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Fixing indentation, fixing reference to another example.
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* HisOwnWorstEnemy: Ironically, for [[ButtMonkey all the crap Bob suffers]], one of the biggest and most consistent threats to his business is actually himself.
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* HisOwnWorstEnemy: Ironically, for [[ButtMonkey all the crap Bob suffers]], one of the biggest and most consistent threats to his business is actually himself.''himself''.
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** As noted in CompanionCube, Bob prefers using objects to talk with than actual people, and it's shown his skills in speaking with people isn't very good. He only ever seems to speak with people if he has to and it's clear Bob doesn't really like coming out of his comfort zone, even with regulars like Teddy. The problem is that as a restauranteur, Bob is ''supposed'' to speak with people, but chooses not to get to know his customers, network with people, or get feedback on improving his restaurant. Bob clearly prefers remaining behind the grill, which is a place that someone who runs a restaurant should ''not'' be.
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** As noted in CompanionCube, [[CompanionCube Bob prefers using objects talking to talk with objects]] rather than actual people, and it's shown his skills in speaking with people isn't very good. He only ever seems to speak with people if he has to and it's clear Bob doesn't really like coming out of his comfort zone, even with regulars like Teddy. The problem is that as a restauranteur, restaurateur, Bob is ''supposed'' to speak with people, but people--but chooses not to get to know his customers, network with people, or get feedback on improving his restaurant. Bob clearly prefers remaining behind the grill, which is a place that someone who runs a restaurant should ''not'' be.