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* MismatchedEyes: It may be a stylistic choice but in every character illustration, the top half of his irises are blue, so he may possibly have sectoral heterochromia.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Claims he'll park the car to [[spoiler:do a happy dance]] if you reciprocate his feelings.
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* DrinkOrder: Specifically orders a Gin and Tonic after disliking the cocktail (a Stinger) Doug gives him.
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* DrinkOrder: Says his favorite drink is a Singapore Sling. Doug's drink recommendations for you tend to include sweeter cocktails, like a [[DoubleEntendre Sex on the Beach]].
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* {{Anguished Declaration of Love}}: You confront him on his feelings and he spills over it while Doug is distracted with a business call. Mark is tense over the situation for the rest of the story, at least up until you choose him [[spoiler:and later accept his feelings, agreeing to go on a date with him]].
* {{Betty and Veronica}}: The Betty to Doug's Veronica. Mark is the familiar childhood friend and coworker while Doug is the suave bartender you just met.
* {{Childhood Friends}}: Specifically reminisces over the old playground you and him frequented. He's taken on the project at your workplace to restore said playground.
* [[ClingyJealousGirl Clingy Jealous Guy]]: Mark sometimes falls into this because of his feelings for you and insecurity towards Doug flirting with you.
* {{Cough Snark Cough}}: He sort of does that at one point.
* {{Betty and Veronica}}: The Betty to Doug's Veronica. Mark is the familiar childhood friend and coworker while Doug is the suave bartender you just met.
* {{Childhood Friends}}: Specifically reminisces over the old playground you and him frequented. He's taken on the project at your workplace to restore said playground.
* [[ClingyJealousGirl Clingy Jealous Guy]]: Mark sometimes falls into this because of his feelings for you and insecurity towards Doug flirting with you.
* {{Cough Snark Cough}}: He sort of does that at one point.
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* {{Anguished Declaration of Love}}: AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: You confront him on his feelings and he spills over it while Doug is distracted with a business call. Mark is tense over the situation for the rest of the story, at least up until you choose him [[spoiler:and later accept his feelings, agreeing to go on a date with him]].
*{{Betty and Veronica}}: BettyAndVeronica: The Betty to Doug's Veronica. Mark is the familiar childhood friend and coworker while Doug is the suave bartender you just met.
*{{Childhood Friends}}: ChildhoodFriends: Specifically reminisces over the old playground you and him frequented. He's taken on the project at your workplace to restore said playground.
*[[ClingyJealousGirl Clingy Jealous Guy]]: ClingyJealousGirl: Mark sometimes falls into this because of his feelings for you and insecurity towards Doug flirting with you.
*{{Cough Snark Cough}}: CoughSnarkCough: He sort of does that at one point.
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* {{Designated Driver}}: When Mark decides to leave early, he offers this since you don't have a car with you to get home and you've had more to drink than him.
* {{Devoted to You}}: While Mark steps out for a phone call, Doug compares him to a puppy following you around and trying to please you.
* {{Drink Order}}: Specifically orders a Gin and Tonic after disliking the cocktail (a Stinger) Doug gives him.
* {{The Everyman}}: A straightforward guy that works as an architectural manager for the same company as you.
* {{First Guy Wins}}: If you choose him. Mark is your childhood friend within the story as well as the first of the two love interests you're introduced to.
* {{Green Eyed Monster}}: He's clearly terse, sometimes to the point of verbally confrontational, with Doug and tends to disparage him behind his back. Mark will awkwardly apologize a couple of times, both to you and Doug, for his attitude.
* [[spoiler:{{I Dont Want to Ruin Our Friendship}}]]: Why Mark's never confessed before.
* {{Insecure Love Interest}}: Shows signs of this and even admits it.
* {{Devoted to You}}: While Mark steps out for a phone call, Doug compares him to a puppy following you around and trying to please you.
* {{Drink Order}}: Specifically orders a Gin and Tonic after disliking the cocktail (a Stinger) Doug gives him.
* {{The Everyman}}: A straightforward guy that works as an architectural manager for the same company as you.
* {{First Guy Wins}}: If you choose him. Mark is your childhood friend within the story as well as the first of the two love interests you're introduced to.
* {{Green Eyed Monster}}: He's clearly terse, sometimes to the point of verbally confrontational, with Doug and tends to disparage him behind his back. Mark will awkwardly apologize a couple of times, both to you and Doug, for his attitude.
* [[spoiler:{{I Dont Want to Ruin Our Friendship}}]]: Why Mark's never confessed before.
* {{Insecure Love Interest}}: Shows signs of this and even admits it.
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* {{Designated Driver}}: DesignatedDriver: When Mark decides to leave early, he offers this since you don't have a car with you to get home and you've had more to drink than him.
*{{Devoted to You}}: DevotedToYou: While Mark steps out for a phone call, Doug compares him to a puppy following you around and trying to please you.
*{{Drink Order}}: DrinkOrder: Specifically orders a Gin and Tonic after disliking the cocktail (a Stinger) Doug gives him.
*{{The Everyman}}: TheEveryman: A straightforward guy that works as an architectural manager for the same company as you.
*{{First Guy Wins}}: FirstGuyWins: If you choose him. Mark is your childhood friend within the story as well as the first of the two love interests you're introduced to.
*{{Green Eyed Monster}}: GreenEyedMonster: He's clearly terse, sometimes to the point of verbally confrontational, with Doug and tends to disparage him behind his back. Mark will awkwardly apologize a couple of times, both to you and Doug, for his attitude.
*[[spoiler:{{I Dont Want to Ruin Our Friendship}}]]: IDontWantToRuinOurFriendship: Why Mark's never confessed before.
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* {{Mismatched Eyes}}: It may be a stylistic choice but in every character illustration, the top half of his irises are blue, so he may possibly have sectoral heterochromia.
* {{Romantic Runner Up}}: Mark is nervous he'll become like this because of Doug's flirtation.
* {{Toxic Friend Influence}}: At one point, Mark notes that when you were kids, your mom was convinced that he was a bad influence on you but you would still play with him.
* {{Unlucky Childhood Friend}}: Presumably if you choose Doug.
* {{Victorious Childhood Friend}}: If you choose Mark himself. [[spoiler:Doug seems almost convinced that it's what will happen since he's used to it.]]
* {{Romantic Runner Up}}: Mark is nervous he'll become like this because of Doug's flirtation.
* {{Toxic Friend Influence}}: At one point, Mark notes that when you were kids, your mom was convinced that he was a bad influence on you but you would still play with him.
* {{Unlucky Childhood Friend}}: Presumably if you choose Doug.
* {{Victorious Childhood Friend}}: If you choose Mark himself. [[spoiler:Doug seems almost convinced that it's what will happen since he's used to it.]]
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* {{Mismatched Eyes}}: MismatchedEyes: It may be a stylistic choice but in every character illustration, the top half of his irises are blue, so he may possibly have sectoral heterochromia.
*{{Romantic Runner Up}}: RomanticRunnerUp: Mark is nervous he'll become like this because of Doug's flirtation.
*{{Toxic Friend Influence}}: ToxicFriendInfluence: At one point, Mark notes that when you were kids, your mom was convinced that he was a bad influence on you but you would still play with him.
*{{Unlucky Childhood Friend}}: UnluckyChildhoodFriend: Presumably if you choose Doug.
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* {{Always Second Best}}: Doug appears to feel this way in terms of trying to get close to people. [[spoiler:He claims most women tend to lose interest in him when someone familiar comes along, hinted at early when he sounds mildly concerned while asking if you and Mark know one another when Mark spots you in the bar.]]
* {{Betty and Veronica}}: The Veronica to Mark's Betty. Doug is the suave bartender you just met while Mark is the familiar childhood friend and coworker.
* {{Brainy Brunette}}: Based on character illustrations depicting him with brown hair. He built and manages Euphoria, an up-and-coming high-class bar.
* {{The Charmer}}: Doug has shades of this, to Mark's irritation.
* {{Designated Driver}}: Doug offers to be this if you stick around to talk, alternately offering to call you a taxi.
* {{Devoted to You}}: Doug muses that he thinks he would be like this towards a romantic interest, using that as a blatant hint as well as to contrast Mark's affection.
* {{Betty and Veronica}}: The Veronica to Mark's Betty. Doug is the suave bartender you just met while Mark is the familiar childhood friend and coworker.
* {{Brainy Brunette}}: Based on character illustrations depicting him with brown hair. He built and manages Euphoria, an up-and-coming high-class bar.
* {{The Charmer}}: Doug has shades of this, to Mark's irritation.
* {{Designated Driver}}: Doug offers to be this if you stick around to talk, alternately offering to call you a taxi.
* {{Devoted to You}}: Doug muses that he thinks he would be like this towards a romantic interest, using that as a blatant hint as well as to contrast Mark's affection.
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* {{Always Second Best}}: AlwaysSecondBest: Doug appears to feel this way in terms of trying to get close to people. [[spoiler:He claims most women tend to lose interest in him when someone familiar comes along, hinted at early when he sounds mildly concerned while asking if you and Mark know one another when Mark spots you in the bar.]]
*{{Betty and Veronica}}: BettyAndVeronica: The Veronica to Mark's Betty. Doug is the suave bartender you just met while Mark is the familiar childhood friend and coworker.
*{{Brainy Brunette}}: BrainyBrunette: Based on character illustrations depicting him with brown hair. He built and manages Euphoria, an up-and-coming high-class bar.
*{{The Charmer}}: TheCharmer: Doug has shades of this, to Mark's irritation.
*{{Designated Driver}}: DesignatedDriver: Doug offers to be this if you stick around to talk, alternately offering to call you a taxi.
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* {{Drinking on Duty}}: Not excessively, especially considering his job and that he owns the business, but he has a glass while talking to you and later has a refill that he's [[WateringDown lightened up]] so that he won't get drunk.
* {{Drink Order}}: Says his favorite drink is a Singapore Sling. Doug's drink recommendations for you tend to include sweeter cocktails, like a [[DoubleEntendre Sex on the Beach]].
* {{Everyone Calls Him Barkeep}}: Literal example by his own admission. Most people think of him simply as "the bartender" and even Mark starts off by addressing him as "bartender".
* {{Exact Eavesdropping}}: This probably happens a lot to him while he's bartending. A particular situation is when he comes back from his business call right after you confronted Mark on his romantic feelings, he begins working on Mark's new drink order and hears just enough to have him curious. [[spoiler:Considering that he pointed out how Mark is very fond and possessive of you before the business call he stepped out for, he probably gathers what the subject is.]]
* {{Drink Order}}: Says his favorite drink is a Singapore Sling. Doug's drink recommendations for you tend to include sweeter cocktails, like a [[DoubleEntendre Sex on the Beach]].
* {{Everyone Calls Him Barkeep}}: Literal example by his own admission. Most people think of him simply as "the bartender" and even Mark starts off by addressing him as "bartender".
* {{Exact Eavesdropping}}: This probably happens a lot to him while he's bartending. A particular situation is when he comes back from his business call right after you confronted Mark on his romantic feelings, he begins working on Mark's new drink order and hears just enough to have him curious. [[spoiler:Considering that he pointed out how Mark is very fond and possessive of you before the business call he stepped out for, he probably gathers what the subject is.]]
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* {{Drinking on Duty}}: DrinkingOnDuty: Not excessively, especially considering his job and that he owns the business, but he has a glass while talking to you and later has a refill that he's [[WateringDown lightened up]] so that he won't get drunk.
*{{Drink Order}}: DrinkOrder: Says his favorite drink is a Singapore Sling. Doug's drink recommendations for you tend to include sweeter cocktails, like a [[DoubleEntendre Sex on the Beach]].
*{{Everyone Calls Him Barkeep}}: EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: Literal example by his own admission. Most people think of him simply as "the bartender" and even Mark starts off by addressing him as "bartender".
*{{Exact Eavesdropping}}: ExactEavesdropping: This probably happens a lot to him while he's bartending. A particular situation is when he comes back from his business call right after you confronted Mark on his romantic feelings, he begins working on Mark's new drink order and hears just enough to have him curious. [[spoiler:Considering that he pointed out how Mark is very fond and possessive of you before the business call he stepped out for, he probably gathers what the subject is.]]
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* {{I Cant Believe a Guy Like You Would Notice Me}}: Definitely expresses surprise bordering on disbelief if you choose to stay to talk with him instead of going after Mark.
* {{Icy Blue Eyes}}: Depicted in character illustrations with bright blue eyes, contrasting his brown hair and tan skin. It matches his cooler disposition as well.
* {{I Just Want to Have Friends}}: Downplayed, but he'll admit he's not particularly close to anyone. Most of his friends are more of connections or acquaintances.
* {{Jack of all Trades}}: He runs the entire business of Euphoria, from management to bartending, as well as choosing the interior design and apparently having hands-on work in the construction jobs. At one point, he's distracted from his bartending by a business call regarding a restock order, giving you a chance to confront Mark on his feelings.
* {{Ladykiller in Love}}: Mark seems concerned that Doug is this or at least is trying to look that way.
* {{Last Guy Wins}}: If you choose him over Mark. You just met Doug and he's introduced second in the story.
* {{Love at First Sight}}: Can come off this way since he's instantly intrigued with you, at least.
* {{Self Made Man}}: Admits he had some help from friends, but still comes off as having done most of the work towards his goals of owning a business.
* {{Tall Dark and Handsome}}: Based on character illustrations, he looks taller and more put together than Mark does.
* {{Verbal Tic}}: His habit of saying "I mean" when explaining things.
* [[spoiler:{{Will They or Wont They}}]]: [[spoiler:Still up in the air at the end. You and Doug make a toast to your newfound friendship in one another. He adds that maybe it can lead to more.]]
* {{Icy Blue Eyes}}: Depicted in character illustrations with bright blue eyes, contrasting his brown hair and tan skin. It matches his cooler disposition as well.
* {{I Just Want to Have Friends}}: Downplayed, but he'll admit he's not particularly close to anyone. Most of his friends are more of connections or acquaintances.
* {{Jack of all Trades}}: He runs the entire business of Euphoria, from management to bartending, as well as choosing the interior design and apparently having hands-on work in the construction jobs. At one point, he's distracted from his bartending by a business call regarding a restock order, giving you a chance to confront Mark on his feelings.
* {{Ladykiller in Love}}: Mark seems concerned that Doug is this or at least is trying to look that way.
* {{Last Guy Wins}}: If you choose him over Mark. You just met Doug and he's introduced second in the story.
* {{Love at First Sight}}: Can come off this way since he's instantly intrigued with you, at least.
* {{Self Made Man}}: Admits he had some help from friends, but still comes off as having done most of the work towards his goals of owning a business.
* {{Tall Dark and Handsome}}: Based on character illustrations, he looks taller and more put together than Mark does.
* {{Verbal Tic}}: His habit of saying "I mean" when explaining things.
* [[spoiler:{{Will They or Wont They}}]]: [[spoiler:Still up in the air at the end. You and Doug make a toast to your newfound friendship in one another. He adds that maybe it can lead to more.]]
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* {{I Cant Believe a Guy Like You Would Notice Me}}: ICantBelieveAGuyLikeYouWouldNoticeMe: Definitely expresses surprise bordering on disbelief if you choose to stay to talk with him instead of going after Mark.
*{{Icy Blue Eyes}}: IcyBlueEyes: Depicted in character illustrations with bright blue eyes, contrasting his brown hair and tan skin. It matches his cooler disposition as well.
*{{I Just Want to Have Friends}}: IJustWantToHaveFriends: Downplayed, but he'll admit he's not particularly close to anyone. Most of his friends are more of connections or acquaintances.
*{{Jack of all Trades}}: JackOfAllTrades: He runs the entire business of Euphoria, from management to bartending, as well as choosing the interior design and apparently having hands-on work in the construction jobs. At one point, he's distracted from his bartending by a business call regarding a restock order, giving you a chance to confront Mark on his feelings.
*{{Ladykiller in Love}}: LadykillerInLove: Mark seems concerned that Doug is this or at least is trying to look that way.
*{{Last Guy Wins}}: LastGuyWins: If you choose him over Mark. You just met Doug and he's introduced second in the story.
*{{Love at First Sight}}: LoveAtFirstSight: Can come off this way since he's instantly intrigued with you, at least.
*{{Self Made Man}}: SelfMadeMan: Admits he had some help from friends, but still comes off as having done most of the work towards his goals of owning a business.
*{{Tall Dark and Handsome}}: TallDarkAndHandsome: Based on character illustrations, he looks taller and more put together than Mark does.
*{{Verbal Tic}}: VerbalTic: His habit of saying "I mean" when explaining things.
*[[spoiler:{{Will They or Wont They}}]]: WillTheyOrWontThey: [[spoiler:Still up in the air at the end. You and Doug make a toast to your newfound friendship in one another. He adds that maybe it can lead to more.]]
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* {{Brown Eyes}}: Depicted with these in character illustrations. It fits his down-to-earth sensibilities.
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* {{Drink Order}}: Specifically orders a gin and tonic after disliking the cocktail (a Stinger) Doug gives him.
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* {{Drink Order}}: Specifically orders a gin Gin and tonic Tonic after disliking the cocktail (a Stinger) Doug gives him.
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* {{Exact Eavesdropping}}: This probably happens a lot to him while he's bartending. A particular situation is when he comes back from his business call right after you confronted Mark on his romantic feelings, he begins working on Mark's new drink order and hears just enough to have him curious. {{spoiler:Considering that he pointed out how Mark is very fond and possessive of you before the business call he stepped out for, he probably gathers what the subject is.]]
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* {{Exact Eavesdropping}}: This probably happens a lot to him while he's bartending. A particular situation is when he comes back from his business call right after you confronted Mark on his romantic feelings, he begins working on Mark's new drink order and hears just enough to have him curious. {{spoiler:Considering [[spoiler:Considering that he pointed out how Mark is very fond and possessive of you before the business call he stepped out for, he probably gathers what the subject is.]]
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* {{Exact Eavesdropping}}: This probably happens a lot to him while he's bartending. A particular situation is when he comes back from his business call right after you confronted Mark on his romantic feelings, he begins working on Mark's new drink order and hears just enough to have him curious.
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* {{Exact Eavesdropping}}: This probably happens a lot to him while he's bartending. A particular situation is when he comes back from his business call right after you confronted Mark on his romantic feelings, he begins working on Mark's new drink order and hears just enough to have him curious. {{spoiler:Considering that he pointed out how Mark is very fond and possessive of you before the business call he stepped out for, he probably gathers what the subject is.]]
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* {{Exact Eavesdropping}}: This probably happens a lot to him while he's bartending. A particular situation is when he comes back from his business call right after you confronted Mark on his romantic feelings and hears just enough to have him curious.
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* {{Exact Eavesdropping}}: This probably happens a lot to him while he's bartending. A particular situation is when he comes back from his business call right after you confronted Mark on his romantic feelings feelings, he begins working on Mark's new drink order and hears just enough to have him curious.
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-->'''Mark:''' Doug, I’m sorry. You're a great guy, but this is kind of important and this is a private conversation. Could you ''please'' not commentate?
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-->'''Mark:''' Doug, I’m sorry. You're a great guy, but this is kind of important and this is a private conversation. Could you ''please'' not commentate?
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* {{Devoted to You}}: While Mark steps out for a phone call, Doug compares him to a puppy, following you around and trying to please you.
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* {{Devoted to You}}: While Mark steps out for a phone call, Doug compares him to a puppy, puppy following you around and trying to please you.
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* {{Devoted to You}}: While Mark steps out for a phone call, Doug compares him to a puppy trying to please you.
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* {{Devoted to You}}: While Mark steps out for a phone call, Doug compares him to a puppy puppy, following you around and trying to please you.
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-->'''Doug:''' Did I'm sorry, did you say something, sir?something?
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* {{Green Eyed Monster}}: He's clearly verbally confrontational with Doug and tends to disparage him behind his back. Mark will awkwardly apologize a couple of times, both to you and Doug, for his attitude.
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* {{Green Eyed Monster}}: He's clearly terse, sometimes to the point of verbally confrontational confrontational, with Doug and tends to disparage him behind his back. Mark will awkwardly apologize a couple of times, both to you and Doug, for his attitude.
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-->'''Mark:''' [[spoiler:All the guys talk about you and it drives me crazy because [[spoiler:All the guys talk about you and it drives me crazy because you're ''so much better than them...'' So much better than ''me.'']]
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-->'''Mark:''' Well... Since the secret’s out, I’m curious to know about your feelings now... Since [[LoveConfession the secret's out]], I'm curious to know about your feelings now...
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-->'''Mark:''' Doug, I’m sorry. You’re a great guy, but this is kind of important and this is a private conversation. Could you ''please'' not commentate?
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-->'''Mark:''' Doug, I’m sorry. You’re a great guy, but You're a great guy, but this is kind of important and this is a private conversation. Could you ''please'' not commentate?
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* {{Drinking on Duty}}: Not excessively, but he has a glass while talking to you and later has a refill that he's [[WateringDown lightened up]] so that he won't get drunk.
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* {{Drinking on Duty}}: Not excessively, especially considering his job and that he owns the business, but he has a glass while talking to you and later has a refill that he's [[WateringDown lightened up]] so that he won't get drunk.
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* {{Drinking on Duty}}: Not excessively, but he has a glass while talking to you and later has a refill that he's [[WateringDown lightened up up]] so that he won't get drunk.
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* [[ClingyJealousGirl Clingy Jealous Guy]]: Mark sometimes falls into this because of his feelings for you and insecurity towards Doug flirting with you.
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-->'''Mark:''' [[spoiler:All the guys talk about you and it drives me nuts because [[spoiler:All the guys talk about you and it drives me crazy because you're ''so much better than them...'' So much better than ''me.'']]
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* {{Last Guy Wins}}: If you choose him over Mark.
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* {{Last Guy Wins}}: If you choose him over Mark. You just met Doug and he's introduced second in the story.
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-->'''Mark:''' Well... since the secret’s out, I’m curious to know about your feelings now... Since the secret’s out, I’m curious to know about your feelings now...
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