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* WeaponOfChoice: A shotgun; he uses it once to return fire when the compound is attacked; and again in Series 3 to blast an invading Talib in the stomach before delivering a cool BondOneLiner.
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* WeaponOfChoice: A ShotgunsAreJustBetter: He likes using a shotgun; he uses it once to return fire when the compound is attacked; and again in Series 3 to blast an invading Talib in the stomach before delivering a cool BondOneLiner.
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** BrokenAce: As well as he hides it, Nick clearly has deep issues with relationships and trusting people in general.
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* [[spoiler: AnArmAndALeg: His luck finally runs out when disarming an IED, and he loses a leg in the explosion, putting him out of service.]]
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* [[spoiler: AnArmAndALeg: His [[spoiler:His luck finally runs out when disarming an IED, and he loses a leg in the explosion, putting him out of service.]]]]
* BrokenAce: As well as he hides it, Nick clearly has deep issues with relationships and trusting people in general.
* BrokenAce: As well as he hides it, Nick clearly has deep issues with relationships and trusting people in general.
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* TheLadette: Of TheSquadette variety.
* PlatonicLifePartners: With Nick.
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* [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes Why Did It Have To Be Rats?]]: Seemingly her worst fear (though she won't admit it), and she takes delight in shooting the little blighters.
* PlatonicLifePartners: With Nick.
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* FriendToAllLivingThings: Well, to rats at least.
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* [[ColonelBadass Lieutenant Colonel Badass]]: Don't let his middle age and love of creature comforts fool you; the Lieutenant Colonel still has the action prowess to cling to the side of a moving truck, climb a wall, zip-wire across to his office, land safely from a four metre drop, plant the key, and be back to the bemused padre in less than two minutes, without breaking a sweat. He also breaks out a shotgun in defence of his tulips.
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* [[ColonelBadass Lieutenant Colonel Badass]]: ColonelBadass: Don't let his middle age and love of creature comforts fool you; the Lieutenant Colonel still has the action prowess to cling to the side of a moving truck, climb a wall, zip-wire across to his office, land safely from a four metre drop, plant the key, and be back to the bemused padre in less than two minutes, without breaking a sweat. He also breaks out a shotgun in defence of his tulips.
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* BlackComedy/[[GallowsHumor Gallows Humour]]: An expert at this. When Bird tells her that Nick has been unconscious for five minutes (a dangerous amount of time to be out for), Jasmine asks why she hasn't drawn a cock and balls on his head; she giggles when she tells Nick about a previous patient who died from a subcranial injury.
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* BlackComedy/[[GallowsHumor Gallows Humour]]: BlackComedy: An expert at this. When Bird tells her that Nick has been unconscious for five minutes (a dangerous amount of time to be out for), Jasmine asks why she hasn't drawn a cock and balls on his head; she giggles when she tells Nick about a previous patient who died from a subcranial injury.
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->Played by: Oliver Chris
->Played by: Gary Carr
->Played by: Katie Lyons
->Played by: Creator/MatthewLewis
->Played by: Stephen Wight
->Played by: Jamie Quinn
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Cpt Ellen Best is focussed, professional and all about self-improvement, which is a shame given her team who are tired, jaded and all about mucking about.
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->Played by: Laura Aikman
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* TheFool: Remember above when he joined the army for the gun? He didn't know they don't let you keep it.
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* TheFool: Remember above when he joined the army for the gun? He didn't know they don't let you keep it.
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* ThePigPen: One time winner of the Jockstrap of Joy, the award for the filthiest bastard on base, for getting crabs from a pair of twins while back home on leave. As it turns out, [[spoiler: he was lying about having slept with the twins, and instead caught crabs from sharing a towel with his dad.]]
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* ThePigPen: One time winner of the Jockstrap of Joy, the award for the filthiest bastard on base, for getting crabs from a pair of twins while back home on leave. As it turns out, [[spoiler: he was lying about having slept with the twins, and instead caught crabs from sharing a towel with his dad.]]
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* TheLancer: To Nick; a rough, working class recruit to Nick's posh, upper class officer.
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* AngerBornOfWorry: If Nick ever loses his temper with the team, odds are it's because of this. Best shown in series 1 episode 2, when Simon steps off the cleared zone;
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* AngerBornOfWorry: If Nick ever loses his temper with the team, odds are it's because of this. Best shown in series 1 episode 2, when Simon steps off the cleared zone;zone, and Nick reads him the Riot Act;
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--> Nick: Oh, and you discovered [a plant] wasn't a booby trap because an IED didn't blow both your legs off and rip great fucking CHUNKS out of the rest of the team! You know why they're called booby traps, Simon?! [Simon starts to speak] Shut up! They're called booby traps because they get trodden on by tits, like you! If you do not stay on the path, you will get blown to Shittingdom come and we will need two dozen body-bags to ship you back to a fiancée who is bafflingly in love with someone with fewer brain cells than BOLLOCKS! [punches Simon in the shoulder] Get your shit together, lance corporal, and stop acting like a useless fucking geriatric - another mistake like this could invoke considerably more than a gigantic bollocking.
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--> Nick: '''Nick''': Oh, and you discovered [a plant] wasn't a booby trap because an IED didn't blow both your legs off and rip great fucking CHUNKS out of the rest of the team! You know why they're called booby traps, Simon?! [Simon starts to speak] Shut up! They're called booby traps because they get trodden on by tits, like you! If you do not stay on the path, you will get blown to Shittingdom come and we will need two dozen body-bags to ship you back to a fiancée who is bafflingly in love with someone with fewer brain cells than BOLLOCKS! [punches Simon in the shoulder] Get your shit together, lance corporal, and stop acting like a useless fucking geriatric - another mistake like this could invoke considerably more than a gigantic bollocking.
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* AngerBornOfWorry: If Nick ever loses his temper with the team, odds are it's because of this. Best shown in series 1 episode 2, when Simon steps off the cleared zone;
--> Nick: Oh, and you discovered [a plant] wasn't a booby trap because an IED didn't blow both your legs off and rip great fucking CHUNKS out of the rest of the team! You know why they're called booby traps, Simon?! [Simon starts to speak] Shut up! They're called booby traps because they get trodden on by tits, like you! If you do not stay on the path, you will get blown to Shittingdom come and we will need two dozen body-bags to ship you back to a fiancée who is bafflingly in love with someone with fewer brain cells than BOLLOCKS! [punches Simon in the shoulder] Get your shit together, lance corporal, and stop acting like a useless fucking geriatric - another mistake like this could invoke considerably more than a gigantic bollocking.
--> Nick: Oh, and you discovered [a plant] wasn't a booby trap because an IED didn't blow both your legs off and rip great fucking CHUNKS out of the rest of the team! You know why they're called booby traps, Simon?! [Simon starts to speak] Shut up! They're called booby traps because they get trodden on by tits, like you! If you do not stay on the path, you will get blown to Shittingdom come and we will need two dozen body-bags to ship you back to a fiancée who is bafflingly in love with someone with fewer brain cells than BOLLOCKS! [punches Simon in the shoulder] Get your shit together, lance corporal, and stop acting like a useless fucking geriatric - another mistake like this could invoke considerably more than a gigantic bollocking.
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** Eventually even Mary gets into snarking about that.
--> '''Bird''': [=Andy McNab=] is the name of Mac's cock.
--> '''Mary''': Why, because it's been out of action for years?
--> '''Bird''': [=Andy McNab=] is the name of Mac's cock.
--> '''Mary''': Why, because it's been out of action for years?
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Whenever Nick stops snarking and becomes totally serious (as in series 2 episode 4, when he finds out [[spoiler: Achmed's brought a ''real'' car bomb into the base, rather than a fake one]]), it's a sign that the situation is ''very'' bad indeed.
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* ICallHimMisterHappy: Andy McNab.Or, in this case, [=Andy McNab=]. ‘Because he's seen so much active service.’
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-->'''Bird''': If you call [the robot] Arthur one more time, you might find that [=Andy McNab=] has been [[GroinAttack cut off behind enemy lines]].
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* InsistentTerminology: His daughter is only ever referred to as "the nipper".
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Toward Ellen, which finally causes her to call him out for it in Series 3 Episode 5 when Bird eggs him on to confess.
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