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* IHaveManyNames: Digger, [[OverlyLongName Digger-of-Unnecessarily-Convoluted-Tunnels Of Clan Quartzclaw]], Burrower, Honored Digger, Digger-Mousie, Earth-Rat, Little Mother Of Earthquakes.
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* IHaveManyNames: Digger, [[OverlyLongName Digger-of-Unnecessarily-Convoluted-Tunnels Of Clan Quartzclaw]], Burrower, Honored Digger, Digger-Mousie, Earth-Rat, [[NamestoRunAwyFromReallyFast Little Mother Of Earthquakes.Earthquakes]].
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* OverlyLongName: Digger-Of-Unnecessary-Convoluted-Tunnels. Of Clan Quartzclaw. And she picks up some nicknames as she goes along, too.
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* OverlyLongName: Digger-Of-Unnecessary-Convoluted-Tunnels. Of Clan Quartzclaw. And she picks up [[IHaveManyNames some nicknames nicknames]] as she goes along, too.
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* HeroOfAnotherStory: Bits and pieces of her story creep in, like the prophecy business, but ultimately, this quest isn't about her. [[spoiler:It's implied that one day, "when she stands astride the fulcrum of the world," her experiences during ''Digger'' will turn out to be vital.]]
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moved to YMMV.Digger except Neutral Evil, as character alignments are only for settings that use them
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* IronWoobie
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* TheWoobie: Ed, kind artist and exiled victim of [[FantasticRacism fantastic misandry]] and [[spoiler: [[DomesticAbuse spousal abuse]]]]. And that's just the tip of the iceberg. He manages to function pretty well for all he's been through.
** In a variation on the typical fan treatment of a Woobie, fans don't want to just comfort Ed, they seem to want to [[BewareTheNiceOnes KILL]] [[BerserkButton ANYONE]] [[MamaBear WHO]] [[PapaWolf HARMS]] [[BigNo HIM!]] Despite no Digger HurtComfortFic being known, certain commenters have made it clear that if any ''did'' appear, the time between it appearing and a ''[[KillItWithFire decisive]]'' [[ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum PPC response]] would be [[InternetBackdraft measured in nanoseconds.]]
** And then he [[TookALevelInBadass rocketed up the]] [[{{Homestuck}} Echeladder]] when facing down Sweetgrass-Voice.[[spoiler: Ed isn't nameless any more]].
*** [[spoiler: Not that he's going to have a chance to use it any longer...]]
** In a variation on the typical fan treatment of a Woobie, fans don't want to just comfort Ed, they seem to want to [[BewareTheNiceOnes KILL]] [[BerserkButton ANYONE]] [[MamaBear WHO]] [[PapaWolf HARMS]] [[BigNo HIM!]] Despite no Digger HurtComfortFic being known, certain commenters have made it clear that if any ''did'' appear, the time between it appearing and a ''[[KillItWithFire decisive]]'' [[ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum PPC response]] would be [[InternetBackdraft measured in nanoseconds.]]
** And then he [[TookALevelInBadass rocketed up the]] [[{{Homestuck}} Echeladder]] when facing down Sweetgrass-Voice.[[spoiler: Ed isn't nameless any more]].
*** [[spoiler: Not that he's going to have a chance to use it any longer...]]
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* UglyCute: Assuming you think it's ugly.
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* {{Moe}}
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* CrazyAwesome: Former pirate shrew who guards bridges and rides trolls for a living. [[SoCoolItsAwesome A-yup.]]
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel
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* CompleteMonster: The closest thing Ursula can get.
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* YourSoulIsMine: If Shadowchild eats the shadow of a living creature, it drops dead.
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* YourSoulIsMine: If Shadowchild eats the shadow of a living creature, it drops dead.
dead. Eventually. First they go into a coma.
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* FanNickname: [[spoiler: Shadowlescent]], after [[spoiler: its encounter with Sweetgrass Voice.]]
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* TheHeroine: Of the webcomic. In-story, she's TheLancer with a hint of SmartGirl.
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* TheHeroine: Of the webcomic. In-story, she's TheLancer with a hint of SmartGirl.TheSmartGirl.
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* [[spoiler:[[SacrificialLion Sacrificial Hyena]]]]
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* TheDogBitesBack: After long years of abuse, when he finally decides to act its...decisive.
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* PhraseCatcher: A meta version, in that it's the ''fans'' who say it: "Oh, ''[[TheWoobie Ed]]''." It is said precisely once in the comic proper, [[spoiler: right after Ed's death]].
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* HeroicBSOD: After her first-born died, she had a very understandable one. ItGotWorse when Blood-Tail started screwing with her head.
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* HeroicBSOD: After her first-born died, she had a A very understandable one. ItGotWorse when Blood-Tail started screwing with her head.
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* TheLibby: Blood Tail enacted a XanatosGambit that ended up getting her sister driven to madness and killed and her brother-in-law exiled over petty jealousy, because said brother-in-law didn't become her husband instead. She's not exactly popular with the tribe, since pretty much everyone knows that she was behind it; when she gets smug about what happened, Boneclaw Mother puts her in her place.
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* TheLibby: Blood Tail enacted a XanatosGambit that ended up getting driving her sister driven to madness and killed and her brother-in-law exiled over petty jealousy, because said brother-in-law didn't become her husband instead. She's not exactly popular with the tribe, since pretty much everyone knows that she was behind it; when she gets smug about what happened, Boneclaw Mother puts her in her place.
* HeroicBSOD: After her first-born died, she had a very understandable one. ItGotWorse when Blood-Tail started screwing with her head.
* ItGotWorse: Her firstborn child died, and she has nobody to take out her rage/grief on aside from [[DomesticAbuse the spouse]] [[LoveMakesYouCrazy she still deeply loves (when she's sane)]]. Meanwhile her sister is taking advantage of her vulnerable state, eventually driving her mad enough to start beating her daughter as well.
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* SanitySlippage: And HOW.
* [[ThereAreNoTherapists There Are No Grief Counselors]]: Blood-Tail probably made sure of that.
* [[ThereAreNoTherapists There Are No Grief Counselors]]: Blood-Tail probably made sure of that.
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* IHaveManyNames: Digger, [[OverlyLongName Digger-of-Unnecessarily-Convoluted-Tunnels Of Clan Quartzclaw]], Burrower, Honored Digger, Digger-Mousie, Little Mother Of Earthquakes.
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* IHaveManyNames: Digger, [[OverlyLongName Digger-of-Unnecessarily-Convoluted-Tunnels Of Clan Quartzclaw]], Honored Burrower, Digger-Mousie, Little Mother Of Earthquakes.
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* IHaveManyNames: Digger, [[OverlyLongName Digger-of-Unnecessarily-Convoluted-Tunnels Of Clan Quartzclaw]], Honored Burrower, Digger-Mousie, Honored Digger, Digger-Mousie, Little Mother Of Earthquakes.
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* IHaveManyNames: Digger, [[OverlyLongName Digger-of-Unnecessarily-Convoluted-Tunnels Of Clan Quartzclaw]], Honored Burrower, Little Mother Of Earthquakes.
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* IHaveManyNames: Digger, [[OverlyLongName Digger-of-Unnecessarily-Convoluted-Tunnels Of Clan Quartzclaw]], Honored Burrower, Digger-Mousie, Little Mother Of Earthquakes.
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* BecauseISaidSo: It comments to the titular wombat that neither the statue nor [[KnightTemplar Jhalm]] want to have a conversation ending with "Because I'm a god and I say so."
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* BecauseISaidSo: It He comments to the titular wombat that neither the statue he nor [[KnightTemplar Jhalm]] want to have a conversation ending with "Because I'm a god and I say so."
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* BecauseISaidSo: It comments to the titular wombat that neither the statue nor [[KnightTemplar Jhalm]] want to have a conversation ending with "Because I'm a god and I say so."
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* IShouldHaveBeenBetter: In regards to [[spoiler:Ed's Death]].
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NF is stuff that\'s not supposed to be scary but is. The creep-out factor is most certainly intentional on Ursula\'s part.
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* HeroicBSOD: Digger seems to currently be going through a version of this [[spoiler: after Ed's death]]: she's reacting to other people, but just barely enough to get by.
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* HeWhoFightsMonsters: [[WellIntentionedExtremist Captain Jhalm]] comes over as dangerously close to [[JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope slipping from]] simple KnightTemplar into this.
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A NotQuiteDead hyena god.
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* NotQuiteDeadOnlyMostlyDead
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A NotQuieteDead hyena god.
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A NotQuietDead hyena god.
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* TrollBridge: her Job.
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* TrollBridge: her Job.Job.
[[WMG: He-Is]]
A NotQuietDead hyena god.
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* AndIMustScream
* TheAtoner
* BeatStillMyHeart
* FateWorseThanDeath:[[spoiler:[[AndIMustScream He is kept alive against his will,]] [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel along with the same demon that made him kill him own child.]]]]
* GodCouple: With She-Is
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone
* NightmareFuel[=/=]HighOctaneNightmareFuel
* NotQuiteDead
* TakingYouWithMe:[[spoiler: does not work until Ed shows up]]
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An elder demon [[spoiler: posessing He-Is's remains]]
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* BigBad
* CompellingVoice
* CompleteMonster: The closest thing Ursula can get.
* MeaningfulName
* OurDemonsAreDifferent
* NeutralEvil
[[WMG: He-Is]]
A NotQuietDead hyena god.
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* AndIMustScream
* TheAtoner
* BeatStillMyHeart
* FateWorseThanDeath:[[spoiler:[[AndIMustScream He is kept alive against his will,]] [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel along with the same demon that made him kill him own child.]]]]
* GodCouple: With She-Is
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone
* NightmareFuel[=/=]HighOctaneNightmareFuel
* NotQuiteDead
* TakingYouWithMe:[[spoiler: does not work until Ed shows up]]
[[WMG:Sweetgrass Voice]]
An elder demon [[spoiler: posessing He-Is's remains]]
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* BigBad
* CompellingVoice
* CompleteMonster: The closest thing Ursula can get.
* MeaningfulName
* OurDemonsAreDifferent
* NeutralEvil
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Grim Eyes should be so lucky, but alas...no.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: She pretty much exists to prove that every Hyena woman doesn't have an enormous chip on her shoulder.
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* HotAmazon: Ed certainly thought so. She ''WAS'' one of the strongest warriors of her time, in any case.
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* TheLibby: Bloodtail Blood Tail enacted a XanatosGambit that ended up getting her sister driven to madness and killed and her brother-in-law exiled over petty jealousy, because said brother-in-law didn't become her husband instead. She's not exactly popular with the tribe, since pretty much everyone knows that she was behind it; when she gets smug about what happened, Boneclaw Mother puts her in her place.
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Leader of the Veiled.
Leader of the Veiled.
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Leader
Former mate of
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* LoveMakesYouCrazy: She [[{{Understatement}} did not take the loss of her first born well.]]
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Leader of the Veiled.
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* StrangeSyntaxSpeaker: Since Ed had been exiled, he hadn't talked to anyone before Digger came along (presumably because no one but the hyenas would know where to find him, and they consider him to be unclean since [[AFateWorseThanDeath his name was eaten]] when he was exiled). After seventeen years of silence, he simply ''forgot how to speak'' and the syntax he uses is his best guess at how it works.
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Yet another barebones description for a character.
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Leader of the Veiled.
Leader of the Veiled.
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* IfICantHaveYou: She encouraged spousal abuse by her sister because she was envious after Ed chose the sister over herself, with an added TakeThat implying that he was still better off with the madwoman who beat him than he ever would have been with her.
* TheLibby: Bloodtail enacted a XanatosGambit that ended up getting her sister driven to madness and killed and her brother-in-law exiled over petty jealousy, because said brother-in-law didn't become her husband instead. She's not exactly popular with the tribe, since pretty much everyone knows that she was behind it; when she gets smug about what happened, Boneclaw Mother puts her in her place.
* LoveMakesYouEvil: Blood Tail was [[StalkerWithACrush infatuated]] with [[BigScrewedUpFamily her sister's mate.]] So she goaded her sister into madness, then campaigned to have her former crush exiled for putting her down.
** Boneclaw Mother opines that it wasn't Love that Made Her Evil, and that she was so poisonous by nature that a madwoman with violent tendencies still made a better mate by comparison.
[[WMG:Captain Jhalm]]
Leader of the Veiled.
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* IfICantHaveYou: She encouraged spousal abuse by her sister because she was envious after Ed chose the sister over herself, with an added TakeThat implying that he was still better off with the madwoman who beat him than he ever would have been with her.
* TheLibby: Bloodtail enacted a XanatosGambit that ended up getting her sister driven to madness and killed and her brother-in-law exiled over petty jealousy, because said brother-in-law didn't become her husband instead. She's not exactly popular with the tribe, since pretty much everyone knows that she was behind it; when she gets smug about what happened, Boneclaw Mother puts her in her place.
* LoveMakesYouEvil: Blood Tail was [[StalkerWithACrush infatuated]] with [[BigScrewedUpFamily her sister's mate.]] So she goaded her sister into madness, then campaigned to have her former crush exiled for putting her down.
** Boneclaw Mother opines that it wasn't Love that Made Her Evil, and that she was so poisonous by nature that a madwoman with violent tendencies still made a better mate by comparison.
[[WMG:Captain Jhalm]]
Leader of the Veiled.
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