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* ChurchGoingVillain: Professor Nox invokes God twice so far - describing bodybuilding as "subverting God Almighty's will for profit" and insisting that augmentations to homunculi be called Creationisming instead of Evolving.
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* ChurchGoingVillain: ChurchgoingVillain: Professor Nox invokes God twice so far - describing bodybuilding as "subverting God Almighty's will for profit" and insisting that augmentations to homunculi be called Creationisming instead of Evolving.
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* SpotOfTea: Shown drinking tea in the one scene where she appears.
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* DisappearedDad: Byron's father is nowhere to be seen. Since his mother claims the man was 72 and in ailing health when she married him, it's a safe bet he's dead by now.
* HeroicLineage: [[WordOfGod In the comments of the first episode]], Dorkly implies that Byron might be Rusty's great-great-great grandfather.
* HeroicLineage: [[WordOfGod In the comments of the first episode]], Dorkly implies that Byron might be Rusty's great-great-great grandfather.
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* DisappearedDad: Byron's father is nowhere to be seen. Since his mother claims the man was 72 and in ailing failing health when she married him, it's a safe bet he's dead by now.
* HeroicLineage: [[WordOfGod In the comments of the first episode]], Dorkly implies that Byron might be Rusty'sgreat-great-great grandfather.great-great-great-grandfather.
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* AbsurdlyYouthfulMother: She looks quite young, and given how old she was when she got married she might only be 22 years old.
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* OldManMarryingAChild: She claims that she was 11 years old when she married Byron's father - a 72 year old man who was senile and suffering from bone madness.
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* AdorableAbomination: In it's Failed Rat Experiment #6 form, it looks like a cute mouse.
* AxCrazy: In it's Eye-possum form, it is infected with rabies and claws Piggley Geoff nearly to death.
* BackFromTheDead: Killed by Squid-Turtle in the first episode. After this, Professor Nox attaches it's bloated eye to the headless corpse of an opossum and reanimates the corpse.
* AxCrazy: In it's Eye-possum form, it is infected with rabies and claws Piggley Geoff nearly to death.
* BackFromTheDead: Killed by Squid-Turtle in the first episode. After this, Professor Nox attaches it's bloated eye to the headless corpse of an opossum and reanimates the corpse.
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* AdorableAbomination: In it's its Failed Rat Experiment #6 form, it looks like a cute mouse.
* AxCrazy: Init's its Eye-possum form, it is infected with rabies and claws Piggley Geoff nearly to death.
* BackFromTheDead: Killed by Squid-Turtle in the first episode. After this, Professor Nox attachesit's its bloated eye to the headless corpse of an opossum and reanimates the corpse.
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* BackFromTheDead: Is revived with revenant juice, much to it's displeasure.
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* BackFromTheDead: Is revived with revenant juice, much to it's its displeasure.
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The... [[NominalHero hero]] of the story. He wants to be a bodybuilder and battle homunculi for amusement.
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The... [[NominalHero [[VillainProtagonist hero]] of the story. He wants to be a bodybuilder and battle homunculi for amusement.
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* {{Expy}}: One of Pikachu.
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* {{Expy}}: One of Pikachu. This is driven home by Professor Nox repeatedly emphasizing that it's [[ItWillNeverCatchOn totally unmarketable to children and incapable of supporting a franchise]].
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Byron's creature.
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Byron's creature. Later named Eye-possum.
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!Homunculi
[[folder: Failed Rat Experiment #6]]
Byron's creature.
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* AdorableAbomination: In it's Failed Rat Experiment #6 form, it looks like a cute mouse.
* AxCrazy: In it's Eye-possum form, it is infected with rabies and claws Piggley Geoff nearly to death.
* BackFromTheDead: Killed by Squid-Turtle in the first episode. After this, Professor Nox attaches it's bloated eye to the headless corpse of an opossum and reanimates the corpse.
* {{Expy}}: One of Pikachu.
* TakingYouWithMe: Electrocutes Squid-Turtle to death after being crushed against the floor by it.
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Piggley Geoff]]
A creature owned by another aristocratic child.
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* AndIMustScream: Is in great pain after being brought back to life, and wants to die again. This is made worse by the fact that it was previously in Heaven before being revived.
* {{Expy}}: Of Jiggly Puff.
* BackFromTheDead: Is revived with revenant juice, much to it's displeasure.
!Homunculi
[[folder: Failed Rat Experiment #6]]
Byron's creature.
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* AdorableAbomination: In it's Failed Rat Experiment #6 form, it looks like a cute mouse.
* AxCrazy: In it's Eye-possum form, it is infected with rabies and claws Piggley Geoff nearly to death.
* BackFromTheDead: Killed by Squid-Turtle in the first episode. After this, Professor Nox attaches it's bloated eye to the headless corpse of an opossum and reanimates the corpse.
* {{Expy}}: One of Pikachu.
* TakingYouWithMe: Electrocutes Squid-Turtle to death after being crushed against the floor by it.
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Piggley Geoff]]
A creature owned by another aristocratic child.
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* AndIMustScream: Is in great pain after being brought back to life, and wants to die again. This is made worse by the fact that it was previously in Heaven before being revived.
* {{Expy}}: Of Jiggly Puff.
* BackFromTheDead: Is revived with revenant juice, much to it's displeasure.
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: While looking for a corpse to make a homunculi for, he dismisses one as "too Irish".
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* HandsOffParenting: Has no problem letting her son travel around creating and battling homunculi,
* OldManMarryingAChild: She claims that she was eleven years old when she married Byron's father - a 72 year old man who was senile and suffering from bone madness.
* OldManMarryingAChild: She claims that she was eleven years old when she married Byron's father - a 72 year old man who was senile and suffering from bone madness.
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* AbsurdlyYouthfulMother: She looks quite young, and given how old she was when she got married she might only be 22 years old.
* HandsOffParenting: Has no problem letting her son travel around creating and battlinghomunculi,
homunculi.
* OldManMarryingAChild: She claims that she waseleven 11 years old when she married Byron's father - a 72 year old man who was senile and suffering from bone madness.madness.
* SpotOfTea: Shown drinking tea in the one scene where she appears.
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* ChurchGoingVillain: Professor Nox invokes God twice so far - describing bodybuilding as "subverting God Almighty's will for profit" and insisting that augmentations to homunculi be called Creationisming instead of Evolving.
* EverybodyHasStandards: He may create abominations, but even he is briefly disturbed by Byron's lack of empathy.
* EverybodyHasStandards: He may create abominations, but even he is briefly disturbed by Byron's lack of empathy.
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[[folder: Aloysius]]
Byron's butler.
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* OldRetainer: He's elderly and obeys his mistress and her son without question.
* ServileSnarker: Aloysious makes one quip, saying "It is really quite tragic, sir" after Byron orders him to mourn Failed Rat Experiment #6 for him.
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Byron's butler.
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* OldRetainer: He's elderly and obeys his mistress and her son without question.
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!Main Characters
[[folder:Byron Oakington III]]
The... [[NominalHero hero]] of the story. He wants to be a bodybuilder and battle homunculi for amusement.
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* DisappearedDad: Byron's father is nowhere to be seen. Since his mother claims the man was 72 and in ailing health when she married him, it's a safe bet he's dead by now.
* HeroicLineage: [[WordOfGod In the comments of the first episode]], Dorkly implies that Byron might be Rusty's great-great-great grandfather.
* InbredAndEvil: Byron refers to his family as being "tastefully inbred".
* LackOfEmpathy: Byron openly admits that he has no empathy.
* SpoiledBrat: A wealthy child from an aristocratic family, who orders his butler around like a dog.
* UpperClassTwit: Byron has such a large family fortune that he's guaranteed a life of frivolity. He spends his time creating monstrosities, despite knowing little about it.
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!Adults
[[folder: Lady Oakington]]
Byron's mother.
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* HandsOffParenting: Has no problem letting her son travel around creating and battling homunculi,
* OldManMarryingAChild: She claims that she was eleven years old when she married Byron's father - a 72 year old man who was senile and suffering from bone madness.
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[[folder: Professor Nox]]
An ether-addicted professor who provides Byron with his creatures and teaches him how battling bodies goes.
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* FunctionalAddict: He's addicted to ether, but is still able to create homunculi with science.
[[/folder]]
!Main Characters
[[folder:Byron Oakington III]]
The... [[NominalHero hero]] of the story. He wants to be a bodybuilder and battle homunculi for amusement.
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* DisappearedDad: Byron's father is nowhere to be seen. Since his mother claims the man was 72 and in ailing health when she married him, it's a safe bet he's dead by now.
* HeroicLineage: [[WordOfGod In the comments of the first episode]], Dorkly implies that Byron might be Rusty's great-great-great grandfather.
* InbredAndEvil: Byron refers to his family as being "tastefully inbred".
* LackOfEmpathy: Byron openly admits that he has no empathy.
* SpoiledBrat: A wealthy child from an aristocratic family, who orders his butler around like a dog.
* UpperClassTwit: Byron has such a large family fortune that he's guaranteed a life of frivolity. He spends his time creating monstrosities, despite knowing little about it.
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!Adults
[[folder: Lady Oakington]]
Byron's mother.
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* HandsOffParenting: Has no problem letting her son travel around creating and battling homunculi,
* OldManMarryingAChild: She claims that she was eleven years old when she married Byron's father - a 72 year old man who was senile and suffering from bone madness.
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Professor Nox]]
An ether-addicted professor who provides Byron with his creatures and teaches him how battling bodies goes.
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* FunctionalAddict: He's addicted to ether, but is still able to create homunculi with science.
[[/folder]]
