It's unclear if she ''is'' actually a doormat, or this view is a product of her impending death.
* PosthumousCharacter: Dead from the start of the series. All we know about her comes from the game's text and Will's ramblings about her.
* ExtremeDoormat: Downplayed. Teddy sees herself as such, and worries that this will have major consequences after her death. It's unclear if she ''is'' actually a doormat, or this view is a product of her impending death.
* PosthumousCharacter: Dead from the start of the series. All we know about her comes from the game's text and Will's ramblings about her.
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* CoolBigSis: While Teddy and Will are [[spoiler: twins (with Will being born first), first)]], Will looks up to her.
* ExtremeDoormat: Downplayed. [[spoiler: Teddy sees herself as such, and worries that this will have major consequences after her death. It's unclear if she ''is'' actually a doormat, or this view is a product of her impendingdeath.
death]].
* PosthumousCharacter: Deadfrom at the start of the series. All we know about her comes from the game's text and Will's ramblings about her.
* ExtremeDoormat: Downplayed. [[spoiler: Teddy sees herself as such, and worries that this will have major consequences after her death. It's unclear if she ''is'' actually a doormat, or this view is a product of her impending
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* BrokenBird: As the game was created prior to her death, it's almost a given that most of her thoughts are on the more negative side.
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* BrokenBird: As the game was created prior to her death, it's almost a given that most of her thoughts are on the more negative side.
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* AwesomeEgo: Constantly rattles his praises in the notes he writes.
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* DeadpanSnarker: After a while of dying, Apollo starts to snark on Will's ability to play thenotes he writes.game.
* DeadpanSnarker: After a while of dying, Apollo starts to snark on Will's ability to play the
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The main character of the series. He
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The main character of the series. HeHe started the webseries in order to play the game his sister left him in her dying months.
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* {{Determinator}}: Despite his countless failures in the game, he never quits playing.
* SuccessfulSiblingSyndrome: Averted. In the game, Teddy said that she was worried that her various successes would cause Will to feel this way, but he immediately denies this when it comes up.
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* {{Determinator}}: Despite his countless failures in the game, he never quits playing.
* SuccessfulSiblingSyndrome: Averted. In the game, Teddy said that she was worried that her various successes would cause Will to feel this way, but he immediately denies this when it comes up.
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* AcademicAthlete: On top of making a functional, detailed game in the span of 4 months,
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* AcademicAthlete: On top of making a functional, detailed game in the span of 4 months, she was [[spoiler: training to be an Olympic swimmer prior to her death]].
* BrokenBird: As the game was created prior to her death, it's almost a given that most of her thoughts are on the more negative side.
* CoolBigSis: While Teddy and Will are twins (with Will being born first), Will looks up to her.
* ExtremeDoormat: Sees herself as such, and worries that this will have
* BrokenBird: As the game was created prior to her death, it's almost a given that most of her thoughts are on the more negative side.
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* {{Determinator}}: Despite all the pain Apollo goes through, he never gives up his mission to help other people. Exemplified in ''Act 1, Episode 9'' where, [[spoiler: after being stuck in a constant loop of dying due to never saving at a checkpoint, he forces his way out of the loop by using pain as a source of power. In the process, this changes the "death" counter into a "tries" counter, showing his new-found strength]].
* {{Determinator}}: Despite all the pain Apollo goes through, he never gives up his mission to help other people. Exemplified in ''Act 1, Episode 9'' where, [[spoiler: after being stuck in a constant loop of dying due to never saving at a checkpoint, he forces his way out of the loop by using pain as a source of power. In the process, this changes the "death" counter into a "tries" counter, showing his new-found strength]].
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* PosthumousCharacter: Dead from the start of the series. All we know about her comes from the game's text and Will's ramblings about her.
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A list of characters appearing in ''Diminsh''.
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[[folder:Will]]
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[[folder:Teddy/Theodora]]
Will's deceased twin sister. She's the creator of ''Diminish'', a game meant for her brother.
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[[folder:[[spoiler:Mikey]]]]
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[[folder:Will]]
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[[folder:Teddy/Theodora]]
Will's deceased twin sister. She's the creator of ''Diminish'', a game meant for her brother.
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[[folder:[[spoiler:Mikey]]]]
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